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Re: [The Red Journal] ~(In Need of New Readers Pls!) Chap 8 is here!
« Reply #120 on: March 17, 2008, 09:55:21 pm »
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« Reply #121 on: March 17, 2008, 10:15:06 pm »
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Re: [The Red Journal] ~(In Need of New Readers Pls!) Chap 8 is here!
« Reply #122 on: March 17, 2008, 11:28:37 pm »




! Click For Criss's Pic!
Such a really cute kid >.<





CHAPTER 9
~Each man the architect of his own fate.~
:Appius Claudius:



****Samantha's POV****



I opened my eyes, and sure enough, it was Luke—he was only wearing beach shorts, and needless to say, I could see his…...his....his...... okay, okay! Hot and solid body….






*Make’s the sign of the cross*


Samantha Hayes, self-control… self-control… Woooooohhhh…. Zaaaaaaaah.



“LUKE!”  :o I mustered to shout.

He was holding me up, and I bet we were in such a stupid position at that time. (GRAPHICAL PRESENTATION: Click me ..... I somehow had the urge to draw it… O__O)


“Hey! When you’re trying to do a moon walk, or when you’re trying to imitate Michael Jackson or whoever the hell it is, please do look where you’re going, missy.” Luke said, wincing a little as he helped me stand up. “And try to break your fall at the very least!”

“I wasn’t doing a moon walk or anything! And… that was a shamelessly long… speech.”

“Yeah, yeah, yeah...” Luke rolled his eyes, and then he unpredictably flashed a smile at me.

I felt my hearth throb, “W-what is it now?!” ???

“Why are you running like a madman again?” He asked, “Goodness gracious, join the track team, they could use your skills!”

“I am practicing.” I scornfully said with my eyebrows raised.

God, I was panting really hard.
 

“How about you? Why are you here, Mr. Perverted Ogre?”

“Oh, just watching you run.”  :)

“You’re not a good liar.”

“Almost as bad as you.” He said, as he let out a little chuckle.

I grinned, “So that means you’re running away from your fan club?”

“Obviously… They are difficult to deal with... And you? Running away from your suitors?” He asked, looking at the roses that I was holding.

I looked at the roses too… damn! Why have I dragged these along anyway…?

“Whatever,” I said, and made a ‘W’ figure with my hands.

“Riiiiiight.” Luke wrinkled his nose—I hope you could imagine that.




…..an uncomfortable silence came between the two of us.  :-\




I burrowed my feet deeper into the sand as I thought of something to say.

“Th—”
“Wa—”

We both stopped. “You go first,” I said.

“No, you.”

“You.”

“You.”

This would go on and on, I know it—it’s like a ‘conversational’ epidemic… So to put a stop to it, I said, “Thank you for catching me, and thank you also for the help again… You know, the bus, the transpo?”

“No prob.”

“Thank you, really.”

He eyed me and smiled yet again, “Stop it with the ‘thank you’… I would be keen on helping you—wait.… Sam… I’ve…. got to say this before I forget it..."

"Eh?"  ???

"You’re looking hot in that swimsuit!”


I raised an eyebrow as he nodded his head—looking at me from head to foot.

“Pervert.” I mumbled as I clenched my fists.

Luke chuckled and raised his hands in an aim of protecting himself. “Just kidding, Sam…! Chill…! Chill…! Speaking of chilling, do you… Want to eat ice cream?”

I felt my heart skip a beat…








Wait a minute.

This was just the same as the flashback memory I had some days ago at school… Wait, wait, wait…!









“Hey, w-who are you really?” I blurted out without thinking.

“Excuse me?”  ???

-____-

........Why the hell can't I just shut my big mouth! I keep on blurting things again---(and again and again)

“Eh? Nothing!” I quickly uttered.

He looked at me intently, “Hmm… In any case, I was asking if you want to eat some ice cream since I think I saw a store not far from here.”






..This was exactly as how I remember it… Just for kicks, I contemplated on asking the same thing that the ‘little me’ did during my flashback memoir.

“Why would you want me to eat?”

“You look hungry.” He said plainly.







 :o :o :o











I let out a little nervous laugh as he laughed along.

Daaaawg. I was shocked. He might be the boy in my flashback memory!—wait, so then… he might be some childhood friend of mine… He did say he came from Kingston, right?  ???



Dang, why can’t I remember...

Luke seemed to not notice the shock that I was in, and then he started walking, “I’ll go and buy some, please wait for me here, Sam…”

Suddenly.... He stopped in his tracks and went back to me, “…and, I’ll take these roses. I don’t like to see you holding it.”




._____.






“Eh? So you want it instead?” I jested so as to hide the awkwardness I was feeling.

Luke just laughed and winked at me.  ;)


“Strange guy”, I mumbled, but I felt my hearth thump again. Oh shizzzz.


I looked at him as he jogged off…






Who is he, really?

I had a weird feeling that we’ve been some sort of mutual friends… or something.  :-\









I need explanations. NOW.








****Luke’s POV****


She looked bothered, what's up with her, again? I thought as I head straight to the ice cream shop.





…As soon as I opened the store’s door, I saw the most ghastly sight that I have ever seen in my whole damn life. O___O

Criss was sitting on one of the booths inside the shop, wearing beach shorts and those bloody gigantic aviator shades.

I don’t know if I should laugh at him... or be irritated at him.

He was happily licking on a Popsicle when he suddenly looked up and saw me—Criss instinctively waved his tiny hand in the air.

I put my hand on my hips and shook my head. He looked…..... stupid. No.. He always look stupid.... ^-^ A stupid-looking kid acting like a cool rich bastard.




I sighed, “Criss…”

“Oh! Hi Luke!”

“Why the hell are you here? And damn, you look stupid.” I commented.

“Stop it with the ‘hell’ word!” He gasped.

“Okay, okay, sorry kiddo, I know you're innocent” I said, rolling my eyes at him, “In any case then, mister, what are you doing here?”

“Having fun.”

“Shut up. You’re just following me.”

“Well, not really, I felt like going to the beach so, yeah.”

“Liar. How'd you get here?”

"Miss Georgina, our neighbor, she's here with her niece."

"Oh, the old hag.... Wait. That's too much of a coincidence!"  >:(

Criss pointed her tiny chubby hand outside the window, and -sigh- sure enough, Miss Georgina really was outside lounging under the sun with her banshee of a niece.

Feeling a little tired to even argue more with this little dwarf, I approached the counter.

I saw several—no, a lot of ice cream flavors. There were the classic flavors—raspberry, vanilla, rocky road, and the like. However, it amazed me to see such ridiculous names of flavors—moss, morning grass, cyber poo.....… O___O



"Cyber poo is our most sought-after flavor so far..." the cashier commented when he noticed me looking at it.

I stared at him and then at the poo-looking ice cream... "A-huh..."




Do people seriously buy ice creams named like that?  :o




The cashier surprisingly neared me and whispered, "It gets everyone curious... that's why...."


I laughed anxiously. "R-really..."


Good thing I'm not that curious!


Anywaaaaay..... I quickly took my order, shot one last vicious look at Criss, quickly stepped out of the mysterious-flavored shop, and went ala-detective to avoid Miss Georgina once I got outside.





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Re: [The Red Journal] ~(In Need of New Readers Pls!) Chap 9 na! YES!
« Reply #123 on: March 17, 2008, 11:36:07 pm »
hahaha nice so cute can't wait for next hap.

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Re: [The Red Journal] ~(In Need of New Readers Pls!) Chap 9 na! YES!
« Reply #124 on: March 17, 2008, 11:59:49 pm »
nice update!!
next chapter na:D
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Re: [The Red Journal] ~(In Need of New Readers Pls!) Chap 9 na! YES!
« Reply #125 on: March 18, 2008, 12:16:25 am »
woot.
ang cute ni Criss.  ;D

next chaaaap! wee
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Re: [The Red Journal] ~(In Need of New Readers Pls!) Chap 9 na! YES!
« Reply #126 on: March 18, 2008, 12:46:21 am »
nice update, leen.. :)
nex na po!

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Re: [The Red Journal] ~(In Need of New Readers Pls!) Chap 9 na! YES!
« Reply #127 on: March 18, 2008, 07:49:37 am »
saammmmm..... remember... sige na, remember him na... hehehe...
 :D :D

i like the drawing. nakakatuwa. haha...  ;D ;D
(i'm not sarcastic)  ;D ;D

and cute si criss...  :P like that kid... hehe...

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Re: [The Red Journal] ~(In Need of New Readers Pls!) Chap 9 na! YES!
« Reply #128 on: March 18, 2008, 08:56:28 pm »
nice update!!
next chapter na:D


xD weee. sure, i'm editing the next chap right now  :)

hahaha nice so cute can't wait for next hap.

:D thanks sis

woot.
ang cute ni Criss.  ;D

next chaaaap! wee


anak ko si Crisssssss!
haha. joke. xD


nice update, leen.. :)
nex na po!

thanks maghz!  :-*

saammmmm..... remember... sige na, remember him na... hehehe...
 :D :D

i like the drawing. nakakatuwa. haha...  ;D ;D
(i'm not sarcastic)  ;D ;D

and cute si criss...  :P like that kid... hehe...

haha. malaking effort ang inilagay ko diyan! gamit ang dakilang mouse!~  ;D :D
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Re: [The Red Journal] ~(In Need of New Readers Pls!) Chap 9 na! YES!
« Reply #129 on: March 18, 2008, 09:20:25 pm »
i was hesitant kung mag-cocomment ako eh. I rarely give comments to other stories in this forum kasi. However, since your fic is in english.. kudos to you! HAHA. i love it. I love english fics so muuuccchh. =D Oh, and the previous chapter.. i love the picture! and I love how you create an image in my shallow mind. haha. It's great. It is really worth reading! oh, i am ana, 15 btw. friends ate?
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Re: [The Red Journal] ~(In Need of New Readers Pls!) Chap 9 na! YES!
« Reply #130 on: March 18, 2008, 09:46:01 pm »
i was hesitant kung mag-cocomment ako eh. I rarely give comments to other stories in this forum kasi. However, since your fic is in english.. kudos to you! HAHA. i love it. I love english fics so muuuccchh. =D Oh, and the previous chapter.. i love the picture! and I love how you create an image in my shallow mind. haha. It's great. It is really worth reading! oh, i am ana, 15 btw. friends ate?

haha! Hi ana! thank you so much for giving such a good comment. ^___^
i made my story in english since it's the best medium where i could
fully express what i want to say. haha ^___^ thank you talaga. I hope
you'll stick up to the end.
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« Reply #131 on: March 18, 2008, 09:53:30 pm »




CHAPTER 10
~Memory is a way of holding onto the things you love,
the things you are, the things you never want to lose.~
:From the television show The Wonder Years:




****Luke’s POV****


I extended the cone of ice cream towards her as she sat on one of the swings, “One cappuccino flavored ice cream for you, missy.”



HAH! You thought I'd give her the cyber poo flavor huh? GOTCHA. >.< Err... *cough* ^-^ Uughh... putting that aside now....



Samantha looked up at me, “Thank you!” she gladly said, and then in a blink of an eye, her brows furrowed, “W-wait. H-how’d you know I like cappuccino?”

I looked at her closely…






So… She still doesn’t remember… Damn… What can I expect?



“Eh… Luke? Hello?”


I sat on the swing next to her and licked on my ice cream. “Coincidence?”  :)

“Coincidence my ass…” Samantha said, “Come on… I think you have a lot of explaining to do--I can just feel it”

"Ooh.. Some sort of fortune-teller? Can you feel vibrations coming?" I jested.

"Come on silly!" >:(

I looked down at my feet …   :-\


Dang, I silently wished that.... at the instant that I would introduce myself, not all of the memories she had about me would start flooding her thoughts…

I wouldn’t like it if all would come down crashing over her… Because I’m not ready yet if she’ll remember ‘that’ incident too…. But hell, I wouldn’t want it either if up to now she still wouldn’t know who I am...

Here goes nothing, I thought.







****Samantha’s POV****




What is he thinking? I thought.  ???

Wow, he’s taking too long to respond… Luke might be thinking of something really important.

“I a-am errr…” he stuttered.

“Eh?”









“I am Luke Richens…! Single, and available!


My jaw almost dropped,  :o “I didn’t ask for that, idiot! I asked why you know that I like cappuccino when this is the very first time we ever had ice cream together!”

Luke laughed, “I know, I know, hey, take it easy….! And by the way, this isn't the first time we actually had ice cream together.”

I looked at him. "And that means?"

....Luke suddenly went into mute mode again. -___-



I felt myself becoming aggravated,  >:( so I stomped on his right foot (again)—I can’t help it!

Luke yelped, Jeeesus! Why’d you keep stepping on that foot!? It could always be the left side!”

“So you want me to step on the other one, okay then I’ll do—”

I started to lift my feet but he stopped me, “I was just kidding! Sheesh, don’t kill my feet. I’ve still got so many plans…!”

"Puh-lease, answer me seriously, even just for once.” I said, licking on my ice cream.











Seconds passed, and he still didn’t say a thing… ^-^

Feeling more frustrated, I stood up. Maybe he might be just one of those stalkers I have… Or whatever! Waiiiiit. That’s not a good thought—and that was a little bit boastful—but yes, I do have stalkers, and some are frightening…

Even so, by his looks, he wouldn’t go that sort of way… And in addition, he doesn’t like me…! Would such a guy just keep on teasing and playing around with someone as a sign of liking?





…As a result of that thinking that he doesn’t like me, I felt a sharp pang in my heart.



Gaaaah. What’s this feeling?










GAAAAAAAAAAH. THE HELL! THE HELL!   >:( >:((*Hades’ gates are about to open, I bet.*)




I guess I should just leave… and I started walking off slowly.

Suddenly, he grabbed my hand.  ???

“Yo, don’t leave.”

“But you’re not talking! So I guess I should just—”

“I’m just frightened.”

“Eh? Of what?” I asked, looking around jokingly.

“Juuust….”









Luke let out a big sigh.

“…..okay, you—Samantha, and I, we were childhood friends back when you were still in Kingston and…”

Then, Luke closed his eyes as though something was going to hit him.  ???











I was perplexed. He looked funny, and did he just say he was scared? Gaaawddd, this guy is bloody confusing.



“And… That’s all…?”

Luke nodded. “…that’s all.”




^-^








I laughed my heart out, and the funny thing was, Luke looked like he was relieved. Because of laughing too much, I dropped my ice cream—but I didn’t care much.

“Why the bloody hell are you scared?! And if you are a friend of mine, you should have just said it right from the start! I would have appreciated it when you said so… really. Why’d you have to keep it in?”
I exclaimed as I tried keeping in my laughter.

Luke grinned and gulped down the ice cream in one swipe, “It’s nothing… nothing.”

I sighed, “Well, I did remember that you did say you came from Kingston when you first came to class, I just sort of forgot to ask you—”

Luke broke me off, looking straight at me. “Wait… And do you remember me? Like... Truly...?”

I gulped. He was acutely gazing at me.  :(








“Err… I don’t...”







****Luke’s POV****

I don’t know if I would get sad because he doesn’t completely remember who I am… or if I would be relieved that he doesn’t remember ‘that’ incident of our past…

Samantha might have seen the look on my face because she said, “B-but I had f-flashbacks of some incidents recently where a c-certain boy was talking to me… or something… And b-by now, I think it really is… you…”

I think I am mostly miserable, now that I hear what she was saying—sure, I felt thankful that Sam’s starting to remember some things now, but it pains me to think that she can’t remember some other things yet about us—we’ve had a lot of memories together, other than ‘that’ dreadful incident... I should have expected this—but blimey, it hurts, I guess.....

Yeah, yeah, I know. I’m talking trash. ^-^ You can’t understand it fully… But you’ll soon understand… But not too soon I hope, or Ms. Author would get mad.




“I’m sorry,” Samantha said swiftly, “I’m sorry I can’t seem to remember you… It’s just that, since I moved here, I can’t remember much of Kingston… I tried, and tried, but I just can’t, it’s weird and—”






I slowly approached her, and put my index finger on her lips to silence her....Our faces were inches apart....

“Shhh… No more talk. I understand, I really understand, Sam…”








****Samantha’s POV****

I felt my heart pounding faster than before… Gaaaawwwd.






















“Sisttteeeeeeeerrrrrr!” a screeching voice suddenly echoed out of nowhere, and true enough, it was Mark—Erica and Cindy were trailing behind him.




They stopped in their tracks when they saw me and Luke in that sort of position—Mark’s eyes were bulging yet again, while Erica and Cindy were just staring at us in amazement.

Cindy giggled, “Sorry for disturbing the two of you…”



Luke and I broke apart, and I could feel myself blushing more than ever—but hey, we weren’t really doing anything—these guys are overacting—but then again, why am I blushing and why were we (Luke and I) looking like ultimate fools who are sort of caught red-handed….


“H-hey…!”

Mark seemed to be out of words so Cindy went and ‘comforted’ him. ^-^


Erica who seems to find the moment pretty entertaining, declared, “Mr. Solar was looking for you guys… There’s some sort of a little gathering, and he wants everyone to be there especially the representativessss… Soooo… You guys want to come over or… is it better if we’ll just leave you alone, pretend that we didn’t see… So that you guys could get on with what you left off?”

Luke looked at me, and then to them, “No, no… and… S-sure, no problem.”


~~~~~~~~~~


While we all walked back towards the beach, Mark shouldered me, “Ouch!!!”

“Why’d you stolen him froooom meeee?!” he hissed.

“Oh, you were so sloooow.” I joked as I embraced Mark.

Erica and Cindy stepped back so they could walk at the same level with me and Mark—Luke was walking ahead of us.

“Just what the hell was going on back there?” Cindy inquired.

“Oh, I j-just learned he was a childhood friend of mine… And... You guys are exaggerating.” I responded.

Erica jolted my thoughts, “Hello… He was touching your lips or something…! It’s like some sort of telenovela flick! If you ask me, it’s more like, the two of you were some sort of childhood sweethearts!”

I felt butterflies in my stomach—that’s impossible!  :o

Or were we?

Gaaawwwd. Memories—what the hell is the use of my brain and all its so-so parts if I can’t seem to remember such trivial details?!






Thinking about it, everything was such a blur, I still wanted to ask more…  :-\

I looked at Luke’s bare back as he walked at the forefront—he’s such a mysterious guy—a really mystifying one. But I’m shy to ask more; he was very disappointed when I didn’t remember entirely who he was and what are the things that happened between us… So if I’d continue to bug him… well, I don’t want to see that saddened face of his anymore.







I was abruptly brought back to reality by Mark’s shrieks, “I’m heartbrokeeeeen!”


“Oh gimme a break! I was just kidding! Nothing’s going on! You were not slooooow!”
I exclaimed.

Mark giggled, “No, don’t kid. I should be the one who’s flippant here, sister... Nigga, I should say good luck to youuuuu and to both of you,” and he embraced me.





Eh? Good luck?! For what???!!!
  ???




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haha! Hi ana! thank you so much for giving such a good comment. ^___^
i made my story in english since it's the best medium where i could
fully express what i want to say. haha ^___^ thank you talaga. I hope
you'll stick up to the end.
I'm Leen,and sure we can be friends!  ;)


no prob. =D What I said was really true. That is why many readers stick to this story. hehe. Anyway, ano ba talagang problema ni Luke? >.< Gaaaa, tell me.
Were they past childhood lovers?
If they weren't.. then can I have Mr. Richens since he is single and available? =D
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