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Author Topic: “In Shambles” - ANNOUNCEMENT pg. 58 (posted as of 08/14/08)  (Read 46151 times)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / SOMETHING on page 23. :p
« Reply #345 on: February 22, 2008, 11:46:05 pm »
nyahahaha.
my labs ha. may pa sneeky peeky ka pa ha. ::)
binibitin mo tuloy ako. :P
hahaha. jokes, i lab you my lubby dubby. bwahahah. ;D >:D
NAKU! Kasalanan mo 'to lubby labs, HYPER mode ako dahil sa sneeky peeky mo! tugoink! haha. peace,yo.
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / SOMETHING on page 23. :p
« Reply #346 on: February 22, 2008, 11:58:50 pm »
MAY SNEAK PEAK KA PANG NALALAMAN! hahaha!

hindi pa rin updated eh. T__T
I realized that my old signature was gross and changed it to something cool like this.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / SOMETHING on page 23. :p
« Reply #347 on: February 23, 2008, 08:29:31 am »
Ang gulo ng sneak peek mo, 'Nay! XD
But it's still worth a...
WOOHOO! XD
I love you. So much! Twenty-three, forever! :]

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / SOMETHING on page 23. :p
« Reply #348 on: February 23, 2008, 11:48:03 am »
i'm loving the teasers, little sis! mwah! ;) ;D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / SOMETHING on page 23. :p
« Reply #349 on: February 23, 2008, 01:20:33 pm »
omGosh. grabe ang nice nito anicia. haha. i lab it.
i didn't realize na nasa page 23 na ako. lol.
aaaaahhh.. update ka na.
grabe.. galing.
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / SOMETHING on page 23. :p
« Reply #350 on: February 23, 2008, 01:27:28 pm »
LUBBY LABS;
oo nga, nahyper ka bigla. :D ^-^ HAHA.
i lub you too my lubby labby. :] don't worry..
an update will be posted today. :p


BEA;
hahaha. peace tayo. <3
mag uupdate naman ako eh. :]
promise! :p


NAK;
hahaha. :D
thanks. <3
my sneaky peeks are supposed to be MAGULO. :]
hahahahahaha.


BIG SIS;
aww, thanks. <3 :]
mwaaaa.~


ANA MY DEAR;
hahahaha. :D thanks thanks thanks. <3
imma update later. i just finished reading YOUR update. :]
ANG GANDAAAAAAAA. <3333 hahahahaha.
aww, thanks ulit. :p

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / SOMETHING on page 23. :p
« Reply #351 on: February 23, 2008, 01:59:21 pm »
Dang..! XD
Wag mo naman itulad ang mga sneak peek mo sa magulo mong utak! XD
Juuk, juuk! XD
May plendstah ka?
Kwentuhan naman tayo, oh.
Nababagot ako eh. T___T
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / SOMETHING on page 23. :p
« Reply #352 on: February 23, 2008, 07:21:47 pm »
my star naman binitin mo pa ako sa sneak peek mo. hahaha! =) alright i'll just wait for the update.  ;)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / SOMETHING on page 23. :p
« Reply #353 on: February 23, 2008, 10:19:27 pm »
NAK;
hahahaha. XD
oo, meron. :] sige, sige.
hahahaha.


MY STAR;
waaaa. :p sorry.
eto na naman yung update eh. ^-^













TEN.



“He’s gonna do it alone?!”
I was about to stand up, but Dom held me back. “He’s nothing but a show off! He’s an @ssho—Mpfh.” I looked at Dom, who covered my mouth. He snickered. I just gave him a cold stare.




“Let him be.” He let go of my mouth, then he wiped his hand on my shoulder, while laughing.

“Takte, tinakwil pa akong kapatid nitong kuma—“

















“Maybe he has his own reasons.” I just looked at him. Then I looked at Chris, who was reading his script.








Maybe Dom, maybe. :(











{ Dom’s POV }

“Mr. Cruz, you may study your script while the next performer is acti—“

“I’m finished.” He handed his script to Sir Perez. Everybody looked at him with awe.

Some guy whispered to his seatmate, “Pasikat si pare, may binatbat naman ba?”






We all stared at Chris as he pulled a chair near him. He sat down, then he put his hands at the back of the chair. He was in an awkward position. He looked like he was tied to the chair. Sir Perez let out a sigh, then signaled him to begin. Everybody paid attention to him.

He closed his eyes for a second, then he opened them again. His face showed another expression. Another one filled with anger. "Kill me?! After all the things that I have done for you??!" Whoa. Hindi naman siya masyadong galit niyan? ^-^






“Alyssa, I made you. I was behind your success, I made you rich, I made you famous, and this…” He looked at his surroundings. Man, he’s still good. “This is what you repay me?!”

His eyes widened, he conveyed every emotion perfectly. “What?!” He acted like a pro. “You’re mine Alyssa, why are you doing this to me?!”











“You were a nobody, I made the Alyssa that people look up to. I made you Alyssa, and—“ He tilted his head back abruptly. “Ugh.” He choked. It look like somebody was grabbing him by the neck.





“A-al-y… I-I…” He took one last gasp. “…I s-still l-lo-ve y-you.” Then he pretended to faint.













D@mn, he’s good. >:D I looked at Jeanne. I smirked. She looked pretty. Her jaw dropped when she saw Chris’ perform. Out of the blue, I blurted out.. “D@mn it, you’re really pretty!”





















































SH!T. I JUST SAID THAT?! :o



{ end of Dom’s POV }












I heard Dom mumble something under his breath, but I didn’t get his message. “What?”

He shook his head automatically. “Nothing.”

I turned my head to face Chris. Man, he’s really good. We were all dumbfounded by his performance. Mr. Perez started clapping his hands.

“Wooohooooooooo!!!” The class really loved him. He opened his eyes, stood up, and took a bow.




“That was a wonderful performance Mr. Cruz!” Mr. Perez was still clapping his hands. Excited masyado. :P

“So sir, am I accepted?” 8) Uhh, hangin alert?!

“Yes, of course!” He scanned the room to check for any vacant seats. Then he smiled at me. OH NO YOU DON’T. “Can I sit there sir?”
















I looked at the chair beside me. Oh gahd. “No, you can’t.”

“Pardon me Ms. Cruz, but I didn’t hear you.” My eyes widened. Chris was about to laugh. I could tell. Dom was chuckling lightly.

“Um, nothing sir. I didn’t say anything.”

“Okay Chris, you may sit next to Jeanne.”

He smiled, the he sat next to me. “Hey sis. ^-^

“Shut up.”








“Tol! Nice perfo.” Dom extended his hand out to Chris, Chris shook it with enthusiasm.

“Ayos ba? Hehe.” They did a high five. Aba, close kaagad ang dalawang mokong? ??? >:D

“Okay class, now I think we all know where to find the best actors.” Mr. Perez smiled at us, then the class all looked at us. Some were snickering, while the others just smiled at us.










































This is gonna be a hard elective for me.





XOXO





“Aww c’mon gimme a hug.” She pouted.

I am going to strangle this girl. “Ayoko nga. Iiwan mo nanaman ako.”

“It’s all his fault. :P She pointed at Gino.

“Sorry Lubby Lub.”

“I hate you both. And to think you’re my…” I faced Kaille. “…Lubby Dubby.” Then I faced Gino, “…and you’re my Lubby Lub.” This time, I pouted.






“Pagbigyan mo na kami. Paminsan nalang kami lumabas oh.”

Gino put his arm around my shoulder. “Ganito nalang Lubs, come with us.” 

I shoved him off. “I’m not that selfish.” I laughed. “Sige go, imma wait for Kyle na.”

“You’re so conyo to death talaga!” He sid that with his freakishly gay accent. Kaille hit him on his arm, then they both laughed.





“Are you sure you’re gonna be okay?”

I faked a smile. “I’m sure.” She hugged me, then they started walking towards the gate.

I sighed. I was alone in the lobby. I started fidgeting with my phone.





Message
Sender: aa Ku-langot.i

Boogs! Wait 4 me at strbucks.

I just replied with a simple ‘ok’. I started walking towards the gate, when I heard someone call my name. I turned to look at the person, it was none other than Dom.












“What?”

“Hey, I just want you to know that I’m really sorry for…” He pointed at my arm. “…that.”

“It was nothing.” I smiled. When I was to face the gate, he held my arm.

“There you go again with your fake smiles. Why do you keep doing that?”

I stuck my tongue out. :P He laughed, then messed my hair. How did he know I faked a smile? “Come on, let’s go somewhere.”


























“I need to meet Kyle at Starbucks.”

“Then we,” He put an emphasis on the word ‘we’, “…are going to Starbucks.”





XOXO





“Here’s your Venti Choco Chip Frappe.” He gave me the drink, then smiled at me.

“I thought I said grande? I can’t finish this.”

He raised an eyebrow. “Ikaw pa, eh ang takaw takaw mo. :D

“Retard.”

I was about to punch his arm, when I saw Chris enter the place.































































With a girl. ::)









{ Dom’s POV }


“Hey CJ—Jeanne!” I was pretty sure it was…

“Hey Chris.” She rolled her eyes at him. Man, she really hates her brother? >:D







I turned to look at Christopher, but to my surprise, he was holding on to a girl’s hand. And that wasn’t any ordinary girl. I felt my head heat up. My eyes widened. “S-She—“ They went to our table.

Chris didn’t see me, but when they came near us, he looked dumbfounded when he saw me. “Ay patay.”

“Aren’t you going to introduce me to your friend?” Jeanne said, in her sweetest tone. But I could tell she was pretty annoyed.













“Uhh… Ahh…”

The girl faced me, then looked at me from head to toe. “DOMINIC!” She smiled at me, then pinched my cheeks. “Hey.. Long time, no see.” She gave me one of her laughs, then she messed my hair.







































“Hey Sheila.” Jeanne looked at me abruptly, then she looked at Sheila. D@mn it, we’re screwed.





























































































“You know her?!” :o









sorry kung medyo magulo yung dulo. :]
sorry din kung maiksi. :p super hirap na kasi akong mag update.
pero babawi talaga ako next time. :D ^-^




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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 10 on page 24. :) readers?
« Reply #354 on: February 23, 2008, 10:32:58 pm »
uh-oh.. trouble?.. haha..
who is she, DOM?..

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 10 on page 24. :) readers?
« Reply #355 on: February 23, 2008, 10:52:11 pm »
um. sino siya? hehe.
i <3 it anicia!

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 10 on page 24. :) readers?
« Reply #356 on: February 23, 2008, 11:05:00 pm »
aw..sino si sheila sa life ni dom? bhakit sila mag-kakilala? :o ??? :D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 10 on page 24. :) readers?
« Reply #357 on: February 24, 2008, 12:13:47 am »
sheila? Sheila who?
Is it wrong if I'd be [size=15pt]ME?[/size]

For a DAMN change.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 10 on page 24. :) readers?
« Reply #358 on: February 24, 2008, 08:50:09 am »
 >:( ano ba talagang meron kay Chris at Jeanne?
i have a feeling na may something eh..
well, malalaman ko din yan...diba????:D  ;D

anyway, si Shiela ba ang kontrabida ng story na ito??
at anong meron sa kanila ni Dom??may past?or baka present?  :o
wag naman sana.!  >:(

wee, nice update.. :)
i want more!  ;D update na..  :)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 10 on page 24. :) readers?
« Reply #359 on: February 24, 2008, 12:54:50 pm »
hhhmmppp...sino na naman ba yang sheila na yan? ex ba ni dom? bakit busted kayo? may dapat bang malaman si jeanne>????!!!talagan usisera ako no??nyahahah
We definitely have a connection. Even if we cannot express it in words, we both know that the spark is growing into something warm. A forest fire? Maybe not. But we could be in for some smoldering embers.

 

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