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Author Topic: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Poster on Page1) - Chapter 51 [Updated: 03-15-09]  (Read 120785 times)

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 11 [Updated: Dec 23]
« Reply #195 on: December 24, 2007, 06:58:18 am »
Update again! Thanks for all the support that you've given me. Happy Holidays everybody!

You will LOVE this update who are Chris-Nicole fanatic ^___^


Lhee: Kakabitin ba?

Joanna: Ok lang yun, at least nakahabol ka ;) Cute naman talaga si Daniel pero mas cute si Chris lol

Gezelle: Hindi ko pa sure kung mag-aaway sila kaya abangan mo na lang :P

Lissy: Chris-Nicole fanatic ka pala. I made this update just for them ^-^




Chapter 12

Chris’ & Nicole’s POV

I was taking a bath when I heard a disturbing sound in my room so I went out. Nagulat ako dahil si Nicole ang nakita ko.

“Anong ginagawa mo dito, Chris?” I’m surprised and confused at the same time.

“What do you mean? I live here.” She just stared at me.

Oh my God! Ngayon ko lang napansin na naka-towel lang siya. Kung ano anong kademonyohan ang pumapasok sa utak ko :D

It’s really obvious na nagwoworkout siya, ganda ng katawan niya ::) Kung totoo si Adonis, ito na yun. Grabe ang bilis ng heartbeat ko. Ayaw ko maimagine kung ano ang nasa likod ng towel na yun, baka bumigay ako nito ng wala sa panahon. Still, my body was still shaking, this time from EXCITEMENT

“Naku, Nicole, wag ka titingin sa baba. Just focus on his face.” Pilit kong sinasabi sa sarili. Pero mahirap tumingin sa taas kung mas maganda ang makikita sa baba ::) :P

Ay gaga! Maghunustili ka! >:( Kung ano ano iniisip mo, tandaan mo na lang ang pahirap na ginawa sayo ng magkapatid na yan!


Bakit ganyan siya makatingin? Syet! :o Wala pala akong damit. Actually, nakatowel lang ako.

Sabay kaming tumalikod.


“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to barge in your room.”

“Ano ba kasi ginagawa mo dito?!” Naiilang na naiinis kong tanong.

After a couple of seconds, may narinig kaming boses.


“Chris, dinner is ready.” Si Mommy! Syet! :o :o

Oh no! someone’s coming :o :o :o I panicked literally.

Wala akong ibang lalabasan hanggang sa nakita ko ang isang bintana. Nagmadali kong pinuntahan ang bintana at binuksan ko ito.


“What do you think you’re doing?” I hope she’s not thinking of what I’m thinking.

“Ano pa ba? Eh di tatalon.” Wala na akong ibang choice. Mas gugustuhin ko pang mamatay kesa naman sa makulong sa bilangguan.

“What?! Are you crazy?!” Napataas ang boses ko. Somehow, nagpapanic na din. Siguradong patay ito pagbagsak niya sa lupa.

Kahit naman ganun kalaki ang galit ko sa kanya, ayaw ko pa rin na makita siyang nasasaktan. I still love her :-[


Nung sinilip ko kung gaano kalalim, nahilo ako. Sobrang taas pala kaya lalo akong kinabahan sa pinaplano ko.

“Ok Nicole, isipin mo na lang na totoo si Spiderman. Baka sakaling iligtas ka niya.” Yun na lang ang binibigay kong encouragement sa sarili.

Naihakbang ko na ang isa kong paa sa may bintana pero nawalan ako ng balanse kaya….

Syet! Ayaw ko pang mamatay! Tulooooooooooong!!!!!

Namalayan ko na lang na may nakakapit sa kamay ko. Pagtingin ko sa taas,  hawak hawak ni Chris ang kamay ko.


“Have you gone insane?! >:( Sinisigawan niya ako.

“Ano bang pakialam mo?! ??? Di ba gusto mo naman ako mamatay! ???

Natigilan ako sa sinabi niya. Why would she say something like that? If you only knew Nicole… :-[ :-\

Nagulat na lang ako ng nagsisigaw si Nicole.


“Chris, sinasabi ko sayo, wag mo akong bibitawan :o :o Napaluwag pala ang pagkakahawak ko.

“Oh sige, payag na ako. Magpapaalila na ako sayo, wag mo lang akong bibitawan!” Humahagulgol na siya.

“Gusto ko pang magka-anak…” Namula ako ng sinabi niya yun.

Ano ka ba, Chris?! ??? Hindi ikaw ang iniisip niyan. Siyempre si kuya yun :-[


“Chris, sinong kausap mo diyan?” Syet! Isa pa itong si mommy.

Oh no! :o Ano na lang malalaman kapag nahuli ako dito? Ayaw ko talaga makulong.

I gave him a hush symbol.


“Mom, nagbibihis ako. Sunod na lang ako.” Panic attack na ito.

Naramdaman ko na lang na wala na si mommy sa may pinto. Nahila ko si Nicole pabalik sa kwarto ko pero napalakas yata kaya natumba ako at pumaibabaw siya.

Our eyes met, it was… magical.


Ewan ko ba. Iniligtas ako ni Chris pero ganito ang feeling. Hinila nga niya ako pero ano ako ngayon nasa ibabaw niya at magkatitig kami. Ang weird ng feeling, masaya na hindi mo maintindihan.

I can smell him, parang baby. Mabango ::) And the moment our skin met, feeling ko nakukuryente ako sa bawat segundo na magkadikit ang mga balat namin.


I can’t explain what I’m feeling right now. Scared, excited, happy. Halo halo ang pumapasok sa utak ko. I feel like my heart took control over my whole body so I can't move at all.

All of a sudden, I saw a flashback inside my head. The kiss dream I had when I’m still in hospital.

Bakit ngayon? I feel like I'm drawn to Chris forever....

Unti unti kong nilapit ang face ko sa face ni Chris.


I can definitely hear my heartbeat, parang sasabog ang puso ko....

“Nicole, what are you ---”


"Shut up and kiss me, Chris."

My mind was against it but I just can’t ignore what my heart is telling me. I just gave in.

































































































Our lips met. We kissed for the first time




Ayan, I'm sure dami kinilig sa update na ito. What you guys think?

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #196 on: December 24, 2007, 07:06:32 am »
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh! Psensya na kung sobrang haba [non <------]
Kiliiiiiiggg! Chris ituloy mo na yan! Gossshh!
Nabebreak ko na houserules dito sa update mo kuyyyyaaaaa! Hahaha  :D
Kakalooookaaaa!
Paolo + Sandy = LOVE. (:

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #197 on: December 24, 2007, 07:10:15 am »
=)) Natatawa ako kay Nicole! Lakas ng loob! YUN YON EH! :D

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #198 on: December 24, 2007, 07:16:01 am »
nu po ba un text lingo? d ko po lam rules... bago lan me! ano po ba un??? at kakakilig ha! nag :-* cla hihihi! nakakamatay un chap mo po... love it! ;D kakabaliw  :D

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #199 on: December 24, 2007, 07:19:57 am »
Sandy: Kakaloka ba? Hindi ko pa alam kung anong mangyayari sa next chapter. Wala pa akong naisusulat.

Bianca: Go Nicole hahaha....

Paulah: Yung text lingo, yun yung pagttype kapag nagtetext, yung kulang kulang ang letters. Kasi violation yun dito sa Teentalk. As much as possible, type in full words ;)

Kakamatay ba yung update ngayon hahaha....

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #200 on: December 24, 2007, 07:29:47 am »
Sandy: Kakaloka ba? Hindi ko pa alam kung anong mangyayari sa next chapter. Wala pa akong naisusulat.


Nahuli sila ni Danieeell! Hahaha.. O0
Kaya mo yan kuya! go go!
Paolo + Sandy = LOVE. (:

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #201 on: December 24, 2007, 08:17:11 am »
waahhh..

naloka ako!! siete! haha.. :)

nice! nice!

next please?!! haha.. LOL!! :D ;D

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #202 on: December 24, 2007, 09:13:27 am »
para namang dekada ang lumipas nung nawala ako dito :o

bakit ba parang ang dameng update? ;D

sige sige i'm here na, ang saayyyyaaa, ang daming update eh ::)

ui ui ui, bakit ba parang nakakatuwa ang mga up. kuya ah, ayus. wala naman akong masabi dahil naeexcite ako sa next chapter :P

UPDATE NA! :D
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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #203 on: December 24, 2007, 09:37:18 am »
ok! naintindihan ko na po!  :) salamat sa pagremind hihihih ok. hihintayin ko na lang po iyong susunod  ;D excited na ako!  ;D ;D ;D  merry christmas po pala  ;)

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #204 on: December 24, 2007, 09:45:22 am »
ako rin poh wait ko na lang poh....






THANKS FOR SUPPORTING MY STORY  ;)
♫~Last Christmas~♪

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #205 on: December 24, 2007, 10:05:54 am »
Sus ginoo! Nakakaloka ang eksena na yan ah!  :D

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #206 on: December 24, 2007, 10:06:29 am »
WOOHOO!
Yahahaha!

Ang ganda naman nun! ;D

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #207 on: December 24, 2007, 10:25:47 am »
whoa. ang ganda na ng story. full of excitement. =p i can't wait for the next chapter!
Wutt am I suppose to write here at the right? (:

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #208 on: December 24, 2007, 10:52:40 am »
deeeeeeeeym I lurrrrve this update!!! ^_^
nice one chris! ^_^

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Re: Ugly But Pretty Swan (Photos on Page1) - Chapter 12 [Updated: Dec 24]
« Reply #209 on: December 24, 2007, 10:55:56 am »
^
Wahaaa ate Kat! Nakakaloka!
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