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Author Topic: --Break the ICE and LET the LOVE begin--CHAP35^THE END^GOODBYE**  (Read 54601 times)

miEmiKsmiNx_003

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I read it na. Ok lang yan, tips ;) Ako na una sa readers list mo na susuportahan to till the end of the dayy. :D


thanks sis yang!!! ;)

labyuuuu. :)

`.. hahah.. yaan mho na si aishen !!
`.. mas maganda naman si jaja at saka mas matagal na silang ano ni jaja..
`.. wihee !!!
`.. aishen, hanap qa na lahn ng iba !!!
`.. kay jaja na xe si matt e.. wahahaha..  :D :D :)
`.. next na po sis !!!
`.. tcgbu !!!



hehe, thanks ara. ;)

eheem.. si matt nga sis.. :D
pinapa excite niO lng ung readers.. i luv it!! ;D

nxt up na ate.. hehe.. :)


ganun na nga hehe.. salamat po sa pagbasa.. :)

no worries.

a good writer will accept criticisms and take note of it to improve his/her work. I understand that you're a beginner. As a beginner, it will take a lot of effort to make a 'better' story for everyone. It won't take long, just keep on writing.

I'm looking forward for the next chapter by the way. :)


thanks, at least I've learned something new. :)

I'm going to put the next chapter later. :) thanks for reading.


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CHAP11

Jaja’s P.O.V.

Paksiyett..

What the hell is he doing here?

What the ferk are they doing here??  :o

Im here standing in front of him, I couldn’t move for bull’s sake! I need help here!


Ralph went beside me.

“Are you ok?” he might’ve noticed me being such an effin statue here.

I tried my best to speak.

“Y-yeah, I-I think I’m quite alright.”

“Ah Ralph sige ayos lang si Jaja don’t worry, ipasyal mo na niece mo baka naiinip na sia eh.”

Buti naisip ni Jess na lumapit mygoodness!

“Ok, alis na kami. See you next time.” Alam ko gusto niang malaman kung anong nangyayari pero siguro naisip din niang wala na siang kinalaman dun. “Bye.”

So they were finally out of the scene, ako nalang, si Jess, si Matt at Aishen, dagdag mo na din si Kenkoy. Darniitt, bakit ngayon pang nakabihis akong ganto saka nia ko nakita, tsss.  :(

“O pare, andito pala kayo.”

Ako? Aun nakatayo parin sa harap nila, hindi makapagsalita, naghihintay ng milagro o kung anumang pwedeng mangyari.

Hindi pa rin makaimik si Matt.

“Tara sa table namin, dun nalang tayo sabay sabay na kumain.”

Pag-aaya ni Jess sa kanila, anak ka ng kalapares Jessica bakit mo pa sila ininvite, paano ako kakain sa harap ng mga yan, ngayon palang hindi na ako makagalaw!

“Tara na gaga ka, gumalaw ka na jan para ka ng tanga jan, hindi ka model ng fast food na toh.” Bulong ni Jess saka nia ko hinila papunta sa table naming, ung fave place namin ni Matt.

Ang tatanga tangang Matt naman sumunod, kasama ang Aishen nia. Yiiih! Bakit kaya hindi nalang sila nagsolo noh! Sasama sama pa samin, tsss.  >:(

“Matt, what do you want to eat?”

Sabi ni Aishen girl pagkaupo naming lahat, parang walang nangyari ah? ??? Hindi naman ako makatingin sa kanila,  :-[  si Matt naman pakiramdam ko nakatitig parin sakin hanggang ngayon. Epal ka Matt umalis ka na sa harapan ko.

“Matt??” hindi sia napapansin ni Matteo eh, sakin kasi nakatitig. ;D “Ok ka lang ba?”

“Huh?”

“Sabi nia kung anong gusto mong kainin daw.” Si Jess na ang sumagot, napansin nia din kasi eh. “Kanina ka pa kasi nia tinatanong  para kang wala sa sarili mo jan.”

“Ah ganun ba, sorry. Ikaw anong gusto mo kainin?”

“I’ll have 1pc. Chicken with a large 7up.”

::) Hakk, ang sweet nio naman.  >:(

“Ok. Ako nalang o-order.”

yeah pang-order mo sia Matteo, palagyan mo ng lason. ;D

Then he stood up and went to the counter, ako naman nakatingin lang sa pagkain ko.

“Jaja..”

Tama ba un? ??? Kinakausap ako ni Aishen girl?

I faced her.

“You really look pretty.”

Nung sinabihan ako nila Jess na maganda daw ako, nagalit ako na naflattered. Ngayong si Aishen ang nagsabi, hindi ko alam ang nararamdaman ko. Ewan.
 
“Thank you.” Un lang ang nakaya kong sabihin. ANO DAW? . “I’ll be back to being the real Jaja tomorrow.”

“That’s no-real Jaja, I’m pretty sure that your heart says that you are a LADY now.”

Kaming 3, ako, Jess at Kenkoy napatingin sa kania. How come? Kilala nia ba ko? Alam nia ba pagkatao ko? Alam nia ba? Huh?

“You don’t know what you’re saying.”

I’m trying to stay calm, naiinis ako. Para bang, alam nia ko eh hindi naman talaga.

“I know.” She said seriously.  “I can see it in your eyes.”













I got up from where I was sitting.

“Miss Mondez, don’t try to make some good impression. First of all, you don’t know who I am to say such things like that. This is the first time you talked to me after your first day in our class.”

I couldn’t control my feelings, I don’t know why....

“Uyy Jaja umupo ka na nga, tama na yan.”

“You’ve been with MY BEST FRIEND since the day you came, since the day you came into his life. Lemme count, almost 3weeks now goodness. Dumating ka lang nagkandaleche leche na kaming magbest friend. 3weeks Ms. Mondez is such a short period of time and yet it feels like the years Matt and I had, had been like nothing when you came into the scene. “


Teka, bakit ba ko nagkakaganito? Hindi ba ko masyadong OA? Ano bang pinagsasabi ko? Hindi ko macontrol....


Aishen girl did not speak. No words came out from her mouth. The hell I care.














“Jaja, what are you saying?”






He was already there?




Did he hear me??




























Then SHE walked out.



ohk lang po ba ung up o mejo boring na??

comments please... :)
« Last Edit: July 06, 2008, 09:55:28 pm by miEmiKsmiNx_003 »

istarrific

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1st tagger ulet. Ang ganda ng update mo! :D Feel na feel ko na parang ako si Jaja. ;D

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ganun?? hindi ko nga ganun ka-feel ngayon, hehe.. out of the blue update..  ;D

ok lang ba sia talaga sis? ehe.. magmula ng ako ay naokray naconscious ako, hehehe..

dapat nga si Jaja ang magwwalk out kaso naisip ko si Aishen naman ang sinigawan, hehehe.. ;)

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Ok lang yung pagokray niya sayo. Wag mo na intindihin yun. Akin kase, di ko tinitignan kung pano mo ginagawa yung story. Ang saken, yung content ang pinaka importante. :)

Maganda, siya pramis. Belib me. :D

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hehehe... tenchu yang yang...  :-*

i belib uuu...  ;D

up ka na din.. san na napadpad sina Harvi??  :D

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No problem ate Mikxx. Yes you must belib meeee! :D
Sina papa Harvz? Sa Los Angeles.  ::) Sowsyal.

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haha.. nakapaglanding na ba sila nian?   :D

i do belib yuuu.. :) :)

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Jaja i think over na yun ginawa mo
tapos andun pa si Matt

l*che na man kasi yang Aishen na yan


next na sis
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`.. bwahahaha.. buti nga xau aishen !!!
`.. go jaja !!!
`.. iqaw naman matt.. anu sa tingin mho ang sinasabi nia ??
`.. nakoo... ahahahha...
`.. GO JAJA !!!
`.. next na po sis !!!
`.. tcgbu !!!

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Go Jaja! Buti nga sayo Aishen. Pwe! Hahahaha :D

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that's right! walk out b*tch! (ang sama ko)

GO Jaja!

si Matt naman kakainis tsk
MYSPACE/FRIENDSTER::: just PM me/lolz
a sad *love* story [the end]
if nothing last forever...
would you be my nothing?

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Psst Mikx! Haha loka loka ka talaga. Lab lab na din kita! Hahahaha Ayos ba? Antaray!

Walangya ka Aishen walk out queen hmph. I dont like you talaga  >:( Hahaha nadadala nanaman ako  :D Sige na Matt kampihan mo si Aishen girl mo bahala ka sa buhay mo hahahahahaha! Go Jaja!

<33 lab lab  :D

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Di ko nga alam kung maglalanding pa sila, di ko ren alam kung tatapusin ko ba story ko o hinde. Di ko na alam ending eh, parang ang pangit kase. :D

miEmiKsmiNx_003

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Jaja i think over na yun ginawa mo
tapos andun pa si Matt

l*che na man kasi yang Aishen na yan


next na sis



over nga eh, galit na galit kasi, haha..

di nga nia alam san nanggaling ung galit niang un..  ;D

anyways, thanks for reading sis!

`.. bwahahaha.. buti nga xau aishen !!!
`.. go jaja !!!
`.. iqaw naman matt.. anu sa tingin mho ang sinasabi nia ??
`.. nakoo... ahahahha...
`.. GO JAJA !!!
`.. next na po sis !!!
`.. tcgbu !!!


thanks ara.. ;)

nakuu lilitaw din ang P.O.V. ni Aishen in the coming chaps...

Go Jaja! Buti nga sayo Aishen. Pwe! Hahahaha :D


ganun, i-pwe daw ba si Aishen, hehehe!

that's right! walk out b*tch! (ang sama ko)

GO Jaja!

si Matt naman kakainis tsk


antitindi ng galit nio kay Aishen ah, hahaha.. ;D

mabait naman sia eh, :D

thanks for the support sis!  :) :)

Psst Mikx! Haha loka loka ka talaga. Lab lab na din kita! Hahahaha Ayos ba? Antaray!

Walangya ka Aishen walk out queen hmph. I dont like you talaga  >:( Hahaha nadadala nanaman ako  :D Sige na Matt kampihan mo si Aishen girl mo bahala ka sa buhay mo hahahahahaha! Go Jaja!

<33 lab lab  :D


 ;D ;D antaray talaga!  ;D ;D

walk out queen ba?? :D

di ko nga alam sinong kakampihan ni Matt, hehehe...

lab lab <33

Di ko nga alam kung maglalanding pa sila, di ko ren alam kung tatapusin ko ba story ko o hinde. Di ko na alam ending eh, parang ang pangit kase. :D


ano namang pangit ka jan, paglandingin mo sila huh! mauubusan ng gas ung eroplano . hehe! basta tapusin natin story natin ohk?!  ;) ;)



thanks for the support :) :) !!!
« Last Edit: July 07, 2008, 06:13:21 pm by miEmiKsmiNx_003 »

 

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