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Author Topic: “In Shambles” - ANNOUNCEMENT pg. 58 (posted as of 08/14/08)  (Read 46153 times)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #270 on: February 08, 2008, 08:52:09 pm »
cheng name ko sis. :)


bt ba ayaw ni jeanne si chris? what's wrong with the both of them?..
pati ang bait ni dom. hehe! next next. :]

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #271 on: February 08, 2008, 09:53:21 pm »
oo nga naman bakit ba nila nitatago na magkapatid sila?? ??? sino yung HIM na yun? ??? :o

nice up sissh :D ;)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #272 on: February 08, 2008, 10:04:04 pm »
raming lalaki nito!
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #273 on: February 09, 2008, 06:23:47 am »
incest alert??

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #274 on: February 09, 2008, 07:05:38 am »
Mommy Aneekins!

Yan na lang tawag ko sayo. Ang haba din ng ANEEKINS MY LAABS. =P
Hahaha. FWARF. X_X
Anyway, haha. Malaking ARAY kay JEANNE!
MAID? Bwaharhar.
I was called 'that' once. T__T
Hahaha. Lublub! ANKYOOOT! O_• <--- BLACK EYE XD
Wala ako magawa. =P
Anong sinasabi mong "Ligawan mo nako jerk@ss"?
LUKAREEET.
Bawal pa ko sa ganyan.
Hahaha. >__<
Ang emo ni Jeanne ngayon. XD
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I love you. So much! Twenty-three, forever! :]

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #275 on: February 09, 2008, 08:22:26 am »
little sis, i have a hunch on who that HIM is. hehe. ;) ;D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #276 on: February 09, 2008, 09:19:51 am »
i hate bad memories to....
We definitely have a connection. Even if we cannot express it in words, we both know that the spark is growing into something warm. A forest fire? Maybe not. But we could be in for some smoldering embers.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #277 on: February 09, 2008, 02:28:37 pm »
err.. Christopher is a monkey..
haha..
bad memory..
tsk..

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #278 on: February 09, 2008, 03:31:46 pm »
HIM? sinong him????
ako\'y isang manhid, na hindi makikinig, sa bawat sasabihin ng mundo...<br /><br />*Multiply*.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #279 on: February 09, 2008, 04:28:16 pm »
sino bang HIM??
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #280 on: February 09, 2008, 05:35:13 pm »
kaih11_jRaU89;
sis, name mo po ulit? :P
soooorryyyyyyyy. XD
i'm very very very BAD with names. :p
parang ba? :] haha.
nako, forbidden love nga, according to Jane.


i understand..
im bad with it too..   :D
anyway, im karla..

waa, na-sense ko nga..
so si Chris kaya si HIM??hmm!

"And I can't help who I love
And I find myself giving it all away


Cause I know I'm in love"

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #281 on: February 09, 2008, 06:28:33 pm »
SISTARR JAKII;
nako, hindi ko rin kilala sistarr! :D
hahahahaha. XD



CHENG;
sorry po ah. :] hehehe.
ayun, 'bad' daw kasi si Chris. haha. XD
mabait talaga yang si Dom, kaya Lubs ko yan eh. :D



LY;
thanks sis. :] <3 haha.
well, malalaman natin. :D



ANA;
umuulan ng mga gwapoooo. XD
ahahahaha.



SHANE;
oo nga eh. OOPS. :P



DAUGHTA;
ayan. para may kaartehan. DAUGHTA~ :]
kunyari slang. :D hahahaha.
ang cute 'noh, LUUUUB! <3333 wee. haha.
bawal pa ba? :p WUSHUUUUUU. hahaha.
nako daughta, malapit naaaa. :}



BIG SIS;
PSHHHT. :-X
quiiiet Big Sis. <3 haha.



MARIANNE;
same here. T_____T



REIN;
he's an @ss. :D
HAHAHA. i'm soooo mean.



OWEN;
hala, hindi ko nga rin kilala eh. :} HAHA.



LEE;
si *****************. :D haha.



KARLA;
sorryyyyyy. ;D hehehe.
hello hello, again. <3
si Chris nga ba? :p




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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #282 on: February 09, 2008, 07:09:50 pm »
hello po! :D
nakapag-comment na po ako sa isa sa stories mo (ata ???) pero hindi ko na-continue ang pagbabasa eh. XP pasensiya na. :D pero i'll try my best para subaybayan 'to! ^-^

anyway, intro pa lang po ang nababasa ko pero mukhang maganda! ;)
wala pa kasi ako sa mood magbasa kaya hindi ko pa nababasa yung iba. hehe..
hahabol na lang po ako. 8) keep it up!
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #283 on: February 09, 2008, 07:10:32 pm »
Yan ang hirap iba ang naalala nya.

Looking forward to your next chapter Anicia...ummm Lubs pala. Haha.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 08 - PG.18 (to be continued.)
« Reply #284 on: February 09, 2008, 07:57:31 pm »
pinkhaterz_023;
sa It's His POV. :] hehehe.
sorry sis, nalimutan ko na name mo eh.
ano po nga pala ulit yun? :D
thanks. <3 sana makahabol ka.



KUYA KEN;
oo nga eh. XD haha.
nyaha, LUBS. :P weeeee.
anyway,
here's the continuation. :]















EIGHT.



Continuation…


I shook my head. No, no, no! Not HIM again! I slapped my cheek lightly. Kaille looked at me, then she rolled her eyes. “Still thinking about him?”

“What?”

She smirked. “Masyado kitang kilala Jeanne. :)






I sadly looked at her, then nodded. “Aww, come here.” She gave me a hug. This what I like about my bestfriend. She always knows how to make me smile. She’s always there for me, and she understands my every move.

“I don’t want to remember him. D@mn it!” I knocked on my head. Kaille laughed. She held my shoulders, then she let me face her.

“Look Lubs, if you’re still going to think of him, better think twice. He doesn’t deserve you. Imagine, leaving you without a reason? I mean, that’s total bull!!! You are too d@mn good for Dennis.”






I laughed while she said those words. “Speaking about bull, your half brubbie’s back?!”

[ Brubbie, in Kaille’s language, means brother. ]





“Oh that, yeah, he’s back.” I sulked.

“Oh my.” She held her mouth.

“Oh yeah.”

“Since when?!”

“I don’t know. All I know is that, last Saturday, I saw him. I wasn’t really listening to the dinner conversation our family had.”

She eyed me. “Diba you have a crush on your half brubbie?”

I rolled my eyes. “I HAD. ::)










“Wooshoo. :P She tapped me. “Ba’t ngayon ba, hindi na?” She ran.





















“Hindi na! You crazy pig!” I ran after her.



XOXO



BRIIIIIIIIING!!!

I stretched my arms. “Yeah! Breaktime!” We all looked at Gino. We all laughed. The teacher just shook his head, then dismissed us.

“Lubby Lub!” I ran to him. “Treat me lunch!”






:o His eyes widened. “Sosyal kang babae ka!” Kaille laughed.

“Please Lubby Lub?” I pouted.

“Why should I treat you?!” Kaille punched him lightly. “So you’re on her side, huh? >:(













“Of course. ^-^ I smirked.

“Come on Lubby Lub, treat me to lu—Aaah! I was grabbed by none other than…






















“Come on.” Hell. “Why should I?!”

“I think we better go.” Kaille grabbed Gino’s arm, then walked away.

“Luuubbyyyyy—Mpfh!!!” My mouth was covered by Dom’s handkerchief. I took it off my face. “What did you do that for?!”

“You’re too noisy.” He dragged me outside. Everyone was looking at us. I wanted to scream. I felt so humiliated, at the same time, I was confused. Where the hell are we going?!











When we were outside of the classroom, near a secluded area, I freed myself from his grasp. “What the heck?! Why’d you grab me?!” I was mad. I involuntarily pouted. “I was about to be treated lunch…”

“Imma treat ‘ya.” :o

“Are you sick?!”

“I’m telling the truth, so shut up and follow me!” He grabbed my arm, then led me to the stairs.












“What?! You’re an a—“ He nearly twisted my arm. “Ouch, Dom, it hurts!”

He looked at me, he saw that I was serious. His icey stare turned into his soft, original Dom-eyes that cared for another human soul. WHAT THE? Hahahahaha. :D

“I-I-m so-rr-y.” He let go of my arm.

I glared at him, and ran back to the classroom.









I was alone inside the room. I held my arm. I looked at it, it had red marks. Man, he’s strong. I stared at my arm for almost 10 minutes, then compared it with my other arm. I also checked the time. 12:57. I slouched on my seat. I laughed, yeah, I laughed alone. Then I took my cellphone. No Messages. Great.




XOXO




“Hey. Jeanne. Wake up.” I opened my eyes, then I checked my watch. 1:42.

“D@MMIT! I fell asleep!” I checked my watch again, just to make sure. 1:42.






CRAP! “Gahd Kaille! I’m freakin’ late!” I was late for my Theatre arts class. That class started 2 minutes ago, and I still needed to change! I scanned the room for Dom. He was nowhere around. CRAP! “Where the hell is my buddy?!”

“Dunno. I just got up.” She eyed me. “What’s wro—“










“GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!” I grabbed my paper bag, then rushed to the bathroom.





















I quickly changed my clothes, then I ran back to the classroom.

“Wow Jeanne, you are so damn sexy!” I quickly smiled at Gella, then I ran to the other building.

D@mmit, my hair was messed up and I badly needed air. When I got inside the room, everyone stared at me. I faced Mr. Perez, “Uhh… Sir! Sorry I’m late!”

He checked his watch. “1:50. Ten minutes late Ms. Cruz.” He shook his head. “Well, that settles our argument then. Ms. Cruz and Mr. Coanco, you are the first ones to perform.”














@____@ My jaw dropped. Dom stood up. That was the first time I saw him with his costume. Not too shabby Dominic. I looked at my costume. Unintentionally, our costumes were great together.

He didn’t look at me straightly, and proceeded to go infront of the class. I pinched my arm to get to my senses, and followed him.

He turned his back from me, then he breathed heavily.

You can do this Jeanne, inhale… Exhale… Inhale… Exhale… In—“And, action!”

INITIATE SUICIDE! @_____@ Waaaaaah!








NO-NO-NO-NO… YOU CAN DO THIS!


































“Br—“ Sh*t. “B—“ SH!T@SS!!!

He faced me. “A—anna?!” He sounded surprise. I’m sorry Dom, I’m just really nervous. What the hell, serves you right for hurting me! >:(











“Br-brya-n…” I tried my best to sound pathetic. I looked at him intently. It was one of his looks that made him look like Dennis. “W-why??”

“A—a—“ He shook his head. “This is never going to work!” Unintentionally, I cried.

“I st-ill love you D—De— His eyes widened. I couldn’t help myself! Oh no!
















“De-? Who the hell is that?!” He went near me, he grasped my hand. He held it… Lightly. But it looked like he was holding it tightly. Maybe he didn’t want to hurt me again.

“He’s no one.” I looked away from him, finally coming to my senses.

“Th-this is bullsh!t!!!” He was going to leave. Gahd, the script is all wrong!

“No!” I hugged him from behind. I felt a drop of tear on my hand. “Dom?”















“A-ana stop it!!!”

“Don’t go! You still love me, don’t you?!” He held my hands. “DON’T YOU?!!!”

“A-a-ana… I—“ He let go of me.





















































“…I don’t.” He left me there, then I kneeled down and cried.

After almost a minute of silence, Dom approached me, offered his hand, and helped me get up. We faced the audience and took a bow. Still, no one reacted.

“Aw sh!t.” This time, everybody laughed and clapped their hands.

“Wooohoooo!!!”

We both smiled, and took another bow.






































































“Bravo. Nice work! I'll consider the both of you for our annual major play, if you still can pull off what you did earlier. You two have great Chemistry. ;)











ayun. ;D thanks sa pag-intay.

 

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