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Author Topic: “In Shambles” - ANNOUNCEMENT pg. 58 (posted as of 08/14/08)  (Read 46137 times)

anicia

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #150 on: January 21, 2008, 08:46:21 pm »
^ OPS, hindi pwede. >:D
hahaha. Dom's mine! *insert evil laugh*

kidding. :}
hahahahahaha.

thanks for reading Gel. :} <3

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #151 on: January 21, 2008, 10:15:34 pm »
hai...new reader here..

ang ganda naman po ng story na to..

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Jeanne..dOmz nGa dAw wAg dOminiC...aaayYYyiiieee...


NEXTIE na poh...


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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #152 on: January 21, 2008, 10:30:53 pm »
anicia! natawa ako when you said na autistic si dom. haha. :D i'll wait for the update. ;D and thanks nga pala for reading my story din. ;)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #153 on: January 22, 2008, 04:22:46 pm »
jeanne, kung ayaw mo o hug si dom ako na lang ha-hug sa kanya. haha.
ako\'y isang manhid, na hindi makikinig, sa bawat sasabihin ng mundo...<br /><br />*Multiply*.

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #154 on: January 22, 2008, 04:37:38 pm »
JENNI;

tama ba ako sa name? :D
hehehe. thank youuuu. <3
LOL. :} Anicia, btw.




GELLIE;

hahaha. it's true, autistic yun. :}
haha. kidding. :p
no problem. <3 i like it naman eh. (conyo, much? :D)




OWHENN;

hindi pwede eh. >:D akin kasi si Dom.
HAHAHAHAHAHA. joke laaaang. :}
thanks sa pagbabasa. <3

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #155 on: January 22, 2008, 11:31:09 pm »
haha! nahahawa ka na yata sa conyo-ness ni papa dom. harhar. ;D :D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #156 on: January 23, 2008, 03:11:57 pm »
OWHENN;

hindi pwede eh. >:D akin kasi si Dom.
HAHAHAHAHAHA. joke laaaang. :}
thanks sa pagbabasa. <3


ay ganon? taken na si fafa dom? sayang naman. haha.

sis, OWEN na lang para hindi mahirap sa ispeling.  ;D
« Last Edit: January 23, 2008, 03:15:01 pm by owhenn_05 »
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« Reply #157 on: January 23, 2008, 07:56:20 pm »
GELLIE;

hahaha. :}
masyadong ma-impluwensya si PAPA DOM. :}
ayiiiiie. <3



OWEN;

aymsosorii may dear. <3
hehehe. mahina talaga ako sa names eh. :P
anyways, parehas naman yung pagbigkas eh. hehe. :}
oo, taken na siya. :] aymsosorii ulit. HAHAHA.
andyan naman si Chris eh, si Kyle, o si Sticks.
pero sakin si DOMINIC! >:D lol. <3


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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #158 on: January 23, 2008, 09:07:51 pm »
JENNI;

tama ba ako sa name? :D
hehehe. thank youuuu. <3
LOL. :} Anicia, btw.



yeAh taMa..
pEro u caN aLso cALL me
"Ly" fOr sHort.. ;D :D

niCe to meEt yOu aNiciA.. ;)

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #159 on: January 23, 2008, 09:19:52 pm »
LY;

Ly? :} sure. hehehe.
nice to meet you too. :}
ilang taon ka na? :D


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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #160 on: January 24, 2008, 12:29:02 am »
waaaa, anicia! akin na lang si kyle! joo ji hoon iuuwi na kita sa ayaw at sa gusto mo! hahahaha! :D ;D :D

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #161 on: January 24, 2008, 12:04:50 pm »

OWEN;

aymsosorii may dear. <3
hehehe. mahina talaga ako sa names eh. :P
anyways, parehas naman yung pagbigkas eh. hehe. :}
oo, taken na siya. :] aymsosorii ulit. HAHAHA.
andyan naman si Chris eh, si Kyle, o si Sticks.
pero sakin si DOMINIC! >:D lol. <3





ang daming options pero na kay dominic lang talaga ang aking ♥♥♥ hehe,
« Last Edit: January 24, 2008, 12:07:56 pm by owhenn_05 »
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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #162 on: January 24, 2008, 07:35:04 pm »
LY;

Ly? :} sure. hehehe.
nice to meet you too. :}
ilang taon ka na? :D




same asu u.. ;)
15 yrs old nako..
ikaw sis?

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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER 4 - PG.10 :]
« Reply #163 on: January 24, 2008, 08:42:13 pm »
GELLIE;

ay syooooor. :}
iyong iyo na yan! :P
HAHAHA. basta akin si Dom ha? <3
nga pala Gellie, ilang taon ka na? :}




OWEN;

ano ba naman yaaaaan! :D





LY;

15 na rin. :}
sistarr ka nalang rin. :D
hehehehe.
















FIVE.




Yesterday was bad. And when I say bad, I mean bad. We had to practice those friggin’ lines during the Theatre Arts class. And I had to practice it with HIM. Gaaah. I hate my life. I’d rather be a girl, acting as a guy, than acting as the main character, but Dom as my leading man. Get my point? ::)

And now, I’m down with a cold. We had to practice yesterday at the soccer field, when it suddenly rained. I was dumbfounded, but he just laughed it off. Shoot. Screw Gian Dominic Coanco! Now I had to be absent, on a Friday! I looooove Friday’s. But this is definitely a Friday that I couldn’t enjoy loving.









My mom suddenly went inside my room. “Honey, are you sure you’ll be fine by yourself?”

“Yeah. 200 per—“ I’ve got to scratch that expression from my vocabulary.  :-X “—cent.”

“We promise to be back by dinner time.” Then she kissed me on the cheek. I smiled at her. “And if you need anything, just buzz, and they’ll sure scramble at your door.” ::) She was talking about the maids.

I just laughed it off. “Okay. Take care.”

“Take care honey, we love you!” And after that, she went out of my room and shut the door.













I got up, as soon as she left my room. I went to my computer and started fidgeting with my files. After that, I watched a movie. I checked my phone.

Message
Sender: Kaille Ü

hey. heard u wer sick. :’c
il try 2 drop by l8r. c:






I just ignored the message. ;D I wasn’t in the mood to text.

I ate ice cream, I jumped around, I played PS2, I did whatever I wanted, but now I’m bored. Crap. I looked at my watch, 5:00. Wow. I just wasted my whole morning, plus, not to mention my afternoon. Gaaaaah! I want to go out of this wretched roo—*KNOCK*KNOCK*









“Yes?”

“Ms. Jeanne, there’s someone downstairs who is looking for you.” It was Krissa, my personal, uhh, helper. (You get my point.) She went inside the room and smiled at me.

“Oh? I’ll be down in about, 5 minutes.” I tried to look for the new pumps that I wanted Kaille to see. “Ang aga naman ni Kaille, she’s usually here by six.”





“Ma’am, I don’t think tha—“ I cut her off… She’d surely advice me to dismiss my guest, since I’m sick, but I’d love to see Kaille. “Krissa, I can manage myself.”

“Ma’am, I’m trying to tell you tha—“ I cut her off, again.

“Krissa, I know that I’m sick. I’m aware of that. I just want to see Kaille. Please attend to her.”

“Whatever you say Ma’am.” Then she sighed and left the room.







I put the polka-dotted-pumps on, and checked myself in the mirror. Gahd, I look great. 8) Hahaha. (Take a peek.)

I ran downstairs, (Yes, I can run with high heels.) and immediately posed in front of the living room. I didn’t care to look if Gino was there.











“KAILLE! EAT YOUR HEART OUT!” >:D then I laughed. But my laugh started to fade when I heard her…
















































Or should I say his reply.

“Are you sure you’re sick?” ??? He had this skeptical look on his face.



:o :o :o



“What the heck are you doing here?!” I looked at him with disbelief, then I saw Krissa walk past me. “You didn’t tell me that this—“ I looked at Dom. “—lunatic was my guest!”

“I’m sorry Ma’am, but I tried to tell you tha—“ I slapped my forehead. So that’s what she was trying to say! “It’s okay. I’m sorry.” Then she walked away to avoid my tantrum.









“How did you even know my address?!” He stood up, then he gave me a small letter. I hurriedly opened it, and to my surprise, it was from Kaille.








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Jeanne! Ran out of load. Sorry. ^____^ Can’ make it to your house tonight. Have to go to a party with my mom. Dom wanted to go there, so I just gave him your address, and I gave a separate note to krissa to show her that I sent him. ^____^

Much love,
Kaille. ^____^


 








Pinagpapalit nalang pala ako sa party ngayon. :’( I glared at Dom, then offered him a seat. Even though I’d love to kick him out of the house, I was just being courteous. ;D

“Now, what do you want?” I just stared at him while he smiled.













“I just wanted to check on you.” Gaaahd, I’m melting. :D Not because of what he said, but because being this close to him feels like hell!

But, I just tagged along. “Check on me, Dominic dear? I’m so touched!” Take note, I AM BEING SARCASTIC.

“Shut up Jeanne. My grades are at risk here.” Yeah right, you’re just concerned about your grades. “Not that I’m not concerned with you…” I shot a look at him. “…which I’m not. I mean, uhh, crap.”

I just laughed at him, and then he joined me. “When are the auditions?”

“This coming Monday.” Then he faced me, and held my shoulder. “That’s why we need to practice.”

I shoved his hand. “I’m sick. I have pneumonia. I have cancer. I’m, uhh, dying. I’m am never going to pull this thing off.” I looked at him seriously, and then he laughed.










“You’re not dying.” I replied with sarcasm, “Is it that obvious?” ^-^

“Anyway, I just really wanted to check on your… Uhh…” He looked at me from head to toe. Status.”

“Coordinates form G-5 align t—“ He lightly hit me on the head. “—oww.”

“You were born sarcastic. Weren’t you?” Then he smiled at me.

“Maybe.” I also smiled back at him.










He checked his watch, then he stood up. I never realized that he was ‘that’ tall. He also reminded me of someone. There’s this foggy image that tries to form inside my head, but it’s having a hard time putting the little pieces together. I just can’t seem to place the ima—“It’s getting late. I need to go.” I snapped out of my imagination.

I stood up, “Uhh, yeah.” Then I ushered him to the door. When he was about to leave the room, I tapped his shoulder, then he faced me. “Wha-?”

“How about the auditions?”













He gave me one of his smiles… “Mind if I swing by tomorrow?”

“O-okay.” :P

He started to head for the gate. And I started to close the door. But he suddenly spoke. “Jeanne!”

I looked at him with suspicion. “What?”

“If you do good tomorrow, I’m buying you ice cream!”

Ice Cream? ???







































































“You’re on!”









sorry sa super duper walang kwenta ng CHAPTERS. T____T
pero magkakabunyagan pa yan. :D ah basta.
plus, malapit na ang introduction nung ibang characters. <3
abangan niyo nalang. XD
basta sorry for the lame updates. :}


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Re: “In Shambles” / My Third Story / CHAPTER five - PG.11 :]
« Reply #164 on: January 24, 2008, 08:54:47 pm »
buti na lang at timing ang pag daan ko.
just droppin by to say i still read, kaso nga lang minsan lang dumadaan 'coz of school stuff.
keep it up.

 

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