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Author Topic: “In Shambles” - ANNOUNCEMENT pg. 58 (posted as of 08/14/08)  (Read 46131 times)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 10 on page 24. :) readers?
« Reply #360 on: February 24, 2008, 02:06:20 pm »
who's sheila? small world ha!

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 10 on page 24. :) readers?
« Reply #361 on: February 24, 2008, 02:49:22 pm »
dominic, sino si sheila? ;D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 10 on page 24. :) readers?
« Reply #362 on: February 24, 2008, 03:25:59 pm »
oo nga dominic my labs, sino siya? ???

>hay naku sistar.nakaka imbyerna to death yung nangyari! :D :-X :-X
imma tell it to yah pag naka ym ka na.kakahiya dito eh :-\

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 10 on page 24. :) readers?
« Reply #363 on: February 24, 2008, 04:48:01 pm »
GROUP REPLY.
Gagayahin ko si Gracie Labs. :]

thanks sa lahat ng nagbasa. <333 wee.
i really appreciated it. :]
sana yung mga Silent Readers, mag ingay naman kahit paminsan. ^-^ :P
hehehehehe.
tapos.. sa mga nagtatanong kung sino si Sheila..
hmm.. MALALANTAD DIN YAN IN TIME. >:D hahaha.
thanks ulit! :]
mwaaaaa.~


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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 10 on page 24. :) readers?
« Reply #364 on: February 24, 2008, 06:12:05 pm »
haha. tama, sa mga silent readers lumantad na. :D

little sis, kaloka ang uppie na ito. naguluhan ako sa latter part, sino si sheila?! hehe. :D ;D ;)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 10 on page 24. :) readers?
« Reply #365 on: February 24, 2008, 06:29:08 pm »
BIG SIS;
hoho. :] tama ka diyan. silent reader,
please do speak up. :D
may isa pa akong update! eheh. :p
magulo pa talaga. :]
pero in about 2-4 chaps, maayos na. as in, clear na.
tapos, that's where the conflict begins. ;D







muhoohoohoo. :]
dahil mahal ko kayong lahat,
here's a short update. :p








ELEVEN.



“We’re dead. We’re dead. We’re dead.” I kept rolling my eyes to Chris’ rantings.

I looked at Jeanne. Pretty confused, huh? ^-^ :P

You’re gonna kill me when you find out.



{ end of Dom’s POV }




“Uhh, yeah?” I turned to the chinita-looking girl who held hands with my monkey of a brother. Let me rephrase that. My monkey of a half-brother. Magbabarkada kami since… I don’t know, since they moved to NY?”












My eyes widened. “So you two knew each other?!” I pointed at Dom and Chris.

Chris was avoiding my gaze, while Dom was taking a sip from his Venti Mocha Frap. “I hope you choke on that.” Good news is, he did. >:D “Answer meeee.” I sounded pretty annoyed.

“Why?” I faced the pretty girl who clasped hands with Chris. I was waiting for either one of the guys to answer, but they weren’t budging.

“They pretended that they didn’t know each other.”

“Huh?”

“Hell, I’m pretty confused too.” Dom looked at me, then he put his drink on the table.







“Look, bago lang ako sa Academia diba?” I rolled my eyes at him and took a sip from my drink. “I lived in the States for 2 years. First year and Second year High School. Third year, I was in the sister school of the Academia. I met Chris and Sheila sa NY nung 1st and 2nd year. Then I moved back here for my Third year. Si Sheila din. By the way this is Sheila.” The pretty girl smiled at me. “Your brother’s girl…” He avoided my gaze. “…g-girl-f-friend. Girlfriend.”

“Hi.” I looked at her. “Uh, Hi.” Then I shifted my gaze at Dom. “I still don’t get it.”

“Look, it’s really a long sto—“










































“Yo mga Pards!”



































































































:o My world stopped.



Please don’t tell me that’s—“Hey Denz!”

NOOOOOOOOOO. T_____T I nearly dropped my drink. “Pati ba siya kilala niyo?! Crap!” I slapped my head. Dom looked at me curiously. Heck. Maybe, this is just a dream. A really loooong and weird one. I piched my arm. “Oww. :-X











“ILY?!” (Eely.) I missed that name. Argh crap, get over him!

“Noooooooooo.”


“ILY?” Sheila looked at Dennis, then looked at me.

“What the-?” Dom scratched his head. “You know what, I’m starting to get a headache.”

I covered my face with my hands.

“Pards… She’s my ex.”











































































































“SHE’S YOUR WHAT?!!” :o

I opened my bag then I dialed Kyle’s number.

*ring* *ring* *ri“Boogs?”










“Where are you?!” I could hear their muffled voices saying ‘Ex mo siya?’, ‘Pano?’, ‘Di nga?’.

“I’m near Starbucks. You can come out now. Do I need to park the ca—“

“I’ll meet you outside.”

“Oka—“ I hanged up.

I stood up, got my bag, opened my wallet and left a two-hundred peso bill on the table. “What’s that for?”



“I’m leaving.”

“What?! ???












I headed for the door, but I turned to face Sheila first. “Bye Sheila, it was, uhh, nice meeting you.” Then I faked a smile. “Uhh… It was nice meeting you too, even though it was a—“

I turned my back at her. Before I could leave the place, Dennis held my arm. “You don’t have to leave.” I took a deep breath. “Kung gusto mo, ako nalang ang aalis.” I looked away from him. I was about to cry. Ewan ko ba kung bakit hindi pa ako nakaka move-on sa mokong na 'toh.

















































“Talk to me Jea—“


 

“This may sound a little cliché, but you know what?...





































...I HATE YOU!




And with that,
















I stormed out of the café.


« Last Edit: February 24, 2008, 06:31:47 pm by anicia »

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I HATE SHEILA. >:[
Anyway, ano email add mo? T___T
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ang daming connection! ;D
small world talaga.

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oh my! that was uhh..
err.. nice meeting at the cafe!
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Anicia!!! I'm sorry kong ngayon lang... :'( Hahabol ako... 4 more chpaters! ;)
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kakabasa ko lang. God. ang liit naman ng mundo ano?
update ulit!

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wow my star! very nice yung update mo. i love it. haha!
daming revelations. hahaha! <3 <3 muuaah!

 

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