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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 in the Making
« Reply #945 on: March 27, 2008, 08:22:03 am »
Sorry kung sobrang delay ang update ko pero meron na ulit. Namiss ko kasi ang story na ito.



Chapter 33

“What is the meaning of this? :o >:(

Oh no Chris, I don't know what to say....

Dahil sa nagulat kami sa narinig, napalingon kami ni Kristine sa narinig. I saw my brother and Nicole, looking at us. Definitely they were shocked at what they saw.

Daniel’s POV

My head is literally spinning at what I saw. I don’t understand why Kristine’s tongue is on my brother’s mouth.

I pulled immediately my brother away from him. “Stop groping my brother!!!”

Napansin kong very disappointed si Nicole sa nakita niya.


Nicole’s POV

I’m so confused. I’m not sure how to react right now. I’m so speechless. I just bowed down at tumalikod ako sa kanila.

Napansin ko na lang na may nagsalita sa likod ko.


“Nicole… :-\

I didn’t expect this face…



… it is Chris.
“I’m so sorry…”

Somehow, I felt this horrible feeling with so much hatred.

Humarap ako sa kanya as if nothing happened. “Sorry? For what?”


Chris’ POV

I didn’t expect that she would say something like that. Her voice is colder than an ice. Of course, I was hurt on what she said, as if she doesn’t care about us.

“Yung nakita ninyo, wala yun.” I tried to explain it to her everything. Although, I don’t think she believed that. I can definitely tell by the way she look at me.


Daniel's POV

“What on earth are you doing here?!” I’m glaring at Kristine.


“What do you mean? I’m back for Chris.” She said it just like that.

I laughed sarcastically. “You know what, Chris has moved on with his life, wala ka ng babalikan dito…”


“I love Chris so dearly ::) She said with full of emotions but I won’t buy that stupid crap.

Oh please?! If she says that one more time, I will strangle this devil para tigilan na niya ang kapatid ko


“I know I caused him a lot of trouble but I’m willing to make up for that…” She frowned but I know deep inside, it’s not real.

“Stop with the melodramatic scene. I’m too old for that!” I said firmly.


Chris' & Nicole's POV

“I know you’re mad at me.”

“Mad at you? I don’t have any reasons to feel that.” I tried to deny it although it hurts so much.

“You saw me kissing someone and I got no reaction from you ??? It’s really hard for me to believe na wala kang katiting na galit na nararamdaman.” Somehow, I felt a little frustration. Who wouldn’t?!

It would be nice kung magselos ka ng konti ???


“Aha! So you like kissing her?!” Sabay tinaasan ko siya ng kilay.

“No, that’s not what I meant… :-[

“You know what, I‘ve had enough of your pathetic dramas >:( Why don’t you join her instead and felt each other for God how long, I don’t even care!” Kulang na lang sumabog ako sa galit.

Nagulat kami ng may sumigaw. We saw my brother strangling Kristine.

“H….he…..hel…..help….” Kristine’s gasping for her breath.

“Stay away from my brother, you devil >:(

Hinila ko agad si Daniel. Although I  hate that girl but I’m not that horrible person. Inilayo naman ni Chris si Kristine kay Daniel.

“Daniel, what are you doing?” I’m trying to calm him down.


“I’m going to kill that devil, she destroyed my brother!” Nagpupumiglas siya sa yakap ko.

“I told you to stay away ??? I’m scolding at Kristine.

“I’m not going to go anywhere without you ::)

“You’re delusional, Kristine ??? She’s hugging me tightly.

Kadiri naman yun, she’s so desperate. I wouldn’t do something like that.


“Chris, stay away from her.” My brother is looking at me intently.

“That’s what I’m telling her.” Then I look at Nicole pero umiwas siya.

All of a sudden, may dumating, my mom.


“Anong kaguluhan ito?”

Lumapit si Kristine kay mommy. “Kamusta na po kayo, tita?” Lumambot ulit ang kanyang boses.

Biglang itinulak ni mommy si Kristine ng yayakapin ito. Nagulat kaming lahat.


“What do you think you’re doing, you wretched girl?!”

Kristine started to cry.

“Tita, hindi ko naman po sinasadya na saktan ang anak ninyo…”

Naawa ako kay Kristine. I mean, kahit ganun ako kalaki ang galit ko sa kanya dahil sa panggulo niya sa tahimik na buhay ni Chris. Gusto ko siya lapitan pero naghesitate ako. I don't think it will be a good decision.

“Stay away from my son if you know what's good for you >:(

Mom walked away. “Umalis ka na kasi Kristine…” She's still crying.

“Fine, but I’ll be coming back for you, soon.”

“Don’t even bother >:(

Kristine left.

After a couple of seconds, there’s this awkward silent moment between the three of us – Me, Chris, and Daniel.

“Maybe I should leave.” Sabay tumingin ang magkapatid sa akin.

“Why are you two looking at me like that ???


“You shouldn’t leave. Di ba may date tayo ::)

Biglang nagflashback sa akin yung masasama kong plano para saktan ang magkapatid pero naisip ko na mali yun. Gusto kong gumanti pero parang hindi kaya ng kunsensiya ko na gawin yun.

“Nicole?” Daniel is waving at me.

“Huh? Yeah, we should go.”

When I looked at Chris, there’s this feeling na ewan ko. Parang hindi ko maintindihan.


“You go inside and don’t dare to look for that devil ??? Si Daniel, pinapangaralan si Chris.

“Bakit ko naman siya hahanapin?” Then Chris looked at me again.

“Teka, saan ba kayo pupunta?” Pahabol ni Chris.

Kinabahan ako.

Biglang nagring ang cellphone ni Daniel.

After a couple of minutes, humarap sa akin si Daniel.
“I’m really sorry, Nicole :-[

“Sorry? Bakit? Sino ba yung tumawag?”

Inexplain sa akin ni Daniel na kailangan niyang puntahan yung photoshoot, importante kasi yun.

“Eh bakit ka nakasimangot diyan :P I’m trying to cheer him up.


“Kasi naman, this is our first date tapos napostponed pa :'(

And I realized something, he’s right. This is our first date. Somehow, nakaramdam ako ng disappointment but hey, modeling is his passion, I can’t just protest. And FYI, hindi naman talaga kami.

"I have an idea."

Suddenly, nakaramdam ako ng sobrang kaba. Why do I get the feeling na may mangyayaring hindi maganda :-\

"Ano naman yun?"





























































































































































“Why don’t you take Chris instead?”

“What?!”



So nagustuhan ninyo ba ang new update. Magsusulat na ulit ako. Kinikilig ako sa kalokohan ko lol. Comments kayo diyan :P

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #946 on: March 27, 2008, 08:38:25 am »
dang I love the update. well worth the wait. nice work!!! :D

next na! yeee!

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #947 on: March 27, 2008, 09:32:46 am »
i would be willing to go with Chris!haha ;D

nah!Nicole,just go with him.alam ko nagtatalon ka na sa kaloob looban niyan.

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #948 on: March 27, 2008, 09:49:23 am »
dang I love the update. well worth the wait. nice work!!! :D

next na! yeee!
Thanks. Ginagawa ko na nga yung kasunod hehe...

i would be willing to go with Chris!haha ;D

nah!Nicole,just go with him.alam ko nagtatalon ka na sa kaloob looban niyan.

Abangan kung anong mangyayari sa susunod :)

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #949 on: March 27, 2008, 12:34:22 pm »
OHMYGALI!
sapakin na si kristine. xD napakalandi na kiri pa[hahaha pasensya sa terms].

yay si chris at nicole magkasama!
kaso.. feeling ko mag aaway sila. WAG! no.

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #950 on: March 27, 2008, 12:49:03 pm »
Buti nga kay Kristine! >:D
Bumalik ka pa kasi. Ayan tuloy. :P

Sumama ka na Nicole.Kunyari ka pang ayaw mo. XD

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #951 on: March 27, 2008, 12:50:23 pm »
i really miss your update. next na po :P

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #952 on: March 27, 2008, 12:56:23 pm »
ai jusko!! haha!! bitin na naman!!! argh!! love it love it love it!!!

wait, bat parang pinagtutulakan yata ngayon ni daniel si nicole kay chris?? hhmm?!?!

tska si natalie nawala na sa eksena.. hehe..
be with someone who knows what they have when they are with you..

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #953 on: March 27, 2008, 01:01:26 pm »
OHMYGALI!
sapakin na si kristine. xD napakalandi na kiri pa[hahaha pasensya sa terms].

yay si chris at nicole magkasama!
kaso.. feeling ko mag aaway sila. WAG! no.
Buti nga kay Kristine! >:D
Bumalik ka pa kasi. Ayan tuloy. :P

Sumama ka na Nicole.Kunyari ka pang ayaw mo. XD
Gigil na gigil kayo kay Kristine ah :D Don't worry, madami pa siyang pinaplano para kay Chris (spoiler ba yun haha)

i really miss your update. next na po :P
Thanks.

ai jusko!! haha!! bitin na naman!!! argh!! love it love it love it!!!

wait, bat parang pinagtutulakan yata ngayon ni daniel si nicole kay chris?? hhmm?!?!

tska si natalie nawala na sa eksena.. hehe..
Maganda nga yung bitin para lalong dumami ang readers hehe.... Actually, ngayon ko lang napansin na wala si Natalie lol.

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #954 on: March 27, 2008, 01:48:06 pm »
EEEE! go! go! go! Nicole! sige lang, kayo na lang ni Chris! bwahaha! Kristine! susugurin talaga kita pag hindi ka tumigil. magiging bayolente ako sa iyo..  >:(

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #955 on: March 27, 2008, 04:21:44 pm »
ahahaha .. ;D :D

new reader here sis!!

way to gO!

phew! i ve reached the last page in just one sitting!ahahaha :D

lurve ur story!
h8ng me wont make yOu pretty ..Ü

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #956 on: March 27, 2008, 04:31:24 pm »
wow worth it yung pag wait ko ng matagal hehe ganda po ng update next na po!! =b

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #957 on: March 27, 2008, 05:08:55 pm »
EEEE! go! go! go! Nicole! sige lang, kayo na lang ni Chris! bwahaha! Kristine! susugurin talaga kita pag hindi ka tumigil. magiging bayolente ako sa iyo..  >:(
Brutal ka pala haha!

ahahaha .. ;D :D

new reader here sis!!

way to gO!

phew! i ve reached the last page in just one sitting!ahahaha :D

lurve ur story!
Thanks. Ang sipag mo naman magbasa ;)

By the way, guy po ako :)

wow worth it yung pag wait ko ng matagal hehe ganda po ng update next na po!! =b
Thanks. Lapit na matapos yung next update. Abangan ninyo na lang.

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #958 on: March 27, 2008, 06:46:10 pm »
"It would be nice kung magselos ka ng konti"
-natawa ako dito ha!..hehe ;D

hoy! ikaw kristine, 'wag kana bumalik bruha ka...nyahahhaha >:(  :D

ganda ng update na 'to kuya!
« Last Edit: March 27, 2008, 06:48:14 pm by iRa vAneSsA »
I wont let you be my FAULT...

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 33 [Updated: 03-27-08]
« Reply #959 on: March 28, 2008, 01:27:52 am »
"It would be nice kung magselos ka ng konti"
-natawa ako dito ha!..hehe ;D

hoy! ikaw kristine, 'wag kana bumalik bruha ka...nyahahhaha >:(  :D

ganda ng update na 'to kuya!
Actually, yung line ni Chris, hindi kasama sa original draft. Nung nagcocolor codes na ako saka ko lang naisip para may konting humor naman lol.

 

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