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Author Topic: HUGS AND KISSES [UPDATED PG. 23: "FRIENDS?". ] NEED COMMENTS. UPDATED!!  (Read 20809 times)

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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~PM LIST CLOSED: UPDATED PG. 2!]
« Reply #30 on: April 09, 2008, 11:05:52 am »
woot!! wow naman ung girl!!! kawawa naman ung boy nagmamadali kasi ehh LOL Good Job sis! I'm hooked...  :D

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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~PM LIST CLOSED: UPDATED PG. 2!]
« Reply #31 on: April 09, 2008, 11:21:19 am »
page THREE. ::)
chapter TWO next next! 8)
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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~PM LIST CLOSED: UPDATED PG. 2!]
« Reply #32 on: April 09, 2008, 12:27:15 pm »
Grace sorry ngayon lang ako nakacomment, i think nalock yata toh right? anyways update ka  na page 3 na tayo oh...hehehe aabangan ko to...hehehe

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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~PM LIST CLOSED: UPDATED PG. 2!]
« Reply #33 on: April 09, 2008, 12:39:02 pm »
Grace sorry ngayon lang ako nakacomment, i think nalock yata toh right? anyways update ka  na page 3 na tayo oh...hehehe aabangan ko to...hehehe


Nope, di siya na lock. I removed it kasi walang readers noon, kasi I posted this using my other account kasi eh. (: Kaya, eto. Malapit na ring matapos ang 99TH DAY, that's why nirepost ko na. Nirevise ko lang siya. (: Hihi. Thanks ate rain! Mwah! (:

page THREE. ::)
chapter TWO next next! 8)


HAHA.. maybe later dear. (: Basta ngayong araw mag-aupdate ako--if super marami na iyong nangungulit. Joke. Hihi. Mwah!

woot!! wow naman ung girl!!! kawawa naman ung boy nagmamadali kasi ehh LOL Good Job sis! I'm hooked...  :D


You're hooked? :D
Hihi... Thanks kathhhhhhhh! (:
Salamat ng marami! Mwah!

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I'll post the update this day. Paramihin niyo muna replies. HAHA! :D Mwaaaaah!
what could be the
FORTUNE of that
CHICKBOY? ___

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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~PM LIST CLOSED: UPDATED PG. 2!]
« Reply #34 on: April 09, 2008, 01:08:12 pm »
Samahan nyo ako kulitin si Ate Grace!

Please post the update na!

Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please!  :D

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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~PM LIST CLOSED: UPDATED PG. 2!]
« Reply #35 on: April 09, 2008, 02:41:25 pm »
hello po...
i'm here para po mangulit.. :D
joke lang po...
now i understand kung bakit po gusto niyo po muna ng maraming 'comments'
before po kayo magupdate...
hehehe...
sige po i'll try my best na palaging magiwan ng 'comments'
oh and another thing po...
sinend ko po sa mga friends ko..
ung link po nung 99th day...
and lahat po sila nagandahan dun..
wala lang po silang account dito kaya po hindi po sila makapag iwan ng 'comments'

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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~PM LIST CLOSED: UPDATED PG. 2!]
« Reply #36 on: April 09, 2008, 03:50:16 pm »
Haha. Ang tarush ni Eane ah. Sa bagay, ito rin naman kasi si Mr. Stranger masyadong mabilis. :P

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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~PM LIST CLOSED: UPDATED PG. 2!]
« Reply #37 on: April 09, 2008, 04:32:09 pm »
astig ng story
 mo 8)

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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~PM LIST CLOSED: UPDATED PG. 2!]
« Reply #38 on: April 09, 2008, 04:38:20 pm »
astig ng story
 mo 8)


THANKS PO! (:
ANO PO NAME MO?

Haha. Ang tarush ni Eane ah. Sa bagay, ito rin naman kasi si Mr. Stranger masyadong mabilis. :P


HAHA. OO NGA. LOL.
THANKS LISSY. WHAT'S UP?

hello po...
i'm here para po mangulit.. :D
joke lang po...
now i understand kung bakit po gusto niyo po muna ng maraming 'comments'
before po kayo magupdate...
hehehe...
sige po i'll try my best na palaging magiwan ng 'comments'
oh and another thing po...
sinend ko po sa mga friends ko..
ung link po nung 99th day...
and lahat po sila nagandahan dun..
wala lang po silang account dito kaya po hindi po sila makapag iwan ng 'comments'


HAHA. 'COMMENTS' ARE NECESSARY KASI SA MGA STORIES.
IT COULD INSPIRE THE AUTHOR, AND IT COULD IMPROVE THE STORY.
WOW! SALAMAT AT NAGUSTUHAN RIN NILA. AWWWW. (:
KAKATOUCH KA NAMAN PO, SIS.
THANKS FOR READING HA! MWAH!


Samahan nyo ako kulitin si Ate Grace!

Please post the update na!

Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please!  :D



GEL. GEL. GEL. ANG KULITTTTTT MO. :D HAHAHA! PERO MAS MAKULIT AKO. :D
SIGE NA NGA. ::)  MAG AUPDATE NA AKO. :D
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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~PM LIST CLOSED: UPDATED PG. 2!]
« Reply #39 on: April 09, 2008, 04:39:35 pm »
haha.
OWKEi! ;D
intay lang akoo' haha. ::)
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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~PM LIST CLOSED: UPDATED PG. 2!]
« Reply #40 on: April 09, 2008, 05:11:12 pm »
haha.
OWKEi! ;D
intay lang akoo' haha. ::)


Hahaha. eto update dear. (:


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UPDATE.UPDATE!






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He’s coming back!” I told Julia with excitement. It was as if my eyes were glowing because of the news that I’ve heard. Dyle’s coming back. My childhood best friend’s coming back! Well, he and his family migrated to States after our elementary graduation… and then I could really say that he made his promise.I’d be seeing again his smile, his eyes, his hair… gosh, I really love his hair. His small dimples… makikita ko na siya, sa wakas.



Wag naman masyadong obsessed, dear. Hindi naman kagandahan iyon eh. Palibhasa, Amboy eh.” Well, every time I talk to her about Dyle she always goes against me. They’re close friends too… kasi classmates sila for 4 years eh, and we weren’t classmates then because I belonged in section A at sila naman eh, B.



Nyahaha. Nalipat kasi si Dyle sa section B nung grade 3 eh, masyadong late palage. HAHA. Ayun, bumaba ‘yung grades. “And yeah, I’ll be seeing you later…” Her face immediately went pale and then her voice was so faint and so weak. I looked at her, and I elbowed her.




Are you okay?” Tinaasan ko siya ng kilay. She gave me a small smile. Weirdo ‘tong Julia na ‘to eh. “You look pale… and your eyes… why so puffy? You cried so much—” She cut me off by giving me a glare. Tapos yumuko na siya, then nabitawan niya yung mineral bottle na hinahawakan niya. Men, she must really be hurting.




The break up should’ve caused her to be like this. Makita ko lang yung Denis na yun, humanda siya. He took away my best friend’s care-free and happy spirit. “Humanda ‘yung Denis na yun…

 

Paalis na sana ako para sugurin ‘yung walang hiyang lalakeng yun, ngunit napatigil ako sa kanyang sigaw.



GEEANE!” My whole body froze. Now she’s angry. Bakit? Lalake lang naman si Denis ah! Marami pa siyang makikita na mas pa kay Denis… Arggggh, those mothafriggin guys. After she said that, she narrowed her eyes at me, and then she ran away.




Humanda talaga ‘yung Denis na yun. >:(









Nakarating na si Dyle, kaya I’m here right now… with him. “I missed you!” He hugged me, and then nag beso-beso kami. Ang saya diba? HAHA. I hugged him and then he lifted my chin up, tapos nag-eye to eye kami for almost 2 minutes. He was looking at my eyes, then… down my lips, and then my eyes again… then I did the same… our lips were only an inch away from each other… So I decided to break the ice until something happens.




You’re so beautiful na ha?! HAHA. Ano, kamusta ang States? Sino naman ‘yung girl friend mo??” Bumitaw na ako sa pag yakap sa kanya, then I said that hesitantly.




He placed both hands in his pocket tapos inayos niya ‘yung cap niya.


“Well, I don’t. And I’m not looking.” I pointed at him using my index finger, tapos tinignan ko siya mula ulo hangang paa, siya?! Walang girlfriend?! Sino bang niloko niya?? HAHA!



Ikaw?! Walang girlfriend?!” He looked at me, then he nodded. “Woah. That’s… unbelievable. Wag mong sabihing… ano ka??” I started laughing again. He smiled at me while taking off the lens cover of his camera. Imagine, Dyle who is really GWAPO, HOT, SEXY, GORGEOUS, GENTLEMAN, SWEET, CARING, LOVING, MABANGO, MABAIT--walang gf?! ;D ;D


I’m not gay. I’m still waiting for that girl whom I really really really love.” My world stopped spinning. Dyle’s in love? With whom? Is she a nice person? Is she asian? Is she beautiful? Is she smart? Is she—then bigla nalang napatigil nung pumara na siya ng taxi.



You go first.” He opened the door for me, tapos ayun, pumasok na rin siya. When we were in the taxi, he pinicturan niya ako. Nako, I’m not photogenic okay?! Pangit kong tignan sa picture noh… Kakainis nga.



Hey, stop it. The camera doesn’t like me.” Yeah, guess it hates me. I was supposed to say more, but I caught him staring at me again. “What? May dumi ba ako sa mukha?



I wiped the side of my face, and then tinignan ko iyong kamay ko to find out if may dumi nga ba, pero wala naman. I tried it on the opposite side, then the result was the same. Tapos nun, I ended up raising my left eyebrow giving him that why-the-hell-are-you-staring-at-me-like-this-look. He laughed a small laugh, then kinurot niya ako.



You’re so cute, Eane.” He smiled, then he looked at the screen of the camera and showed me my picture. “You’re right… you’re not photogenic.” He whispered. It kinda touched my ego. Oo, alam ko naming hindi ako photogenic, bakit kailangan—I stopped from complaining in my thoughts when I heard him say something that really made me blush.



Know why you’re not photogenic?” He turned to me, and then he looked back at the screen, then he looked at me again. “Photogenic people aren’t good looking people in person. And the un-photogenic ones… are those who are beautiful, Eane.” My eyes widened, and then he stared at me and smile. “You’re not photogenic because the camera is jealous of your beauty that’s why the photo doesn’t really turn out in a good way.” 

A-ano raw? Ako? Beautiful? :o >:D




HAHAHAHAHA! BUHAHAHA! MWAHAHAHA! AHEHEHE…BWISET! >:(



Pinapakilig ako neto. Tsssss. What a friggin lie. Tumigin ako sa bintana para tignan kung malapit na kami sa bahay, so… I had to look pass through him to see the window… kasi ‘yung bahay namin nasa side niya banda, so I felt a bit nervous. Ano ba, ang awkward. Bakit ganito ‘yung nafifeel ko. After all these years… magkasama na kami ulit.



Then I had a small flashback.


It was when we were still in our kindergarten years. We were playing ‘kasal-kasalan’ and ayun, ‘yung friend niyang lalake yung kumasal ‘raw’ sa amin, tapos ayun. He kissed me on my cheek that time. And ayun, married na raw kami. And my flashback ended there. So much for kindergarteners. HAHA.




After the flashback I felt hot blood flushing into my veins and rushed into my cheeks. Yumuko nalang ako at napahawak sa gilid ng mukha ko. “Ahehehe… so, are we there yet?



Pasensya na at kinikilig ang loka-loka. :D :-X Eh, kasi eh... ano... ano kasi uhm... nanghihina tuhod ko sa kagwapuhan ni Dyle. :-[ :D 8)



Ano?! ??? Wag niyo kong tignan nang ganyan! Hindi ko naman si Dyle pagnanasaan eh! E-eh kayo! :-\


Pag may katabi kayong GWAPO-CHINITO-ATHLETIC-MUSICIAN-PHYSICALLY FIT (meaning sexy, at 6 packs iyong abs! :o ) AT MATALINONG LALAKI... NA MERONG NAPAKAGANDANG BOSES (As in kumakanta :o ) Katulad NITO...




sabihin mo nga!?





Di ba manghihina tuhod mo?!
:-X   
« Last Edit: April 09, 2008, 05:36:48 pm by inluvagal_08 »
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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~PM LIST CLOSED: UPDATE POSTED PG.3!]
« Reply #41 on: April 09, 2008, 05:30:31 pm »
pers!  ;D
weeee, i'm loving your PMlist grace  ;D
nakakatuwa naman yung description ni dyle tungkol sa mga hindi photogenic,  :D
i'm loving the story,  ::)

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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~SEE PAGE 1 PLS!: UPDATE POSTED PG.3!]
« Reply #42 on: April 09, 2008, 05:35:42 pm »
ayiiii!!!! edi matumba ka na! gogogo!hahaha nice one grace...

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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~SEE PAGE 1 PLS!: UPDATE POSTED PG.3!]
« Reply #43 on: April 09, 2008, 05:37:40 pm »
ghurL.. pwd mgtanong?? haha..
anu meon sa pm list??
andun xe q.. peo wla naman aq narerecib?? hmm...

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Re: HUGS AND KISSES [~SEE PAGE 1 PLS!: UPDATE POSTED PG.3!]
« Reply #44 on: April 09, 2008, 05:55:19 pm »
ay juice ko eane... may problema ka sa tuhod :D
hindi mo pagnanasaan si Dyle? ^-^ pwes, ako na lang ang magnanasa sa kanya :D :D

kaloka!


 

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