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The Red Journal©


By: Icecold656
| STORY IMAGE |  CHARACTERS FACES| 
*CREDITS TO: Deviantart.com – Images edited by Me ♥

365 pages.... 365 days.... I should have known it was a countdown


:OTHER PHOTOS:
| Criss's Photo |
| RJ's Photo |




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(**My first time doing a story here, I've been writing since elementary and I'm also a journalist...and!! Enough about that...
I'm Leen, 16, And err... Please say "break a leg" to me! And it's very nice
meeting you... I hope you'd love the story I'm about to offer.
My characters and places are fictional by the way... So don't try and go searching for them. XD
But yer, yer, someday I'll write my own life's love story here... I hope... HAHA!
So here goes the story... In five, four, three, two, one....! BAM!**)





[ CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS: ]

Samantha Hayes
"I'm living my life as much as I could, but I always feel empty by some
piece of memory that I seem to have lost. It almost seem so unimportant
to even try and recall until you came along."
Luke Richens
"I'm thankful that I'm with you as much as I could. I need to explain things...
Things that you might not even believe.. I wished for unbelievable consequences
just so I could be with you... I really need to. "


[ (Samantha’s Pals) ]
Lucy Allister
~Boyish behavior despite the pretty face, sports fanatic~
Cindy Brooks
~Has a nose for ‘gossip’, A lil’ chubby which leads us to the
notion that she really loves food, plus, she's Boy-crazy~
Erica Olden
~Typical sassy girl, Can be a !@#$ sometimes, Definitely stylish~
Mark Leisters
~A real gentleman... "gentlegirl", Boy-next-door looks
but he isn't a boy as he says, so 'girl'-next-door looks then…~


[ Samantha’s Family ]
Dad (Michael)
~Protective dude, Funny guy, Workaholic~
Matt (Samantha's brother)
~Almost a complete duplicate of his dad, protective also
esp. for her sister, workaholic, mysterious guy to say the least~

**~EXTRAS are in THIS color~**


~~~NEW CHARACTERS!~~~

Criss
~Mysterious buddy of Luke~

RJ Panco
~A Rival or A Friend?
A Threat or An Insurance?~


Richard Vermont
~A man who seemed to have a given
a huge impact on Luke's life.
All that surrounds him is a mystery that is yet to be unfolded~





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(**I hope I'm going to do great things on this haha...! I've made
this story because I'm inspired by the anime show I've recently watched, entitled _____
(I will not reveal it yet, so that the suspense will kill you all, haha, I'll reveal the anime
show I based my idea on when this story of mine ends...)

-hint, hint- This story is sort of... out of the ordinary if I say so myself. Don't
expect too much of a very grand, grand, Cinderella ending though... But of course, it's
definitely a good read! (I hope!) ^__^

The Characters list isn't the final list yet, along the way, I might add new ones too.
Characters Images are for imaginary purposes only

I'm also sorry in advance if updating the story is taking so much time,
aside from having to do my ‘university workload’, I am quite finicky when
I'm writing... I need to read it over and over again before I say it's "Okay" Haha xD
But I guarantee you long chapters so it might be worth the wait -i hope-**)






Gladness can engulf me in an instant, ♥♥
but pain can take so much time…


Put time into good use,
is
presence really that important?



*Synopsis*
Samantha thought that it doesn't matter much if she forgot a big chunk of her childhood memory, but the presence of Luke suddenly draws her back into the recalling of her past. A journal that soon binds the two of them, a continuous barrage of memories unfolding; is she ready for such a sudden shock?







FOREWORD

****Samantha’s Statement****

My name is Samantha Hayes and I came from Sparta. No, no, no, I’m kidding, that sounded lame… way too lame. Anyway, you might get the idea now that I have a trivial sense of humor. Which sometimes can’t be referred to as humor anymore. Troubled you, eh? Not as much as it troubles me. ^-^

My story would start when I was around my senior year in Bluecave High. My family originally lived in Kingston though. My kin is composed of my dad, my brother, and I… My mom? She’s in heaven, I suppose. (We still have with us mom’s cremains in an urn placed inside dad’s room.)

We somehow managed to get through life without her—though I have to say that I really longed for my mother, but what can we do, right? Sure, my dad misses her; I can even hear him secretly crying sometimes, whereas he openly shows his sadness especially on the night of my mom’s death anniversary every year.

Dad told me that mom died when I was still 5 years old because of a car accident—a car accident that erupted out of nowhere, and that unfortunately, of which my mom was on the way. My brother, Matt, currently works somewhere out of town, so he could help my dad in making ends meet—and not be a pain in the ass. I miss him, but the good part is that he still manages to visit me and dad once in a while.

Why have we moved, anyway? We moved to Bluecave sometime during my grade school years and when I was probably around 9 years old?

I know something happened that’s why we moved, but I just can’t remember… And my dad doesn't even help me in remembering... He would always say: ”We moved! That's all, sweetheart. Apart of that also, is that we could move out from the bad memories, a place like that where your mom met an accident isn’t good for us."

Yeaaaah riiiight… thus said by the dad who still keeps such memories even after the move.  ::)

I know and I have this gut feeling, that there was more to that... I just can't recall.... And dear God, no, I didn't have amnesia which is to the best of my knowledge and to the assurance of my dad.

Other than not remembering the cause for our moving to Bluecave, I can’t even remember how I spent my childhood in Kingston. I know, it's pathetic. I had to leave out or shut up during my friends' conversations whenever they try to share their childhood stories… simply because I can't share anything. As in nadah~   :-\ No memories, not even a tiny bit.

Whenever I try to recall any experiences that I had there, well, I always find myself failing at it. I feel like I’m desperately trying to switch on a dead television inside the back of my mind.

I tried asking more and more about some stuff when I was still a kid there so it could help me in remembering, but like the uncooperative person my dad is, he would always say along with a smirk: “Why try to remember? You were still a kid. A really noisy kid, nothing much happened, sweetheart.”

He was a very hard nut, that's for sure, and I always wondered why… Sometimes it makes me think that he’s too old that’s why he can’t remember it himself—and that he’s just shy to admit that he forgot about my childhood.

Sheesh, adults; but I love my dad… obviously!  ;D

Time passed, and I didn’t even bothered on nagging my dad or even remembering again the experiences I had in Kingston. It was tiring, anyway, and who cares about such childhood memories as much as I do…?  ???

So… When did I stop on trying to recall?

During the start of the year when I finished from 3rd year and about to enter senior year… the time when Luke suddenly appeared into my oh-so-boring life.




****Luke’s POV*****

I felt a little bit woozy as soon as I set foot on the ground. I think it really takes some time to adjust to this new surrounding.

I looked back and glanced sideways. What a heck of a journey, I thought to myself as I quickly looked up at the skies smiling contentedly.

I’m really glad that I’m already here. 

The ‘bosses’ weren’t too enthusiastic about the idea of me leaving, but sometimes, like what some say, good guys really needed a break and an extra good great ‘grant’ once in a while. :D

I started walking up the road while thinking of all the things that I should do now that I’m here… It isn’t much of a good idea if I instantly show myself to her. Sure it’s the first day of the year, but I wanted a little more pizzazz… more flavor!

I chuckled at the thought of it—pizzazz huh?  ;D
This is so gay.

I stopped walking as I saw the big sign right above me.

WELCOME TO BLUECAVE!

I grinned once more. Dang, I’m really excited to see her. I kept on walking and soon, I started to see more people, bustling along and talking joyfully. The streets still have the traces of last midnight’s celebrations; sticks, firework wrappers, confetti and the like. Some kids were even lighting a few noisy fireworks in the distance which is to the dismay of their parents.

I really love this buoyant atmosphere; I hope I came here a little early so I could celebrate New Year’s too... New Year—wow, that brings back memories. I should be mourning or something instead of being too eager to celebrate it, but heck no, I'm tired of that drama.  :-X

After several minutes, I found myself in the center of the shopping district. I saw this little shop named Mignon Boutique which has these appealing stuff toys displayed on the front along with some really neat stuff like figurines, accessories, notebooks, etc.

I felt like going in so I did. Bells chimed as I opened the wooden red door. An old man greeted me and I nodded my head with a smile.

I started walking around looking at all the stuff—all of a sudden, this certain red journal caught my eye.

I held it up with my two hands and the old man suddenly called out, “That’s a good material you’re holding there, sir, 365 pages, good for a year. Not a binder though such as all the new stuff recently, so you couldn’t refill it. However, it’s one of the best things I’ve got here, it charms the girls.”

I chuckled, Sales-talk.  ^-^

But then again, I smiled from ear to ear; it’s just what I wanted. “I’ll take it.” I said.




[ CHAPTER NAVIGATION: ]

| Foreword | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 |
| 6 | 7 | Luke's Corner | 8 | 9 | 10 |
| 11 | 12 | 13 | 14 | 15 |
| 16 | 17 | 1819 | 20 |
| 21 | 22 | 23 | Luke's Corner Pt.2 | 24 | 25 |
| 26 | 27 | 28 | 29 | 30 |
| 31 | 32 | 33 | 34 | 35 |
| 36 | 37 |




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that was really nice and promising...
love the flow of thought and narration...
looking forward to your updates...
 ;) ;) ;)

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wow, i liked the start... keep it up!  ;D ;D ;D

i'm inviting you to my story din. it's in my signature. hehe...

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Re: [ The Red Journal ] ~ (In Need of Supporters!) ^__^
« Reply #3 on: February 29, 2008, 08:15:29 am »
that was really nice and promising...
love the flow of thought and narration...
looking forward to your updates...
 ;) ;) ;)


 ;D aww, thank you! ^___^
I shall soon update it, I already have the first 4 chapters
in store, xD


wow, i liked the start... keep it up!  ;D ;D ;D

i'm inviting you to my story din. it's in my signature. hehe...


Thank you sis!

checked out your story, nice!
Mine is about long lost childhood sweethearts too,
but with a lot of shock in store towards the end. Haha.






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Yes... you! Haha, I'll appreciate it if you guys
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I'll accept it.. Just let me know your presence,
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« Reply #4 on: February 29, 2008, 01:48:16 pm »

Thank you sis!

checked out your story, nice!
Mine is about long lost childhood sweethearts too,
but with a lot of shock in store towards the end. Haha.




haha... i'm so excited na mag-start na yung story... :)

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Re: [ The Red Journal ] ~ (In Need of Supporters!) ^__^
« Reply #5 on: February 29, 2008, 05:21:01 pm »
wooot. great start, sis!

keep it up, I will keep on watch for this story of yours.  ;D

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Re: [ The Red Journal ] ~ (In Need of Supporters!) ^__^
« Reply #6 on: February 29, 2008, 06:20:05 pm »
haha... i'm so excited na mag-start na yung story... :)


ahehe, in a few minutes I'll post the 1st chapter  :)

wooot. great start, sis!

keep it up, I will keep on watch for this story of yours.  ;D



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« Reply #7 on: February 29, 2008, 07:07:57 pm »



CHAPTER 1
~"There is no such thing as chance; and what seem to us merest accident
 springs from the deepest source of destiny."~
:Johann Friedrich Von Schiller:



****Samantha’s POV****

BAAAAAAM!

“Daaaaaaaaaaaaaad!”  >:( I exclaimed as I almost tripped over a bucket that was situated right outside my room. “Dad! Ooooooh daaaad!”

I hurriedly descended the stairs and gracelessly ran towards the kitchen—not perceiving that I bumped on a table causing this certain China vase to fall down with a crash.

As soon as I arrived in the kitchen, I saw my dad sipping a cup of coffee on the table while reading the morning paper with his right hand.

“There goes my vase...” He muttered with a sigh.

Obviously not paying any attention to whatever he was trying to say, I slapped my hand real hard on the table which sent a wince to suddenly escape from my lips.

“Ouch, ouch, ouch” I flinched as I waved my hand in the air, “Dad! Goodness! Tell me what is the exact time in your watch!”

“It’s 6:30, sweetheart,” he replied.

“Exactly,” I folded my arms, “And what day is it today?”  ???

“Your first day in school and the start of your senior year.”

“Exactly! And what trouble am I in?” I asked while I felt as though there was smoke escaping through my nose.

“You’re late,” he said with a plain tone while he peered at me through his eyeglasses, “I know sweetheart, but you see, even with 15 alarm clocks you didn’t woke up—as always.”

I shook my head. “But daaaaad, how many times have I told you to do whatsoever way there is so I could wake up if the alarm clocks in my room won’t work on me!”

“I know sweetheart, I shook you up and all—didn’t work still. So I thought of something new!” he said, “I used cold water. I applied it to your arms, to your feet, and even to your face. Didn’t work, but I have a theory that it would wake you up soon—and seeing you up now, then… I guess it did work.

He seemed to find it funny since he let out a little chuckle.  ;D

...So that was why I was shivering when I rose up from my bed a while ago!

“Very funny, dad.”

He took another sip and looked at me again, “Instead of whining about it, sweetheart, why don’t you go and change already? You still have 30 minutes left before the bell rings.”

I grumpily stomped out of the kitchen…. First day, first day, and it’s starting out pretty bad.

Dad called out to me, “Be careful, don’t step on the vase sweetheart, I’ll clean it later.”

“Yeah, yeah, yeah…” I muttered.

When I finally reached my room, I shot one nasty look at my bathroom door and then to all those 15 alarm clocks… and I let out a tiny cry of frustration.






****Samantha’s POV****


10 minutes… 10 minutes… 10 minutes…!

I should try jogging every morning so I could run faster than this…

Damn, why am I bestowed with this slow-moving-and-easily-exhausted-body!? At that moment, I really thought that I should speed up—like seriously! That’s the only way there is so I could make it on time before the gates close.

There were only two streets away and after that, I’ll be at school already. For kicks, I felt like I wanted to act similar to some sort of gritty runner, so, I squinted my eyes, picked up some speed, and puffed out air like a madman.

I was about to reach the end of the first street when in an instant, I saw this tall lean guy passing! And even if I wanted to stop, I just… couldn’t!

“Get out of the waaaaay!” I bellowed.  ??? >:(

The guy looked at me worryingly as though his life depended on that expression, and then bam! We collided—just to cut the story short.

If you ask me, we looked like two blocks of wood smacked right into each other because I was robustly thrown aback as I found myself lying flat on the pavement.

“Sheesh,” I moaned as I felt a sharp pain on my forehead, “I should start learning those martial art techniques so I could just jump over this reckless dude…”

I continued mumbling such incomprehensible things when out of the blue, the guy’s… okay, okay, handsome face was right above me and he was blocking the sun—which I find oddly—as in ODDLY amusing at that moment.

“Sun… sun, my stunning sun…” I garbled.

I panicked. What the hell did I just say?!  :o

The guy sniggered as he extended his hand to me, “I have to say that you’re such a weirdo; the bump might have affected your brain… and missy, I’m not the one who’s reckless here, you were the one who was running like a madman.”

He said it with such a smug smile that I felt my face flush. Instead of standing, I sat up with a scowl on my face and immediately let go of his hand.

“I—wasn’t.” I said sharply.

The guy shrugged. He rubbed his forehead a little, “I feel a bump forming already,” he looked at me, “and you seem like you’re about to have one too.”

I shot a piercing look at him, and by some sort of girly instinct, I abruptly looked down to my knees. Guess what? My skirt was way up high, exposing one both of my thighs!

I felt my face flush more than ever, and I quickly looked at the guy—he was looking!

*@#%!
Why do I have to wear a skirt of all days?!
  >:(

I directly stood up before him and before I could stop myself, my hands went right up and I slapped him hard on the face.

No turning back, continue, continue was the exact thought that passed through my head at that time. So I cried out “Pervert!” and I saw the priceless look of surprise on his face.

Right after that, I was also shocked as to what I’ve just done, so before he could say anything and before I could do anything more, I picked up my bag and ran for dear life.~





****The guy’s POV****

I glanced at her as I saw her dart up the street. Woot, she’s still a graceless runner.  :D

I started rubbing the right side of my seemingly scarlet cheek with my right hand.

“That was painful…She still has a sturdy hand too.” I muttered.

Samantha thought wrong, but she’s the same as always.

I felt a smile form on my lips, This was the pizzazz I was hoping for—hah! Yeah right…

I started walking up the street and since I felt a little happy and silly, I started hopping a little bit.  ;D




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« Reply #9 on: February 29, 2008, 08:07:35 pm »
that was hilarious... hahaha! natatawa ako sa sinabi ng dad nya...  ;D ;D ;D ;D

grabe siya makatulog, parang 10 taon hindi nakatulog...  ;D ;D ;D

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« Reply #10 on: February 29, 2008, 08:17:33 pm »
hi nice cn't wait for next chap pls..read my story

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clicky.. ;)

can't wait... :D


weee, thank you sweet ^__^




that was hilarious... hahaha! natatawa ako sa sinabi ng dad nya...  ;D ;D ;D ;D

grabe siya makatulog, parang 10 taon hindi nakatulog...  ;D ;D ;D


hahaha xD that's Samantha for you!
^___^ di ko nga rin ma-imagine sarili ko na magkaroon ng 15 na alarm clocks,
ang ingay nun...
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« Reply #11 on: March 01, 2008, 02:41:15 am »
im liking the guy so far...
he seems to be jolly and hmmm....pizzazz....
 ;D ;D ;D

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« Reply #12 on: March 01, 2008, 12:43:06 pm »
oh sis. you're story's great. ;D
promise, supporter ako nito.

wait, meaning kakilala nung guy si samantha?
i dont boo people. they're just either undeserving or plain insignificant.
call me he-lee-na. consider me your hell.

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« Reply #13 on: March 02, 2008, 08:47:23 am »
im liking the guy so far...
he seems to be jolly and hmmm....pizzazz....
 ;D ;D ;D


hahah.  ;D he is... and... i love that word!


oh sis. you're story's great. ;D
promise, supporter ako nito.

wait, meaning kakilala nung guy si samantha?


YESSS! ^___^ I'm glad you're going to support my story -hugs- haha
yuuup! ^^ Samantha knows the guy... but she can't remember him... you'll soon find out
by the 3rd chapter and the 6th chapter.  ;)
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Re: [ The Red Journal ] ~ (In Need of Supporters!) ^__^ Chap 1 already out!
« Reply #14 on: March 02, 2008, 08:52:34 am »
nakakatuwa naman si Samantha.. pati na yung guy!  :D
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