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Author Topic: Accidentally In Love © tenderheart [COMPLETED~] You can now DL the .doc version.  (Read 72347 times)

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Accidentally In Love
[1st Story] © tenderheart. All Rights Reserved 2008. Distribution of any kind is PROBIHITED without the written consent of LHYNNE.

He's the POLICE, and I'm just a PRISONER of his.

| Author : Lhynne [tenderheart] |
| Date Started : November 17, 2007 |
| Date Finished : January 2, 2009 |
| Latest Update : Official .doc Version


[Character Chart]
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The Handcuffs

The Case [Prologue] // 1 // 2 // 3 // 4 // 5 // 6 // 7 // 8 // 9 // 10 // 11 // 12 // 13 // 14 // 15  // 16 // 17 // 18 // 19  //
20 // 21 // 22 // 23 // 24 // 25 // 26 //  27 // 28 // 29 // 30 // 31 // 32 // 33 // 34 // 35 // 36 // 37 // 38 // 39 // 40 // 41 // The Prison [Epilogue]

Official .doc Version


The Case


Accidents always occur when...

You do an unexpectedly crime that will lead you to be a prisoner -- of a stup!d guy. I'm like a prisoner in his sight.

•   Because of the crime that I did accidentally.
•   Because he’s the guy who’s arranged with me accidentally too.

I noticed that nowadays, everyday in my life occur ACCIDENTALLY. Everyday is like an accident for a student like me. Well, for me, that’s life. Life surprises you with another turn. Life always changing in every second, as well as underestimating you.

What if love will bloom between us accidentally?

I told you. Everyday in my life occurs accidentally. And I will never ever regret the surprises of life that the crime actually given me.


He's the POLICE, and I'm just a PRISONER of his.


Disclaimer : The following is a work of Fiction. Names, characters, places, and incidents are the products of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual events, locales, or persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidental.
« Last Edit: December 31, 2009, 04:31:25 PM by tenderheart »

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Wow! This is interesting. :)
Go for it. I'll support this. :)
Grace here, friends?
what could be the
FORTUNE of that
CHICKBOY? ___

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hi lhynne!
nakakatuwa naman! nagawa mo na pala yung story.. all you have to do is just type it..
aabangan ko toh!
next!  ;D ;D ;D
call me xhobe.. friends?

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Nice... Nice start... Start this please... Paula here. :)
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wow.. start na please..
joycie here! friends?
LOVE WAITS. we don't need to rush things. God has best plans for us. right? BE HAPPY of what you have right now. mwah! :)

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hey, sis! just dropping by! same title kasi tayo ng story..

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nice!continue mo lang sis!same tayo..first time ko din magsulat ng story hehe.. :)

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GOMAWO KAMSAHAMNIDA! weeehhh!!! ginaganahan akong gumawa kahit may hang-over pa because of you guyz! *BOWS* nasa kabilang pc ang story kaya isasave ko muna sa diskette... thank you talaga! :)

hey, sis! just dropping by! same title kasi tayo ng story..

same title? kelangan ko bang palitan? ???

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An arranged marriage story ? I've never heard of an actual story before on this subject. This should be a good one. You have me hooked sis. I'm gonna keep an eye on updates on this story.

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Re: Accidentally In Love © tenderheart [1]
« Reply #9 on: November 19, 2007, 09:32:07 PM »
Chapter 1 – Weird Life.


I had a dream last night....

I saw myself in a white gown like i'm going to be married & walking at the aisle...
Then I saw a man in a white clothes...
Suddenly, he faded away...
I saw myself yelling his name so he can come back but, he didn't respond...


Weird dream, huh? but you know, that dream reminds me of finding soulmates... I dunno, we'll... I just read it in Abby's book and it says,

"If you already found him, then you shouldn't let him go..."

Nah! Hindi ko pa iniisip yan noh! I’m not ready enough to meet my soulmate. Who cares? Nobody does… except to my friend Abby.

I was cleaning at the living room when I saw this Arrange Marriage Agreement stuff at the center table. Kung gusto mong malaman kung ano yung Agreement na yun, better read up.

Papu told me that I’m going to marry that guy who I met in a children’s party, I dunno why and I’m super hate it…

Alam mo, kapag nakikita ko yan, gusto ko yang punitin pero, there’s something forcing me na wag gawin yun… and I dunno why.

“Ano naman yan?” andyan pala si Mamu.

“Kasi naman eh, nakita ko nanaman ‘tong Agreement na to…” I went upset.

“Akala ko ba, pupunitin mo yan sa oras na mahawakan mo yan?”

“Bakit pa Mamu? Mabait naman ako ah!”

She tapped my shoulder. “Alam ko kung anong nararamdaman mo at this moment pero, it’s your Papu’s fault, remember?”

Yeah, kabalbalan to ni Papu. Dahil nga mahal ko si Papu at nandun na sya sa fluffy [Heaven] place, sinunod ko na sya.

And this is my destiny. I guess.


***


Sa school, gumagawa kami ni Abby [Rose Cruz] ng assignment kaya we have to hurry. Eto nga palang si Abby, eh, she’s a kikay girl, must say na mala -- okay, let me rephrase that. Masyado lang syang ‘friendly’ pagdating sa boys. She’s always there to make me laugh, kahit saan, kahit bumagyo pa, magkaroon pa ng tornado at lindol, kahit tangayin na kami, hay, di mo kami mapapaghiwalay. Kaklase ko kaya to since elementary pa! Nahawaan na ata ako nito ng virus nya eh… you know, para na rin akong lukaret tulad nya.

The bell suddenly rang. Lahat kami nagsipagpasukan na sa kanya-kanyang mga classrooms. Well, wala kaming teacher ngayon. Nagmistulang playground nanaman tong room namin. Lagi naman eh… ako? Nakadungaw lang kaya ako sa bintana?!

Nilapitan ako ni Abby. “Oi Madam! Alam mo, para kang autistic jan?”

Endearments. She decided that for herself only. Ayoko naman kasi ng mga endearments na sina-suggest nya. So, she decided to call me ‘MADAM’. Guess what I’m calling her? ‘MANANG’. Haha.. “Hay, naku, tigilan mo nga ako! Etong manang na ‘to…”

“Pwede ba, wag mo nga akong tawaging manang?! Ang mabuti pa, samahan mo na lang ako sa boy’s locker room, andun daw ngayon yung gwapong nasa pilot section!” sabay tili.

“Ikaw na lang mag-isa!”

“Ang sungit naman nito… hmp!” sabay alis.

“Ewan ko sa’yo Abby, at bakit nababaliw ka ngayon sa mga nerd sa pilot section.”

Ang tagal ng oras!

With that, the bell rang. Ang weird ah. Kakasabi ko lang, nangyari agad.

“Ang aga naman ata ngayon ng uwian?”

May nag-announce. “Teachers have an urgent meeting so, class dismissed!”

Nagsigawan lahat ng mga kaklase ko, at nagtulakan para lang makaalis. Iniwan naman ako ni Abby sa locker room.

Nakita ko yung matandang babaeng janitor. We exchanged smiles tapos bigla na lang nyang hinawakan yung kamay ko.

“H-huh? T-Teka.. ano po yun? Bakit nyo po ko hinahawakan?”

“Sandali lang iha. Huhulaan kita, iha.”  I looked at her, puzzled. “May insidenteng mangyayari sa daan mo kung saan makikilala mo ang katapat mo.”

“Huh? Ano… po yun?” Seriously, I don’t get her. Well, ganyan naman ang mga manghuhula diba? Clueless ka kapag kaharap mo. Feeling mo sya lang ang nakakaalam ng lahat ng mga nangyayari.

“Sige na iha. Mag-ingat ka iha at mamuhay ka ng masaya kasama sya.” At umalis na sya.

Ano yung sinasabi nung matandang yun? Weird nga talaga.
« Last Edit: November 13, 2008, 10:20:21 PM by tenderheart »

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Re: ACCIDENTALLY IN LOVE [Tagalog V.] Chapter 1 is UP! Character Chart is UP!
« Reply #11 on: November 21, 2007, 01:18:51 PM »
NEW UPDATES!!!

meron na syang CHARACTER CHART at updated na ang Chapter 1! kumento nyo please!

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Re: ACCIDENTALLY IN LOVE [Tagalog V.] Chapter 1 is UP! Character Chart is UP!
« Reply #12 on: November 21, 2007, 07:50:59 PM »
nice start..
next na..
Don't say "I love you", instead say "I have been loving you.

Present Perfect Progressive, done in the past, continuing in the future.

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Re: ACCIDENTALLY IN LOVE [Tagalog V.] Chapter 1 is UP! Character Chart is UP!
« Reply #13 on: November 23, 2007, 04:17:01 PM »
next poh..  :)

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Re: Accidentally In Love © tenderheart [2]
« Reply #14 on: November 24, 2007, 06:02:37 PM »
Chapter 2 - Committing a Crime.


Oh, never mind.

Pero, pano kaya kung maaksidente ako? Gusto ko pang mabuhay no! *Sigh* Oo nga, nandun si Papu, pero hindi ibig sabihin hindi ko sya gustong makasama dun. Hay, ewan.

When I was walking home, naalala ko nanaman yung Arrange Marriage. Nakakainis talaga sina Mamu … Nababaliw na ba sila o nasisisraan na ng ulo?

I felt bored. Na parang gusto kong durugin ang mundo at manirahan na lang sa ibang planeta. If I had to, I would try to survive on Neptune [since Pluto wasn’t considered as a planet na.].. kasi alam ko that planet was also suffering the things that Earth was suffering now. Well, based lang naman yun sa utak ko, wag naman kayo magpapadala. Kayo oh, alam nyo namang iba ang isip ko sa iba. Malayo ang nararating ng utak ko, di nyo alam. Mamaya mabalitaan nyo na lang ako nasa past na ko using the time machine. Haha. Nangarap ba?

I saw an empty soda can towards the street. Dahil sa galit ko, I tried to kick it. All of a sudden, nakarinig ako ng nabasag na something… well, siguro ano lang yun, mga walang magawa sa buhay nila. Wala yun.

I was walking at the sidewalk nung may narinig akong boses ng lalaki.

“Hoy!”

Tumingin ako sa kanan at sa kaliwa, pero di ko pa rin sya makita. Ang weird ah.

“Hoy! Ano ba?”

Haha. Nandun pala sya sa likod.

“Aishh.. ano bang problema mo at nagsisisigaw ka --” I paused. Oi, madam. Akalain mo yun, sa lahat ng mga pinagdadaanan ng buhay ko ngayon, isang gwapong nilalang pa ang dadaan? but, unfortunately, sira-ulo naman… tsss...

He scoffed. “Tsk. Nagtanong ka pa. Tingnan mo nga kung ano ang ginawa mo sa kotse ko!”

“Huh? Ano bang pinagsasasabi mo?”

“Alam kong ikaw ang sumipa nito.” may hawak-hawak syang lata. Yun yung latang sinipa ko kanina.

“Halika rito.” Then he grabbed my arm.

“Aray ko! Ano ba?”

Dinala nya ko sa sasakyan nya.

“Look what you did!”

“Ano? Wala naman eh!”

“Bulag ka ba o bingi?” Ano bang pinagsasasabi ng lalaking to?

There it is. My two big black eyes saw it and widened. Aiyyy! Basag pala yung car window nya! Ang lakas naman ng impact ng pagkasipa ko dun. Ni hindi ko nga binigyan ng much strength. Yah, face it. Lagot ka…

“Then fine, I’ll pay it!”

“Oi, inosenteng baliw, alam mo ba kung magkano ‘tong brand new na kotse ko?” Aba.. loko pala tong lalaking to eh! Tinawag ba naman akong inosenteng baliw? Aiiissshhh… I have a decent name, idi0t.

“Magkano ba?!” I exclaimed.

“Costs about.. well, mga hundred thousand lang naman.”

O_O 

Ano? Okay, my eyes went out of their sockets because of so much shock. H-hu-hundred thou-ss-sand daw? Lang naman? Well, siguro mura lang naman siguro sa katulad nyang mayayaman ang mga ganun. Eh wala naman akong perang ganun kalaki.

“Uh… ummm… hindi ko talaga sinasadya yun, sorry talaga...”

“Tsk. A sorry couldn’t back the disaster you made.”

I thought for a second haw to escape it. Alam mo kasi, ang magandang gawin in this kind of crime is to…



RUN!!!



“Oi, teka! Bumalik ka rito oi!”



Para kaming tangang naghahabulan sa kalsada. Ito na nga ang krimeng hindi ko matatakasan. Kainis! With matching sigaw pa ang pagtakbo ko!

Lumingon ako habang tumatakbo. Buti na lang at malayo ang agwat naming sa isa’t isa. “Ano ba yan! Hinahabol pa rin nya ko? Naman!”

Ano nang gagawin ko? Papu, Mamu! Tulong!

Buti na lang, may nahanap na akong spot na pwede kong pagtaguan pansamantala. AYOS! Ang tagal kong nagtago dun ah! Pero, nanjan pa rin ang gwapong sira-ulong to… alas-otso na! Ano ba sya? Tao ba talaga to? Talagang mahal nya yung kotse nya… syempre, brand new eh!

“Inosenteng baliw!”

Ang sama talaga nitong lalaking ‘to! No manners!

“Pag nakita kita, papatayin kita!” tapos sinilip ko sya sa butas, nakaalis na pala sya.

Huminga ako ng malalim. “Walangya yung lalaking yun! Ang sakit-sakit ng likod ko kakatago dun!”

Tumakbo ako papauwi sa bahay na parang kabayo.

“Naku, nakalock pa yung gate. Mamu! Marco! Buksan nyo tong gate!"

Nakita ko sila. “Marriane, alam mo ba kung anong oras na? di ba 5 ang uwian nyo?”

“Sorry, Mamu, 4 nga kami umuwi kasi may meeting ang mga teachers sa school.”

“Eh ba’t 8 ka na nakauwi?”

"Uhhh, ummm… oo, nagreseach pa kami sa library kanina.” *bows* sabay takbo papuntang kwarto.

“Ate, di ka ba kakain?”

“Hindi na, kumain na ko kanina bago ako umuwi.” Sabay lock ng kwarto. Sumandal ako sa pinto.

“Aaaahhh!!! I hate myself!”

Humiga ako sa kama. “Nakakainis talaga… tsk.Tsk.tsk.”


***


Nagising ako dahil sa ingay sa labas. Dumungaw ako at alam nyo ba kung anong nakita ko?




Mga pulis! :-O


As in ang daming pulis na nakapalibot sa bahay namin… may magtatangka pa ngang umakyat eh! Reding-ready na silang tudasin ako eh… tapos nakita ko pa yung gwapong sira-ulo, kumakaway-kaway pa… kaasar talaga!

“Marriane Louise Santos! Sumuko ka na, napapaligiran ka na naming lahat!”


Is this happening to me?


Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



***


Nagising ako, pawis na pawis at hingal na hingal. Pinuntahan ako nina Mamu. “Marriane! Anong nangyari sa’yo? Okay ka lang ba?”

Binigyan ako ni Marco ng tubig. “I- I had a nightmare..,. yung mga Pu-“ oi Marriane, be specific naman!

"I mean, uhhhmm... ayun! may humahabol raw sakin na halimaw! tapos - "

"Kinain ka? hay naku ate, nabasa ko na yan sa libro eh! Istorbo ka ah…"

"Totoo naman ah! Sapakin kita jan eh~~"

"Oi, tama na yan at inaantok pa ko... magsitulog na uli tayo, halika na Marco."

Napabuntong hininga na lang ako as soon a they went out of my room. I looked at the ceiling. Sana panaginip lang yun... sana di totoo yun... Pero paano kung.... Masundan nya ko? Patay na!

Well, good for me. >_<
« Last Edit: November 13, 2008, 09:40:31 PM by tenderheart »

 

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