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The Doll Story
« on: May 16, 2008, 03:26:31 pm »
a short story from a thousand miles away..
about a doll with hopes..
no one never knew..
about her..


the story started with once upon a time like any other fairy tales do...
but do you actually believe that this story is not a happy ending?
because how could endings be happy... if they are endings?


once upon a time there was a doll named Ann Sherina.
she had perfect round eyes and cute red lips.
she was owned by a boy named Cyril.

This doll was given to him by his mom after her death. That's why even though a doll is not actually for boys, he took care of it.

because of his care and love, the doll was gifted by a heart.. the one who gave it was not yet known..

Ann Sherina always looks after Cyril. When Cyril sleeps, she would walk by his side and kiss his cheeks softly.

Cyril never knew the doll is alive.

One day when Cyril was away, Ann sherina heard a voice..

"Do you love him?"
"Of course I do.."
"I could make you human... for I knew that you made use of the heart I gave to you wisely..."
"May I ask one question then?"
"What is it my dear Ann Sherina?"
"Why have you given me a beating.. human heart?"
"For I knew that he had so much love.. he needs something in return.. though he doesn't know.."

a light came through. the doll became a human.

Cyril never knew about this. He thought that he left his doll somewhere. He cried for endless nights and days.

With these endless nights, Ann Sherina was the one who comforted him. She was happy to touch his hand... his tears... his face... as a human.

They became the best of friends.

One afternoon, when Ann Sherina is ready to tell Cyril the whole truth, that she became human because of his love for him,

Cyril confessed to Ann Sherina that he loved somebody else.

"I loved a girl in school. Her name is Karylle. She's pretty and nice. I don't know how to tell that I love her... I wish that I could give her something... something that could make her know my real feelings for her."

Ann Sherina did not have the chance to tell her true feelings to Cyril.

Because of anger and jealousy, she went to the girl that Cyril talked about. She brought a knife with the intention of killing her.

She saw Karylle, the girl whom Cyril loved, sleeping. And when she was about to stab her, she began to sleep talk.

"I love you Cyril... but I just don't know how to tell you. I wish I had something to let you know my true feelings for you."

Ann Sherina cried then threw the knife away. The voice spoke,

"What do you want me to do?"
"Make me a doll again... A talking one."

The next day, Karylle found a doll beside her. She embraced it and found out that it was a talking one. She smiled and thought that this was the perfect gift for Cyril to know her real feelings about him.

The girl gave the doll to Cyril. Cyril was real happy because he had found his long lost doll. He embraced it and noticed that it talked...

"I love you."

Cyril knew about Karylle's real feelings.
Karylle knew about Cyril's real feelings.
Then they lived happily ever after.

But then...
they never knew about the doll's real feelings.
Cyril never knew..
that besides Karylle's confession...

the doll, Ann Sherina, also confessed to him..
saying,
"I love you."

 :'(
« Last Edit: November 06, 2008, 02:20:15 pm by peach_xvision »

peach_xvision

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Re: ..the doll story..
« Reply #1 on: May 16, 2008, 03:33:58 pm »
uhm.. hehe.. sana maraming magbasa... first story [short story lang]... :)

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Sis try mo po siyang i-post sa Short Stories... Suggestion lang po. :)
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oh God sis!
i ken releyt, i ken releyt!

kat here, new reader!
ang sakit naman nun!
tagos na tagos.

continue mo please???

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ayy.. the end na ba yun?
maganda siya.
kakaiba.
sana maging long story..
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peach_xvision

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Sis try mo po siyang i-post sa Short Stories... Suggestion lang po. :)

sis.. di ako marunong.. pano ba yun ilagay dun? haha.. :) paensya na.. newbie lang po eh. :)

peach_xvision

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oh God sis!
i ken releyt, i ken releyt!

kat here, new reader!
ang sakit naman nun!
tagos na tagos.

continue mo please???


nako paensya na.. naligaw lang kasi yung short story ko.. short lang talaga to. newbie lang kasi ako dito.. well anyway.. triny ko lang magpost.. broken kasi ako ngayon. haha.

anyways.. thank you. maraming salamat  [haha.. ang redundant] ;)

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ayy.. the end na ba yun?
maganda siya.
kakaiba.
sana maging long story..
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maraming thanks po.. kaso promise.. di ko talaga alam na ilipat to sa short stories.. thanks sis at nagustuhan mo..

mm.. the ending na yun.. kaya nga hindi siya happy ending..  :'(

sensya na puu..  :(

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ang ganda naman ng story mo. :) haaaay. would you mind kung gawan ko ito ng mahabang story? just asking. :) thanks!

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ang ganda naman ng story mo. :) haaaay. would you mind kung gawan ko ito ng mahabang story? just asking. :) thanks!

hi..  :)

yup oo naman.. it would be an honor.  ;D thanks..  :)

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maraming thanks po.. kaso promise.. di ko talaga alam na ilipat to sa short stories.. thanks sis at nagustuhan mo..

mm.. the ending na yun.. kaya nga hindi siya happy ending..  :'(

sensya na puu..  :(

`oh. it's okay. :)
hmm.. pero sana may continuation.
Haha.
pero maganda naman
siya kahit short lang.. :D

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`oh. it's okay. :)
hmm.. pero sana may continuation.
Haha.
pero maganda naman
siya kahit short lang.. :D

wee. thanks po. :)

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Re: ..the doll story.. [my first short story.. sana po magustuhan niyo..]
« Reply #12 on: November 06, 2008, 01:03:42 pm »
ganda2. Kaso sad ung ending. :'(

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Re: ..the doll story.. [my first short story.. sana po magustuhan niyo..]
« Reply #13 on: November 06, 2008, 02:16:21 pm »
ganda2. Kaso sad ung ending. :'(

ay oo nga sad yung ending ...

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Re: The Doll Story
« Reply #14 on: November 06, 2008, 03:23:58 pm »
uwaw!!!

So sad ng ending.. Kaganda pa mandin.. Hayyyy :'(

 

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