THE PROMISE OF JULIAN

[louj_rose]

am usually ok with lurking around here...

pero am desperate na!!!!!dna ako mkpgtimpi!! 

tamo gumawa pko ng acct dito oh.. 

pls pls....update ka na ms. 





 

hah?! sige na...




hello!
haha!natawa namn aq dun...super desperate ba????hehe...
know what..ngaun ko lng ulit navisit un account ko d2 sa candy...super busy....parang nagive up na rin aqng tapusin un stories ko d2....i have a work already...mejo mahirap pagsabayin...but i'll try my best....bka nxt time magupdate nq...mejo nakalimutan ko na din un story eh...so, i'll refresh my memory and read it again...at iyon ay DAHIL SA YO...salamat sa pagbasa....i appreciate it a lot...

[louj_rose]

ate!!!! update na po!!! PLEEAAASE!!!!

hello!!!!musta na!!!!!waah!
grabe..ngaun ko lng ulit navisit un account q d2...it's been so long...
nakow..cguro you're finished already with your stories here!.haha!gusto ko nang basahin...but then,i'm really so busy these days....but i'll try to update my stories...especially this one..take care!

[qwertyslu]

hello!!!!musta na!!!!!waah!
grabe..ngaun ko lng ulit navisit un account q d2...it's been so long...
nakow..cguro you're finished already with your stories here!.haha!gusto ko nang basahin...but then,i'm really so busy these days....but i'll try to update my stories...especially this one..take care!

hindi din ate eh... hahahah!~ i was also on hiatus until  january

[nielle_11]

hah?! sige na...




hello!
haha!natawa namn aq dun...super desperate ba????hehe...
know what..ngaun ko lng ulit navisit un account ko d2 sa candy...super busy....parang nagive up na rin aqng tapusin un stories ko d2....i have a work already...mejo mahirap pagsabayin...but i'll try my best....bka nxt time magupdate nq...mejo nakalimutan ko na din un story eh...so, i'll refresh my memory and read it again...at iyon ay DAHIL SA YO...salamat sa pagbasa....i appreciate it a lot...

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

really??

you're gonna try to update???

oh my oh my!!!thankyou verymuch!!!!!!!!!!

i really REALLY love this story!!!

julian is LOVE..

thankyou talaga at itatary mo...

yey!!!!

uhm..btw goodluck sa work mo..

[nielle_11]

  la padin?

[ishe]

ate louj. . bitin ahhhhhhhhhhhh

yan namiss ko na naman si julian

hahaha. . kahit lang beses ko na'tong nabasa.

natapos basahin. . grabe kinikilig pa rin me



hhehehe sana may kagaya ni julian sa earth. . hahaha


unahan na lang. .


GO FOR THE GOAL KUNG BAGA! hahaha

[.loulovesyou.]

Hello po ate!! New reader here.

Hay ndi ko rin tlga maintindihan kung bakit napakagaling niyo sa paggwa ng story. ikaw na tlga. ikaw na! 

Gusto ko n mabasa ung nxt update! Wag nmn kayong tamarin magtype! 

UPDATE NA PO!

[ishe]

busy na talaga?! wala na talagang update ate louj. . kawawa naman ang mga readers hindi na nila madugtungan ang kwento ni JULLIAN at KAHLIL. .


miss. .

[LeValiant]

wala na.. imbaness.

[rainnoa]

tagal na palang di naga-update ni louj... tsk-tsk-tsk...

buti na lang nabasa ko na yung buong story na to

ahahaha

[ishe]

tagal na palang di naga-update ni louj... tsk-tsk-tsk...

buti na lang nabasa ko na yung buong story na to

ahahaha

tama ate!!! hahaha <apir>

hoy ate mag comment ka don sa kwento natin dali. . http://www.candymag.com/teentalk/index.php/topic,199528.15.html

o ayan yung link

[pangetka16]

UNLIKE what Julian’s mother have said to him, Kahlil is not just resting in her room but she’s fighting for life over death.

She’s in coma at the ICU.

Mas malaking pinsala ang natamo ni Kahlil dahil tumama ang ulo ng dalaga sa may bakal ng bintana ng kotse. Her brain was damaged and she hasn’t gained consciousness mula nung dalhin sya sa ospital.

And aside from that, naipit ang kaliwang paa ng dalaga sa banggaan…malaking damage ang natamo niyon.

But the doctor assured that she could walk again normally after months of therapy.

Pero ang pinakamalaking issue ay paano kung hindi na magising ang dalaga sa pagka-comatose?



Nasa labas ang mag-asawang Valeriano habang nakatingin sa nag-iisang anak na si Kahlil na nakahiga sa hospital bed with different tubes in her body.

Their faces were worried.


“This is all my fault. Kung alam ko lang na ang lalaking dinadala ng anak natin sa bahay noon ay ang lalaking magdadala sa kanya sa ganitong kalagayan, sana noon pa man ay napagbawalan ko na sya.” malungkot na sabi ni Blanca,Kahlil’s mother.


“May kasalanan din ako. We never became good parents. Malaki ang pagkukulang natin kay Kahlil. Hindi sana sya malalagay sa panganib kundi rin dahil sa kapabayaan natin.”

Blanca threw herself in her husband’s embrace.
And she cried because of guilt.

“I’m sorry…I’m sorry…”

“Everything will be alright. Let’s pray for her to be safe.”

“Let’s start all over again, Julio. Doon na tayo tumira sa States, kina Mama…for Kahlil.”

“Yes, that is really my plan. We’ll start all over again…”Julio said as he kissed his wife’s forehead.

         *******************************



TWO WEEKS     have passed.

Finally, Kahlil woke up. She’s out of danger now. Her bruises were healing.

When Kahlil opened her eyes, the place was not familiar.
Where am I? she asked to herself.

Pagkuway inilibot nya ang tingin sa paligid. She saw two people sitting on the couch, a middle aged man and a woman, probably his wife.

Nang makita syang nagising ng mga ito ay lumapit agad ang mga ito sa kanya.

“Oh my God, finally you’re awake now.” Said the middle aged woman.


At first, Kahlil’s mind was empty. But after a while, confusion was taking place. There were so many questions running through her mind. And she didn’t know what to ask first.


“Hija, nag-alala talaga kami say o.” sabi naman ng lalaking naron.


At that point, she opened her lips and mouthed the words,
“Who are you?”


The two people were stunned. Nagkatinginan ang dalawa. Afterwards, the lady turned to her.
“Don’t you remember me? God, I’m your mother.”


Hindi nya alam. Gulung-gulo ang utak nya.
Napahawak si Kahlil sa ulo. 

“I CAN’T REMEMBER…”


The middle aged lady gasped aloud.


“I’m going to call the doctor.” sabi naman ng lalaki at mabilis na lumabas ng hospital suite.



When the doctor arrived, Kahlil was diagnosed with amnesia. Hindi nya matandaan ang lahat-lahat ng tungkol sa kanya, including her name.


“Well, her amnesia is just temporary. If you expose her to the things that have a connection to her past, bringing her memory will be easy. And of course, with the right medication, she’ll be normal again in no time.” Said the doctor.


Kahlil was just listening. She felt like a stranger. It’s like the beginning is nowhere because she doesn’t even know where to start thinking. She doesn’t even know her own existence.

She’s like a baby waiting to be fed with memories.
She felt so numb…empty.
Walang dahilan para matuwa.
Walang dahilan para malungkot.

Pano ba sya magsisimula sa ganitong kalagayan?


Suddenly, the lady beside her held her hand. She felt warmth.

“Don’t worry baby, we’re here to help you. We will support you all the way para maging mabilis ang pagbalik ng ala-ala mo.”


“P-pero…pero…a-ano ang pangalan k-ko? H-hindi ko a-alam ang pangalan ko.”

Nagkatinginan ang nagpakilalang mga magulang niya.
Pagkuway nagsalita ang may edad na babae.


“ Your name’s Bianca…right…you are our Bianca…”


Bianca? Still, there was no familiarity. It’s like she wanted to shiver. Even her name sounded strange in her ears.


“B-Bianca…” she whispered.


Tumingin sya sa babae. Sana nababasa nito ang gusto nyang iparating.


The lady smiled.

“I know…call me Mommy.” the woman said as she cried in front of her.


“M-Mommy…”

Bigla sya nitong niyakap habang nauwi sa hagulgol ang iyak.


“Oh my god…I’m glad we have you back. We’ll start anew. NAndito kami ng Daddy mo. Hindi ka namin iiwan. We will take care of you.”


Hindi nya alam kung gaganti ba sya ng yakap o ano. Pero siguro, sapat na ang kaalamang may mga magulang siya at ang pangalan nya ay Bianca. Doon sya magsisimula.




KASALUKUYANG naglalakad sa hallway ng hospital si Kahlil (Bianca). Gulung-gulo pa rin ang utak nya.

Although marami nang naikwento sa kanya ang nagpakilalang mga magulang nya, still, nandon pa rin ang doubt sa buong pagkatao nya.

Waking up every morning with no memory stored in her mind is like torture. It feels so strange not finding the right emotion to feel, the right words to say, the right actions to make.

Her parents told her that she had an accident. Iyon ang dahilan kung bakit nagkaroon siya ng amnesia.

Based on their story, she was driving along in her car when a drunk driver suddebly bumped his vehicle to hers. And because of the impact, her head bumped on the window’s metal. Nang magising sya mula sa aksidente ay wala na nga syang maalala.

Well at least, may nagging rason kung bakit nagka-amnesia sya.

The only thing that she could do now is to believe their story. And as of now, her parents are the only people she could give her trust completely.


Gusto na nyang bumalik ang ala-ala nya.
She desperately wants to remember a specific situation where she was very happy. It was at the back of her mind pero hindi talaga nya maalala. At kapag naman naaalala nya ang bagay na iyon, para namang pinipiga ang puso nya.

At hindi nya alam kung bakit.


Patuloy sya sa paglalakad.

When she turned to her left, she saw a guy on a wheelchair wearing the hospital gown.. Magkakasalubong silang dalawa nito. Hindi na sana nya ito papansinin nang biglang mahulog nito ang isang bagay.

Nakatingin lang sya rito. The guy was trying so hard to reach out for the thing pero hindi nito makuha iyon. His hand was touching the other direction of the floor. Samantalang ang bagay na nahulog nito ay nasa tabi lang ng gulong ng wheelchair.

Poor guy, he was blind. Nakaramdam sya ng awa para dito.

Lumapit sya rito at pinulot ang bagay na nahulog nito which is a key.

Nilagay nya iyon sa kamay nito.
The guy felt that someone is with him at alam nitong pinulot nya ang nahulog nitong susi.

“Thanks.” he said. Afterwards, he maneuvered his wheelchair and went away.

Sinundan na lang nya ito ng tingin.
She sighed and shrugged her shoulders afterwards.


      ******************************************************

JULIAN, on the other side, seemed lost and devastated.
He still can’t see even a single light.

At hindi pa rin nya nakakausap si Kahlil.
Araw-araw ay tinatanong nya ang kanyang ina tungkol sa dalaga pero iisa ang sinasabi nito sa kanya.
“She doesn’t want to see you.”


But why wouldn’t Kahlil want to see him?
Is it because he’s the reason why that accident happened?
Sinisisi ba sya ni Kalhil?

Or maybe she already knew that he was blind. That he can’t even pick a glass of water on the table beside him. Baka alam na ni Kahlil na wala na syang silbi.

Ah, that’s bullshit!!!


Hindi magagawa ni Kahlil yun.
He trusts her wholeheartedly and an act like that won’t come from her.
He’s sure of that.


Pero bakit hanggang ngayon ay hindi pa rin nagpapakita sa kanya si Kahlil?


It’s killing him. The thought that she really doesn’t want to see him is killing him.

Kanina, gumawa na sya ng paraan para makita si Kahlil. Kanina rin, nalaman nya kung nasan ang hospital suite nito. He even tried to seduce the nurse at the reception. It’s very funny that he could still seduce a lady  samantalang wala naman syang makita kahit ano. Oh well, maybe the lady felt pity on him. But that’s the last thing in his mind right now. Ang importante makita nya si Kahlil.

Ano ang naging resulta nun? Nakuha nya ang duplicate key sa kwarto ni Kahlil.

He was about to go there tapos bigla na lang nahulog yung susi sa floor. Mabuti na lang at may tumulong sa kanyang pulutin yun. At least, hindi na nadagdagan ang paghihirap nya.

Pero nasira rin ang plano nyang pagpunta sa kwarto ni Kahlil dahil nakita sya ng nurse nya. Bawal pa kasi syng lumabas ng room. His eyes were not that fully recovered. Maaaring makahakot iyon ng dust and other foreign substances on air na makakapag- irritate ng mga mata nya.

He felt so frustrated. At naiinis sya sa sarili nya.
 He sighed again and again.



Naputol lamang ang pag-isip nya nang marinig nyang bumukas ang pinto.


“Insan…”

It’s Catie.

 “Catie, where’s Kahlil?” agad nyang tanong.

“Hindi mo magugustuhan ang sasabihin ko sayo.”

Kinabahan agad sya sa sinabi ng pinsan.


“What?”



“KAhlil is gone.”


“Hah? What do you mean gone? She’s dead?!”


“No, I mean nagcheck-out na sila sa hospital just this morning.”


“Pero bakit nya gagawin iyon nang hindi man lang kami nakakapag-usap?” naguguluhan nyang tanong.

“It’s because she has an amnesia.”


He was speechless by what he heard.



“Oh God…”



“Kuya Julian, nine days sa ICU si Kahlil. She’s in coma at that time. Thank God that she survived the accident. But unfortunately, she can’t remember anything, even her name.”


“Pero bakit iba ang sinabi sa akin ni Mama? Sabi nya maayos ang kalagayan ni Kahlil. And she also said that Kahlil doesn’t want to see me.”


“Well apparently, nagsinungaling sa yo si Tita.”


“Christ, for this I want to hate my own mother.”



Dumaan ang matagal na katahimikan.



“So…do you have a plan in mind?” Catie asked.



“Pupuntahan natin ngayon din si Kahlil. And you will help me get out of this hospital.”

“Iyon lang ba…sige para sa inyo.”


Julian smiled kahit hindi umabot sa mga mata.

   **********************************************************

KAHLIL was looking at herself in the mirror.

Fifteen minutes na syang nakaharap sa salamin.
But still, she felt like a stranger.
Wala pa rin syang matandaan na kahit ano tungkol sa sarili nya.

But in the middle of the night, she would dream of herself together with a guy. But he had no face in her dram. Gabi-gabi niya iyong napapanaginipan.


She wants to see what he looks like. Maybe, he had a connection with her past.

Who is that guy that is always haunting her?


She was distracted by a knock on the door.

“Bianca, are you ready?” tanong ng isang boses mula sa labas.


“Just a minute Mom.” She answered back.


“We’ll wait for you downstairs.”


Narinig nya ang paalis na mga yabag.
Kinuha na nya ang bag sa bed.


Paalis na sila ngayong araw na iyon patungo sa States.
The place where she belongs, where ahe was born.


Her parents said that they really live in Texas and their family has a property there.


Nagbakasyon lang sila ditto sa Pilipinas.


But unfortunately during their vacation, she had an accident.
Her father said that they will not come back here for good.

Nilibot nya ang panigin sa buong kwarto. Hindi nya maintindihan ang nararamdaman.

But did she feel so much sadness and longing? In the first place, this is only their vacation house and they only visit it once a year.

Hindi nya alam kung bakit ganito ang nararamdaman. Huminga muna sya nang malalim bago umalis ng kwarto.


Pababa siya ng hagdan nang makita niyang naghihintay sa kanya ang mga magulang.

There were smiles on their faces.

Sinalubong nya rin ang mga ito ng ngiti.


“Hija, we can see that you’re recuperating very well. Kaya mo nang ilakad ang iyong kaliwang paa.”

“Yes Dad, I just wanna be normal again.”

“That’s good.”

“At gusto ko na ring mawala ang amnesia na to.”

Nagkatinginan ang mag-asawa.

“Don’t worry hija, we’ll help you para maalala mong muli ang lahat-lahat.” Sabi ng kanyang ama.

“Thanks dad.” She said as she hugged her Dad.

“So, let’s go. Baka ma-late tayo sa flight natin.” Sabi naman ng kanyang ina.

They seem to be a very happy family.


Maybe through her parents, madaling babalik ang mga ala-ala nya.


Nakasakay na sila sa kotse nang may kotseng pumarada sa tapat ng bahay nila.

Mula roon ay bumba ang isang dalaga.

“Mom, may babae..”

Mukha naming nakita iyon ng mga magulang niya at nagkatinginan ang mga ito na parang nagkakaintindihan.


“Okay…Bianca, you and your Mom will go to the airport now. Susunod na lang ako. I’ll handle the lady first.”sabi ng kanyang ama at bumaba ng sasakyan.


She saw her father talked to the girl.

Ang kanyang ina naman ay inutusan ang driver na paandarin na ang kotse.

Sumunod naman ito.

Palabas na sila ng driveway. Nakita nya nang malapitan ang kotseng pinanggalingan ng dalaga na kasalukuyang kausap ng kanyang ama.

Bukas ang bintana na sasakyang sa passenger’s seat at nakita nyang may isang lalaking naroon.

He’s wearing shades at diretso lamang ang tingin nito. Kumunot ang noo nya hbang tinitingnan ito.

Wait, it was the guy whom she met this morning. It was the blind guy.

Anong ginagawa nya rito sa kanila?


Oh well, maybe he’s the boyfriend of the girl who’s currently talking with her father.


She shrugged her shoulders pagkatapos ay ibinaling na ang atensyon sa iba.


“Mommy, daan muna tayo sa resto. Bili me ng food para habang nagbibiyahe, I’ve something to eat.”

“Oh sure sweetie.”

   ******************************************************


NARAMDAMAN ni Julian nang hawakan sya ni Catie at may ilagay ito sa kamay nya. Kahit hindi nya nakikita ang bagay na iyon, he could still recognize that thing even in his dreams. Ang bagay na inilagay nito sa kamay nya ay ang necklace na binigay nya kay Kalhil noon.


“I’m sorry kuya…” malungkot ang tinig ni catie.



“She’s gone…just like that.” He whispered.

He closed his hand tightly. His knuckles became even whiter.

Halu-halong emosyon ang nararamdaman nya nung mga oras nay un. He felt like the world was on his shoulders.


Napasuntok sya sa dashboard ng sasakyan.
Galit sya sa sarili nya at mas lalong galit sya sa sitwasyon.


“I am !@#$ ! This moment is !@#$!” namumulang sabi ni Julian sa matinding galit.


Alam nyang nasa tabi lang nya si Catie at nakatingin sa kaawa-awa nyang hitsura.


“I don’t need your pity right now catie. I know you’re staring…”



“Who says I pity you? Youre such a coward. You let her go because you thought you are useless with your blindness. If you really trust kahlil, then blind or not, she’ll believe you and she’ll recognize you. But you let her go. You don’t have the courage to go outside this car and make your own move.” Catie said.


Tinanggap nya ang lahat ng sinabi nito.

In a way, catie’s right. He’s a coward.

“Alam kong !@#$ ako, napakagago ko talaga…”


“Are you going to let her go forever just like that?”

“Hell,no!”

“Then do what you think is right.”


“I know, I’m going to find her.”

“Pero saan?”


“I don’t know. But one thing is for sure…I’ll find her anywhere even if she’s on the other side of the world. I’m willing to go through hell and back just to find her.” He said with a voice full of determination.


“That’s the spirit cousin.”


Hindi sya kumibo.
Pero buo ang kanyang loob at tutuparin nya ang kanyang pangako.


“Wait for me Kalhil…I’m going to find you. I promise that.”
 

pahingi naman ng copy !! 4 kame naghihintay sa continuation ng kwento ng toh !! tnx sa mag bibigay !!  

[ishe]

ate louj may nanghihingi ng copy. .

hehehe MAHIRAP TALAGANG MAGING TEACHER busy lagi ang kaluluwa. . .

mabuti na lang talaga tapos ko na lang ng nakapost na story dito ni ate louj. . pero hindi ko pa alam ang katapusang ng PONKAHOLIC, Still You, Chasing Gian, grabe madami pang naiwan sa ere. . o hindi kolang talaga nabasa. . shocks kamiss ka ate louj at ang mga gawa mo. . kahit hindi tayo magkakilala ng personal hahahahaha 

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