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Author Topic: “In Shambles” - ANNOUNCEMENT pg. 58 (posted as of 08/14/08)  (Read 46140 times)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 06 - PG.13 :]
« Reply #210 on: February 01, 2008, 08:09:31 pm »
anu ba yan aneng...ang tagal ko na ngang nawala pero wala parin?!

wahaha atat? lolz...joke lang..

sige take your time =)
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 06 - PG.13 :]
« Reply #211 on: February 01, 2008, 08:24:42 pm »
eLow siStah..

gOod uPdate..kAhit biTin nG KunTi...hehehe ;D ;) :D..but itS oKieyz... ;D

aYiieee..kiLig nAmn nG pRactiCe niLa..pArang toToo.. :D..

i'll jUst wait fOr tHe nExt update here...
tAke yoUr tiMe.. =D

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 :D ;) :D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 06 - PG.13 :]
« Reply #212 on: February 01, 2008, 08:29:47 pm »
hiyeeeeee.
ateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
ako sa computer ngayon. bwahahaha. >:D

ilong!!!
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 06 - PG.13 :]
« Reply #213 on: February 02, 2008, 10:05:56 pm »
anu ba yan aneng...ang tagal ko na ngang nawala pero wala parin?!

wahaha atat? lolz...joke lang..

sige take your time =)


hahaha. sorry Gel. <3
eto na yung update oh. :}




eLow siStah..

gOod uPdate..kAhit biTin nG KunTi...hehehe ;D ;) :D..but itS oKieyz... ;D

aYiieee..kiLig nAmn nG pRactiCe niLa..pArang toToo.. :D..

i'll jUst wait fOr tHe nExt update here...
tAke yoUr tiMe.. =D

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 :D ;) :D



hahaha. :D salamaaat. <3
sorry kung bitin. :p first chaps kasi eh.
eto na yung next. :}




hiyeeeeee.
ateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
ako sa computer ngayon. bwahahaha. >:D

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hoist. XD hahaha.
abnormal! :D ilong!















SEVEN.





I just stared at him. Then he laughed. I forced a smile. It seems like I’ve met him. I just don’t remember when, and how. He got his phone from the table, then looked at me.

“Are you serious?” I asked him.

“Yeah. I promised to buy you ice cream if you did good, right?” Then he smiled at me.

“Uhh. Yeah, I’ll go get my stuff…” I couldn;’t take my eyes off him. I wasn’t starting to like him, was I? He isn’t even close to the guy of my dreams.









The Guy of Jeanne’s Dreams – is a guy with brown straight hair, tall, and fair skinned. He’s athletic, but he’s got the brains. He speaks fluently, he should know at least 3 languages. English, Filipino, and (insert language here). Hahaha. He’s near perfection.






Dominic isn’t even close to that. ^-^ Well he is, but for starters, he doesn’t have brown hair. HAHA.

I ran upstairs to get my small bag. Then I stuffed my phone and wallet in it. But before I jammed my phone inside my small bag, which was now battered, I texted my brother.






Psst. :] Will go out.
Send to: aa Ku-langot.i






I didn’t wait for his reply. I ran downstairs and saw Dom waiting for me. He took his phone, then dialed a number. He spoke for 17 seconds (naka time pa eh. ^-^ haha.), then stood up.

“C’mon.”

“Uhh, okay.”






I followed him outside the house, but before I could go out, he stopped me. “Aren’t you going to tell them you’re going out?”

“No. They wouldn’t care.” :P I laughed, but he looked at me seriously. “I was just kidding. I already texted my brother.” Damn, he knew that I was bluffing?








He looked at me for at least 5 seconds, then went outside. He ushered me to his, or their, car. Then he sat opposite me. The car started to move. (Well, duh.)

“So, where are we going?”

“I’m buying you ice cream.”

“Yeah, I know. But where?” He looked at me, then smiled.
































































“You’ll see. 8)





XOXO





The Square. We were dropped off in front of a garden/mall, well I don’t know what the hell it was, but I’ve heard of it. I just forgot where I heard it from.

It was like a garden, obviously landscaped by some professional. I was huge, there was, like, a mini park inside the row of stalls. It was very classy, there were a lot of corporate adults, but there were also teenagers. It was a typical hang-out place for people like Dom.





“Nice.”

“Yeah, very nice, right?”

“How did you know about this?” It wasn’t near the main road, that’s why only few individuals know about it.

“From a friend of mine.” He motioned for me to follow him, then he let me sit on the park bench, while we went to the ice cream stall. “You’ll love the ice cream here.”















I sat and checked my phone. A message appeared from my brother.

Message
Sender: aa Ku-langot.i
Boogs. Ud be surprisd to
find out that—









I couldn’t read the next line, since someone covered my eyes.

“Guess who?” I didn’t actually recognize his voice, but I knew it was a HE.

“You don’t sound like Dom.” I laughed, thinking it was one of my classmates.

“Dom?” I felt his hands loosen grip. But he still covered my eyes.























































“Oh come on JC, don’t you remember me?” ^-^




































JC?




















Oh my G—







I felt his hands leave my face. I opened my eyes. Surprised to find him in front of me. He was now staring at me. We were an inch apart.















“Chris?” :o ???





























































“Hi Sis.”

He’s back. He’s back to ruin my life. He’s back to make things complicated. He’s back. Christopher Erique Lao Cruz’s back.

He’s my brother. He’s back.








































And he’s my Dream Guy.














continued...









sorry kung BITIN + SUPER IKSI. >:D ^-^
hehehehe. :}may katuloy pa naman eh.





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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 07 - PG.15 :] (to be continued.)
« Reply #214 on: February 02, 2008, 10:19:17 pm »
hAla..shino yun siss..??!! ???

brother pa talaga niya yun? ???

or umi-epal lang? ???

nice update kahit..bitin..hehehe..but its okey.. :D ;D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 07 - PG.15 :] (to be continued.)
« Reply #215 on: February 02, 2008, 10:24:31 pm »
aw. chris? bagong guy? hahaha. i so love guys! ;D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 07 - PG.15 :] (to be continued.)
« Reply #216 on: February 02, 2008, 10:26:39 pm »

hAla..shino yun siss..??!! ???

brother pa talaga niya yun? ???

or umi-epal lang? ???

nice update kahit..bitin..hehehe..but its okey.. :D ;D

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hahahaha. :D
tingnan nalang natin sa continuation. :}
hehehe. thanks sis. <3





aw. chris? bagong guy? hahaha. i so love guys! ;D


hahaha. :} bago for US.
i also LOVE guys. <3333







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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 07 - PG.15 :] (to be continued.)
« Reply #217 on: February 02, 2008, 10:43:59 pm »
sino siya??

abangan...

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 07 - PG.15 :] (to be continued.)
« Reply #218 on: February 02, 2008, 10:46:36 pm »
O ASAN NA YUNG NEXT ANICIA?!?! ASAAAAANNN?! hahahaha.
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 07 - PG.15 :] (to be continued.)
« Reply #219 on: February 02, 2008, 11:26:24 pm »
papanong naging brother niya na nagruin ng life niya???huh!!!hahahhahahahhaha..i'm kinda confused...dreamguy niya pero brother niya?hmmm.heheh
We definitely have a connection. Even if we cannot express it in words, we both know that the spark is growing into something warm. A forest fire? Maybe not. But we could be in for some smoldering embers.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 07 - PG.15 :] (to be continued.)
« Reply #220 on: February 03, 2008, 03:48:49 am »
ha? naguluhan ata ako dun. haha!  :D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 07 - PG.15 :] (to be continued.)
« Reply #221 on: February 03, 2008, 07:38:41 am »
ANEESYA MY LAAABS!
I missed you so damn much!
Anyhoo, I think Chris is the real brother.
Hooha!
INCEST? ^-^ >:D
Anyhoo...
Maisisingit ba ang epal Dennis na yun dito?
I'll be waiting... ^-^
MISSED YOU SO MUCH!
Hoy loka! UPDATE!  :D  ;D
I love you. So much! Twenty-three, forever! :]

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 07 - PG.15 :] (to be continued.)
« Reply #222 on: February 03, 2008, 08:02:05 am »
brother? dream guy? HUH?
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 07 - PG.15 :] (to be continued.)
« Reply #223 on: February 03, 2008, 09:51:51 am »
hi new reader here..  :D

brother?as in literal?
arrgh!sino yun??  ;D

next na please..  ::)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 07 - PG.15 :] (to be continued.)
« Reply #224 on: February 03, 2008, 01:24:11 pm »
sino siya??

abangan...


hahaha. tama ka jan..
ABANGAN. :}




O ASAN NA YUNG NEXT ANICIA?!?! ASAAAAANNN?! hahahaha.


mamaya na yung katuloy. ^-^
KAYO NAMAN OH, MAY WRITERS BLOCK AKO. haha.
pinapahirapan niyo ko 'eh. :D




papanong naging brother niya na nagruin ng life niya???huh!!!hahahhahahahhaha..i'm kinda confused...dreamguy niya pero brother niya?hmmm.heheh


hahaha. :p magulo talaga itong part na 'toh.
hehehehehehe. PEACE~
ieexplain naman sa continuation eh. :}




ha? naguluhan ata ako dun. haha!  :D


hahaha. :D magulo talaga.
sa continuation mabubunyag ang lahat! >:D




ANEESYA MY LAAABS!
I missed you so damn much!
Anyhoo, I think Chris is the real brother.
Hooha!
INCEST? ^-^ >:D
Anyhoo...
Maisisingit ba ang epal Dennis na yun dito?
I'll be waiting... ^-^
MISSED YOU SO MUCH!
Hoy loka! UPDATE!  :D  ;D



lokalokang mahal ko!!! :}
(may tawag na ako sayo. ;D YAHAHA!)
aymissesyusomats! :p haha.
magulo talaga. HAHA.
pero wait, HINDI SILA INCEST! baliw! :D
basta magulo talaga, ipapaliwanag ko sa continuation. :]
mwaaaaa~ <33333




brother? dream guy? HUH?


hahahaha. :D gulo ba?




hi new reader here..  :D

brother?as in literal?
arrgh!sino yun??  ;D

next na please..  ::)


siguro? :} hahahaha.
name mo po sis? :}
thanks for reading. <333
ipapaliwanag ko later. @___#




 

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