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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 44 update finally Saturday 6-14-2008
« Reply #570 on: June 17, 2008, 11:08:50 am »
nice richard, caught up with 2 hot gurls.. hahaha...

thanks for the warm welcome.. :)

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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 44 update finally Saturday 6-14-2008
« Reply #571 on: June 18, 2008, 09:53:51 am »
nice richard, caught up with 2 hot gurls.. hahaha...

thanks for the warm welcome.. :)

He gets caught up with them alright. But we're still getting to the really nice part soon. Midori's RAGE. I'm stil building it up. No probs, new readers are always welcome.

haha, na-off guard si richard dun ah!
haha, love the guts!

Yeah. He was caught off guard there. But maybe not really caught off guard. If you back read to the time that Richard and Midori went out with their friends back in Valentines Day, you can see how Midori's best friend, Sharmaine was acting around or how she looked at Richard. And you can tell there was some intention there. But got to admit it was nice and straightforward of her to do that.

kuya ask ko lang... nasa pinas kaba?

nice UP nga pala

Thanks. I'll post another update tomorrow or the following day when I get a chance.

I'm in New York. Pero I vacation in Pinas every year. Sometimes twice a year.

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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 44 update finally Saturday 6-14-2008
« Reply #572 on: June 18, 2008, 12:19:13 pm »
i see :)

next na po.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 44 update finally Saturday 6-14-2008
« Reply #573 on: June 19, 2008, 01:23:55 pm »
i see :)

next na po.

I'll post it soon. Just writing it up still.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 44 update finally Saturday 6-14-2008
« Reply #574 on: June 20, 2008, 04:57:44 pm »
yeah, sharmaine already show motives to richard that time. its just that, i mean i dont know if the timing is just right for her to make a move when the situation is getting difficult between richard and midori.

knowing richard as a playboy, it wouldn't harm him if he get involved with the two for he will always believe that he can always escape. grr.

anyway, next up please! :)
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 44 update finally Saturday 6-14-2008
« Reply #575 on: June 22, 2008, 03:18:43 pm »
yeah, sharmaine already show motives to richard that time. its just that, i mean i dont know if the timing is just right for her to make a move when the situation is getting difficult between richard and midori.

knowing richard as a playboy, it wouldn't harm him if he get involved with the two for he will always believe that he can always escape. grr.

anyway, next up please! :)

I'll post an update tomorrow. When you said "escape", just keep that in mind a few weeks from now to see if Richard will be able to "escape".
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 44 update finally Saturday 6-14-2008
« Reply #576 on: June 27, 2008, 03:38:46 pm »
Update coming up either tomorrow or the weekend. Sorry it's been very busy lately.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 44 update finally Saturday 6-14-2008
« Reply #577 on: June 27, 2008, 05:50:22 pm »
alright. i'll be waiting!
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 44 update finally Saturday 6-14-2008
« Reply #578 on: June 28, 2008, 06:55:24 pm »
kuya ken, update update. hahahaha!  ;D ;D

exciting part na.  ;D ;D

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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 44 update finally Saturday 6-14-2008
« Reply #579 on: July 03, 2008, 05:27:29 pm »
kuya ken, update update. hahahaha!  ;D ;D

exciting part na.  ;D ;D

Okay the update is finally here. Exciting ... well look at what's happening behind Midori's back from her best friend.

alright. i'll be waiting!

Your long wait is finished. Sensya it took a long wait haha.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 45 update finally Tuesday 7-8-2008
« Reply #580 on: July 08, 2008, 10:08:41 am »
Part 45 - Richard's p.o.v.

Mahaba yung quiet sa amin ni Sharmaine. Her sweet voice sounding innocent, "It doesn't matter Richard, he's seeing someone anyway."

And ako yung tinutukoy nya, and that somebody I am seeing is her best friend, Midori.

So iniba ko yung usapan. Ibinalik ko ulit yung usapan sa ex-boyfriend nyang si Frank. Sinabi nyang nakipag-break sya kay Frank, kse hindi consistent si Frank. Katulad ng tatawagan nya si Frank ng hating-gabi tapos laging meron kausap si Frank sa kabilang linya pag nag ring yung phone. Palaging may kausap si Frank at hindi si Frank ang tumatawag sa kanya. Entonces, nasa talampakan si Sharmaine, habang ang mga ibang tao ay nasa ibabaw sa paningin ni Frank.

So it was like that for about half an hour. May sasabihin sya tungkol kay Frank. Ako naman may ssabihin tungkol kay Midori. Parang comparing notes on bad relationships.

Tapos biglang napatawa si Sharmaine, "Alam mo bang gusting mag live-in na kayo ni Midori? She wants to move in with you." Pero parang tawang weird na hindi dapat paniwalaan yung gusto ni Midori.

"Uhuh," sinagot ko sya. "Tumawag nga si Midori tungkol doon sa gitna ng gabi."

"Looks like decided na sya ha."

"Alam ko."

"So ano nagging desisyon mo Richard?"

"Sharmaine teka muna." Sinubukan ko i-explain sa kanya that yung beauty at sexiness attracts me to a woman, pero personality at character is what keeps me to her heart. Okay Midori was hot. Talagang knockout. Pero there's more to beauty than breasts, thighs, and legs in a bucket of Kenny Rogers chicken okay. Sinabi k okay Sharmaine, "Ewan ko Shar, parang hirap ako maging feeling relaxed around Midori. Parang naglalakad ako tapos napapaligiran ako ng ilang milyong itlog. Ang hirap maglakad ng hindi nagiingat."

"Richard kambal ata tayo. Ganon din ang feeling k okay Frank. Palagi ko rin tinatanong yung mga tinatanong mo."

"I feel bad for you Sharmaine."

"Okay. So what? Midori's my best friend, pero minsan naiinis rin ako sa kanya kse she gets into my nerves sometimes. It's okay with me...different because I'm not the one she's sleeping with. So how long do you think you can handle her, Richard ?"

"I don't know. Come what may come, siguro it'll come to pass even sometime. We'll probably go our separate ways. Ganon naman halos lahat ng mga relasyon. They all end, and the two people go their separate ways."

Tapos silence na naman.

Parang quietly nagsalita ulit si Sharmaine, "Richard..." She cleared her throat parang sounding barado. "Richard, would you see someone else? Halimbawa meron kang nakilalang easy to talk to, easier to get along with, yung tipong isang taong meron kang mas in-common kesa kay Midori?"

"Bakit mo naman natatanong yan Sharmaine?"

"Richard, hindi ko dapat sabihin toh sayo..."
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 45 update finally Tuesday 7-8-2008
« Reply #581 on: July 08, 2008, 10:27:44 am »
aixxxxxx...  anong hindi nia dapat sabihin?

hala, magcoconfess na ata si Sharmaine, nice naman niang best friend.. tsk tsk..

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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 45 update finally Tuesday 7-8-2008
« Reply #582 on: July 08, 2008, 01:36:50 pm »
wow naman yang si sharmaine.  ;D ;D ;D

i don't know what to say sa ganung klaseng tao. haha!  :D

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Re: Babaero Incorporated...Part 45 update finally Tuesday 7-8-2008
« Reply #583 on: July 09, 2008, 02:24:27 pm »
sharmaine is taking her next step.
haha. di na talaga sya paaawat. :)
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sharmaine is taking her next step.
haha. di na talaga sya paaawat. :)

Yup parang hindi na talaga maawat ni Sharmaine yung feelings nya diba. Parang here we go, ilabas na ang lahat.

Pero ang problem, the guy she's interested in, is her best friend's boyfriend. It shows you Sharmaine's character right there.

Pero hmmm maraming best friend na ganon ah diba...interested in their best friend's boyfriend, kaya ang daming break ups. Oh well.

Pero wait til the next couple of updates. It's the eye-opener and turning point siguro ng story that I hinted a long time ago.

wow naman yang si sharmaine.  ;D ;D ;D

i don't know what to say sa ganung klaseng tao. haha!  :D

Well ano nga naman ang masasabi natin sa ganong klaseng tao diba. There are a lot of people that are like that. Pero, remember she's about to confess right.

You're gonna be shocked ba ? Well read the next couple of updates. I am ironing out lang kase what the dialogue should be. This is going to be one of the great parts of the story. One of the main turning points.

I can't spoil what I want to say what's going to happen talaga. Haha. But shock and funny is all I can say.

Basta ... abangan !

aixxxxxx...  anong hindi nia dapat sabihin?

hala, magcoconfess na ata si Sharmaine, nice naman niang best friend.. tsk tsk..

It seems like magco-confess yata si Sharmaine, right ? Mga best friends talaga na ganon na kinakausap yung boyfriend ng best friend nila ... lots of girls like that. Hindi mo malalaman because your boyfriend will not tell you of course. Haha. Kase baka masapak si boyfriend diba.

Pero you're gonna like the next two updates. I have the idea down pat on how the conversation is going to go ... confession indeed...
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