--Break the ICE and LET the LOVE begin--CHAP35^THE END^GOODBYE**

[meena23]

si Matt nga naku mag kakagusto na siya kay JaJa

next na sis

[yohonae]

OMG  exciting! UYYY MATT     iloveittt!

[love_boo62]

`.. inlababo qa na matt..
`.. aminin mho na.. wulang mawawula.. pramiz !!! dali..
`.. hahaha..
`.. next na po sis !!!
`.. nice update po pla !!!
`.. tcgbu !!!

[iloveyounot]

si Matt nga

next na sis

[miEmiKsmiNx_003]

At yan ang aabangan ko! 
Nalalike ko na si Aishen girl. Nababaitan ako. Haha!

morning!!

hmmm.. mabait si Aishen, very reserved and decent, pero pag na-in love na yan hindi na natin alam ang mangyayari.. hahaha.. spoiler daw ba.. ^__^

labyuuuu yang yang..! thanks for supporting this story.. 

si Matt nga naku mag kakagusto na siya kay JaJa

next na sis

ehe, hindi pa natin alam.. mei Aishen pa kasi sia sa tabi nia eh.. 

thanks kim...

OMG  exciting! UYYY MATT     iloveittt!

hehe, salamat sis for the support.. i really appreciate all the supports.. 

`.. inlababo qa na matt..
`.. aminin mho na.. wulang mawawula.. pramiz !!! dali..
`.. hahaha..
`.. next na po sis !!!
`.. nice update po pla !!!
`.. tcgbu !!!

thanks ara! hehe, mei mawawala.. si Aishen, haha...

si Matt nga

next na sis

thanx sis! thank y0ou thank you.. 

[mica_bee]

nalaglag ba panga mo Matt? hahahaha  dapat lang!  nice update sis!

[miEmiKsmiNx_003]

nalaglag ba panga mo Matt? hahahaha  dapat lang!  nice update sis!

thanks sis... 

sobrang thank you for reading...

[istarrific]

Ay ganun daw ba? Ok lang, marami ng girls na ganun ngayun. Matinik pagdating sa pagibig. Naks!

I lab you too ate Mikx!

[miEmiKsmiNx_003]

haha, oo matinik pagdating sa pag-ibig sis, mei know ako ganun...




AKO..

 


ako ay nitatamad mag-update ngayon, antok ako eh.. ehehe.. hindi ako makpag-isip ng maaus.. bukas nalang siguro ulit or maya maya pag nasa mood na..

thanks for reading the story po... sana support nio til the end.. 

salamat.. ^__^

[Aristotle]

first of all, your title is too long. It's more like a short slogan of the story.

second, there is not much significance on some of title of your chapters(eg chapter 1: first move on first day). It kind of confused me, first day of what? anyway, it's not really compulsary to make a title out of every chapter, but it's still up to you. A title for a chapter should contain a theme of the certain chapter.

Avoid using (...) or uhm often, try to stick to a correct grammar even if you're using taglish language.

besides that, your story is quite nice.

[miEmiKsmiNx_003]

i appreciate your comment, thanks.

About the title, yep it's more like a short slogan of the story.

And sorry if I often use (...) or uhm, nasanay na kasi ako. Pati dun sa mga non sense titles in every chap, sorry, beginner lang po, still learning. ^_^

anyway, thanks for quite appreciating my story..

[istarrific]

I read it na. Ok lang yan, tips Ako na una sa readers list mo na susuportahan to till the end of the dayy.

[love_boo62]

`.. hahah.. yaan mho na si aishen !!
`.. mas maganda naman si jaja at saka mas matagal na silang ano ni jaja..
`.. wihee !!!
`.. aishen, hanap qa na lahn ng iba !!!
`.. kay jaja na xe si matt e.. wahahaha.. 
`.. next na po sis !!!
`.. tcgbu !!!

[priSzy]

eheem.. si matt nga sis..
pinapa excite niO lng ung readers.. i luv it!!

nxt up na ate.. hehe..

[Aristotle]

i appreciate your comment, thanks.

About the title, yep it's more like a short slogan of the story.

And sorry if I often use (...) or uhm, nasanay na kasi ako. Pati dun sa mga non sense titles in every chap, sorry, beginner lang po, still learning. ^_^

anyway, thanks for quite appreciating my story..

no worries.

a good writer will accept criticisms and take note of it to improve his/her work. I understand that you're a beginner. As a beginner, it will take a lot of effort to make a 'better' story for everyone. It won't take long, just keep on writing.

I'm looking forward for the next chapter by the way.