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•Worth a Second Look™• - FINISHED. DL LINKS AVAILABLE P.1
« on: November 10, 2007, 07:30:16 pm »



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http://tinyurl.com/wasl2download


Hi everyone! this is my first story. :D Hope you guys will like it!
here are their pics: (which are strictly for imagination purposes only.)
CHARACTER CHART
CHARACTER CHART NEW!

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POLL!pwede ipost nio rin kung sino binoto niyo? thanks!


Characters:

Ria Antonio
Gelo Fontanilla
Maffy Smith
Jonathan Figueroa
Elle Reyes
Aidan Lennox
Denise Lopez
Liam Woods
Rish Beltran
Lance De Rivera
Zoe Co




links sa chapters: humahaba na kasi, in fairness.
Chapter One...
Chapter Two...
Chapter Three (A)...(B)...
Chapter Four...
Chapter Five...
Chapter Six(A)...
(B)...
Chapter Seven...
Chapter Eight...
Chapter Nine...
Chapter Ten...
Chapter Eleven...
Chapter Twelve...
Chapter Thirteen
Chapter Fourteen
Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Sixteen (A),(B)
Chapter Seventeen
Chapter Eighteen
Chapter Nineteen
Chapter Twenty
Chapter Twenty-One
Chapter Twenty-Two
Chapter Twenty-Three
Chapter Twenty Four
Chapter Twenty Five
Chapter Twenty Six
Chapter Twenty Seven
Chapter Twenty Eight
Chapter Twenty Nine
Chapter Thirty
Chapter Thirty One
Chapter Thirty Two (part1) (PART 2)
Chapter Thirty Three
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48 A B C
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52.1
Chapter 52.2

EPILOGUE

yung color coding is for shifting ng point of views (POV) and for what they're saying.
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Re: "Worth a Second Look" - come on in, the preview's posted.
« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2007, 07:44:46 pm »
Chapter One

“Hoy, andyan na si Sir!” someone yelled.

There was a commotion as everybody rushed to get back to their seats… Kanya kanyang tulakan para makarating sa upuan agad; habang yung iba todo hanap ng mapapagtaguan ng balat ng kinakain nila. Bawal kasi ang kumain pag class hours, pero sa klaseng ito, walang bawal-bawal… lalo na pag gutom. ;D

Ngunit dahil Homeroom time na at any minute now eh parating na ang adviser nila, heto sila at nagpapakabait, dahil alam nilang hindi sila kukunsintehin ni Sir Mar. As everyone settled down and tried to look innocent, the classroom door opened.

A stocky, big-bellied man entered, looking serious and composed. As usual. Tumingin tingin siya sa mga estudyante niya, as though spotting something wrong with their all-too-angelic expressions.

“Guys, if you think na napapaniwala niyo ko, you’re very mistaken. Lalo na’t nangangamoy ang sky flakes.” ::) ;D

Natawa naman ang mga estudyante ng Fourth Year Integrity sa sinabi niya.

“Anyway, andito nga pala ako kasi may gagawin tayong importante.”

Taasan ang mga kilay. Ano nga naman kaya yun? ???

“Ano ba. Palitan na ng seating arrangement. Say your tearful goodbyes!”

“Oh, tumayo na kayo… anong hinihintay niyo?”
sabi ni Sir Mar. Tayo naman silang lahat, at nagsimula na si Sir na magtawag ng mga pangalan…

Ria’s POV:

Kanina pa akong nakatayo dito, and my muscles were seizing up due to a lack of movement. Ano ba naman yan, anong petsa na, hindi pa ako tinatawag… ::)
Pati braso ko nangangalay na. On my left arm were my books, on the other was my bag, which was still half-open, nakalimutan ko nang i-zipper. Tiningnan ko yung mga hindi pa natatawag… yung mga taong most likely na makakatabi ko…

I saw Maffy, my best friend, standing at the very end of the line. She smiled at me and I did the same, hoping na sana, siya na lang ang makatabi ko.

“Ria.”
“Po?”
“Dun ka. Third row sa may aisle.”

Tumango ako to acknowledge that I had understood; tapos pumunta na ako sa bago kong upuan.

“Angelo… take the seat beside Ria.”

One of the jocks in class went and carried his bag with him. Tiningnan ko siya as he passed by… I wondered how the next quarter would go. Wala akong kahit anong idea kung anong klaseng tao si Angelo… pero dahil popular siya sa campus, I didn’t think too well of him, or any of his other peers for that matter. Ayoko sa grupo nila, ang yayabang kasi, wala naming maipagmamalaki. Mga gwapo nga, ang tatamad naman, minsan sobrang slow pa. Well, ayoko talaga sa kanila… maliban siguro sa isa, yung kababata ko, si Liam.

Nag-creak yung upuan sa tabi ko, cutting into my thoughts. When I looked, he smiled at me. Ngumiti din ako para hindi naman masabing bastos ako.

“Paano ba yan. Kopyahan tayo ha? ;) sabi niya sa akin in a low voice.

I went like, “HUH?” Was he expecting me to laugh? ???

Kakaloka naman. Sa lahat ng seatmate na pwedeng i-assign sa akin, ito pa? Wala na ngang kwenta humirit, nangongopya pa? Sheesh. Napakaswerte ko nga naman.

Angelo’s POV:

Man, was that a laugh? ???

Ang wirdo naman ng buhay kahit kailan. Honestly, that was my best attempt at being friendly. Darn, I don’t get girls!

Hmm, hindi naman pala lahat…
But as it’s Ria Antonio… well, I shouldn’t have expected anything less.

She was known for being hardcore-suplada. Especially sa mga friends ko. Ayaw niya sa amin, ewan ko ba. Kahit sa mga girls na sikat sa campus, masungit siya. Ang labo, eh kung tutuusin, sikat din naman siya dito. Ay, never mind. Aamo rin yan.

I just slumped my arms and put my face right in it, feeling extremely sleepy. Napuyat ako kagabi kakalaro ng RO with my friends. Nag-away kasi kami ni Elle, at ang pinayo nila saken maglaro at i-vent ang frustrations ko sa computer. It worked naman, coz by 2 am, I completely forgot about Elle. My friends really do know their remedies… IBA NA NGA PAG EXPERIENCED.

May sinasabi si Sir Mar pero hindi na ako nakinig. Wala namang tulong sa buhay ang mga tinuturo nila. Siguro kung magtuturo sila kung paano tratuhin ang mga clingy girlfriends, makikinig ako. But otherwise…

Nako, grabe na ang antok ko AMP. May isang subject pa… Physics… Kelangan ng pampa gising… Makapag chewing gum nga.
Wala kasing kape, kaya gum ang pampagising ko...

Napatingin ako sa bago kong katabi. Nagbabasa siya ng Physics book… wow. Napaka-worthwhile. Alukin ko kaya ng gum? Baka sakali.

“Gum? ;) I offered.

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Re: Worth a Second Look - come on in, the preview and Chapter one is posted.
« Reply #2 on: November 10, 2007, 08:07:24 pm »
good start sis!!  ;) :D
Wutt am I suppose to write here at the right? (:

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Re: Worth a Second Look - come on in, the preview and Chapter one is posted.
« Reply #4 on: November 10, 2007, 09:35:23 pm »
nice intro, ate kat!  :)
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Re: Worth a Second Look - come on in, the preview and Chapter one is posted.
« Reply #5 on: November 10, 2007, 10:56:36 pm »
thanks so much sis! *mwuah!*

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Re: Worth a Second Look - come on in, the preview and Chapter one is posted.
« Reply #6 on: November 11, 2007, 09:48:38 am »
Yay! Sige pa sige pa! :D Exciting ito :D

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Re: ♥Worth a Second Look♥ - Chapter Two! ^_^
« Reply #7 on: November 11, 2007, 08:29:43 pm »
ui. nag update na si ate kat. aihee!  :)
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Re: ♥Worth a Second Look♥ - Chapter Two! ^_^
« Reply #8 on: November 11, 2007, 08:33:02 pm »
waah! kakilig na sya! ;]
Wutt am I suppose to write here at the right? (:

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Re: ♥Worth a Second Look♥ - Chapter Two! ^_^
« Reply #9 on: November 11, 2007, 08:47:06 pm »
Shocks nakakakilig ;D ;D ;D Ang cute ni Angelo nung dinugo siya sa speed at velocity ah ;D

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Re: ♥Worth a Second Look♥ - Chapter Two! ^_^
« Reply #10 on: November 12, 2007, 05:42:04 pm »
waaah stupid me!!! nadelete ko yung Chapter Two!!! AMP!!!

Repost ko na lang mamaya... GRRR! BAKIT ANG TANGA TANGA KO NGAYONG ARAW NA TO?!

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Re: ♥Worth a Second Look♥ - Chapter Two! ^_^
« Reply #11 on: November 13, 2007, 06:23:44 pm »
Angelo’s POV:

“Gum? ;) I offered.

Tiningnan niya ako na para bang ininsulto ko siya sa nasabi ko. Tinaasan niya rin ako ng kilay...

“We’re not allowed to chew gum in class,” ??? she said coldly.

“Wala pa naman tayong teacher.”

“Kahit na. She’s due to come any minute now.” ::) Helpfully, our P.R.O. (aka taga-tawag ng teachers) chose that moment to announce:


“CLASSMATES! Wala daw si Ma’am Pearlie!”



Napangiti ako as I watched her facial expression change. She rolled her eyes, na para bang it was a gesture of admitting defeat. What she did next shocked me to no end.

“Thanks,” she said, breaking into a wide smile. kinuha niya yung isang gum na nasa kamay ko, tas binuksan niya.

“Bazooka? Brilliant, I haven’t had one of these in ages,” :D she said, finally crumpling the wrapper up. Grabe, parang bata pala tong taong to. Natuwa ba naman sa bubble gum? ??? I thought it would take more than that para mapaamo si Ria. May kababawan din pala siyang nalalaman. Akalain mo yun? ;D

“Saan mo nabibili yan? I thought kasi phased-out na yan sa groceries,” she asked me, still chewing.

“Sa kapitbahay naming tindahan. Phased out? Talaga?”  ???

“I just heard. But I never found out if it was true… I haven’t been to the grocery lately.”


“Ria, pwede favor?”

“Anong favor?” she asked, puzzled. :o

“Wag ka na mag-english. Dinudugo ilong ko eh.” ;D

“Sige ba,” she replied, giggling ;D. Ang cute niya. Bungisngisera pala to eh. Napatingin ako sa binabasa niya… Speed,velocity, acceleration, at kung ano ano pa. Lalo yatang duduguin ang ilong ko.

“Bakit mo binabasa yan?” I asked her.

“Ha? Di mo ba narinig si Ma’am Pearlie kahapon? Sabi niya may quiz daw tayo ngayon. Eh kaso nga hindi naman tayo sinipot…”

“Makikinig… ako? Hah. Tingin mo ba ako yung tipong nakikinig sa mga ganun?”
“Bakit naman hindi. Pero somehow… hindi ka ba natatakot na bumagsak?”

“Sus, kahit naman nakikinig ako, hindi ko rin naman naiintindihan.” ;)

“Wow, napakaoptimistic mo naman. Eto,” she said, putting the book on my desk, “Tuturuan kita.”



Ria’s POV:


His face registered an expression of both bewilderment and apprehension, but he was trying to smile as he scratched his head.

“Ah… eh… wala ako sa mood mag-physics eh. Wala nga si Ma’am Pearlie, ikaw naman pumalit?” :-\

“Ano ka ba, madali lang to. Promise! Ganito lang yan oh, kasi ang speed…” and I went on talking; Gelo did not protest. (well, it’s not like he had a choice. ;D) To my delight, he was actually listening to me, with his face screwed up in concentration to comprehend what I was saying, then after a couple of minutes, he opened his mouth to interrupt.


“Wait, mali,” he said. I looked at him.

“Huh?”

“Two thousand three hundred fifty-two kilometers divided by forty-nine seconds, diba? Bakit thirty-nine kilometers per second lang? Dapat forty-eight diba?” he said all these very quickly. I got amazed and I could not help but stare. :o

“Diba?” he repeated, almost with a puppy dog pout.

“Oo nga. Ang bilis mo naman mag-compute,” :) I said. He smiled.

“Parang sira naman itong physics book natin… naturingang may doctorate degree yung author mali mali naman yung example na computation… Why are you giggling?” he demanded.

“Wala. Natatawa lang ako. Oh, I thought you didn’t want to speak in English?” I asked him.

“Saying I don’t want to doesn’t mean I can’t,” >:( he snapped. I was quite taken aback. Pa-moody effect si kumag. :D

“Pikon.”

“Hindi ako pikon.”

“Eh bakit nagalit ka agad?” I said, fighting the urge to laugh.

“Tinatawanan mo kasi ako, ano bang tingin mo saken, illiterate?” >:(

“Whoa, whoa… dude, I didn’t say that.”

“Implied but not stated.”

“Fine, I’m sorry!” I finally said. The expression of his face was infathomable. And then…



“Galing ko umarte noh?”
  :D he said, the ends of his boyish grin almost reaching his ears. At that moment, I could have given anything to punch him.

“Umayos ka nga!”

“Sorry na po.”

“Mukha mo!” I said, turning back to my physics book.

“Wah pikon… Aww, she’s gonna cry na!”

“Shut up, Gelo.” >:(

“Fine. Ano, meryenda tayo mamaya? My treat.”


MMMM.



"Sige ba."

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WE WANT CHAPTER THREE! ;D ;D

No pressures, Ate Kat ;D Hahaha, just kidding :D Excited na ako sa magiging meryenda session nilang dalawa. Hmmm I wonder ano kakainin nila? :D

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wow, thanks!! :d sige, it's coming tonight! ine-edit ko na lang po ^_^

WE WANT CHAPTER THREE! ;D ;D

No pressures, Ate Kat ;D Hahaha, just kidding :D Excited na ako sa magiging meryenda session nilang dalawa. Hmmm I wonder ano kakainin nila? :D

hehe... lapit na dude!!! konti na lang. ^_^

 

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