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« on: April 21, 2008, 06:18:06 pm »

Perfect? Purpek? Palpak?
I know deep within me that I can change from palpak to purpek to perfect.
It just takes time..

..to heal

..to recover

..and to move on

Just give me time and I'm sure..

..I'll be your PERFECT GIRL!





Why you?
Why not another girl?
Why did it have to be me?
Why did it have to be me and him?
Why..

..did it have to be us?





I never expected to fall for someone like you.
For someone..


..who doesn't even know the word fashion

...who doesn't even understand the meaning of being sociable

...who concealed herself within her.





“So you passed the school that you want to enter for college?!”  Shocked

“Uhm.. Yeah.. Sort of?!”  Undecided

“Well.. Hello?! As in H-E-L-L-O?! Aren’t you even happy?”

“I am..It’s just that..”   Embarrassed  Undecided  Sad

Owkhay.. So that was the scene a few months ago in my room.. And yeah I’m proud to say that I am college freshman now. And who am I talking to during that day? That’s Khimberli or Khim for short.. And who am I? I’m Jecca and this is where it all started..

- 1 -

*knocks on door*

“Baby? Are you awake now? Khim’s waiting for you downstairs.”

That’s my mom. She still calls me baby even though I’m a college freshman already.

“I’m comin’ mom.”

“Hurry up. You’ll be late for your orientation.”

(Si mommy talaga. Hindi sanay sa Filipino time. Ayaw ng nalalate.)

Yup. Tama kayo sa mga iniisip niyo. Marunong akong magsalita ng Filipino. Batas nga lang sa bahay namin na magsalita ng Ingles. At bakit? Ewan ko rin kina mom at dad. Haha. Joke lang.  Cheesy For some time kasi tumira din kami sa states and within that ‘some time’ nasanay ang family ko na magsalita ng Ingles pero syempre hindi pa rin namin nakakalimutan ang aming mother tongue. Siguro naman gets niyo na kung bakit hindi sanay si mommy sa Filipino time?

[living room, 6:27 am]

“So you’re done?” Khim asked me sarcastically.  Huh

“Knock it off Khim. Don’t try to be like mom cause you’re even worse than her.”  Angry

“Ang taray naman ng inglesera kong bespren.” Lumapit sa kin si Khim at bumeso.

“Loka! Tara na nga.” Nagpaalam lang ako kay mom at dad tapos umalis na.

[car, 6:45 am]

“Handa ka na for orientation?” tanong sa kin ni Khim habang naghahanap ng fm station na may pinapatugtog na magandang kanta

“Ayos lang. Nakakatamad pa talaga. Second week of May palang pero ganito na ako ka-aga gumising. Imbes na dapat andun pa ako sa kama ko at masarap na natutulog, eto ako ngayon.. Nagddrive paputang taft. Hai..”  Undecided

“Wag ka ng magreklamo bespren. Kaw rin naman ang may gusto na pumasok dyan sa school na yan eh..” *tap sa shoulder ko* “..kaya ayos lang yan. Live with it.”  Wink

Hindi ko alam kung nang-aasar tong si Khim o ano eh.  Huh

“Yeah right.”

[school, 7:20 am]

Inihabilin ko na kay Khim yung kotse. Wag na kayo magtaka kung bakit pati si Khim ay gising na ng ganito ka-aga. May summer workshop yan somewhere in QC by 9 am. Pero bago makarating ng QC yang babaeng yan, marami pang tinitigilan. Ayos lang naman sa kin na gamitin niya yung kotse ko kasi pinapagasan niya naman eh.

Dire-diretso akong pumasok sa main gate.

“Miss yung form niyo po?” tanong sa kin nung isa sa mga lady guards ng school.

(Form?! What form?!)  Huh  Huh  Huh

"Miss?”

Owkhay.. So natataranta na ako dito..

(Anu ba yung form na sinasabi ng lady guard na to?!)

I was about to ask the lady guard but..

 Shocked  Shocked  Shocked

“The form she’s talking about is the paper where your schedule is encoded.” sabay labas nung sarili niyang form na binabanggit nung lady guard at dire-diretsong pumasok ng campus.

Sinundan ko ng tingin yung nagsalita para tignan kung sino siya kaya lang side view niya lang ang nakita ko kasi papasok na siya nung isang building.

“Miss?”

Hindi rin naman masyadong makulit tong lady guard na to. *lingon sa likod*  Shocked Ooopps.. Kaya naman pala.. Marami na rin palang pumapasok na mga mag-oorientation..

Pinakita ko na yung form ko dun sa lady guard at agad niya rin naman akong pinapasok.

(Central Plaza? Central Plaza? Central Plaza? Nasan ba ung sinasabi nilang Central Plaza dito? Dapat pala nagpasama nalang ako kay ate dito. Tsk tsk tsk.)

“Excuse me. Do you know where the Chess Plaza is?”

Tiningnan ko kung sino yung nagtanong sa kin, “Sorry. I’m actually lost too.”

Nag-sorry sa kin yung girl na nagtanong sa kin then umalis na rin siya.

(Hai.. Asan na ba yung Central Plaza na yun? It’s almost seven thirty.)

“Looking for the central plaza girl?”

 Shocked

(Wait! That voice sounds familiar.)

*lingon*

 Shocked

“Ate!”

(Tama hinala ko. Galing! Anu naman kaya ang ginagawa nito dito? All the while akala ko nasa bahay to at mahimbing na natutulog, yun pala andito rin.)

“Nawawala ka noh?”

“Duh! Obvious ba?!”

“Haha.. Chill out girl! Tara na nga. It’s seven thirty.”  Wink
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« Reply #1 on: April 21, 2008, 06:24:27 pm »

yieeeee! first tagger!!

bwahaha! first nga ba?

anyways! nice start sis!

steffie here. next na!
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« Reply #2 on: April 21, 2008, 09:29:50 pm »

hehe second ako...  Cheesy  Grin next na poh...
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« Reply #3 on: April 22, 2008, 05:25:41 pm »

yieeeee! first tagger!!

bwahaha! first nga ba?

anyways! nice start sis!

steffie here. next na!
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first ka nga po..
nice meeting you steffie..
bute naman at may bumasa ng story ko..
salamat sa pagpansin dito..
hehe..
vanna nga pala..
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« Reply #4 on: April 22, 2008, 05:27:25 pm »

hehe second ako...  Cheesy  Grin next na poh...

hello there..
second tagger..
hehe..
kumusta naman yun..
salamat sa pagbasa ha..
sana suportahan mo to til the end..
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« Reply #5 on: April 22, 2008, 05:30:02 pm »

mga sis..
i'll try to post the next chapter tomorrow..
salamat sa mga bumabasa nito..
yngatz lagi..
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« Reply #6 on: April 23, 2008, 10:16:48 pm »

sorry to keep you waiting girls..
i modified the first part to give you guys an idea about the personality of the main characters..
here's the second chapter..
hope you'll like it..



- 2 –

“What are you doing here? Akala ko nag-eenjoy ka pa dun sa kama mo eh.”

“Yeah. Whatever. Let me see your form.”

“Tell me what you are doing here first before I hand you my form.”  Cool

Ang abnoy ko noh? Kanina lang nagsisisi ako at hindi ako nagpasama kay ate, ngayon naman na andito ang ate ko, sinusungitan ko siya.  Wink  Cool

“Do you really have to know what I’m doing here?”

“Forget it.”  Cool  Cool  Cool *abot ng form*

Ang bad ko noh? La lang. Sarap lang mang-asar.  Cheesy

*tingin sa form* “Oh great!” *hinatak ako*

 Huh

(And what was that great thing that you saw in my form?)

“Hey hon.” Sabay beso ni Kuya Marx kay ate.

Umakap naman si ate kay kuya Marx. They’re starting to get mushy which I usually get irritated of.  Angry

“Excuse me!” I meddled with a sarcastic tone.  Tongue

“Oh andyan ka pala. Hon, kaw na bahala sa kanya. Block mo naman siya eh. Take good care of that girl.”

Gggrrr.  Angry Marunong din talagang makipag-asaran sa kin tong si ate.

“Is she a girl?” sabay tawa ni Kuya Marx ng malakas  Cheesy  Grin

“Leave her alone Marx. Stop fooling around with her. She easily gets pissed off.” Then she walked away smiling.

Dinilaan ko lang si Kuya Marx  Tongue tapos sumunod na rin sa kanya.

“Owkhay block EA. This is Jecca. Say hi Jecca.”

“Hi Jecca.” Those guys greeted me with a very monotonous tone.

I just sat down on one corner and listened to my ipod. Some of them there were already talking to each other. Don’t ask me if they formerly knew each other as in they were schoolmates or whatever or if they just met each other at that present situation because I don’t know.

(Hhmmm.. ano kaya yung great na nakita ni ate sa form ko?)

Nyaha! Kuhlet ko ren noh?! Kanina pa ako nacucurious dun sa ‘great’ na un eh.

{So go past the lights and all the excuses.. You could have left sincerely yours..}

Nakaramdam ako ng tap sa balikat ko. Doon palang nabuhay ang wisho ko.  Shocked May guy na nakatayo sa harapan ko at hindi ko marinig at maintindihan ang kanyang sinasabi. Tinitigan ko lang siya tapos napansin kong tinuturo niya yung ears niya.  Huh

(Ahy! Oo nga pala! Naka headset ako. Kaya naman pala hindi ko marinig to.)

Tinanggal ko yung headset ko, “Uhm, yeah?”

Ang stupid ng sagot ko noh?  Cheesy  Grin

“Deaf.” Sabay irap nung guy.

(Bading?)  Cheesy  Grin  Cheesy  Grin

“What did you just say?” tumaas ang kilay ko sa nirinig ko.  Huh

(Excuse me! Hindi pa ako bingi noh. At sandali lang.  Shocked You look familiar. Hhhmm..)

"Forget it." Sabay upo sa tabi ko.

Gggrr.  Angry Ginagalit ako ng lalaking toh.  Angry Iistorbohin ako tapos wala naman pala.  Angry Uupo lang pala sa tabi ko.  Angry Hmp!  Angry

(Deaf ka dyan?! Nakita mo ng nakaheadset ako eh.)

Tinago ko na yung ipod ko kasi nawala na rin naman ako sa mood na magpatugtog. Tinignan ko yung guy na katabi ko. Pakiramdam ko nakita ko na siya.

May pumalo sa braso ko kaya tinignan ko kung sino yun.

(Gggrr!!!  Angry Kuya Marx!)

“Don’t give me that look. Tell me Jecca, ngayon ka lang ba nakakita ng lalaki? I mean ngayon ka lang ba nakakita ng guwapong lalaki? Titig na titig ka kay Brix ah.” Sabay tawa.  Grin

(Jecca! Hule ka! Gggrr.  Angry Kanina pa ko inaasar nitong si Kuya Marx. Nakakagigil! Wait! Brix pala ang name mo ha. Hhmmm..)

“Tulo laway pa kamo.” Pabulong na dinugtungan ni Brix yung sinabi ni Kuya Marx.

(Huwa?! Tulo laway?!) *kapa kung tulo laway nga* (Hmp! Hindi naman eh. Gggrr.  Angry Mukhang nakahanap ng katulong sa pang-aasar sa kin tong si Kuya Marx.)

Sabay na tumawa ng malakas si Kuya Marx at yung Brix na yun.  Grin Nakakapika talaga.  Angry

“Stop pissing me off.” I sat properly and crossed my arm.  Angry

“Grow up











































JELYKA.”


(Huwat? So ano hanap mo ngayon? Gulo o away?!)

“Shut up Marx! I hate you! I don’t even know why Kariz liked you!”

“You can’t do anything about that. Your sister does not only like me,












































she LOVES me. I know you’re a man hater JELYKA and I know why.











































Sino ba naman kasi ang papatol sa yo?























































Physical aspect palang bagsak na.
















































I mean H-E-L-L-O?










































Who in the world wears loose ragged masculine cut pants and loose shirts?! I’ve never met a girl who wears clothes your way. What kind of fashion statement do you have anyway?!”


OUCH. That was way below the belt.  Cry  Cry  Cry



Summary of Characters Present in the Past Two Chapters:
Jelyka/Jecca
Khimberli/Khim
Jecca's Family
Brix
Marx/Extras



girls..
here's part two..
should i continue?
or not?


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« Reply #7 on: April 23, 2008, 10:20:54 pm »

continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!  Grin nice story!  Roll Eyes
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« Reply #8 on: April 24, 2008, 06:34:04 pm »

continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!  Grin nice story!  Roll Eyes

thanks sis..
at least alam ko na maski papano may nagbabasa ng story ko..
hindi ako makakapagpost today..
i just dropped by..
please wait for the next post nalang..
salamat talaga..
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« Reply #9 on: April 24, 2008, 06:53:13 pm »

Uii ! support din ako dito ! hehe..
of course noh, continue !!! hehe.
wa'g mong itigil ! Smiley
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« Reply #10 on: April 24, 2008, 06:56:30 pm »

Uii ! support din ako dito ! hehe..
of course noh, continue !!! hehe.
wa'g mong itigil ! Smiley

huwaw..
natats naman ako..
natagpuan niya ang story ko..
salamat ha..
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« Reply #11 on: April 24, 2008, 07:01:42 pm »

^Ano ba iyan, "natagpuan" .hehe.
Galing mooo magsulat ! Smiley
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« Reply #12 on: April 24, 2008, 07:04:29 pm »

^Ano ba iyan, "natagpuan" .hehe.
Galing mooo magsulat ! Smiley

erhm..
anu bang ibang word..
yun kasi ang unang salita na pumasok sa isip ko eh..
kea auin..
senxa na..
salamat pala sa complement..
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« Reply #13 on: April 24, 2008, 07:32:39 pm »

hello dito ulit ako...

continue sis ...  Wink

pwedeng pahabaan ng onti..  Cheesy  Cheesy ( sorry demanding  Grin  Cheesy )
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« Reply #14 on: April 24, 2008, 09:05:51 pm »

erhm..
anu bang ibang word..
yun kasi ang unang salita na pumasok sa isip ko eh..
kea auin..
senxa na..
salamat pala sa complement..
hehe.. late na ba yung reply ko?? At, totoo naman noh,, galing moh ! Smiley
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