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Author Topic: “In Shambles” - ANNOUNCEMENT pg. 58 (posted as of 08/14/08)  (Read 46146 times)

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Re: “In Shambles” - CONTINUED! :) see Page 30.
« Reply #465 on: March 22, 2008, 08:53:19 am »
i'm finding a JunKi pic with glasses.
i tried manipulating the photos, and gahd,
it's HARD. (:


i agree, little sis! gahd, my eyes sore everytime i do those things because it'll take me hours to finish it. :D

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Re: “In Shambles” - CONTINUED! :) see Page 30.
« Reply #466 on: March 22, 2008, 09:54:57 am »
buddies? wah!!! patay si jeanne nito! nice one sis!next na:D

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Re: “In Shambles” - CONTINUED! :) see Page 30.
« Reply #467 on: March 22, 2008, 10:44:16 am »
^ hi Nika. :]
thanks for reading my story.
i'd reaaaally appreciate it if you'd support this. <3
hahaha. but the fact that you read it meant a lot to me. :D
lalo na ngayong kaka-bangon ko lang sa pag 'dadalawang isip'.
hahaha. :P anyway, i'll try to drop by your story.
thanks again. :]

No problem. Keep it up! Goodluck. O0 Next na. :)
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Re: “In Shambles” - CONTINUED! :) see Page 30.
« Reply #468 on: March 22, 2008, 02:20:49 pm »
weeehh..saan sila magiging buddies? :o ???


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Re: “In Shambles” - CONTINUED! :) see Page 30.
« Reply #469 on: March 22, 2008, 03:48:03 pm »
BIG SIS;
yeah, and i'm drooling over everyone. :D
i don't know what came to me, it's just that..
you know.. "WRITER'S BLOCK". :p
hahaha. and hell yeah, it really drains me out. :}


ROMA;
haha. :D haven't you heard of it? :D
nawindang ako nung unang beses ko pinakinggan yun. :p


ATE RAIN;
haha. :p deads kay Chris.
ubod pa naman sa kulit! x_____x


NIKA;
haha. :]
ginagawa ko na yung next sa MS Word. (:


LY;
haha. :] sa school.
diba may buddy system sila? :p

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Re: “In Shambles” - CONTINUED! :) see Page 30.
« Reply #470 on: March 22, 2008, 04:08:37 pm »
sa wakas! nakahabol din ako...
dami kong namiss na chapters ah. :D
di ko kinaya yun...
but to sum up my comment sa lahat ng namiss kong chapter:
IN SHAMBLES NGA! :D :D :D
ate anicia, buti at tinuloy mo.. ganda ng flow ng story. ;)
ano naman kaya ang naisipan ni Chris and Dom at nagpretend na di magkakilala? hmmm... ::) ::)

btw, since magkakilala pala talaga sila Chris and Dom, alam na ba dati ni Dom na may half sis si Chris that is Jeanne? curious lang.. :)

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Re: “In Shambles” - CONTINUED! :) see Page 30.
« Reply #471 on: March 22, 2008, 04:42:37 pm »
ang cute ng bear..  ;D
yehey tuloy yung story..  :D
nalate lang ako..  :'(

omg!what buddies?hmm!
could he be the drummer?
next na sis.. :)

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« Reply #472 on: March 22, 2008, 04:47:37 pm »
JOICE;
waaaaaaaaaaaaa~
IMY! :D haha. <333
ay syempre malalantad yang mga yan...
...later on. ;D haha.


KARLA;
hahaha. :D buddies,
diba may buddy system sila? :]
hmm.. pwede rin. we'll see.

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« Reply #473 on: March 22, 2008, 04:50:17 pm »

KARLA;
hahaha. :D buddies,
diba may buddy system sila? :]
hmm.. pwede rin. we'll see.


oh..okay!
waah anong we'll see!
wag naman..
kawawa na si Jeanne kay Chris..  ;D

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« Reply #474 on: March 22, 2008, 06:18:40 pm »
hahahaha. :D
a basta, abangan! haha.









FOURTEEN.



{ Kaille’s POV }


Uh-oh. In five seconds, she’s gonna burst. Dominic jumped up from his seat. Five… “What?!!” Four… Chris grinned. Three… Sheesh, he really cooked up something this time. Two… “Buddies? You two?!” One… “Why?! How the? I—crap.”

















-_-




Ang tagal naman~

One and a half…

I looked at Jeanne to check if she was okay, One and one fourth, she looked fine. Except for the fact that her eyes were huge, and that both her eyebrows were already touching each other. One and one eig















“WHAT THE FU—“ Right on cue. ::) I just wonder why she didn’t finish her sentence. :P I looked behind me, surprised to see our first period teacher, Ms. Eugenio. “Oops.” She greeted the teacher, “Hello there Ms. Eugenio.”, as she faked a smile.




















































Boy Jeanne, you are one slick chick.



{ end of Kaille’s POV }




“Good morning Section 2.” As usual, everybody stood up to greet her. I was still baffled at the sight of the huge bear. It was cute though.

“Psst! She’s calling you!” I looked at the guy beside me. Oh great, it’s brubbie.

I looked at Ms. Eugenio. She was raising her eyebrow at me. What the heck did I do? “Ms. Cruz.”







“Uhh… Yes ma’am?” I answered her, as I grinned.

“I believe Mr. Cruz has told you the…” She cleared her throat. “…news?”









“Uhh… I guess so?”

“Good, then you don’t need me to explain any—“

“Actually Ma’am, you need to explain everything. Christopher just waltzed inside the room and told us that he was to be paired with Jeanne.” I shifted my gaze at him. What the—meron ka ba? ^-^ Hehehe. Lalim ng English mo brad. :D









“What’s with you? ??? A perplexed Chris asked Dom.

“Yeah?” I sneered.

“She’s MY buddy. How come you butt in?” He seriously looked at Chris.






“I don’t know? What the hell’s wrong with you?!”

“Excuse me.” We looked at Ma’am. She smiled at us. “You three are going to be buddies.” Then she pointed at the back. We all turned our heads. She acknowledged Kaille’s question.








“Aren’t buddies supposed to be, like, two people?”


“That’s a very good question, but I do not know the answer.” Ms. E smiled, again.

“What?”










“You three…” She pointed at us. “…you may take your seats.” We sat down. “Now, I really don’t know how and why the Principal assigned Mr. Cruz to Ms. Jeanne, but all I know is that you three are going to be partners. But in this case, you are a team.”































It echoed in my mind~ You are a team. YOU ARE A TEAM. YOU ARE A TEA—










“Damn it!”




XOXO



“Come on Jeanne, eat something!” She nudged me.

Gino pointed at my food. “Are you still going to eat that? I wouldn’t mind wolfing it down.”

“Oops. 2 goofy guys, 12 o’clock!” I didn’t bother to look at them.








“Argh.” I was going to get up, leave my plate, and head for somewhere serene. My mind was somewhat drained from all the events. I was seated at the Caf for almost, 15 minutes, and yet, I haven’t touched my plate. I didn’t know why I even bothered to buy. As I was about to leave, Kaille held me arm. “Hey, where are you go—“

“Hayaan mo siya.” I smiled at them. She let go of me. Kahit ganyan yang si Gino, alam niyan kung kelan titigil sa pangungulit. I walked past Dom and Chris, who happened to stare at me. I didn’t give a damn. I was still mad at them.

For what, you may ask? Well, for everything. First of all, why the hell did they keep their relationship/friendship a secret? Second, well, they simply !@#$ me off. And third, Dom keeps ticking me off. Imagine, he acted ‘that way’ at me, and for what? I don’t know! Gahd, they keep pissing me off.

“Hey Jeanne.”

“Hey.”







A lot of people smiled at me. Well, I’m pretty popular in this school. Imagine being a lead vocalist in the school’s top band. 8) I’m pretty much a celebrity.

“Cruz! Nice photo sa Sven’s!”

“Thanks.”

And oh, haven’t I told you? I’m also a model. ;D I do shoots for my dad’s clients. Mostly for their gadgets. Yeah, you know, the usual. Sometimes, I also do tests shots for my mom. Kyle too. But mostly, me. My mom’s an expert when it comes to women’s apparel. That’s why when she needs to present her designs, I model for her. Ramp and Photo.










*BOOG*




















I nearly fell. “Ouch. Sorry.”
The guy almost spilt his drink. Good thing it didn’t.




























“Hey! What the f—“






























“IKAW?!”



Continued…










sabi sa inyo babawi ako eh. ;D

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« Reply #475 on: March 22, 2008, 06:30:38 pm »
c'mon...sinong ikaw yan?
bitin!  :'(

asar din si Dom eh..  :P
pag-untugin ko kayo ni Chris..  ;D
next na.. :)

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« Reply #476 on: March 22, 2008, 06:42:54 pm »
oh eh bat andun din si dom eh akala ko be she walked pass them kanina.hehehhehe
We definitely have a connection. Even if we cannot express it in words, we both know that the spark is growing into something warm. A forest fire? Maybe not. But we could be in for some smoldering embers.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 14 on page 32. :)
« Reply #477 on: March 22, 2008, 06:45:32 pm »
sila?!? matutuwa ako kung magiging okay sila!
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« Reply #478 on: March 22, 2008, 07:32:49 pm »
ohmaygash!

pinagsama silang tatlo...badtrip tuloy si Jeanne niyan...
ang init ng ulo nila ngayon ah...
don't commit when your'e not ready,don't keep others waiting endlessly

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« Reply #479 on: March 22, 2008, 08:13:33 pm »
KARLA;
haha. :D
si Dom at Jeanne yun,
nagbanggaan. :p hehe.


MARIANNE;
hehe. >:D yun nga eh.
abangan! (baka nag teleport. @_____@)


ANA;
haha. siguro. :D
sana! :}


REGINA;
haha. :p sobra!
si Chris lang hinde.
nyahahahaha.

 

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