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« on: June 26, 2008, 07:10:49 pm » |
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Hey guys! This is my first story under this username, so I hope you'll comment on this. I promise to try my best to write with all my might. haha. Oh, and as a bonus, you get to hear awesome music per chapter as well. So prepare your speakers,haha. I assure you the music will be really bagay sa story. Listen to the theme song too, you'll love it. Swear.The title is actually a song by Jon Mclaughlin, from the movie Enchanted. Hear the song!Lyrics So Close
She was always the wallflower, the plain jane, little miss play it safe. So when she left Manila, she left behind her old image as well. Now she's ready for a fresh start, but will she still be a damsel in distress in London?He's the perfect guy, handsome and smart with royal blood to boot. Engaged to the "perfect girl", he is one step closer to inheriting the throne. But is that what he really wants?To live his life just conforming to what is expected of him? Their path's come across by some kind of twisted faith. Will our damsel in distress find a hero in Mr. Perfect? Will Mr. Perfect choose "real life" over his throne? Authors note: Comments, please. haha. Tuloy ko pa ba? Will you support the story if I continue it? 
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« Last Edit: June 29, 2008, 09:59:54 am by pretty_kikay »
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« Reply #2 on: June 26, 2008, 07:37:32 pm » |
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ladymondegreen
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« Reply #3 on: June 26, 2008, 07:40:29 pm » |
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Hmm. By the preview, ang cliche nung story. I hope your story would be different from all those opposites-meet stories.
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« Reply #4 on: June 26, 2008, 07:44:02 pm » |
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Hmm. By the preview, ang cliche nung story. I hope your story would be different from all those opposites-meet stories.
Kindly expound on what Cliche is to you, you seem to have lost me there. Oh, and yes, I do hope that people will read/interpret my story with an open mind and an open heart. 
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« Reply #5 on: June 26, 2008, 08:25:06 pm » |
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Kindly expound on what Cliche is to you, you seem to have lost me there. Oh, and yes, I do hope that people will read/interpret my story with an open mind and an open heart.  What I meant to say was, yung type nung story. The rich guy wants to live a normal life (At least I'm thinking that's what's going to happen.), the girl is/used to be simple. I'm really waiting for the story, maybe it's a whole lot different (Judging from your personality.  )
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« Reply #6 on: June 26, 2008, 08:51:17 pm » |
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What I meant to say was, yung type nung story. The rich guy wants to live a normal life (At least I'm thinking that's what's going to happen.), the girl is/used to be simple. I'm really waiting for the story, maybe it's a whole lot different (Judging from your personality.  ) Haha. You just have to wait and see then. I'm currently typing the first chapter, and I'm really excited to post it. Yay. 
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« Reply #7 on: June 26, 2008, 09:05:34 pm » |
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Bear! May story ka na rin. Haha.
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« Reply #8 on: June 27, 2008, 05:16:45 pm » |
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Bear! May story ka na rin. Haha.
Oo nga eh. haha. Support this ha 
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« Reply #9 on: June 27, 2008, 06:28:49 pm » |
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Aww.Wala ng nag cocomment. Continue ko pa ba? 
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« Reply #10 on: June 27, 2008, 06:46:49 pm » |
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mukhang interesting! pabasa ng chapter one!
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They are coming back...soon
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« Reply #11 on: June 27, 2008, 07:30:27 pm » |
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mukhang interesting! pabasa ng chapter one!
I'mma post it na sis 
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« Reply #12 on: June 27, 2008, 07:50:26 pm » |
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You changed the title? No matter, I'm sure it fits the story better than the first chap.
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« Reply #13 on: June 27, 2008, 07:52:19 pm » |
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You changed the title? No matter, I'm sure it fits the story better than the first chap.
Yeah, I find it more appropriate eh. I'm going to post the first part as soon as I finish researching about London. haha. I wanna get my facts straight. I'm Jess by the way, and you are? 
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« Reply #14 on: June 27, 2008, 09:26:05 pm » |
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PrologueMax’s Point of ViewI can’t believe I’m going to be a prince. Never in my wildest dreams did I expect this. By the Order of Precedence, it states that I am 6th in line for the throne and by some miracle, I am now expected to inherit the throne. Weird, but I did accept. Although it hasn’t gone public yet, it’s going to be officially announced in a month or so. Only my father, and sisters know because I plan to keep a low profile. Even my fiancée, Venice, doesn’t know yet. I lived a fairly normal life ever since, and I have this feeling that things are about to drastically change. Can I really handle being a prince, and eventually, a king?Jess’ Point of View“Dad, I confirmed na my slot. Pero wala pang reply eh..”
I did it. I confirmed my slot in the University of London. I can’t believe I’m going to study abroad. Finally, after a year of waiting because of visa problems, I’m finally going to leave. After 21 years of living in the Philippines, I’m moving. Out. Away. Goodbye sheltered and privillaged life. Goodbye, sheltered and privillaged life. Goodbye comfort zone. Goodbye familiar territory. Hello, new life. Hello, new world.
******************************************************************* Author's Note: Hey guys. Comments naman diyan. haha. I need feedbacks eh, thanks 
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