Babaero Incorporated (Updated and just posted Part 90 right now)

[miEmiKsmiNx_003]

waiting in line kuya,

wanna know what's gonna happen next.

[johnny_madrid]

waiting in line kuya,

wanna know what's gonna happen next.

Thanks. I'll be posting the update tomorrow.

[bluerose]

yeah. it really happens but sometimes in different situation. like maybe the girl is too busy she cannot give much time to her boyfriend or the other way around.. and here comes  the bestfriend to the rescue.  kaya ayun. maraming break-ups. but this one is different. i mean, this friend knows the situation and she's taking advantage! geez. if i was her friend, i might kill her if i found out. haha.

i am gonna wait for the update for sure.

[laci88]

Well ano nga naman ang masasabi natin sa ganong klaseng tao diba. There are a lot of people that are like that. Pero, remember she's about to confess right.

You're gonna be shocked ba ? Well read the next couple of updates. I am ironing out lang kase what the dialogue should be. This is going to be one of the great parts of the story. One of the main turning points.

I can't spoil what I want to say what's going to happen talaga. Haha. But shock and funny is all I can say.

Basta ... abangan !

wow, i can really feel na may major twist ah. 
aabangan ko talaga yan. haha, 

[johnny_madrid]

Part 46 - Richard's p.o.v.

"Okay, Richard. Nung sumama ako sa inyo ni Midori nung Valentine's
Day...hindi ko dapat sabihin ito sayo."

Sinabi ko kay Sharmaine, "Huwag kang maging shy."

"Well pogi ka and you look good Richard."

"Well you're beautiful naman din Sharmaine."

Tapos naalala ko yung mga "little things" na ginagawa ni Sharmaine over
the last several months. Kinikindatan nya ako ng patago pag hindi
mapapansin ni Midori. Tapos pag walang tao, bigla na lang ako nyang
madadaplisan ng hawak sa braso o sa kamay. So all that came to this.
Andyan na yung mga bagay sa harapan ko. Parang feeling na may secret
love ang mangyayari...yata.

Feeling kong maling-mali talaga, pero nararamdaman ko na tao lamang ako.
Yun ang problem. Dugo't laman lang ako at parang hinahanap yung ibang
hindi kilalang dugo't laman din.

Ayokong mag-make ng first move. Gusto ko sya. Siguro lahat ng moves.
Kahit unorthodox. Pag nagbigay sya ng opening sa deal baka maging
anxious akong mag close ng deal na binuksan nya.

... to be continued

[miEmiKsmiNx_003]

bitin bitin bitin.. 

next na po,

[johnny_madrid]

bitin bitin bitin.. 

next na po,

Bitin and you are right. I will add more later tonight. Mahirap mag dangle ng cliffhanger noh. Pero it gets better.

wow, i can really feel na may major twist ah. 
aabangan ko talaga yan. haha, 

Yup. Twisted totally twister and more twisting. Akala nyo yun ang mangyayari ha ... basta wait til I post the next several updates. It's a very interesting next few posts.

yeah. it really happens but sometimes in different situation. like maybe the girl is too busy she cannot give much time to her boyfriend or the other way around.. and here comes  the bestfriend to the rescue.  kaya ayun. maraming break-ups. but this one is different. i mean, this friend knows the situation and she's taking advantage! geez. if i was her friend, i might kill her if i found out. haha.

i am gonna wait for the update for sure.

And what a friend she is. I just updated one before. And the next few will be really interesting...friends indeed.

[miEmiKsmiNx_003]

kuya where's the next update? ehe..

[johnny_madrid]

kuya where's the next update? ehe..

Update coming up later tonight. I just had to change something ... to add to the dramatic effect.

[johnny_madrid]

Part 47 – Richard’s p.o.v.

“Listen Sharmaine, I have to go.”

“Teka Richard. Hindi mo sinagot ang tanong ko.”

Tahimik lang ako.

“Richard, sa totoo lang, gusto kita. Kahit na hindi gita gusting agawin kay Midor, papayag ako na magkita tayong dalawa basta hindi lang alam ni Midori. At hindi rin ako magsasabi sa kanya."

Basta hindi pa rin ako sumagot kay Sharmaine.

"Richard please magsalita ka naman."

"Pakinggan mo sarili mo Sharmaine. Girlfriend ko ang best friend mo. Kahit hindi perfect ang relasyon naming, hindi ko magagawang makipagkita sayo, dahil makakasakit masyado yunkay Midori."

And nagging quiet bigla.

“Makikita mo rin Richard. Malaking pagkakamali itong ginawa mo.”

“Anong ginawa ko? Wala akong ginawang mali Sharmaine. Maraming ibang guys na makikilala ka. Huwag na lang ako, isipin mo na kawawa naman ang best friend mong si Midori.”

Naging tahimik ng bigla.

Ewan ko kung iyak ng tao yung narinig ko sa kabilang linya. Basta ang narinig ko parang may nagbulong sa kabilang linya. At biglang dial tone na lang ang nasa kabila. Binaba ni Sharmaine yung line. At parang double click pa ang pagbaba nya ng telehone.

[miEmiKsmiNx_003]

double click?

mei iba pang nakikinig?

ganda kuya! bitin lang, 

next na po,

[johnny_madrid]

I just posted this sa Writer's Lounge. So copy and past ko lang dito. Trip lang haha.

Writer's Lounge musta ang mga nagistambay dito ?
Huwag masyadong magtagal at baka kayo'y magalaito.
Kumusta naman ang mga creative corner stories nyong tungkol sa pagmamahal ?
Inspired ba ang pagsulat nyo,
katulad ng pagsusulat ni Hose Rizal ?
Huwag kayong mag-quit ng story nyo dahil hindi nobelang katulad ni F. Sionil Jose.
Kase ang mga babaero ay hindi nagquit sa mga chics dahil sila ay natotorpe.
Kaya sige na at magsulat at mag post ng inyong mga updates.
Para masiyahan naman ang inyong mga readers,
Para regaluhan kayo nila ng mga cupcakes.

Yun lang po mga writers.
At maraming salamat sa mga readers.

double click?

mei iba pang nakikinig?

ganda kuya! bitin lang, 

next na po,

Bitin pa rin ba. Just revised something. Just a little detail lang naman. But the major turning point...the big one... is still the same. I'll post an update again very very soon.

[miEmiKsmiNx_003]

yep bitin 

sige kuya wait nalang ako ulit, basta very soon huh? 

[bluerose]

yeah bitin nga..
more more!

[johnny_madrid]

yeah bitin nga..
more more!

Okay yung pagka bitin, mawawala ang pag bitin pero malapit na mabitin yung pagkabitin ni (name). Or bibitayin haha. Basta check out the update na lang. Salamat sa pag wait.

yep bitin 

sige kuya wait nalang ako ulit, basta very soon huh? 

I'll try to post the update later tonight or tomorrow. It's just been pretty busy at the office lately. But I'll see what I can do. Thanks for the waiting.