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Author Topic: “In Shambles” - ANNOUNCEMENT pg. 58 (posted as of 08/14/08)  (Read 46066 times)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14 on page 32. :)
« Reply #480 on: March 22, 2008, 10:23:47 pm »
nice one!
so team pala si-la.... hey! team sila?? ;D
ayos ah. . . nakakaloka naman.. :D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14 on page 32. :)
« Reply #481 on: March 23, 2008, 09:56:12 am »
psst psst.
chris, bawal daw team. nyaha.
magisa ka na lang kaya mo naman eh,
hmm, sino naman kaya yun? :D
next na ate Anicia. (:

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14 on page 32. :)
« Reply #482 on: March 23, 2008, 10:34:56 am »
JOICE;
yuhh. :p haha.
nakakaloka talaga!


JAYNE;
ehehehe. :D
si Dommie. (: malapit na yung Cont.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14 on page 32. :)
« Reply #483 on: March 23, 2008, 12:29:12 pm »
HAPPY EASTER! :D







FOURTEEN.



Continuation…





“IKAW?!”




Me: @_______@ <-- baffled
Dom: >______<



“H-h—ow?” He shrugged, then scratched his head. I looked at him from head to toe. Imposible naming nag teleport sya diba? ^-^ How the heck did he get here that fast? “Uhm…” He searched for something in his pocket, then he reached for my hand.




“Hey!” I tried to let go, but he wouldn’t budge. He’s strooong. This guy’s like Shrek. T___T

“Stop squirming!” He opened my palm, then placed ‘something’ in it, and closed it.

“What’s this?” He smiled…


















WHOAAAA. HE JUST SMILED? HAHA.










Then he turned his back at me. “Hey! I’m talking to y—“

“Why don’t you open your hand, rather than, like what, wasting two minutes of your time?” He looked back, and laughed, but he proceeded to where he was going.

I raised an eyebrow. “Hmpfh.” He’s too arrogant. He’s back to his old self, old snobby Dom.









I opened my palm and smiled. :) “Gahd, I hate to admit it, but he’s sweet…” There was small brownie in the middle of my hand, with a note. It said,






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Eat me!

-- Forgive me, I’ve suffered enough.







Well I really didn’t get the message though, but it’s the thought that counts. I opened the brownie, then took a bite. It was good. I threw the wrapper away after gobbling it all up, then I stuffed the note inside my wallet. I like keeping stuff like that. :D Haha. I had time to kill, so I went to the soccer field to think about things.









“Cruz!”


“Yap?”
Lorenzo, a soccer varsity player, came near me. I was seated meters away from the goal post, and I could see them play.

“We might hit you with the ball, I suggest you move th—“

“It’s okay.” I smiled at him.

He blushed. Oh man. ::) “Are you sure?”

“Definitely.”

He nodded, then went back to playing. They weren’t that good though, but they’d do.I was starting to think about what happened earlier. What exactly happened? Why did he give me that brownie… Peace offering, maybe? And… What did the note mean? What the. I’m getting confused. :D















I was enjoying myself with a lot of soccer hunks playing in front of me, but then, I noticed that the ball was headed for me. Stupid Jeanne. I should have listened to Lorenzo!

I covered my face, since I didn’t have time to stand up and run.

“Cruz!!!”












































*BOOG!*



“Ano naman ba kasing pumasok sa kokote mo at dito mo pa napiling umupo??!!!”

I opened my eyes, and saw Dom holding his arm. He must’ve ran in front of me, and stopped the ball. O____O








Nah, I don’t think so. :P
















“Dominic! Dude, why’d you do tha—“ Lorenzo ran up to him.

“I think you would have also done that.”

“I—“ :-\

“Be careful, next time.”

Lorenzo nodded, picked up the ball, and ... BLUSHED.

What the—? He even attracts men??!









Or maybe, Lorenzo’s just a gay guy. :P Haha.

I looked at him, he was still holding his arm. That’s when I noticed a bottle of water that fell from his hand. He sat down beside me, and watched the other players kick ball. “Why did you do that?”

“Why are you seated here?”









“I want to.”

“I want to.”

OvO Whaa~ Ang gulo namin.













“Lemme’ see that.” I grabbed his arm. “Ow!”

“Stupid.” I got the bottled water, and placed it on top of his arm.












“That’s not for me.” He showed an annoyed face. …which I wanted to pinch.

“You dimwit, it fell from your hand, then you’re telling me it’s not yours? ::) Get a hold of yourself.” I snickered.

“I bought it for you.”










OvO



















“Haha~” Sarcastically. “Very funny.”

“Seriously.” He took the water, and opened it in front of me. “Here.” He offered it to me.

I stared at it for a moment. “It’s not ‘gonna move, you know.”

I reached for it. “Uhh… Thanks?”

“No prob.” Then he messed my hair. What am I, a dog? T___T But I secretly smiled. He’s being too nice to me. I wonder why.

















I narrowed my gaze at him. He looked at me, and showed his ‘What the-?’ look.

“Is this a bribe?” >:D I pointed at the water bottle, after taking a sip from it.

“A bribe?” He chuckled.









“You know I’m still mad at you guys, right?”

“Uhh, yeah?”

“So I am correct! You are bribing meeee~” He laughed, after I pointed at his face.
























“No.” He laughed. “But, come to think of it, it can be a bribe.”

I punch him on the arm, lightly, then I smiled at him. He pinched my cheeks. “Hey, I missed that.”

I felt like blushing. WTF?! WHY??! “Shut up.” I continued to drink the water.











“Seriously, that isn’t a bribe.” He continued to talk, even though he wasn’t looking at me. “I just wanted to give that to you, since you haven’t eaten anything. Ever wonder why we bumped with each other?” I nodded. “I ran after you. I mean, I don’t know why, but I just feel guilty.” I raised an eyebrow. “Hey, don’t look at me like that. I mean, I feel guilty for, uhh, everything? Yeah, for everything. So, I wanted to… You know… Get on friendly terms.” He started blushing, so he buried his face in his hands.







I poked his arm. The other one, since the other one was still red.

“Hmm?”











































I smiled at him. “Hey, no prob.” :)



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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14.5 continued on PG 33. :)
« Reply #484 on: March 23, 2008, 12:47:00 pm »
my star! haha! ganda ganda ng mga update mo.
i love them. anyway, sorry if i didn't have the chance to comment on your story always.
happy easter my star. =] its easter sunday in the philippines huh? ehe! tomorrow pa ang easter dito. anyway, keep it up. lublub. <3 mwah!   :)

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« Reply #485 on: March 23, 2008, 12:47:34 pm »

NAK;
oo nga 'noh?! dapat Stuffed Barney nalang! XD
hmpfh. hahaha. :D i love that song too.
major LSS nga eh. HAHAHA. :P


hahaha.
may sakit din akong ganyan eh. XD
puro 'huling el bimbo' na lang kinakanta ko. XD
a lot of things not to mention people have been bumping jeanne.
wawa naman.
tadtad na ng bukol. XD
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14.5 continued on PG 33. :)
« Reply #486 on: March 23, 2008, 12:57:29 pm »
babait rin naman pala si dom eh.
konti konti lang. hahahaha. ;D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14.5 continued on PG 33. :)
« Reply #487 on: March 23, 2008, 12:59:28 pm »
oh!i love this update...Dom is a one sweet dude...

the brownie...it's like the cake in alice in wonderland with the note "eat me"

he also gave Jeanne some water...Dom i'm hungry and thirsty too...LOL ;D


don't commit when your'e not ready,don't keep others waiting endlessly

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14.5 continued on PG 33. :)
« Reply #488 on: March 23, 2008, 01:00:15 pm »
waaaahh..ang cute niya sigurong magblush!!!!!!!hahahah..hmm..teka nga, kung sinundan siya ni dom, bat nagbad words nun si dom nung magkabunggo sila?akala ko ba sinadya niya yun?at bat parang gulat siya? tsaka ano nga kaya yung meaning nung nakasulat dun sa papel na I've suffered enough?saan kaya siya nagsuffer??hmmm.hehehehhe..ang dami namang tanong.I'm so excited na sa next chapter nito...(parati naman ata..hahahha)
We definitely have a connection. Even if we cannot express it in words, we both know that the spark is growing into something warm. A forest fire? Maybe not. But we could be in for some smoldering embers.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14.5 continued on PG 33. :)
« Reply #489 on: March 23, 2008, 01:00:31 pm »
Nice update Ate Anicia. O0
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14.5 continued on PG 33. :)
« Reply #490 on: March 23, 2008, 02:01:14 pm »
ahw..ang sweet naman ng ginawa ni dom..ayiiee.. :D ;D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14.5 continued on PG 33. :)
« Reply #491 on: March 23, 2008, 02:17:06 pm »
naks naman!ang sweet ni Dom!yihee!!!! sis kinikilig ako...hahaha next na

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14.5 continued on PG 33. :)
« Reply #492 on: March 23, 2008, 02:21:23 pm »
ayieeeeeeee. may ganun ng banat si dom ngayon ah!
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14.5 continued on PG 33. :)
« Reply #493 on: March 23, 2008, 02:23:35 pm »
MY STAR;
haha. :D advance happy easter!
i understand you dearie. <3
nasan ka ba? :}


NAK;
oo nga eh. :p
naawa na ako sa Dommie ko. T_____T
bugbog sarado na. :D


ROMA;
hehe. :D mabait yan!
asawa ko yan eh. :p


REGINA;
ay sori sis,
Dom's miiiine. <3 y____y
HAHAHAHAHA. >:D
joke lang. :p


MARIANNE;
hwah. O______O
ang daming tanong. haha. :D
ahm, kasi hindi namalayan ni Dom na si Jeanne na pala yun. :]
nauna si Jeanne sa kanya diba? :p
hindi niya namanlayan na yun na pala si Jeanne. :D
yung sa suffer etc., nevermind that. :p
iexxplain nalang yun later. :]


NIKA;
haha. :D
thanks! <3


LY;
haha. :D
inggit nga ako eh. T_____T


ATE RAIN;
hahahaha. :D
waaa~ iniisip ko pa yung next eh. XD


ANA;
hahaha. :D oo nga eh.
bumabanat na. >:D ^-^ nakopo.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14.5 continued on PG 33. :)
« Reply #494 on: March 23, 2008, 02:42:31 pm »
sistarr!ay lab yur apdate!ang sweetie ni dom!grabe! :D
buti naman at bumalik ka na. :)
IMY na dear! ;)

 

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