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Author Topic: “In Shambles” - ANNOUNCEMENT pg. 58 (posted as of 08/14/08)  (Read 46147 times)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / see PG.21 for the ANNOUNCEMENT. :(
« Reply #315 on: February 17, 2008, 05:54:29 pm »

NAK;
may daddy ka na. :]
hahahaha. joke laaaaang. :P


SISTARR JAKII;
waaaw. tapos na. nice. :]
last year din, sumakit yung paa ko eh.
pero at least nag enjoy, diba? :) <3













NINE.



CHEMISTRY?! :o The two of us?! Crap.

We looked at each other and laughed. “But next time, kindly tell us if you’re planning to manipulate the script.”






I felt my face get hot. D@MN! :-[ “Ahh—we… Uhm…”

“It won’t happen again.” I heard him snicker. Harhar Dom, harhar. May araw ka sakin.

“Miss Cruz?” Ngumiti naman si Sir. SLY SLY SLY. “Yes sir, it won’t happen again.”

As we were about to sit down, I heard a faint muffled sound.

































































“I hope it never happens again.”




XOXO




We’re up to the 10th pair in the auditions. Some of the actors were promising, but majority of the class got low marks from Mr. Perez. Gaah. I’m just plain happy to be accepted in this class. I tried to look at Dom, but I shivered. Loko kasi yang si Dom eh, nakakatakot. @____@ I looked at my hand, it still had the red mark. “Sheesh.”





“Yah.” I looked at Dom. He spoke the word ‘Yah’ with a different tone and accent, so it wasn’t the ‘Yah’ that agrees with a person.

I looked at him quizzically. “Huh?”






















“Junmal miyanheyo.” @____@

“What in the name of—“

“Ms. Cruz.” I turned to face Mr. Perez. He had his index index on his lip. I smiled at him, then I heard Dominic laugh.










He knows Japanese?! Man, he’s awesome. I envy him. :D

I moved closer to him and nudges him. “You speak Jap?”

He chuckled. “Paboyah.” Then he toyed with my hair.

“If you’re making fun of me, you better run for it.” I aimed my fist at him, but he stopped me.






“That wasn’t Japanese. It was Korean.” :P Oops.

“Yeah, whatever.” I smiled. “What does it mean?”

“It means…” He got hold of my wrist, the one with the red mark. “…I’m sorry.”

I felt butterflies flutter inside my stomach. :D








“Aww Dommie.” I said sarcastically.

He held my wrist near my face, “You want me to do it again?”, then he motioned to squeeze it.





“You want me to kill you? Get your freakin’ hands off my lovel—“


*SBAM* The door swung open. The auditioning students stopped performing. Mr. Perez faced the door. We all looked at the door. Ooh, what a lovely door. :P









A guy entered the room.

But this wasn’t any ordinary guy…





















































































It was my half brother.




“Excuse me Sir, is this the Theatre Arts class?” He smiled.


“That’s Chri—“

“What the hell is he doing here?!” My eyes widened.
































“Oh my, he’s gorgeous!”

“I saw him first!”

“No, I saw him first!”

























A lot of girls whispered with each other. Mr. Perez shook his head. “In fact yes, this is the Theatre Arts class.”

“Good afternoon sir, I’m Christopher Erique Lao Cruz, and I wish to audition for this class.”

Mr. Perez eyed him suspiciously. “I’m sorry, but I’ve never heard of you, and this class already started last week.”

























“Sir, I’m the transfer student.”
TRANSFER STUDENT?! :o

“Oh, so you’re the new kid? The one without the buddy?”
What in the world is going on?!

“Yes sir.” :)

“D@mn.”

“Oh, I’m sorry, but this class requires you to audition, after this day, I will no longer allow anyone to audition.” Yeah, go Sir! >:D




















“I can do it now.” 8)

“Whoaaaaaa.” The whole class reacted.

“Mr. Cruz… Wait, Mr. Cruz? Are you somewhat related to Ms. Cruz?” They all looked at me.









“Uhh—Ahh—“

“No.”









“What?!” I looked at Dom, he had a serious look on his face, but his eyebrows gave him away. He seemed angry, but at the same time confused.











“Sir, Cruz is a very common name.” Then he smiled.

“Plastic ‘kang hayop k—“ Tinakpan ni Dom bigla yung bibig ko. “Mpfh.”

Mr. Perez held his eye glasses. “I’m sorry Mr. Cruz, but all my scripts are for pairs. And, you still don’t have a buddy right? I don’t think you—“

“I can do it alone.” Mr. Perez looked at his scripts, then he looked at Chris. “You can read the other lines to me. But I can perform alone.”







“We’ll give it a shot.” Mr. Perez smiled. Chris also smiled, then he flipped his hair. He got hold of his bag, then he placed it on the chair near the door. He looked at me and smirked. Imma kill this guy.

“Okay Christopher, here’s the script.” He chuckled, and got the script from Mr. Perez.

























































































“Sir, call me Chris.” >:D






I FIND IT LAME. T________T & POINTLESS.
super duper sorry. :'(


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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 21. :) finally.
« Reply #316 on: February 17, 2008, 06:02:14 pm »
dammit chris!you're so plastic ever!
i hate you talaga! >:(

nakakainis si chris sistar!ang sarap sapakin! ;D

enjoy naman kahit papano.ngunit hindi inaasahan ay nasira pa rin kagandahan ng gabi.
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #317 on: February 17, 2008, 06:10:16 pm »
wah!ano ba yan si chris may pagka epal!hahaha

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #318 on: February 17, 2008, 06:18:35 pm »
papansin din si chris eh noh?  ;D
bakit kaya ayaw nila sabihin na magkapatid sila?  :D
may sikreto ba na nakatago dyan sa dalawang yan?

wee, next na..sana hindi matanggap si chris..  :P

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And I find myself giving it all away


Cause I know I'm in love"

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #319 on: February 17, 2008, 06:43:08 pm »
im thinking that chris will be accepted! err.. and there's a love triangle in the story portrayed by the three.. haha..

sis, yes we're happy for the up! thanks.. haha

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #320 on: February 17, 2008, 07:09:37 pm »
yabang talaga ni chris oh...
We definitely have a connection. Even if we cannot express it in words, we both know that the spark is growing into something warm. A forest fire? Maybe not. But we could be in for some smoldering embers.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #321 on: February 17, 2008, 07:30:47 pm »
hay naku..umepal na naman yang si chris..and he is ssssooooooo plastic...duh..sarap ihagis.. >:( >:(


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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #322 on: February 17, 2008, 10:00:50 pm »
Ate Anicia. Chris is mine. After you said that Dom is yours, I tried to find a new hubby. && that's Chris. :D Though he's kinda bad, mean, and jerky. ::)

-next ate anicia. XD
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For a DAMN change.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #323 on: February 18, 2008, 01:54:28 pm »
chris, sana naman diba. di ka masyadong epal. haha. ;D
ako\'y isang manhid, na hindi makikinig, sa bawat sasabihin ng mundo...<br /><br />*Multiply*.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #324 on: February 18, 2008, 04:40:11 pm »
comedy pala tong si chris eh.
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #325 on: February 18, 2008, 05:39:10 pm »
ows.?  :o
hanggang dun ba naman nandun parin si chris.?
pero di ko gets..
bakit ikinaila ni chris na 'related' siya kay jeanne.?
at bakit nainis si jeanne dahil dun.?
wahaha. ayaw nya kay chris tapos nung ikinaila nya siya mas lalo siyang nainis.?
haha. sorry. im slow today.
please explain. :)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #326 on: February 18, 2008, 07:00:42 pm »
^ounga bakit kinaila niya..?
tska at ganun yung reaction ni jeanne?

awww si YUU!! .n_n.
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #327 on: February 18, 2008, 07:44:13 pm »
parang may bagyo yata! wahahah
ang "cool" ng dating ni chris ah..wahaha
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #328 on: February 18, 2008, 07:53:29 pm »
chris pwedeng
pakihinaan ung hangin mo..
sobra na ha..
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 09 on page 22. :) finally.
« Reply #329 on: February 18, 2008, 07:56:43 pm »
ayos si chris ah! hahaha.:]
signal no. 4 ka pare! ;D

 

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