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Author Topic: THE Filipino Lover (Updated, p.7)  (Read 5205 times)

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THE Filipino Lover (Updated, p.7)
« on: August 29, 2008, 10:39:46 pm »
Hallo everyone. Kinda back with a new story. I hope I'll be able to finish this. This is kinda cliche but I'll do my best para di kayo ma-bore. KAT here. Call me Kat or Ana. :D Comments please!



Life is always _________.

What the heck.

Life is always fun. Not really.
Life is always adventurous. Err, sort of.
Life is always about living. Haha, whatever.

“Uh, I’ll go for adventure. I suck when it comes to opinionated tests over the net.”

“Iha...! Iha...!” I heard Therese shout. “Halika dito.”

“Be there in a sec!” I grabbed the paper and rushed down my apartment. I definitely did not know how to speak and understand Tagalog much but I knew that ‘Halika dito’ means ‘Come here.’

“What’s up?” I saw Therese, my landlady with a guy about my age or maybe older. “I don’t accept room mates or apartment-mates Therese. I’ll pay double; just don’t give me a person to live with.” I’ve been living in Therese’s apartment since I left my dad in Canada almost a year ago.

Therese gave a warm smile. “Hindi.” That meant ‘no’ right? “He’s my nephew who just came from Leyte. I want you to help him around since you don’t have work yet. Of course I want you both to be friends. Your dad already agreed.”

“Oh. Why me?” I wasn’t being rude or anything. I just wanted to ask. ‘Ya know, curiosity. Besides, I’m not that friendly...

“Mabait ka kasi.” That didn’t register in my brain. “You’re a good friend.”

That flattened me a bit but didn’t convince me. I only had one more reason left to say no. “I can’t speak—”

“He speaks English.” Shoot.   

“OH great. That’s great. Sure.” Inhale, but exhale more. “Uh, okay.” I didn’t know what to say.

“I’ll leave you guys here.” But before Therese could go away, I pulled her near myself.

“Is this a set-up?” I whispenavy. “Is dad playing with my life again? I don’t need a boyfriend so I don’t need anyone waiting around expectant to have my pants down so my dad can be the future grand daddy.

She laughed. “That was quite rude. But no. He’s my nephew and he’s a bartender in the coffee shop across the street. Your dad has nothing to do with this.” She squeezed my shoulders. “It’s okay if you don’t want Lorenzo around.”

Now that was convincing.

“I’m sorry. It’s just... the last time this happened, ‘twas my dad’s idea.”

“I know that and I won’t do that to you. You believe that right?” I nodded then she went away.

I looked at the guy in front of me. From Leyte? He didn’t look much of what they say, ‘probinsyano.’ In fact, he looked a lot more like an urban Filipino. More urban than the gardener I hired to water and maintain my plants. Anyway...

“I’m Lei. Do you want something to drink?” I went to the fridge to get yogurt and a bottle of water.

“Water please.”I quickly glanced at him because I noticed the accent he had. He didn’t sound like a probinsyano at all. “Lorenzo’s my name. Call me Lorenz.” He caught the bottled water I tossed.

“Therese never told me about a nephew named Lorenzo. Well honestly I never get too much time to talk to her. She’s too busy with life.” I sat across him.

“Mmm... yeah. Do you live here alone?” He looked around and I was sure he noticed how bare my place was. In fact, only my room was designed. Everything else was black and white.

“Yup. I enjoy the company of myself.” I smiled.

“Do you want me to help you design your place? This will look a lot better.”

“Uh... no thanks. I don’t like changes around this place, around my life. I love it like this.” He nodded. “You don’t look like a probinsyano at all, ‘ya know that?” After that question, I knew his face changed to kind of amusing type.

“Oo, alam ko.” Oo meant ‘right’ right? “Sana nakakapag-tagalog ka rin.” Now that was longer. “Para hindi naman ako masyadong ma-nosebleed. Hehe.” Okay, that really didn’t register in my brain.

“OKAY, enough. I don’t like you speaking Tagalog. I’m sure that is Tagalog because I don’t understand anything.” He smirked. “Can we agree with that?”He laughed. “What is funny?!”

“You are funny.” I unconsciously hit him on his shoulder but he laughed more.

“I hate it when people talk Tagalog.” I stood and noticed that it was getting late. “Oh I guess you need to go home now.”

“I think so. Uh, I’ll just give you my number in case you need me.” I handed him the paper I had been holding since he came.

“So bye Lorenz.” He nodded but before he really turned around, he murmunavy two words.

“Gwapa ka.”

“Huh?”

“Oh, my number.” He gave me my paper then he was gone. I looked down on the paper and saw his number. But what caught my attention was the answer to the question in the internet.

Life is always full of changes.

« Last Edit: May 22, 2009, 03:31:25 pm by twoneight »

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Re: My Filipino Lover :)
« Reply #1 on: August 29, 2008, 10:59:55 pm »
yey!!! first tagger!!! :)

yee.. :) the plot is cute. :) super. your style of writing is marvelous. :) i love it. may pagka comedy pala siya. :)

jessa here. :)
« Last Edit: August 29, 2008, 11:03:47 pm by peach_xvision »
I have seen Lots of PAIN.
I have seen Lots of LOVE.
though no memories to go back..
or feeLings to feeL
alam kong SIYA na yun.

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Re: My Filipino Lover :)
« Reply #2 on: August 30, 2008, 09:44:52 am »
yey!!! first tagger!!! :)

yee.. :) the plot is cute. :) super. your style of writing is marvelous. :) i love it. may pagka comedy pala siya. :)

jessa here. :)


Thanks jessa. I'm trying hard to put my pieces back again. Hehe. Thank youu.

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Re: My Filipino Lover :)
« Reply #3 on: August 30, 2008, 10:23:05 am »
sis!!! tuloy mo!!!!  :D

haha

hazel here!!!  ;D

nakakatuwa si Lorenz... haha nosebleed!!!
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Re: My Filipino Lover :)
« Reply #4 on: August 30, 2008, 03:36:05 pm »
woww. hahaha. next na:D janice here^^
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Re: My Filipino Lover :)
« Reply #5 on: August 30, 2008, 07:19:14 pm »
ui ana.. your back with a new one.. haha..
tanda mo pa ko? si kiche? anyway..
Kat ka rin pala? haha.. kat din kasi ako eh..
yung totoong name ko.. wahahahaha..

nwei.. i'm gonna read this..








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Re: My Filipino Lover :)
« Reply #6 on: August 31, 2008, 01:52:23 pm »
Lozzie:
Yep, yep. I'm gonna continue this. Just making some adjustments sa update. :D So, can I call you Lozzie? Call me Kat or Ana. Sorry kung nosebleed. Haha.

Janice:
Hey. Thanks for the 'wow'--whatever that meant.
Call me Kat or Ana. Thanks!

Kiche:
Naman, why would I forget the cutest pokemon ever?
Hahaha.
Thanks! :D

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« Reply #7 on: August 31, 2008, 04:17:45 pm »
Supporting this. keep it up!

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Re: My Filipino Lover :)
« Reply #8 on: August 31, 2008, 05:23:42 pm »
eww. ayoko ng nagtatagalog din kapag hindi marunong magtagalog yung tao. huh!? gulo. basta ganun! XD

nice start, kambal! ;)
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Re: My Filipino Lover [UPDATED&COMMENTS PLS] :)
« Reply #9 on: August 31, 2008, 08:08:27 pm »
“You are qualified Ms. Martinez but I’m sorry to say that you submitted your form late. You can try applying to our sister company. Please do not return this call. Thank you very much.”

*TEEET*

I screamed in frustration. Every time I try to apply for a new job, I always get my report on the answering machine. My last resort was the “secretary slot” on the nearby company that sells liquors. I sighed because I didn’t want that secretary job at all.

I removed all my garments leaving only my sports bra and white boxers then sprawled myself on the bed. It was exhausting to hunt for the perfect job. I’ve roamed around the city just to see if there’s a job looking out for me. I’m sure that when I finally get a job I wouldn’t need to ask my dad for allowance. That’s what I call real independence.

“Hey Lei wanna grab some ice cream?” I stopped in the midst of my thoughts. It was Lorenz on my door holding two pints of Häägen Dääz ice cream. “Yeah right, you’re busy.” He hauled himself downstairs. I was sure that I saw him red as tomato when he saw that I was only on my almost underwear.

I laughed. “Hey hey! I want some ice cream! Wait up!” I pulled an oversized shirt over my head and ran after him. He stopped in his tracks and turned to look at me with his eyes closed. His hands were shaking as he handed me the pint. “Idiot. You can open your eyes now. I’m dressed.” I grabbed the pint.

“Will you ever learn to put a shirt on after you removed your clothes?” He asked.

“Well Lorenz, will you ever learn to at least knock on my door or use the damn doorbell?” I pointed out. We both laughed. “Yeah right, we both will never learn.”

Lorenz and I have been hanging out a lot in the past few weeks, talking about good and bad stuff. It was really cool having him around mainly because I found someone to talk with and partly because he seemed different from all the guys I’ve met in Canada.
“I’m sorry—”

“For the nth time Lorenz.” I cut him off. “It’s not like you haven’t seen me in it last Tuesday when you also barged in my apartment.”

“I mean, it is never my intention to see you wearing those. It’s just… that’s how we do it in Leyte, we just walk in, since we don’t have doorbells…”

“—or doors?” I ate a spoonful of ice cream.

He gave in and sighed. “I’m sorry.”

I gave him a warm smile. “Yeah, yeah. I understand. Filipino people.”

“You always say that. It’s like you’re implying that being a Filipino is pathetic.” He said while I admired the black orbs in his eyes. “Want me to show you how living and being a Filipino is fun?”

“I’ll pass on that. I don’t like Philippines after all.”

“Then why are you here?”

“I have no other place to go. This is like a temporary address.”

I think I heard him mutter, “Hayy foreigner talaga.”

Pregnant silence enveloped us. “Oh so… did you drop by here just to eat ice cream with me? How sweet. You’ve been doing this ‘drop by’ thingy since the first day we ever met. I’m thinking you have a huge crush on me.”

“Ewan ko sa’yo.”

“Shut up.”   I said. “We had this agreement right? No speaking Tagalog in front of me.”

“Whatever. But sorry to press your ego, I don’t have crush on you.”   He pulled his wallet from his jeans’ pocket and handed me a paper. Tita Therese asked me to get the rental fee. It’s due today.”

“Oh. Good excuse.”   I smirked, got my wallet and gave him five thousand pesos.

“Whatever you think. I’ll take off. Bye.”   But before he went away he said, “You gotta think about the Philippine fun thing. It’ll be enjoying, you know persuading you and bonding with me.”

I just waved my hand after him and I noticed that he left half of his ice cream. I ate a spoonful and nearly choked when I knew it was Pistachio flavored.

The next morning came and I knew something was different because I woke up extra early like 3 hours early. I got up, brushed my teeth but didn’t bother fix my hair. As I was going down, I smelled something—someone was cooking! I ran to the kitchen only to see Lorenz wearing a shirt with the print ‘I suck in cooking.’

“Good morning sunshine!”

I ran my hand through my hair. “What the hell is with you? It’s still 8, for Heaven’s sake!”

“I prepared something for you.”   He smiled sweetly. “It’s called Tapsilog.”

“What the heck. Topsilog?”   It smelled good however. “What’s with you Lorenz?”

“It’s Tap-si-log—beef, egg and fried rice. I’m just teaching you stuff.”   He smiled again. “I know you can’t resist this.”

We ate together and I admit, the food he prepared was great contradicting the ‘suck-y cooking’ his shirt says.

“So is this the Filipino thing you told me yesterday?”   I helped him with the dishes.

“Not really, it’s a part of it. You know, just to warm you up. I suppose you liked it, didn’t you?”   I didn’t answer because I didn’t want to flatter nor flatten him. “I take that as a yes.”

After washing the dishes I decided to take a bath and leave him there. When I was done, I saw him sitting perfectly on my couch. “You can go home now Filipino tutor-Mr. Patriot-or whatever. I have lots of movies to watch today.”

“Oh is that so?”   He said like trying to imply something. I sat beside him and turned the TV on. But he stood in front of me, covering the TV and said, “Get up, couch potato. We have some more things to do.”

“Oh really?”

“Yes really. Now, get up.”

“I don’t believe you.”   I played along.

But that didn’t help much because he scooped me in his arms like a bride and brought me outside. “You better believe me.”  

The sun hit my skin and I didn’t like it. I looked at the man who carried me and again, admired his black orbs. A smile played on his lips and he said, “To start off, I’m glad you noticed one of Filipinos’ attributes. I see how attracted you are to my eyes, aren’t you?”

I just prayed that I heard him wrong.
« Last Edit: May 22, 2009, 11:45:59 am by twoneight »

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« Reply #10 on: August 31, 2008, 10:28:16 pm »

Kiche:
Naman, why would I forget the cutest pokemon ever?
Hahaha.
Thanks! :D


haha.. oo nga eh.. prettiest digimon.. wahahaha..
nagulat talaga ako nung nalaman kong KAT ka rin..
wala lang.. haha.. nagulat lang talaga ko.. hehe..

and i'm sorry pala.. wala pa kasi akong time basahin 'to eh..
exam week namin.. so baka after the exams pa.. haha..
pero promise, hahabol ako dito incase bigla kang magupdate ng magupdate.. hehe..




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« Reply #11 on: September 01, 2008, 03:27:54 am »
OMG!!! kilig naman to!!! :) haha... nakakatuwa si Lorenz... i like him... :)
I have seen Lots of PAIN.
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though no memories to go back..
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« Reply #12 on: September 01, 2008, 07:44:46 am »
Oh my gosh, I`m loving this story!
More Ate! I love itttt!  :D

For some weird reason, pag binabasa ko,
I think of Edward and Bella.
I`m not sure what that means to you,
but it`s a compliment from me(:
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« Reply #13 on: September 01, 2008, 09:31:42 am »
Kiche. Thanks anyway. God bless sa test mo. Kaya mo yan! Goo.. Haha.

Jessa.
Thanks, buti nagustuhan mo.

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Hey hi. Thanks! And, please wag mo akong i-ate. Bata pa 'ko. 16 lang ako.
Oh. Twilight fan, aren't you? Hehe.
Gusto kong basahin un kasi sabi nila maganda daw tapos walang point na hindi ka kikiligin.
Hehe. Pero, no time kasi para magbasa eh. Hahaha.
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« Reply #14 on: September 01, 2008, 10:20:48 am »
ang cute! love this! haha! go lorenz! show how we filipino rocks! hahaha~ next na po! ^_^
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