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Author Topic: CHICKBOY [CHAPTER 1 POSTED PG.2~!]  (Read 4844 times)

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Re: CHICKBOY [PROLOGUE POSTED~!]
« Reply #15 on: June 23, 2008, 04:37:49 am »
new reader here

ganda naman
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Re: CHICKBOY [PROLOGUE POSTED~!]
« Reply #16 on: June 23, 2008, 10:11:15 am »

Awww! Thanks for the welcome, gezel.
I missed you big time! :) Hehe! Anyway, I hope this will be successful just like 99TH DAY. :) Thanks for the full time support! Naks. ;)





i missed you too!! tagal mo nawala eh, sigurado ako magiging successful itong story mo tulad ng 99th day, madami kaming sumusuporta sayo  :)
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Re: CHICKBOY [PROLOGUE POSTED~!]
« Reply #17 on: June 23, 2008, 11:26:48 am »
sure naman sis grace!Ü friends.. friends.. i think nakapagcomment na ako sa 99th mo pero once lang.. ginagawa ko din kasi nung time na yun yung start nung story ko dito.. hahaha.. saan na ang up? :'(  :D

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Re: CHICKBOY [PROLOGUE POSTED~!]
« Reply #18 on: June 23, 2008, 02:18:29 pm »
hello po! shiela here.. ganda ng intro! hehe.. next na po ;)
I didn't know that I could be so blind to all that is so real but as illusion dies I see there is so much to be revealed.

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Re: CHICKBOY [PROLOGUE POSTED~!]
« Reply #19 on: June 23, 2008, 10:23:33 pm »
yes, present ako. haha!
aww. i miss you too.  :)
ang tagal mo kasing nawala. what happened to you?  :D
okay naman ako. happy dahil walang pasok tomorrow. im kinda busy na din sa school.  :'(  :'( ikaw musta?


awwww.
oo nga, antagal kong nawala!
hmmmm, wala lang, kasi naging busy ang lola eh. ;D
ok rin ako, I guess I still can't post the update tonight. :D
marami pang gagawin.
may duty pa ako bukas. :D

hi ate.... I'm one of your "AVID FANS" nakz... may ganun pa...?!.. hehehehe... UNIQUE story mo kaya I like it and I'll support this all the way...
ps: your STORIES are cool! keep them ALIVE!I LOVE it soooo much! <333


Whoa,whoa,whoa! :o Sis, you made my day. :D Hehe! But seriously, thanks sa comment mo ha.. It really made a difference. Iniinspire mo akong magsulat ng magandang update. ;D Hehe! Thanks po talaga ha.. :D THANK YOU!!!


hehe ...
nag.post nako hindi ko maintay ang bukas ...
eeh
ala kasing magawa kaya ayan binasa ko rin ...!!
anu nga pala ulet name mo??! ???
nakalimutan ko po eeh !! ::) ::)

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nice naman ...
sabay mahirap ngang mag.move on !!
nakikiramay nalang ako [joks] ;D

wait ko nalang po ang next

*mmua :-*


Grace po name ko. Hehe! Salamat po sa comment ule! :D Di po ako sure kung mapopost ko 'yong update tonight. Malalaman nalang natin pag meron na! HEHE! :D



naks.
new story ni ms. author. HAHA.
ayiyi..  ;D
next na pooo. hahaha


uy! anditooooo ka pare! ;D
salamats naman! :D

ganda ng intro! intro pa lang ganda na! next na po!


Wow! Thanks po! Salamat ng marami. :D

new reader here

ganda naman


Awww. thanks po! Salamat ng marami. Grace here po by the way. :)


i missed you too!! tagal mo nawala eh, sigurado ako magiging successful itong story mo tulad ng 99th day, madami kaming sumusuporta sayo  :)


Awww! Sana nga maging successful rin 'to. I hope! ;D Salamat sa support niyo! ;)


sure naman sis grace!Ü friends.. friends.. i think nakapagcomment na ako sa 99th mo pero once lang.. ginagawa ko din kasi nung time na yun yung start nung story ko dito.. hahaha.. saan na ang up? :'(  :D


Awwww. Thanks aishhhh. :D Hmmm. New account mo 'to? Or what? Hehe! Hindi ako sure kung makakaup ako tonight! Malalaman lang natin yan. ;D HEHE! Konting hintay nalang. May duty pa kasi ako bukas. :D

hello po! shiela here.. ganda ng intro! hehe.. next na po ;)


Hi shiela! Thanks po! Grace here. :D *shakes hand*

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A/N:

GIRLS/GUYS, DI AKO SURE KUNG MAPOPOST KO 'YUNG UPDATE TONIGHT. JUST WAIT AND BE PATIENT, KASI MAIPOPOST KO TALAGA SIYA WITHIN THIS WEEK. THANKS PO SA MGA SUMUSUPORTA! :) TIRA TIRA! ;D :D

-GRACE



what could be the
FORTUNE of that
CHICKBOY? ___

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Re: CHICKBOY [PROLOGUE POSTED~!]
« Reply #20 on: June 23, 2008, 11:21:56 pm »
nice story sis
suportahan ko to
new reader mo pala ako
Miel is the name
O0
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Re: CHICKBOY [PROLOGUE POSTED~!]
« Reply #21 on: June 23, 2008, 11:27:58 pm »
hi ate Grace!
you're back!..
interesting tong new ishtory mu ahh?!..
hmm..
nice intro...
there's such thing as
Z E R O Gravity

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Re: CHICKBOY [PROLOGUE POSTED~!]
« Reply #22 on: June 24, 2008, 10:13:39 am »
nyc story hap./...interesting...il wait for the update
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Re: CHICKBOY [PROLOGUE POSTED~!]
« Reply #23 on: June 24, 2008, 10:19:16 am »

Awww. thanks po! Salamat ng marami. Grace here po by the way. :)



Lauren nga pala

next na plz :)
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Re: CHICKBOY [PROLOGUE POSTED~!]
« Reply #24 on: June 24, 2008, 05:12:39 pm »
support ko tong story mo :) mariella here :)
i hate lOve PINK.. any prOblem?!

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Re: CHICKBOY [PROLOGUE POSTED~!]
« Reply #25 on: June 24, 2008, 09:09:46 pm »
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"PRACTICE'S OVERRRR!" I made a stop signal, and then I fixed my baseball cap and then I dropped the bat then I shrugged off my long bullcrap hair. Would you want me to cut it? Definitely no, right? But hell yeah, I'm gonna cut it... YOU'LL JUST SEE. 8)



Anyway, as you can see, I am the head player, hindi ba obvious? 8) 2 years ago, I went in this SPORT and now, you see it--I'm the best baseball player in this UNIVERSITY. >:D But you know what? I really,really HATE this sport. Because basketball owns my heart. So yeah, I just don't like baseball.



Shocked? Nah.. It's because--I NEVER LOVE THIS SPORT,until... we broke up.



You see, Lucas never wanted baseball as a sport for a girl. He hate girls who play this sport. Sabi daw kasi niya, TOMBOY iyong dating. And it's soooo friiigin nice to play this now, since we are over--and since that HE REALLY HATES to see a girl, especially 'me', playing this sport. ^-^


Oh, shiiit! Let's not talk about it anymore. :-\ Nakakainis isipin. Naalala ko na nagmukha akong tanga! >:(


"Oy,pare! 8) " Ayan, ayan ang adobo kong best friend, si Jas. Yeah, his real name is Jaseth pala, wala lang share ko lang, nice no? ::)


Anyway, we've been bestfriends, since.. i don't know when!? Eh, ang pagkaalam ko kasi, si Jaseth parang kapatid ko na. Mahal na mahal namin ang isa't isa, siyempre--as bestfriends, tsaka parang bro & sis na iyong turingan namin. 8) Bigla ko nalang binaba 'yung pants ko, tapos biglang napatingin si Jas sa akin.



"P-p-pare?! Anong ginagawa mo!? Hoy,hoy! Hindi pwede yan dito! :o " He covered his eyes with his hands, and then he parang he peeked in sa space between his index finger and middle finger.


Tumawa nalang ako. Nako, hindi ba niya alam na may shorts ako? ^-^ Nung nakita niyang naka shorts ako, hinay-hinay niyang kinuha 'yung mga kamay niyang nakapatong sa mga mata niya tapos muntikan nang malaglag iyong panga niya. "SUSMEEEE!! ANG PUTI NAMAN-- :-X "



Binatukan ko siya. Oo, tama kayo. First time niyang nakitang nag shorts ule ako. See? Ganun ako ka conservative. I mean this 'mini' short-like. ^-^ When he said that, it looked as if lahat ng taong nasa paligid namin na may ginagawa--tumigil. As in, all eyes were on me..






...and on my hot legs. 8)






I raised my chin up, and then kinuha ko 'yung rubber band sa hair ko, tapos naglugay ako nang buhok. I just noticed na si Jas panay tingin sa akin pala. ;D "Hoy! Parang nakakita ka ng artista ah. ^-^ Wag mo na nga akong pagnasaan. >:D " Nag blink siya, tapos nun nag sign ako na parang 'may-laway-ka-sa-gilid-nang-labi-mo' na sign. Pinunas niya iyong gilid ng labi niya, tapos binatukan niya ako.



"Sira ulo ka! >:( Wala namang laway ah! ??? " Tumawa ako na parang ewan, then all of the sudden we heard footsteps that were fast approaching us. Ilang segundo bago naming nalaman kung sino, nagkatitigan pa kami ni Jas tapos bigla siyang napalingon sa likod niya nung may humawak na kamay sa balikat niya.




"Ano kailangan niyo!? >:( " Napakunot noo nalang ako nun, hindi ko kasi alam kung bakit nilapitan kami ng mga kabarkada ni Lucas eh. :-\ I know he's up to something.



Minutes after Jas said that, I already saw Lucas standing before me. He neared me, and then he placed the tip of his index finger at the tip of my cap. Tinignan niya si Jas ng masama, tapos si Jas naman nakatingin sa akin na para bang 'go! awayin mo na siya, Max!' na mukha.



I looked at the feet of Lucas, and then I brought my stare up to his eyes and then I placed my right arm on his left shoulder and gave it a grip.


"P--" Before I could utter a word, tinignan na ako ni Lucas starting sa paa hangang sa mga mata. I supposed na naging ganito siya, kasi nga naman--nakita niya akong na ka 'mini' shorts nga.


"Maxx---"





"Lucas!" Napalingon kaming lahat. Then I saw his 'girlfriend' running toward us.



I took a step backward, and then napayuko ako tsaka natahimik. No, hindi ako nagseselos. Naiirita ako sa babaeng 'to. Shocks naman, she's Aira, my all-time-favorite-rival kasi eh.


But now, nangunguna na siya sa akin. Kasi naman? I gave up. Mahina kasi ako eh. Oo mahina. Pero take note. NOON yun. NOON ako mahina--ngayon..bago na ang lahat. Bato na ang puso ko, at hindi na ako mahina. Tandaan niyo 'yan. Kasi kahit ilang beses ako matumba pa ako ilang beses ngayon, BABANGON pa rin ako.


Patuloy akong nakinig sa sinasabi ni Aira, then tinignan ko sila. Tumingin si Lucas sa akin, tapos hinila niya si Aira, then he kissed him infront of me. French Kiss pa yata 'yun eh! Eww.


I can't imagine that his tongue which was once in mine but now this time, it's already in someone else's dirty tongue. :P




I shrugged them off, and then I gave them a look. Tapos tumawa ako. "Waw, ang hot naman nun. ^-^ Can we now leave you guys behind? ??? 8) Thanks,yea." Paalis na kami ni Jas nun, kaso bigla nalang binanggit niya pangalan ko.




"Maxxine." Tumigil ako sa paglalakad, tapos I stayed in my place. "My bestfriend Gio wants to play basketball with you. Can you do him that favor?" Gio? Sino 'yun? "He said he won't be leaving the gym unless you come and meet him." Hah? What the heck? Ano 'to? Nirereto niya ako? Shut the fvck up, shiiit. :P




I didn't say a word, tapos nagpatuloy ako sa paglakad. But then, hindi kinaya ng konsensya ko, so ang ginawa ng napakatangang ako ay pumunta sa locker room ng girls tapos nag bihis ng JERSEY at pumunta sa gym para i-meet itong si 'GIO' na sinasabi ng dakilang ex kong si Lucas.


When I arrived there, first and foremost, nilagay ko 'yung knapsack ko sa may bleachers banda, tapos... kinuha ko 'yung gatorade, then uminom ako. 8) Ilalagay ko na sana ule 'yung gatorade sa knapsack ko, kaso may shadow akong napansin. I looked behind me only to find out na may isang matangkad na lalakeng naka-school uniform na nakatayo sa harapan ko.




"Ano ba yan? Ikaw ba 'yung sinasabi nilang malalaro ko sa basketball?! Eh, ang payat payat mo tsaka tignan mo nga?! Parang duster na 'yung jersey mo! Ang pandak pandak mo pa! Tsaka ano yan?! Lalaro ka ng basketball, naka high cut ka na chucks?! :o :o "




I pointed my index finger at him, and then tinurok ko 'yung dibdib niya gamit nito.





"Hoy ikaw! Hindi porket payatot ako tsaka pandak ako tsaka masyadong maluwag na parang duster 'tong jersey ko at kahit na naka- high cut na chucks ako hindi ibig sabihin na matatalo mo na ako! >:( 8) "



Akala niya magpapatalo ako.



Hinding-hindi na ulit ako magpapatalo pa... hinding-hindi na.




A/N:

Ayan na po ang update! Okay lang ba? Feeling ko ang boring kasi. Thanks po sa mga comments ninyo! (:

-GRACE
« Last Edit: June 24, 2008, 09:15:03 pm by inluvagal_08 »
what could be the
FORTUNE of that
CHICKBOY? ___

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Re: CHICKBOY [PROLOGUE POSTED~!]
« Reply #26 on: June 24, 2008, 09:11:39 pm »
babasa muna ako! first tagger! next na po!

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Re: CHICKBOY [CHAPTER 1 POSTED PG.2~!]
« Reply #27 on: June 24, 2008, 09:35:32 pm »
whoa! whoa! whoa!
sino naman yang GIO na yan ha?!..
naku ang daming fafables ah..
hahha!
next na ate grace!
there's such thing as
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Re: CHICKBOY [CHAPTER 1 POSTED PG.2~!]
« Reply #28 on: June 24, 2008, 10:36:31 pm »
naka naman! astig naman niya!! haha
atapang atao. dang!! haha
nice update ms. author.
next na. hehe

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Re: CHICKBOY [CHAPTER 1 POSTED PG.2~!]
« Reply #29 on: June 24, 2008, 11:17:11 pm »
you got a nice concept..  :D i like it...
mejo same pala tayo, i have my character as a tomboy din eh, i didn't know na ganun din sayo, ehe.. but different stories...  ;) am just a beginner lang pati.. and i don't have a title pa ^_^

anyway, i'm your new reader and supporter...  ;) mikx here..   :) :)

 

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