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Author Topic: “In Shambles” - ANNOUNCEMENT pg. 58 (posted as of 08/14/08)  (Read 46066 times)

anicia

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Sis Anicia, balak ko sanang asawahin si Dom, eh mukhang sa iyo na :) ;D


sakin na talaga yun. ^-^ :D
hahahahaha. inyong inyo na sina
Chris, Sticks, Dennis, Kuya Kyle, etc. :}
mamili kayo sa kanila. pero Dom is miiiine. :] >:D
haha.



ANICIA I-UPDATE MO NA TOOOO!! YOU'RE TORTURING US! lol. haha. :P misyuu.


nako bea, aymsosori. :{
hehehehe. wala na kasi akong maisip eh. :D
writer's block. HAHA. kaya boring chapters muna. :]



waaaaaaaaah! ang tagal naman ng next, anicia!


sorry ana. :}
eto na yung next! haha. :D



sure, count on it! i love how all of your stories go. lots of luck! kudos for the hard work you put up to it.  ;D


aww, thanks Gelline. :} haha.
i hope i can finish this one tho. ::)




yup! andito nga ako. hehe.
kelan mo ipopost yung next??



hahaha. :D
eto na po yung next. :}















Jeanne is pronunced as 'Jhan' or 'Zhan'. Something like that. :D










TWO.



That was when he left. Simon Estalia left me. Stickie Boy left me. :’( He’s been my seatmate, my friend, my bandmate, my close friend, my shoulder. Shoot. Drama. ^-^

“We’re dead.” I turned to face Gino, who was now holding his guitar.

“Why?”

“We don’t have a drummer.”

“And so? We don’t have any booked gigs this month.”
I turned to faced Kaille, who was now ready to go.











“Yeah…” Kaille was now ready to leave, she was only fixing her hair. “…but we’re competing next next month! We need a drummer, Jeanne.” He really put an emphasis at the word need.

“Whatever. Let’s not talk about it today Gino. I’m late for my-“ I looked at my watch. It was already 6:15, and I still needed to go to the shop to get my dress. “-D@rn it! I’m late!”






I got my bag, then waved ‘bye’ to Gino and Kaille. “Later! Mwah!”





XOXO





“I’ve been seated here for almost an hour you booger!”

“I’m sorry my dear kulangot.” Then I pinched my brother’s cheeks. I went to the counter to fit my dress, but they were still ironing it.




I was inside Jarris’ (Ha-ris-s). A local, but classy, shop for dresses. My mom owns this store. She practically designs all of the outfits. Obviously she has her own team of designers, but she prefers to design the clothes herself.




“Come on, let’s go!” I looked at him, then I rolled my eyes at him. “What?”

“Aba nagtataka pa ang loko!” I lightly hit his arm with my bag.

“Kasi naman ‘tol, kahit anong suotin mo diyan, hindi bagay sayo!” Then, he massaged the spot where I hit him. “Ilang beses ko ‘bang paulit-ulit na sasabihin sayo yun?”

“You are a…” I looked for my phone inside my bag, “…a retard.” I looked at the screen, which read 11 messages.









Oh no.





Message 1
Sender: aa Daddy

Meet u at 7.30





Message 2
Sender: aa Ku-langot.ii

Wer r u? Im gnna kill u l8r!





Message 3
Sender: aa Ku-langot.ii

Ur double ded!





Message 4
Sender: aa Ku-langot.ii

Jeanne! >:] Boogs! Booger!





Message 5
Sender: .gella.

Peeeeeeps. ^_^
Gaaaaaah.
Sa mnday n yung pgpili ng electives!
Im exciteeeed.
X_X hahahaha.
-GM-





Message 6
Sender: aa Mommy

Hon, I left ur dress there.
Just get it from them.





Message 7
Sender: .ria.

gUys., giMme an eLecTive!,
Hihihi.,
geeEhmmm.,





Message 8
Sender: aa Ku-langot.ii

Boogs. Im rotting.





Message 9
Sender aa Ku-langot.i

Damn. Lowbat n ung 1 phne!
Imma kill you l8r!





Message 10
Sender: aa Mommy

Wer r u hon? Kyle’s w8ng 4 u.





Message 11
Sender: Kaille Ü

i miss stixx already. :c












I miss him too Kaille. Very much…









“You’ve been texting me for the past half hour.”


“You weren’t replying to any of my messages you booger!”

I faced my BIG BRO Kyle, and was about to hit his arm with my bag, but the stupid sales clerk interrupted me. “Ms. Cruz, here’s your dress.”

“Thank you…” I looked at her nameplate, “…Elisse.” After smiling at me, she left.







“Whoa, she’s hot.” I took another look at the sales clerk, she seemed nice. She had long eyelashes, straight black hair, but she had a huge nose.

“I’m telling Ate Faye. 8) Then he snapped at me, “Don’t you dare.”

I laughed, then I took the dress inside the dressing room for fitting.





XOXO





“Sorry we’re late.” I sat at the empty chair beside my dad.

“That’s because she wa—Ouch!” I pinched my brother’s hand. Can’t he just shut up?

My mom looked at me, “What?”

“Nothing.” I smiled at mom, who looked confused.





It was another one of their ‘dinners’ which involved their clients, whom we didn’t know. “So Mr. Cruz, the members of the board were thinking of—“ Blah. Blah. Blah. I don’t care. There were a lot of DOM’s, I mean, old men, around the one of the restaurant’s largest tables. They were talking about stocks, bonds, the works. But I didn’t care. My Dad owns this big company who’s in charge of the distribution of gadgets all over the different malls.

But I hated his job. He wasn’t around the house often. It was either he was on a meeting, or he was on one of those business trips. AND, he didn’t give us the privilege of owning one of those classy gadgets. He wanted us to stay humble. Yeah, right. As if my friend’s didn’t know that Daddy operated those distributions.

My mom was, yeah sure, she was inside the house often. Inside her own room. ::) She has this room where she works on her designs, and she seldom goes out that room. Sheesh.

But don’t get me wrong, I love my parents very much. Even thought they have jam-packed meetings, or events, they still try to involve us in them. Sometimes, we still go out together.







My brother poked my arm. “I’m hungry.”

“Me too.” We stood up, excused ourselves, then we went to the buffet table.





“So…” he stood beside me, holding his plate. “…how was Simon?”

“He was okay.” :-X

“You miss him, don’t you?” I looked at him, then he smiled.



























“I sure do.”





XOXO





I kept looking at my watch to check if I was late for my class, and fortunately, I wasn’t.

“Hi Jeanne!”

“Hey there!”

“Jeanne! Kamusta?”


I just smiled at students who passed by me. Obviously, I knew a lot of people. Our band was pretty popular here, at the Academia. And it still is. 8)

When I reached the second floor, the bell started to ring. People hurried to their rooms, but I still walked at a leisurely pace. As I reached the fourth floor, my floor, I grasped for air. I held on to the railings, and inhaled. Nakakapagod kayang maglakad. ^-^ But stupid me, insed of huffing for air, I loudly—“BURP!”-ed.









O______O SHOOOOOOOT! LOKO!






I looked at my right, and thankfully, nobody was there.

Whew.

“Haha—pft.” Who the—OH NO.







I turned to look at the idiot who laughed at me, and it was none other than Mr. Gian Dominic Coanco. He tried to look at another direction, while containing his laughter. I rolled my eyes at him, and gave him a pout, then I ran to the nearest room which door was open. “Jeanne!”







And to my surprise… The whole class was staring at me. :-[

“Uhm, Ms. Cruz, what are you doing here?”

I ran into the wrong classroom. :o STUPID!







“Uhm…”   I looked at the whole room, and everyone was staring at me. “…I, uhh, I—“

“I’m sorry Mr. Rodriguez. I played a prank at Ms. Cruz, and pushed her inside this room.”

The room howled with laughter. Mr. Rodriguez eyed Dom sternly. “Mr. Coanco, next time, please restrain from pushing people into other classrooms.”

“Yes, sir. It won’t happen again. ;D He smiled at the teacher, then he grasped my arm.







“Ouch!” I tried to pull away from him, but he still held on to my arm. We started walking, then when we reached the door of our classroom, he let go of me.

“What were you thinking?!” I just stared at the floor. “Why did you go inside Section 1? In case you haven’t noticed, we belong to Section 2.”








“I’m…” I looked at him, He's hottt. “…I’m sorry!”

He held my chin close to his face. WHAT THE HELL IS THIS FREAK DOING?! :o We were just an inch apart.

“Jeanne, you don’t have to cry.”

“Why do you care?!” I shouted at him, then I pushed his arm away.
He looked at me suspiciously…


Wait.







I’m crying?! O_O


























“I’m crying?!!!”  :o I looked at him with curiosity. I tried to look inside my bag if I had a mirror with me. Dominic patted my shoulder, then walked inside the room laughing.



















































































“Boy Jeanne, you’re weird.” :D

















ang corny noh? :D
hahahahaha. :}
sana kahit korni, mapagtyatyagaan niyo. :p
paalala ko lang po, ang Lime Green, for all relatives.



« Last Edit: January 13, 2008, 04:35:08 pm by anicia »

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wooaaahh, i can't believe na yung snob na si Gian Dominic eh pinansin siya?wahahahahhahaha
We definitely have a connection. Even if we cannot express it in words, we both know that the spark is growing into something warm. A forest fire? Maybe not. But we could be in for some smoldering embers.

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Ang kulit ni Gian! Nice up Anicia! :) Next na! :)
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa si jun ki na yun!?!  waaaaaaaaa

kinikilig ako!! wahahah wala lang..:) ;)

anu ba yan jeanne..di mo man lang alam na umiiyak ka ::)
wahaha anu akala mo sa basa sa mukha mo?
laway?

tama bang sermonan? wahaha jokes lang!

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Ay nako, I know what you mean by writer's block. Haha.

ANG CUTE! ANG CUTE! yii. hahaha. next na Anicia! <3
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ang kulit nilang dalawang magkapatid! :D

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sis, it's gellie. pero typo-error happens, it's okay.  :)

love the uppie!  ;D joo ji-hoon, sarang heyo!  :D i miss goong so much whenever i see the two of them.

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Aryt ate Anicia. iyo na si Dom. 8)
hahanap na lang ako ng iba:) I'll check them out pag-lumabas na sila sa story:) ::)
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For a DAMN change.

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nice up. ang kulit ni gian. ;D
ako\'y isang manhid, na hindi makikinig, sa bawat sasabihin ng mundo...<br /><br />*Multiply*.

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may up na.!
wahaha. ang kulit ni dom.!
bagay sila. awoots.
next na po. :)

ps. sis pwede bang akin nalang si kyle, si dennis o kaya si chris.?
bahala ka na kung sino sa kanila ang bibigay mo saken. haha. thaanks.!!  :)
« Last Edit: January 15, 2008, 05:39:37 pm by ketchup47 »

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yeaah! kaya pala may weird din sa comment mo sa story ko. ahaha.
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ehalu!remember me?hehehe nice story sis!aabangan ko mga updates mo...hehehe si dom ang weird hindi si Jeanne..hahaha

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aneeeesya!
sooo beyutipol!
d@mn, forget about stickie boy!
i looooove dom-dom!
haha.
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wooaaahh, i can't believe na yung snob na si Gian Dominic eh pinansin siya?wahahahahhahaha


hahaha. :D yun nga eh.



Ang kulit ni Gian! Nice up Anicia! :) Next na! :)


hahaha. :D
salamat Ate Pau. :}



waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa si jun ki na yun!?!  waaaaaaaaa

kinikilig ako!! wahahah wala lang..:) ;)

anu ba yan jeanne..di mo man lang alam na umiiyak ka ::)
wahaha anu akala mo sa basa sa mukha mo?
laway?

tama bang sermonan? wahaha jokes lang!




wahahaha. :D yup. si JunKi labs nga. :}
hahaha. baliw yang si Jeanne eh. :]



Ay nako, I know what you mean by writer's block. Haha.

ANG CUTE! ANG CUTE! yii. hahaha. next na Anicia! <3


hahaha. :} ang hirap noh?
nakakabangag. x___x
salamat Bea deaaar. <3



ang kulit nilang dalawang magkapatid! :D



hahaha. oo nga eh. :}



sis, it's gellie. pero typo-error happens, it's okay.  :)

love the uppie!  ;D joo ji-hoon, sarang heyo!  :D i miss goong so much whenever i see the two of them.


hahaha. :} sorry Gellie.
weee. i miss goong too. :]



Aryt ate Anicia. iyo na si Dom. 8)
hahanap na lang ako ng iba:) I'll check them out pag-lumabas na sila sa story:) ::)


hahaha. :D
Chris is another option. <3



nice up. ang kulit ni gian. ;D


hahaha. :]
salamat.



may up na.!
wahaha. ang kulit ni dom.!
bagay sila. awoots.
next na po. :)

ps. sis pwede bang akin nalang si kyle, si dennis o kaya si chris.?
bahala ka na kung sino sa kanila ang bibigay mo saken. haha. thaanks.!!  :)


hahaha. :] ayiiie.
iyong iyo na si Dennis. :D hahaha.



yeaah! kaya pala may weird din sa comment mo sa story ko. ahaha.


ano? o___O



ehalu!remember me?hehehe nice story sis!aabangan ko mga updates mo...hehehe si dom ang weird hindi si Jeanne..hahaha


yes ate! :D i remember youuuu. <3
ayiiiie. salamat! :}



aneeeesya!
sooo beyutipol!
d@mn, forget about stickie boy!
i looooove dom-dom!
haha.
neeext!



aynakoooo. XD hahaha.
Dom's miiiine!



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nevermind, anicia! :D
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