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Author Topic: Bestfriend Vs. The Crush | Chapter 1.5 UP! | In serious need of readers :]]  (Read 551 times)

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Re: Bestfriend Vs. The Crush
« Reply #15 on: July 20, 2009, 04:15:36 pm »
Chapter 1.5

Trish
Dane
Brian
Sam
Back-up


The Next Day...

Trish`s POV

I`m in Photo class right now, doing the usual, NOTHING. Photo class is just one of those subjects that you just have to take `cos it`s TOO easy. My teacher is such an  easy marker.. i`m not even kidding. Even when I don`t do anything, she still gives me an A for "trying". YEAH RIGHT!

*BUZZ BUZZ*
That was my phone, Sam texted me...
"Robby`s not in class. CAN YOU BELIEVE HIM! SKIPPING WITHOUT EVEN INVITING ME? Anyway, are you ok? I mean.. with the thing that happened yesterday...."

ANO TINGIN NYA! OFCOURSE I`M NOT OK! ><;
Ayan tuloy, dahil sa super galit ako.. i`m already talking in tagalog.. which never happens.. GUH. Only when I talk to my parents, they think i`m too WHITE WASHED. What do they expect? dinala nila ako dito eh! ><;

I didn`t text back.. just a waste of my energy.

What`s up with the long face, Trish? That`s one of my best friends, Dane. He`s 2 years older than me, kaya he`s like an older brother to me. I tell him everything and I mean EVERYTHING! Kaya nga I`m really sad na he`s graduating this year eh !  :'(

Look at this.. Sam texted me if I`m ok.. DUDE. IT`S SO OBVIOUS I`M NOT! GUUH. She pisses me off so much! ><; I said, showing him the text.

Don`t be too hard on your friend, I think she`s just trying to comfort you. He said, handing me back my phone.

COMFORTING? Well, it`s not working..

Well, it`s not working.. so she should just stop TRYING.

*Riiingg*

Hey, want me to walk you to your class? Dane said while packing up his stuff.

Nah, I`m alright. I have gym next.. so I have to go back up to my locker for my stuff. Thanks, anyway. I said running to the door.. I CANNOT BE LATE FOR GYM! MY TEACHER IS SERIOUSLY ON TO ME!

I insist. I run faster than you anyway. Dane said while trying to keep up.
You`re a meanie you know that! I said trying to run faster.

NO RUNNING IN THE HALLS! A teacher from behind said.
I`m Sorry! We both yelled, but kept running.
Aren`t you going to be late for your class? WAIT, don`t you have that really nasty sub today? What`s her name.. ms..ms.. WILSON! I said, while opening my locker.

Yeah, I`m skipping. I don`t wanna see her. She got mad at me yesterday for talking too loud. wtf! He said leaning on the lockers.

Hey brosef. OMG. I know that voice.. who is that.. 

Hey Bry, sup? Dane said and did that guy hand shake + hug thinggy they do.  ;D

Not much, not much.. aren`t you going to class? Wilson`s pretty scary.. OMG. IT`S BRIAN!  :o OMG! He looks so awesome today.. I like his shirt, it was a plain printed white shirt. I love it. It totally matches with his blank pants.. and.. his really cute adidas white/green shoes. He`s so dreamy.  ::)

Nah, I`m skipping today.. wanna come?

No man, I need to go to her class. I already skipped too many classes. I guess I`ll just cya.. Brian said while waving bye.

Uhmm.. EARTH TO TRISH! What`s wrong with you?

Huh? Wha-- OMG.. I`m so late.. OMGOMGOMG.. My teacher`s gonna get mad... SO MAD.. ommggg.. I said while running downstairs.. wait.. SPRINTING downstairs..

When I got downstairs, I was already tired.. I just did my warm up.. I think I shouldn`t do the warm ups na!
Pero GUUH. I still have to. nakakainis.

Hey, do you guys know what`s for warm ups today? I asked while taking of my shoes.

It`s forest run today.. I think were doing it twice.. Lee`s in a really bad mood today.. WHAT?!??! FML! I don`t wanna do two forest runs!

If you may know, forest run is when we run around the forest that`s beside our school under 20 minutes.. if it`s not under 20 minutes, we do another round.. GUH! Hate it.

READY? 1....2....*whistle* Forest Run begins..GUH! I hate this. I don`t wanna do ittt! ><;

I hate my li-- OUCHH!!

TRISH! Are you okk? Sam said running towards me...

OBVIOUSLY I`M NOT!

Trish.. You can`t run like this.. it seems like you broke your ankle.. Go back! I`ll carry you. She said, trying to carry me.

No, I`ll just go back by myself.. I said, trying to get up.

What are you talking about? YOU CAN`T EVEN STAND UP WITHOUT MY HELP! I`ll carry you. She said, putting her arms on my shoulder.

No, i`ll take her.. A random voice said from afar, I really don`t know where it`s coming from.. and to be honest, I don`t really wanna know who.. all I want right now.. is a rest..

Give me your arm, Trish. It was Dane.. wow.. what is he doing here?

What are you doing here? You might get caught skipping, dumby. I said, giving him a slight punch in the arm.

Uhh.. I think right now, your situation is more important.. here, i`ll give you a piggy back ride..

Nooo.. I`m heavy..  :-[

I think I can manage.. now get on my back.. I did what he said..

What happened? Lee said, looking for the first Aid kit.

She hurt herself while running, I think she might`ve broken her ankle.. Dane said, putting me down.

After I put a bandage on your ankle, you still have to finish the forest run.. it`s just not fair for the other people..

WTF! I already hurt myself..! What does he want from me!  >:(

But.. ahh....

Don`t worry, I`ll carry you.  ;) Dane whispered to me.

Fine.. I`ll do.. but only because Dane`s carrying me.


In the forest...

Author`s POV

“So… do you like anyone?” she asked to break the silence.

“Yea, I do, but she doesn’t like me unfortunately.” There was a furious desperation in Dane`s voice and expression.

“Well, try to win her over then. I mean, you’re a great guy, I don’t see why anyone would say no to you” cheered Trish.

“Apparently, you do” sighed Dane.

 “What do you mean Dane?”
“The girl I like is you” Dane’s words turned around in Trish’s head.

His hands moved up to cup her face. His touch was gentle, almost tentative.

“Ever since I saw you-I’ve always wanted to meet you. I knew you’d be extraordinary.”

“I hope you’re not too disappointed” she laughed shakily.

“No,” he breathed, sliding his fingertips under chin.

“Not at all.” He lifted her face to his.

She was too surprised to move, even when he leaned towards her and she realized, belatedly, what he was doing: Reflexively she shut her eyes as his lips brushed gently over hers, sending shivers through her...

To be continued...





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Re: Bestfriend Vs. The Crush | Chapter 1.5 UP!
« Reply #16 on: July 21, 2009, 03:31:55 pm »
waaah.. i like sis.. next na please.. :D
Man alone is INCOMPLETE; Woman alone is UNFULFILLED

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Re: Bestfriend Vs. The Crush | Chapter 1.5 UP!
« Reply #17 on: August 06, 2009, 04:15:54 am »
waaah.. i like sis.. next na please.. :D


Hahahahaha. Thank you. =)
Sige, next na. Haha.
Thanks for reading ulit :)

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oo nga. who is BRIAN JANG, trish? :D
kidding!
its cute naman ah. light lang but kilig. ima support this. ;)

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oo nga. who is BRIAN JANG, trish? :D
kidding!
its cute naman ah. light lang but kilig. ima support this. ;)


Hahaha.. =]]]]
You caught me. HAHAHA.
hindi joke, well.. technically sya nga pero.. imagine mo na lang iba. LOL.
thanks ate. =]

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i like your story!
hahah!
new reader irr =]
kaso masyadong kanose bleed!!
hahaha!
kidding! :D
update na ate!!
i'll support this!
I know its all true, that why all i need is you .. in bad times you keep me smiling, in good times you always keep me wanting.. 

 

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