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Author Topic: Broken reflections (PG13):Visions of a dark future - Updated..see page 1  (Read 336 times)
amuro_ray
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« on: April 05, 2008, 11:56:32 AM »

Status:working on the next chapters..then the mini novel.yung next few chapters try ko magpost ng 1 or 2 a month, pero yung mini novel on hold dahil sira yung card reader ko and puno HD ng cp ko so di ko masasave. may isa na kung chapter dne but di ko matransfer kasi sira card reader ko.

sorry mukhang delayed muna.

BROKEN REFLECTIONS
Shard 1:see below
Shard 2: http://www.candymag.com/teentalk/index.php/topic,170752.15.html but yung dark angel di ko mapost, character limit error.next time dagdag ko na lang.
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Iceman

2010.The world is a mess, a bloody big mess.

Human greed caused several "mini wars" over oil. Pollution destroyed the majority of the world's biosphere. Some religous fanatics nuked New York and the Amazon Basin.There was a lot of fingerpointing and the resulting war caused a complete global political, ecological and economic disaster.

The relatively habitable part of Asia was cordoned off for the rich and the corrupt corps that support them and provide their every single whim and desire.The enclave of New Hong Kong,Jewel of the South China Sea. Rich,stable, and somewhat peaceful.

For those who didn't have the money and the influence to live in the enclave, those with something to hide, or just running from the law, there are the poisoned, and bombed-out husks along the coast. It has many names, Hell, Wasteland, The Slums. But most call it "home".

My name is Damien Frost, but people call me Iceman.Tall, silver-white hair and steel gray eyes. Nerves of steel and a heart that's cold as ice.

I am a Hunter, a corporate hitman and wetworks operative. This isn't exactly a job to be proud of, but what can you be proud of these days? It pays the bills. I lost my home,my family, and the woman I love in the war. A war caused by the corps and the corrupt politicians in their pocket. Ironic, isnt it? I end up working for the people who took away all I ever cared about.

I have done a lot of things,things that most people wouldn't touch with a 10 foot pole,things the corps didn't want to get their hands dirty with. I still wake up with nightmares, faces of those I killed or worse.

Life sucks,but it could have been worse.
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Miseria

So this is how the dregs of society live. Disgusting. And yet they teem and thrive. Like roaches.

Then again,they are a means to an end. It is because of these mindless dretches that my family's fortune was made. And because of them,that I lost my mother.

I was born to a life most would only dream of. Every priviledge and desire was mine. After all, we control the biggest arms manufacturer on Earth. I never really knew who my father was. All I got from my mom was that he was a corp executive killed in the war.

I got it all. Wealth,beauty, power, and whatever i wanted was the best money can buy. I thought life can never get worse. I was wrong.

On my 16th birthday, my mother was on a tour of Europe. She returned in a box. Novatech would be controlled by the board till I turned 18. Losing the only family I got, I felt empty and started frequenting the Wasteland under the name Miseria,for kicks. Thats where I met Damien.

One night, I was so plastered that I fell asleep in an alley and woke up when a bum started feeling me up. Shouldn't have drunk that much, but misery loves alcohol. Then I heard a gunshot.

"Did you shoot him because you didn't want to share? It's okay. The more, the merrier."
"Shut up.Get up, Cinderella, you have to go back to your castle.This isn't the enclave."
"Did you suddenly become my adoptive parent, old man."
"You got two choices, brat. Start walking or I tie you up and carry you like a sack."
"Do you know who I am!?"
"I know exactly who you are,Victoria Marquet."

It turned out that my mother took out a contract with this guy to ensure my safety,just in case she met the reaper suddenly.

Two years later, when I took control of Novatech, I contacted Damien with a very generous proposal. I wanted: 1)whoever killed my mother dead and 2)the SOB's death would be messy, very painful, and very, very slow. I offered a blank check in operating expenses and 2 million euros after the job is done. He delivered, in a very impressive manner. The bastard died after 7 days and I enjoyed every moment of it.

I enticed Damien to join Novatech as VP of Corp Security. He gets to choose his Hunters, play with all the lethal little toys our labs produce, and a large budget. At first, I objected to his recruitment of Wasteland scum, but it seems that they are unexpectedly effective. In a business where 'the best' was dead after 3 years, Damien's team have become legendary for taking on impossible odds and surviving for 10 years now. I don't know how he does it, but as long as whoever I want dead ends up in a hole in a ground, I don't care.
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Viper

Hmm...running a nightclub and strip joint in the middle of the Slums has some ups, like never having a slow night and no crummy laws plus some very interesting clients.But its a !@#$ cleaning up the bloodstains in the morning and finding new muscle every week or so cause the old ones died on me.

But at least I am better off than most of the street trash.Thanks to Iceman being a regular, no one touches me.In exchange, I get info for him and provide or get rid of whatever he needs.

Better his friend than his enemy, heard that the last guy who pissed him off was begging to be killed when the street trash found what was left of him, and what was left of him couldn't be sold to the organ bank.

'Paradise' has built quite a rep for itself thru all these years. We got the most accomodating and best girls ,or guys, if you are into that.And all the recreational pharmaceuticals. Clients range from Hunters going for a last bang before they get iced to crime lords and corp honchos slumming it.

My business is pleasure and business is booming.
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« Reply #1 on: April 05, 2008, 12:30:23 PM »

very interesting yet disturbing...
a vision of 2010 huh?
this made me smile... im sick... Cheesy

somehow this reminds me of those yaoi plots...
the dark future...
bloody!

looking forward to this one...
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« Reply #2 on: April 05, 2008, 12:52:14 PM »

whoa. @____@
this IS new. this IS nice.
definitely. I LOVE IT!! Cheesy

medyo brutal, pero at least, may bago na akong babasahin.
na may magandang plot.



amuro_ray, are you a girl, or a guy? Tongue
i wouldn't want to assume. heheh. (:
i'm Anicia, btw. i'll support this one.
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« Reply #3 on: April 05, 2008, 01:46:29 PM »

Weee Manong JM, umiistory ka na ah. I like it Cheesy
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« Reply #4 on: April 05, 2008, 06:42:30 PM »

whoa. @____@
this IS new. this IS nice.
definitely. I LOVE IT!! Cheesy

medyo brutal, pero at least, may bago na akong babasahin.
na may magandang plot.



amuro_ray, are you a girl, or a guy? Tongue
i wouldn't want to assume. heheh. (:
i'm Anicia, btw. i'll support this one.
Guy.
Its supposed to be brutal.The question is:What if everything that can go wrong did go wrong in the worst possible way? Its from the POV of people who did everything to survive.Its a back against the wall thing. Post Apocalypse without the religous nuts. Smiley

adle>never been one of those who like doing things within a comfort zone.its supposed to disturb the conventions of people and make them think.

pujabbers7>working on the next few "reflections",pag natapos yan.sunod na yung mini novel.
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« Reply #5 on: April 05, 2008, 07:01:03 PM »

Guy.
Its supposed to be brutal.The question is:What if everything that can go wrong did go wrong in the worst possible way? Its from the POV of people who did everything to survive.Its a back against the wall thing. Post Apocalypse without the religous nuts. Smiley

adle>never been one of those who like doing things within a comfort zone.its supposed to disturb the conventions of people and make them think.

well its a visionary here in CC, i guess...
people are outgrowing the usual school love story...
but 2010... isn't that way too soon???
can't it be on the time when i'm dead already???
hahahahahaha....
 Grin Grin Grin
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« Reply #6 on: April 05, 2008, 07:28:57 PM »

well its a visionary here in CC, i guess...
people are outgrowing the usual school love story...
but 2010... isn't that way too soon???
can't it be on the time when i'm dead already???
hahahahahaha....
 Grin Grin Grin
read whats happening and also search for a thread entitled "politicaland ecological mess".not to mention the way GMA is running this country into the ground 2010 is just right.baka di na 3rd world ang pinas, may bago na category,4th world.
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« Reply #7 on: April 06, 2008, 07:04:27 PM »

wow, a new guy writer here in CC. (: nice.
4th world?? hahahaha. XD hell yeah,
the way Gloria is running this freakin' place,
i don't know WHAT to expect. :p


have you ever read the book Dogeaters? :p
i don't know why, pero the 'Iceman' character
reminds me of Joey Sands. ((:
wala lang. hahahahaha. Cheesy
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« Reply #8 on: April 07, 2008, 05:32:35 AM »

sosyalin! naipublish mo na din pala.. ayiee.. english kung english talaga ah..hahahaha!

pinaghirapan itype ni kuya sa cellphone yan..haha
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« Reply #9 on: April 07, 2008, 06:14:44 AM »

hello po,
new reader here..
Nice story po.. kakaiba siya ah.. dito kasi sa CC eh halos HS lovestory..

Anyway, i like the idea. 2010 huh? Sira na pilipinas? Whoa. Pano na college ko? kidding! Lol! But my attention really caught by the title.. Smiley

btw, khay here.. Ano po name mo? Anyway, next chap na po!
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« Reply #10 on: April 08, 2008, 06:16:52 PM »

wow, a new guy writer here in CC. (: nice.
4th world?? hahahaha. XD hell yeah,
the way Gloria is running this freakin' place,
i don't know WHAT to expect. :p


have you ever read the book Dogeaters? :p
i don't know why, pero the 'Iceman' character
reminds me of Joey Sands. ((:
wala lang. hahahahaha. Cheesy
Only heard about that book.

yahk07>JM.and its not just a reflection of Pinas,  more like SE Asia.

rave_mignon>Biena, malas ka ata eh..ngayon yung card ang sira tapos yung card reader din.
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« Reply #11 on: April 15, 2008, 12:41:19 PM »

dun sa mga nagtatanong...
eto inspiration ko at pinagkukunan ko ng ideas:
http://www.candymag.com/teentalk/index.php/board,48.0.html
plus experiences when i worked for a grey ops team dati.
plus my gf biena.  Smiley lalo na si biena.
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« Reply #12 on: April 16, 2008, 05:13:59 AM »

Hey, la pa pong update? Undecided .. Btw, nice to meet you po kuya JM.. Next na po
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« Reply #13 on: April 16, 2008, 01:50:08 PM »

Hey, la pa pong update? Undecided .. Btw, nice to meet you po kuya JM.. Next na po
tapos na yung next mini chapter di ko lang maupload, sira yung card reader, under reapir, plus busy ako sa jobhunting e.
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« Reply #14 on: April 17, 2008, 01:33:45 PM »

plus my gf biena.  Smiley lalo na si biena.

awww.. i'm touched. iiyak na ako..haha
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