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[shawty24]

Hi to all!
   I have been a member of Candymag for a long time, almost a year. This will be the very first story that I will post here. This story is made by my younger sister. I just want to share how gifted she is to everyone. She might not like it that I am going to post this but oh well! I hope you all like her story.




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Love Beyond Death

   Luissa is a girl from stylish to geekish. She fell in love with the new guy in town. What if the is a vampire and everything is revealed on her 18th birthday celebration? She is ready to face anything to prove her love for him.

[shawty24]

Chapter 1

   It was sunny Tuesday in Littleville High school; the clouds were in a happy condition as the birds soar high. Luissa Clarkson, a 17 year old student was staring out the window viewing the football players as they practice their game. She can see in the field the captain of the team Giovanni Kent that stands 5 feet and 9 inches tall. He is a year older to Luissa and 4 inches taller. He loves to be in the limelight, many girls adore him and money is never a problem for him. Luissa on the other hand is the opposite. She wears eye glasses, braces and has thick brows. No one recognize her as if she doesn’t exist but as she looks at Giovanni, she wonders why he always teases her and he is very mean to her. He always makes her feel that no man will ever be mistaken to love her. Luissa’s parents separated when she was four years old and she lives with her mother so she never experienced the comfort of a man.
   Krrrrriiiingggg!!! The bell rang and before Luissa noticed it, it was only her that was left in the room and when she glanced outside, the players were not there anymore then a hand laid on her shoulders. Luissa shouted in shock and when she turned around, she saw the students laughing led by Giovanni. She grabbed her things and ran to the door; she passed in the locker room on her way to her next class but she doesn’t leave her things in her locker because it is broken. She has not fixed it yet. Littleville High School is old and needs a repair as she always complain about this.
   While passing to her locker, she heard some noise and noticed that something is inside it. She opened it slowly and then frogs jumped on her face. She took it angrily and slammed her locker. She knew it was Giovanni’s idea but good thing she is not frightened by frogs and she even had a frog as a pet when she was young.
   Everyday is a disaster for her whenever Giovanni is around. She irritatingly took her things and immediately head off to her next class. She was late but the teacher is writing on the board and no one noticed that she entered except her seatmate and also her friend- Dana. Dana is her best pal since childhood and they grew up in the same neighborhood. She is slim and jaw-dropping. She could be one of those girls that everybody looks up to id she will be friends with the rich and famous cheerleaders but she chose to be with Liussa.

   “Hey! Luissa, where have you been?” Dana whispered.

   “It’s a long story. That jerk played a prank on me again!” Replied Luissa.

   “So it’s Giovanni?”

   “Who else do you think?”

   “Well just forget him. Did you bath yourself this morning? Because you stink and you should at least comb your hair.”

   “Shut up! This is all because of Giovanni and…”

   “Luissa and Dana! You might as well continue your conversation in the detention room.” Mrs. Mayer said at the top of her lungs.

   “But we are just…” Luissa was supposed to reason out.

   “Now!!!”

   “You’re such a troublemaker.” Dana murmured.

   The two went out the classroom but not to go to the detention room. Dana went to the canteen while Luissa meander for fresh air at the roof top. She passed Giovanni’s classroom and glared at him but he just smiled back innocently. She rolled her eyes and raised her brows but it wasn’t obvious because it is so thick. As she walks through the stairs, it was silent and could only hear her footsteps. She always goes to the rooftop if she wants to be alone and feel free to reminisce. When she opened the door, the wind blew hard and brought her black as ebony hair up in the air and away from her face. She walked near through the edge and stand still. She closed her eyes, opened her arms widely and inhales the fresh air with a smile.
   It was a long time since the last time she was up there. When she opened her eyes, she could see from her position the trees, few cars, street lights and houses. When she turned sideways, she could only view one antique house even there is a family residing there. Luissa was absentminded as she looks at it. It was only few blocks away from their house but it is isolated. She could pass that house when she goes home but she uses the other way to void that place.

   “What are you thinking brace face?” asked Giovanni.

   “Ahhhh!!!” Luissa shouted as she slipped and almost fell but Giovanni pulled her and fell on his top. She was looking on his hair that is always full of styling gel with highlights then she remembered what happened. They stood up and she gave Giovanni a punch on the arm.

   “Do you really want to give me a heart attack, you moron?” she said apprehensively.

   “You have four eyes and didn’t see me coming so it’s your fault.”

   “What are you doing here?”

   “I can go wherever I want.”

   Luissa remembered when they were in elementary until middle school. Giovanni, Dana and she were best friends but when they entered high school, everything changed. He started to be mean to her but not to Dana.

   “Are you still hoping?” he asked teasingly.

   “Hoping for what?” she asked back very confused.

   “c’mon! I can tell every time you look at the house and I can still remember what you wrote in our school year book back then.”

   “Just say it and leave me alone!”

   “I like it when you get angry. Cool down girl! Don’t worry someday you’ll….interview a VAMPIRE!” Giovanni walked out as he said that.

   Luissa became silent and glanced at the gothic house. She almost forgot what she wrote in their year book before. Suddenly her phone rings.

   “Hello? Hey girl! Where are you? Do you need a ride home?” Dana asked on the other line.

   “ahm…yeah. I’m here at the rooftop. I’ll be down there in a minute.”

   Luissa hurriedly went down. Dana is waiting for her downstairs and waved at her when she saw her. They headed to the parking lot and ride at Dana’s car. Her car is a second hand green bug car that she received when she had her 16th birthday.

   “Can we just pass Nark Street instead of Millian street?”  Luissa asked in a sweet voice.

   “No! I don’t want to pass that haunted street. It’s getting dark and they don’t have much light.”

   “Pretty, pretty please?! I’ll drive.”

   “I hate it when you make that face. I can’t say no! Fine, but be careful.”

   Liussa started the engine and drive through the Nark Street. It was dark and the trees were dancing as the wind whistle. A few meters away, they saw a truck parked in front of the gothic house and furniture’s are placed at the back. Luissa intentionally stopped near the street.

    “What happened?” Dana asked in a panic voice.

   “ahm…I-I don’t know. Did you check your car before we use it?”

   “N-no but do everything you can to start it. I’m already having goose bumps!”

   “Why are you afraid? Don’t you remember that we used to play there when we were younger?”

   “That was before the rumor that a family of vampire lives there. Will you just focus there?!”

   “I’m trying!” she said while looking at the house. Someone opened the gate then Luissa drove off immediately. Her heart beats faster but also excited to see the owner of the house that she believes to be a vampire.

   Luissa was at her room. It was not a girly-girl type of room, just a plain sky blue wallpapered room. She was lying on her bed when Giovanni popped into her mind. She recalled what he said in the rooftop. She looked for her year book around the house but she could not find it so she asked her mom. Her mom is a hotel manager and very young looking. She treats her as her best friend.

   “Mom, did you see my yearbooks?”

   “I can’t remember. Maybe they are in the garage.”

   “Okay mom…Is the family in the gothic house moving? I saw a truck in front of it.”

   “Don’t tell me you passed that street? Didn’t I warn you not to?”

   “I’m fine. Nothing happened to me! So what? Are they moving?”

   “I heard they are because they are just renting. Hey! Swear not to go there again!”
   “Mom…”

   “Just promise!”

   “I don’t think there’s something wrong from going there and…”

   “Luissa, I’m telling you!” Mrs. Clarkson said in a high tone.

   “Fine, I promise!”

[M A J A]

First tagger~

I wonder who'll die in the story. :0 Haha. Anyway, good luck with your story dear. (: ♥

[shawty24]

thank you po sa support...
i hope you'll wait for the updates...

[ilabyu*kath]

hardcore ang title!!!! sige sis support ko ito! PS: newbie lang ako dito...

[shawty24]

thank you sa comment...
wat nga pala nga pangalan nio...
maja at ilabyu kat?

[shawty24]

Chapter 2

   Cuckoo! Cuckoo! Cuckoo! It was 6:30 in the morning when Luissa was awakened by the alarm clock. She took shower and dressed up with the sweater her mom gave her, jeans and sneakers. This is her everyday style. She went down to eat her breakfast. Bread, egg, ham, and bacon are served on the table. She eats one piece each and went to school.
   Luissa was walking in the hallway when she saw Dana.

   “Luissa this is my old lock for your locker so you can have more privacy.”

   “You don’t have to give that to me.”

   “But I want to.”

   “Thanks Dana. You’re so nice to me even I look like this.”

   “We’re best friends and there’s nothing wrong with the way you look. Are you riding with me later?”

   “Ahm…A…No.”

   “Okay. See you later in History class.”

   “Ayt.”

   Luissa is watching the cheerleaders chanting in the field while on the other hand, the football players are having their training. She was looking at the couple smooching beside her when the ball hit her. Her glasses fell off and had a little crack. Someone is coming near her but didn’t recognize until he was really in front of her. It was Giovanni but didn’t even mind to say he was sorry. He grabbed the ball and walked away.
   Luissa dropped by Eye Shop to have a repair of her glasses and headed straight home. She was walking and walking and didn’t realize that she was in front of the gothic house. She thought all the while that she is in her way home in Millian Street. She slightly pushed the black pointed gate and it opened. It made a little noise. She walked to the front door. As she stands in front of it, her heart pumps as if it wants to come out. She held the door knob but it was locked. She looked at the window and opened the shutter and it has a hole in it. She tried to fit in and she was successful. She entered a room and it looks like the basement. It has a lot of furniture but covered with white cloth.
   A spider fell on top of her head and shouted but she covered her mouth. She jumped to get rid of it then she tripped into something and fell on a hard board. She took the white cloth and saw a frame with a painting of a family, a coupe with two children. Half of the frame was broken. She became anxious that the owner will lambaste her and tell her mom that she was trespassing. She took the painting with her and immediately went the house. Before going out, she noticed that there’s a lot mirror but all are covered and there’s a stair to go up the main house.
   Luissa arrived at their house holding the frame with cover. She is seating as she catches her breath.

   “What are you holding?” Mrs. Clarkson asked Luissa.

   “Ahm…Ah…Ah…just our project.”

   “May I see it?”

   “No! No… I mean, it’s not yet done.”

   “O-okay. Your glasses look new.”

   “I was hit by a football and it fell so it had crack.”

   “You have your contact lens. Go use it.”

   “I don’t want to. I still look like a geek whatever I wear.”

   “Hon, stop saying that. You’re so pretty.”

   “Of course, every mother says that to their child. They always say that their child is the greatest of all. I’ll just go up to my room.”

   Luissa opened her computer and checked her mails. Dana was online and buzzed her.
BUZZ!

Gorgeousdana: wazzup?! How did you get home?
Geekish_luissa: my mom picked me up.
Gorgeousesana: I didn’t see her. I missed to say hi. Btw tomorrow let’s have a sleepover.
Geekish_luissa: I’ll ask my mom to drop me off at your house tomorrow.
Gorgeousdana” but I’m planning at your house.
Geekish_luissa: it’s kinda messy around here but sure!
Gorgeousdana: mt mom is calling me. ttyl 
Geekish_luissa: ayt! Later…

Gorgeousdana has signed out =|

   Giovanni signed in so Luissa signed out. She got an ordinary glue and tried to fix the frame but it keeps on falling. She decided to just buy tomorrow a heavy glue.
   The next day afternoon, Mrs. Clarkson bought popcorn and rented movies.

   “What’s this all for?”

   “I am thinking that you may want to invite Dana for a sleepover.”

   “I forgot to tell you, she’s coming.”

   “So it’s a good timing.”

Ding Dong!

   “I’ll get it dear.”

   “Hi Mrs. Clarkson!”

   “Hey Dana! It’s been a long time since last time I saw you. How’s your mom?”

   “Oh she’s great. She wants me to give flowers for you.”

   “Oh thank you how sweet!”

   “We should have seen each other yesterday but I don’t know that you are picking up Luissa.”

   “But I was at work and I thought you two were together.”


   “Dana! I have something to show you in my room. C’mon, hurry up!” interrupted Luissa and pulled Dana.

   They went upstairs and locked themselves in the room. Dana was confused and Luissa was silent pretending that she’s looking for something.

   “Did you just lie to me?” Dana asked.

   “Look I’m sorry. I don’t intend to lie but…I don’t know. Don’t worry I won’t lie to you again. Sorry.”

   “How could you?! We’re best friends. Now, tell me the truth.”

   “Well, Ahm…I sneaked in the gothic house.”

   “You what!?! Oh! You’re so dead!”

   “Ssssshhhh! Don’t you ever mention it to my mom. Look I broke the frame.”

   “Oh no! You weirdo.”

   “Could you just help me? Tomorrow go with me and I’ll return this. You’ll just be the look out.”

   “I don’t know about that Luissa.”

   “Fine then…I’ll go there alone and the vampire will munch me little by little and you won’t see me again!”

   “Shut up! You’re making me feel guilty. I’ll go but I will stay outside.”

   “Oh thank you!” Luissa hugged Dana and kissed her on the cheek. Knock! Knock!

   “Girls! Dinner is ready!”

   “We’re coming.”

   “Luissa, forget everything first and let’s enjoy the night.”

   It was very silent in the dining table. The aroma of the food is smelled outside the house. Clam chowder soup, pasta and lasagna is served, it was like a party. Luissa washed the dishes after with a help of Dana. They watched a movie with Mrs. Clarkson after in the living room while eating popcorn. They were all laughing at the comedic movie Mrs. Clarkson rented. Their stomach aching and tears of joy falling. Mrs. Clarkson went to bed right after the movie. The two teens stayed up later. They chatted and giggled all night, surf the net and put accessories to themselves. They were not aware that it was 5:00 in the morning when they fell asleep.

   “Luissa! Luissa! Wake up!”

   “Why…I’m still sleepy!”

   “Wake up sleephead! Your mom is at work and left a note that she won’t be back ‘till midnight.”

   “That’s good. We can go to the gothic house.”

   “But it’s already 5:00 in the afternoon so you better get ready!”

   “What?! Why didn’t you wake me up? I still have to buy heavy glue and the shop closes at 6:00 pm.”

   “Oh geez!” Dana sighed.

   They went to the shop and fixed the frame. Luissa is ready to return the frame.

[ShaLLex]

hello! i'm here..

wala lang...


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para ...

madali ko lang mababasa pag nag post ka.ng update...


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[laci88]

hey, just read your story. it's great!
your sis could be a writer. hehe...  (no kidding...  )
i really like it...

[Icecold656]

<sup>hey sis!
just checking out your story in your sig...

na-intriga eh! HAHAHA. xD 

galing, i'll watch out for this !</sup>

[ako_to]

hehe!
i like it!
newbie here..


update po


x-nikki-x

[shawty24]

hello! i'm here..

wala lang...


nagpaparamdam...

para ...

madali ko lang mababasa pag nag post ka.ng update...


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waaah!!!
thanks poh sa payo!!!
tnx rin sa pag basa...

hey, just read your story. it's great!
your sis could be a writer. hehe...  (no kidding...  )
i really like it...

yea!!! yan din ang naisip ko eh!!!
hahaha
i'll tell her that...

<sup>hey sis!
just checking out your story in your sig...

na-intriga eh! HAHAHA. xD 

galing, i'll watch out for this !</sup>

thank you poh sa comment...
update will be later!!!

hehe!
i like it!
newbie here..


update po


x-nikki-x

welcome!!!
sana abangan mo toh!!!!
later poh ang update

[ehlheighne08]

sis,andito na ko!haha..hindi ko pa nababasa lahat eh..yaan mo hahabol ako..may mga hinahabol din kasi ako..haha..basta ayun..keep it up..

[skyblue0814]

waaa! buti di natatakot si luissa na pumunta dun sa gothic house! kung ako yun.waaa! new reader here!

[yahk07]

Hey, a new reader here po.
Ang ganda ng story po.
Your sister could be a writer someday..

i like the story po. Kaya lang nakakakilabot yung title.."Love beyond Death"?? Uhm..feel ko po kasi eh parang may mamamatay.. Oh well, feel mo lang yun! Hihi

anyway, next na poh!