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Author Topic: A Stupid Promise: "I know everything that happened." See p.72 :D  (Read 55860 times)

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A Stupid Promise
© lissy_14

I did not believe in LOVE until you came into my life.

You showed me its true meaning , you made me realize that it existed.

And you made me realize that
I ALREADY LOVE YOU.

But I guess it’s all too late now since we both made…




A Stupid Promise.

LINKS:

Prologue: The Past
01|02|03|04

Chapters
1|2|3|4|5|6|7.1|7.2|8|9|10
11|12|13|14|15.1|15.2|16|17|18|19|20
21|22|23|24|25.1|25.2|26.1|26.2|27.1|27.2|28|29|30.1|30.2
31.1|31.2|31.3

ASP MULTIPLY SITE

Characters' Pic
*thanks to Scrapblog

OLD POSTER
*thanks to PAULYN a.k.a ulap~ :]

LATEST OFFICIAL POSTER
*thanks to MARENG GELLIE a.k.a untamed77angel :]

NEW OFFICAL POSTER

CHANEL. MIKO. JAMIE.


FOR IMAGINARY PURPOSES ONLY. I DO NOT OWN THESE. I JUST GOT THEM FROM OTHER SITES.

Chanel Madrigal

Miko Fontanilla

Jamie Salcedo

Cassie Hizon

Charles Hizon

David Anderson

DISCLAIMER: Names of characters, some places and events are fictional. Any similarities to other people (either living or dead) and events are purely coincidental and not intended by the author.

DO NOT REDISTRIBUTE WITHOUT THE AUTHOR'S PERMISSION.
« Last Edit: March 14, 2010, 09:02:55 pm by lissy_14 »

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Re: A Stupid Promise: My 4th story *need readers and comments (:*
« Reply #1 on: May 12, 2008, 08:26:00 pm »
Lissy!!! Love the intro! I'm here! Start this please! I'm so excited! ;) :)
Check out my stories: EVER AFTER, LRT (Love Really takes Time), THEATER PLAY SEASON 1, TMW (Too Many Walls), THEATER PLAY SEASON 2, My Unfortunate Life, The Punishment and...

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Re: A Stupid Promise: My 4th story *need readers and comments (:*
« Reply #2 on: May 12, 2008, 08:28:12 pm »
ate lis! hi. :]]
hannah here. ^^
hm. new reader. (:
lurve the intro, ate.
i'll wait for the next. ;)
support ko 'to. [:
"until the day i DiE...
..i'd spill my heart for YOU."

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Re: A Stupid Promise: My 4th story *need readers and comments (:*
« Reply #3 on: May 12, 2008, 08:32:40 pm »
hi lis. Karla here. support ko ito.
interesting eh!! :)
next na. :)

"And I can't help who I love
And I find myself giving it all away


Cause I know I'm in love"

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Re: A Stupid Promise: My 4th story *need readers and comments (:*
« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2008, 08:35:44 pm »
wow! lissy. new story na naman. i'll support this. expect me!
don't commit when your'e not ready,don't keep others waiting endlessly

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« Reply #5 on: May 12, 2008, 09:11:18 pm »
ill support this one...

btw, ice here...
A man deprived of love and has dedicated his life seeking for revenge…

HADES

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« Reply #6 on: May 12, 2008, 09:22:19 pm »
Lissy! I like it. Update mo na. :)
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« Reply #7 on: May 12, 2008, 09:32:19 pm »
hi po, new reader here :]

Jen nga pala (:

continue niyo lang po to :

i like the into :D

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« Reply #8 on: May 12, 2008, 09:49:32 pm »
Lissy!!! Love the intro! I'm here! Start this please! I'm so excited! ;) :)

Ate Pau! I missed you! Haha. I'll post the part 1 of the prologue tomorrow. Mag-iipon lang ako ng comments. Haha.

ate lis! hi. :]]
hannah here. ^^
hm. new reader. (:
lurve the intro, ate.
i'll wait for the next. ;)
support ko 'to. [:

Hey Hannah! (: Thanks for reading this. Hope you'll support this til the end. Haha. I'll post the part 1 of the prologue tomorrow. ;)

hi lis. Karla here. support ko ito.
interesting eh!! :)
next na. :)

Thanks Karla! I'll post part 1 of the prologue tomorrow. ;)

wow! lissy. new story na naman. i'll support this. expect me!

Haloo Reg! Yes new story. Ganyan talaga kapag na-bored ako. Haha. Thanks thanks! Mwah!

ill support this one...

btw, ice here...

Hey Ice! Thanks. :) I hope you'll support this til the end.

Lissy! I like it. Update mo na. :)

Bea! You're here! Haha. I'll update it tomorrow. Maghahakot pa ako ng ibang comments. Kahit man lang umabot siguro ng page 2. Haha.

hi po, new reader here :]

Jen nga pala (:

continue niyo lang po to :

i like the into :D

Hey Jen! Welcome to my story thread. Haha. Thanks for reading! (:

I'll post the update tomorrow. Mag-iipon pa ako ng ilang comments. Kailangan umabot ng page 2. >:D Hehehe.

« Last Edit: May 12, 2008, 09:52:45 pm by lissy_14 »

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« Reply #9 on: May 12, 2008, 09:57:05 pm »
waah! ate it's me! wahehe..
Sabi naman sayo support ko stories mo eh.. hehe..
hirap lang talaga humabol sa iba eh.. hehe..

Continue po.. Mukhang maganda..
No! Maganda talaga.. intro palang eh.. wahaha..  :-* :D ;D

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« Reply #10 on: May 12, 2008, 10:26:19 pm »
hello!
kat here. new reader.
nice intro O0
that's the reason why i don't love promises.
Wahaha
naki-epal sa storya ng may storya e!
Wehehehe!

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« Reply #11 on: May 12, 2008, 10:47:24 pm »
ganda ng intro.
continue niyo lang po. :)
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« Reply #12 on: May 13, 2008, 04:31:00 pm »
wah! kawawa naman ako nalate sa pag reply!hihihi anyways...patuloy mo lang to liss! support ko din to! ;)

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« Reply #13 on: May 13, 2008, 04:32:14 pm »
waah! ate it's me! wahehe..
Sabi naman sayo support ko stories mo eh.. hehe..
hirap lang talaga humabol sa iba eh.. hehe..

Continue po.. Mukhang maganda..
No! Maganda talaga.. intro palang eh.. wahaha..  :-* :D ;D

Hello Kaycee! Haha. Wait, what should I call you? Kaycee or Kiche? Hehe.

Thanks for the comment! I'll post the prologue in awhile. ;)

hello!
kat here. new reader.
nice intro O0
that's the reason why i don't love promises.
Wahaha
naki-epal sa storya ng may storya e!
Wehehehe!


Hello Kat! Welcome dito. Haha. Same here. Actually, I really don't like making promises. XD LOL. Ang hirap kasi tuparin minsan. Haha.

ganda ng intro.
continue niyo lang po. :)

Hey sis! Thanks ah. What's your name nga pala?

wah! kawawa naman ako nalate sa pag reply!hihihi anyways...patuloy mo lang to liss! support ko din to! ;)

Rain! Nandito ka na rin. Yey! Haha. Thanks thanks. Post ko na iyong update in awhile. :>

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Re: A Stupid Promise: "The Past" Updated! *need readers and comments (:*
« Reply #14 on: May 13, 2008, 04:44:08 pm »
So, hindi ko na siya aantaying mag-page 2. I'll post the update na since marami-rami na nag comments. :> Thankies! Yay for all of you! ^_____^ By the way, iyong ipopost ko is iyong prologue. And ngayon pa lang sasabihin ko na, mahaba po siya. I divided it into 4 parts. It's about the past of our main character. Read on. ;)


Prologue

From a happy family to a broken family…

“Charlotte! Ano bang problema? Please naman, ayusin natin ito.”
“Ben, pagod na pagod na ako. Ayoko na! Hindi ko na kaya.”
“Pero paano na tayo? Paano na si Chanel? Kawawa naman iyong bata. Nadadamay pa sa away natin. Baka pwede pa nating pag-usapan ito.”

Nandito lang ako sa may gilid ng pintuan ng kwarto ko at nakikita kong nag-aaway sina mommy at daddy sa tapat ng kwarto ko. Hindi nila alam na nanonood ako sa kanilang dalawa. Akala ko noong una, wala lang pero nakita ko si mommy, meron siyang dalang mga maleta. Malinaw na nga ang pinapakita sa akin na maghihiwalay na ang mga magulang ko.

Napalingon sila pareho sa kwarto ko at nagulat sila nang nakita nila akong nakasilip sa kanila. Wala silang sinabi pareho. Si mommy nakatingin lang siya sa akin at sabay may pumatak na luha sa mga mata niya. Inalis niya iyong tingin niya sa akin at humarap uli siya kay daddy.

“I’m so sorry but I have to this. Basta, huwag na huwag mong pababayaan si Chanel.”

Pagkasabi niya nun kay daddy ay kinuha na niya ang mga maleta niya at tuluyan nang umalis. Narinig ko pa nga iyong malakas na pagsara ng pintuan namin eh.

5 years old lang ako noon at sobrang malapit ako sa mommy ko. Kaya nang marinig ko iyong malakas na pagsara ng pintuan namin pag-alis niya, hindi ko napigilang umiyak. Kaagad namang lumapit si daddy sa akin at niyakap ako.

Hindi ko alam ang reason kung bakit biglang kaming iniwan ni mommy. Basta magmula noon, naging malaki ang galit ko sa kanya. Akala ko pa man din noon, isa kaming happy family. Pero wala, nauwi rin sa pagiging broken family.

Nang gabing din iyon, tinabi ako ni daddy sa kanya sa pagtulog. Habang nanonood kami ng TV, meron akong tinanong sa kanya.

“Daddy, is there such thing as love?”

Napatingin naman sa akin si daddy nun at medyo napangiti.

“Ikaw Chanel, ang bata-bata mo pa tungkol sa love na ang tinatanong mo ah.”
“Daddy naman eh. Seryoso po kaya ako.”
“O sige sige. Ano nga uli iyong tanong mo?”
“Is there such thing as love?”

Medyo napakunot ng noo si daddy dun sa tanong ko sa kanya pero nung tumingin uli siya sa akin napangiti na lang siya at sinagot niya ako.

“Oo naman. Bakit mo naman naitanong iyon?”
“Eh kasi po kung meron talaga love, hindi tayo iiwanan ni mommy. Kaya niya tayo iniwan kasi di na niya tayo love.”
“Anak, hindi iyon totoo. Mahal na ka ng mommy mo.”
“Eh kung ganun bakit niya po tayo iniwan?”

Napabuntung-hininga na lang si daddy nun.

“Chanel, meron lang talagang mga bagay na hindi mo pa maiitindihan sa ngayon. Pero itong tatandaan mo, kahit iniwan ka ng mommy mo, mahal ka pa rin nun.”
“Eh bakit po kayo, di na po ba kayo mahal ni mommy?”

Natigilan si daddy sa tinanong ko sa kanya.

“Eh hindi po ba kapag isang family, dapat nagmamahalan ang isa’t isa? Eh parang wala naman tayo nun eh.”

Bigla akong hinawakan ni daddy iyong pareho kong kamay nang mahigpit at kahit alam kong malungkot din siya kagaya ko ngayon ay pinipilit pa ring ngumiti sa harapan ko.

“Don’t say that Chanel. Kahit iniwan na tayo ng mommy mo, nandito pa rin ang pagmamahalan. Nandyan ka at nandito ako. Kahit dalawa na lang tayo, we’re still a family. And I promise you, hinding-hindi kita iiwan. Gagawin ko ang lahat para lang maalagaan kitang mabuti at mabigyan kita ng magandang kinabukasan.”
“Promise yan daddy ah?”

Hinalikan niya ako sa noo ko.

“Oo. Promise ko yan anak.”


Comments please. :)
« Last Edit: August 23, 2009, 12:23:01 am by lissy_14 »

 

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