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Re: Struggle With Boys - Ch. 3 [Readers & Comments Please xD]
« Reply #30 on: July 04, 2008, 03:59:17 pm »
Eeeew what a guy. "I'll treat you later". Flirt much.  ;D
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Re: Struggle With Boys - Ch. 3 [Readers & Comments Please xD]
« Reply #31 on: July 04, 2008, 04:21:32 pm »
naku bakit si Shay dapat si Joyce. galit na tuloy si Joyce

next na po

Thanks Lauren :) Onga ehh.. feel ko pa naman gusto ni Joyce si David hahahaha!

Haha! Si Shay pa talaga eh no? 1st date ko ren sa Starbucks. ;D

Natatawa talaga ako sayo Conyang! Hahaha kakarelate ka ba ? first date sa Starbucks  :D :D Thanks!

ohhhhh starbucks!!  :D

hahahah si shay daw???

nakakacurious tuloy...

Parang mga adik sa starbucks mga tao dito ahh  :D nagsalita yung hindi  ;D Thanks ella!

Eeeew what a guy. "I'll treat you later". Flirt much.  ;D

Thanks for dropping by :) I know right what a flirt spelled with a capital D. Hahahahahaha

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Re: Struggle With Boys - Ch. 3 [Readers & Comments Please xD]
« Reply #32 on: July 04, 2008, 06:44:00 pm »
Haha! Ay naman, natural lang yan saken. Oo.
Actually, yung guy.. Dun niya dinedate yung mga girls niya, isama mo na ko Mica. ;D
Di ko type yung guy. Type ko yung Starbucks.

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Chapter 4
« Reply #33 on: July 05, 2008, 05:36:16 pm »
Haha! Ay naman, natural lang yan saken. Oo.
Actually, yung guy.. Dun niya dinedate yung mga girls niya, isama mo na ko Mica. ;D
Di ko type yung guy. Type ko yung Starbucks.

Hahaha suki na siya ng Starbucks! Hahaha kakatawa ka type mo Starbucks ha ;D sa bagay sayang din yung libreng kape.  :D

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Chapter 4

David’s POV

Parang nabilaukan si Joyce sa tanong ko ;D kase nagpapanic nanaman siya. Kakatuwa talaga toh.

“Si Shay? Wala pa yun boyfriend. Bakit mo naman natanong?” Bakit nga ba?

“Di ko alam eh bigla lang pumasok sa utak ko.” Siya kaya meron na? Or natitipuhan man lang? “Sige ubusin mo na yung frap mo at feel ko magmall ngayon. Samahan mo na ako may bibilhin lang ako para sa ate ko.”

“Uhh.. sige wala naman akong homeworks.” May nahila nanaman akong kasama ;D.

Nandito kami ngayon sa SM. Naglilibot libot at si Joyce naman sumusunod lang sa akin. Parang ang weird naman nasa likod ko siya ;D ano siya bodyguard ko? Hahahahaha.  Kaya naman sinabayan ko siya sa paglalakad at nagstart ng conversation.

“May gusto ka bang bilhin?” Baka kasi may gusto siyang pasukan na store nahihiya lang magsabi.

“Wala naman. Tsaka di pa ako nabibigyan ni Mama ng allowance ;D

“Ahh ganun ba.  Nagugutom nako kain muna tayo.”

Umorder kami ni Joyce ng Kimchi sa isang Korean Restaurant. ;D Kanya kanyang bayad toh. Baka mabutas ang bulsa ko ng wala sa oras noh.  Habang kumakain kami, siya naman ang nag open up nag conversation.

“David may naging girlfriend ka na ba?” :o Ano raw?

“Uhmm wala pa naman but I felt how it was to be rejected by the girl I think I loved.”

“You think you loved? So you mean you weren’t sure about your feelings for her?” Tumigil siya sa pagkain niya at inusisa ang lovelife ko :D. Ayos toh ah.

Joycelyn’s POV

“Well.. It’s like this. I’m very well sure that I liked her. Ganito kasi yun.  Whenever she’s around, I’m happy.  I cared about her and she made me feel the same way.  She’s always in my mind so that’s where I thought that I was in love with her.  Ganun naman yun diba?  So one day I decided to confess my feelings for her, hoping that she feels the same way as I did.  Pero yun nga hanggang best friend lang ang tingin niya sa akin.  I perfectly misunderstood her actions towards me. So my feelings for her were then replaced with pain.  Andrama ko baka mapagkamalan mo akong bading niyan! ” Naisip niya iniisip ko? Haha mind reader ang mokong.

“Ganun? Wow di ko akalain yun ha! Isang David Johnson mababasted? Hahahahahaha! Masyado kang defensive! Wala naman akong sinasabing bading ka eh! Hahahaa defensive! :D

“Sige tawa lang may araw ka rin sakin.” Oh wow I’m so scared mommy help me ::) ;D.

“Kasi naman sa school palagi kang pinagtitinginan ng mga tao. Minsan nga eh yung mga kaklase ko pinaguusapan ka! Ano ka artista? Asa!”

“Ehh ganon talaga pag gwapo eh matalino pa? Ano pa hahanapin mo?” OhMyGod. Baka biglang umulan at bumalik si bagyong Frank. :D Sumeryoso na ako at tinanong ko kung okay na ba siya ngayon.

I haven’t fully moved on pero malapit na. Months ago na din naman yun ;D Tsaka marami naman ibang babes diyan.” Babes? What a word! Hindi bagay sa kanya! Ewww kadiri ::)!

David and I decided to go home since its 7pm na din.  Pero bago yun, dumaan muna kami sa isang store at bumili siya ng graphing calculator :o for his sister.  Wow mahal nun ah. Di bale mayaman naman sila :D. Dami palang perang bitbit toh sana di siya maholdap ;D  David offered to drop me off sa house since he said it’s getting dark and late na. Aga pa kaya noh ::).  gentlewoman ang dating? :D

David’s POV

Kahit papano naeenjoy ko ang company ni Joyce.  May sense siya kausap at di ko naman akalain na maoopen up ko yung past ko with Leslie.  Magaan lang ang loob ko sa kanya.  Hindi rin siya katulad ng iba na naghahabol sa akin. Talagang pinangatawanan (hirap itype netoh :D) ko na.  Hindi siya maarte ni hindi ka siya nagmemake up! Natural beauty ika nga.

Hindi ko pa masabi sa ngayon kung gusto ko ba siya o ano dahil kakakilala pa lang namin at madami akong crush sa school :D.  Siguro mga lima? Hahahahahaha.  Sasabihin ko sa inyo kung sino sino sila..

Si Bea.. Si Jessica.. Si Maan.. Si Shay ::)  at siyempre mawawala ba si…























SECRET. It’s better left unsaid. :D Malalaman niyo din soon.
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Salamat ng marami sa mga nagbasa kung meron man. Hahahaha. May silent reader ba diyan? Kung meron man labas na kayo :D. I don’t bite promise! ;D COMMENT NAMAN PO KAYO PLS? Hahaha.

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Re: Struggle With Boys - Ch. 4 [Pabili Po Ng Readers & Comments xD]
« Reply #34 on: July 05, 2008, 06:14:20 pm »
i bet si joyce yun  ::) next na!

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Hay naku may secret pang nalalaman itong si David eh halata namang si Joyce yun! ;) Naku kay Joyce ka na lang... Next na Mica sorry kung ngayon lang... ;)
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hahaha... nice up, namiss ko ung 2 chap ngayon ko palang nabasa..
andami naman pala niang gusto eh. . pero baka ang pagpipilian nia nian sina shay at joyce...  :D

anyway, nagkita na sina Matt at Jaja, thanks sa support huh!  ;)

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hi ms otor.
yay for you.i love it already. ;)
taiwan and korea's finest mga characters ah.
i love it....sobra.
rhen here nga pala. :)

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Mica! Kakaloka itech. :D Bonding place namen ng ate ko, SM, mapasaang-sulok man yan :D
Talagang nakakarelate ako. MABUHAY ang storya mo.  :D

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i bet si joyce yun  ::) next na!

Thanks for reading!  :D Feel ko nga din si Joyce eh hahahaha. ;D <33

Hay naku may secret pang nalalaman itong si David eh halata namang si Joyce yun! ;) Naku kay Joyce ka na lang... Next na Mica sorry kung ngayon lang... ;)

Thanks talaga Ate Pau at binasa mo :D! Onga David talaga tsktsk ::). <33

hahaha... nice up, namiss ko ung 2 chap ngayon ko palang nabasa..
andami naman pala niang gusto eh. . pero baka ang pagpipilian nia nian sina shay at joyce...  :D

anyway, nagkita na sina Matt at Jaja, thanks sa support huh!  ;)

Thanks mikx! :D Confused pa si David sa ngayon ;D  Thanks din sa support ha :). Update ka na :D <33

hi ms otor.
yay for you.i love it already. ;)
taiwan and korea's finest mga characters ah.
i love it....sobra.
rhen here nga pala. :)

Waaa may new reader :D Thanks Rhen at pinagtiyagaan mo ang story gaya nila :D hahahaha!  Anyways, ang cute ni Mike He! Agree agree? Hahahaha! :D <33

Mica! Kakaloka itech. :D Bonding place namen ng ate ko, SM, mapasaang-sulok man yan :D
Talagang nakakarelate ako. MABUHAY ang storya mo.  :D

Naloloka nako sayo Yang  :D Rich girl SM ang bonding place. Shopping ba o Starbucks pa din? Hahahaha ;D
MABUHAY KA! :D  <33

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Thanks sa lahat! At dahil I feel so touched (hahahaha magdrama ba) Yays kayo lahat :D Lab lab ko kayo :D

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HAHAHA may secret???
whyy? joke lang! ahah

ANG GANDA!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY RIN!

CANT WAIT SA SUSUNOD!
Every time you come to mind, I realize...
I'm Smiling
<3

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ang daldal naman ni David hehe

baka nga may pag ka sistah ka, tol :D like you said ;D
wag naman sana :D


next na
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Haaaayyy David. ;D
Celebrity. lolz.

Great chapter, Mica! Make a PM list and put me on it! [:
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Re: Struggle With Boys - Ch. 4 [Pabili Po Ng Readers&Comments xD]
« Reply #43 on: July 06, 2008, 01:11:07 pm »
ahaha.. ganian talaga mga guys na maraming gusto, nacoconfuse,  ;D

next na po, gusto ko na malaman sinong mas matimbang sa utak nia, hehe.. kasi wala pa naman ata sa puso nia eh,  :D

thanks din, mag-update ako maya2.. ;)

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Re: Struggle With Boys - Ch. 4 [Pabili Po Ng Readers&Comments xD]
« Reply #44 on: July 06, 2008, 01:46:04 pm »
Oh my.

Are you making a story? or are you making a REVIEW?
basically, the descriptions had done so much spoiler to the story.Can't you just put it in the content of the story?

If you put it that way it would make the story less exciting and 'boring' in the next chapter. There is no thrill, it's more like the story had ended. Exposing the characters and their roles in a detailed manner would mean disadvantage on your side because readers will only read the 1st post, hit and then run.
It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it.

 

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