sorry to keep you waiting girls..
i modified the first part to give you guys an idea about the personality of the main characters..
here's the second chapter..
hope you'll like it..
- 2 –
“What are you doing here? Akala ko nag-eenjoy ka pa dun sa kama mo eh.”“Yeah. Whatever. Let me see your form.”“Tell me what you are doing here first before I hand you my form.” 
Ang abnoy ko noh? Kanina lang nagsisisi ako at hindi ako nagpasama kay ate, ngayon naman na andito ang ate ko, sinusungitan ko siya.
“Do you really have to know what I’m doing here?”“Forget it.” *abot ng form*
Ang bad ko noh? La lang. Sarap lang mang-asar.
*tingin sa form*
“Oh great!” *hinatak ako*
(And what was that great thing that you saw in my form?)“Hey hon.” Sabay beso ni Kuya Marx kay ate.
Umakap naman si ate kay kuya Marx. They’re starting to get mushy which I usually get irritated of.
“Excuse me!” I meddled with a sarcastic tone.
“Oh andyan ka pala. Hon, kaw na bahala sa kanya. Block mo naman siya eh. Take good care of that girl.”Gggrrr.
Marunong din talagang makipag-asaran sa kin tong si ate.
“Is she a girl?” sabay tawa ni Kuya Marx ng malakas
“Leave her alone Marx. Stop fooling around with her. She easily gets pissed off.” Then she walked away smiling.
Dinilaan ko lang si Kuya Marx
tapos sumunod na rin sa kanya.
“Owkhay block EA. This is Jecca. Say hi Jecca.”“Hi Jecca.” Those guys greeted me with a very monotonous tone.
I just sat down on one corner and listened to my ipod. Some of them there were already talking to each other. Don’t ask me if they formerly knew each other as in they were schoolmates or whatever or if they just met each other at that present situation because I don’t know.
(Hhmmm.. ano kaya yung great na nakita ni ate sa form ko?)Nyaha! Kuhlet ko ren noh?! Kanina pa ako nacucurious dun sa ‘great’ na un eh.
{So go past the lights and all the excuses.. You could have left sincerely yours..}
Nakaramdam ako ng tap sa balikat ko. Doon palang nabuhay ang wisho ko.
May guy na nakatayo sa harapan ko at hindi ko marinig at maintindihan ang kanyang sinasabi. Tinitigan ko lang siya tapos napansin kong tinuturo niya yung ears niya.
(Ahy! Oo nga pala! Naka headset ako. Kaya naman pala hindi ko marinig to.)Tinanggal ko yung headset ko,
“Uhm, yeah?”Ang stupid ng sagot ko noh?
“Deaf.” Sabay irap nung guy.
(Bading?) “What did you just say?” tumaas ang kilay ko sa nirinig ko.
(Excuse me! Hindi pa ako bingi noh. At sandali lang. You look familiar. Hhhmm..)"Forget it." Sabay upo sa tabi ko.
Gggrr.
Ginagalit ako ng lalaking toh.
Iistorbohin ako tapos wala naman pala.
Uupo lang pala sa tabi ko.
Hmp!
(Deaf ka dyan?! Nakita mo ng nakaheadset ako eh.)Tinago ko na yung ipod ko kasi nawala na rin naman ako sa mood na magpatugtog. Tinignan ko yung guy na katabi ko. Pakiramdam ko nakita ko na siya.
May pumalo sa braso ko kaya tinignan ko kung sino yun.
(Gggrr!!! Kuya Marx!)“Don’t give me that look. Tell me Jecca, ngayon ka lang ba nakakita ng lalaki? I mean ngayon ka lang ba nakakita ng guwapong lalaki? Titig na titig ka kay Brix ah.” Sabay tawa.
(Jecca! Hule ka! Gggrr. Kanina pa ko inaasar nitong si Kuya Marx. Nakakagigil! Wait! Brix pala ang name mo ha. Hhmmm..)“Tulo laway pa kamo.” Pabulong na dinugtungan ni Brix yung sinabi ni Kuya Marx.
(Huwa?! Tulo laway?!) *kapa kung tulo laway nga*
(Hmp! Hindi naman eh. Gggrr. Mukhang nakahanap ng katulong sa pang-aasar sa kin tong si Kuya Marx.)Sabay na tumawa ng malakas si Kuya Marx at yung Brix na yun.
Nakakapika talaga.
“Stop pissing me off.” I sat properly and crossed my arm.
“Grow up
JELYKA.”(Huwat? So ano hanap mo ngayon? Gulo o away?!)“Shut up Marx! I hate you! I don’t even know why Kariz liked you!”“You can’t do anything about that. Your sister does not only like me,
she LOVES me. I know you’re a man hater JELYKA and I know why.
Sino ba naman kasi ang papatol sa yo?
Physical aspect palang bagsak na.
I mean H-E-L-L-O?
Who in the world wears loose ragged masculine cut pants and loose shirts?! I’ve never met a girl who wears clothes your way. What kind of fashion statement do you have anyway?!”OUCH. That was way below the belt.
Summary of Characters Present in the Past Two Chapters:
Jelyka/Jecca
Khimberli/Khim
Jecca's Family
Brix
Marx/Extras
girls..
here's part two..
should i continue?
or not?
