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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 37 posted {updated just now 4/23/08}
« Reply #510 on: April 25, 2008, 10:20:17 am »
^ Of course. Isa 'toh sa pinakamagagandang stories sa CC. :D
And I really do lear a lot from this. (: Hahahaha.

You've got a lot of catching up to do,
with the other stories that you've been reading. Hahaha.

Anyway, we're glad you're back. (:

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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 37 posted {updated just now 4/23/08}
« Reply #511 on: April 25, 2008, 10:32:38 am »
new reader poh...
ako yung author ng i hated him the first time met him
hindi ko po alam if naaalala nyo ako... :)
anyway, nice story...



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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 37 posted {updated just now 4/23/08}
« Reply #512 on: April 25, 2008, 11:58:56 am »
new reader poh...
ako yung author ng i hated him the first time met him
hindi ko po alam if naaalala nyo ako... :)
anyway, nice story...



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Welcome to the story. New readers are always welcome and nice to have. I have seen your story pop up in CC when it's updated. I'll drop by to read up on your story. Thanks for the comment.

^ Of course. Isa 'toh sa pinakamagagandang stories sa CC. :D
And I really do lear a lot from this. (: Hahahaha.

You've got a lot of catching up to do,
with the other stories that you've been reading. Hahaha.

Anyway, we're glad you're back. (:


Thanks for the nice sentiments. And I'll be backreading when I get a chance on some of the stories here. Yeah mukhang gotta get up to speed sa "In Shambles" diba. Haha. I'm back again...off again...back again...haha Parang broken record.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 38 posted {updated just now 4/25/08}
« Reply #513 on: April 25, 2008, 12:00:05 pm »
What the--?! Pinaglalaruan nanaman si Candace? ><
To hell with those men!

Gutom na gutom ako sayo honey. --tumayo balahibo ko dito. XD
Hahahahaha.

Miss ko na si Richard. :P Sana magkita na sila ni Candace.

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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 38 posted {updated just now 4/25/08}
« Reply #514 on: April 25, 2008, 12:00:32 pm »
Part 38 - Candace p.o.v.

Pinuntahan ko yung ringing phone. Baka si Dave ang tumatawag. So I picked up on the fifth ring bago mag-on ang answering machine. “Hello?”

“Boo!” Ang sagot sa kabilang line. “Bakit mo sinagot ang telephone?”

Sagot ko, “Hoy Kelly wag mo ng i-disguise ang boses mo. Alam kong ikaw yan.”

Tumatawa sa kabilang line si Kelly, “Haha. Natakot ka noh. Sabihin mo yung totoo.”

“Alam ko naman na ikaw yun Kelly.”

“Kelly tinawagan mo ba si Anna ?”

“Nagbibihis sya. Alam mo naman, kelangan nasa work sya bago sila mag-open.”

Tinanong ko si Kelly, “Alone ka ba ?”

“Wala dumaan lang si boyfie. Andon sa bedroom tulog na parang nasa coma.”

Nagusap kami ni Kelly. At nagtawanan. Habang naguusap kami nagbibihis ako. Pagkatapos ko magbihis at palabas na ako ng bedroom, biglang may malakas na beep. Naka-on pa siguro yung answering machine.

Sabi ni Kelly, “Nako Candace sana wala tayong sinabing very juicy sa usapan natin.” Tumawa na naman si Kelly.

Inisip ko pero hindi ko maalala kung ano pinagusapan naming. Well ayoko naman na naka-record ang conversations naming at pakingan ni Dave. After all ang mga conversations ko ay para sa akin lang. So sinabi ko kay Kelly na teka muna. Iba kase ang mga buttons sa answering machine ko sa bahay. So hindi ko alam kung anong button dapat pindutin.

Sabi ni Kelly, “Basta pindutin mo yung may tuldok. Yung may circle.”

So pinindut ko at nag-stop ang machine.

Nagtanong si Kelly, “Ano ba pinagusapan natin?”

“Hindi ko matandaan eh. Hmmm. Erase ko na lang lahat.”

Nagsabi si Kelly, “Teka teka. Candace, baka may mabura kang important na message na kelangan ni Dave.”

Tama nga naman si Kelly, “Okay ano ba dapat.”

“Candace basta pindutin mo yung may reverse o parang pang rewind ng message. Tapos press mo yung parang forward na para mag-play.”

So pinindut ko at nag click yung answering machine. Tapos mejo matagal ang pag rewind ata at nag play ng old message ni Dave. Boses ng babae ang nag iwan ng message. At ganito ang sabi nung nag iwan ng message.

“Hello Dave. It’s me. Ummm nagluluto ako. Kung gutom ka pa, ako rin gutom. Gutom na gutom ako sayo honey. Alam ko parang trip diba. Pero ikaw nagti-trip din. Talk to you later. Bye.”

“Sh.t! Kelly narinig mo bay un?” Napatalon ako.

Sumagot si Kelly, “Mukhang iba ang gusting lutuin ni sis ah. Ilapit mo ang receiver sa machine at lakasan mo ang volume.”

Tapos yung sumunod na message ay galing sa boss ni Dave.

“Dave si boss mo ito. Ginawa na naming yung weekend schedule as per your request, hindi mo kailangan pumasok ng mga weekends this whole month. Si Anthony ang co-cover sa weekend shift mo. Have a good month and weekend Dave.”

Napatingin ako sa wrinkled sheets sa kama. Naalala ko yung mga basing sheets nung umagang nahuli si Mark ng kanyang asawa.

Not again. Ayoko na talagang umiyak.

Silence.

Nagsalita si Kelly, “Candace are you all right ?”

“Okay lang.” My teeth were clenched sag alit. “Lumang tugtugin na toh Kelly.”

... to be continued
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 38 posted {updated just now 4/25/08}
« Reply #515 on: April 25, 2008, 12:02:48 pm »
What the--?! Pinaglalaruan nanaman si Candace? ><
To hell with those men!

Gutom na gutom ako sayo honey. --tumayo balahibo ko dito. XD
Hahahahaha.

Miss ko na si Richard. :P Sana magkita na sila ni Candace.


Ganon na nga. It makes it interesting kse diba. Kesa yung boring na masaya. Okay lang si Richard malapit na magwala yung girlfriend nyang si Midori at hindi kasalanan ni Richard. Anyways ssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh tungkol sa last sentence mo. Haha.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 38 posted {updated just now 4/25/08}
« Reply #516 on: April 25, 2008, 12:09:52 pm »
Ganon na nga. It makes it interesting kse diba. Kesa yung boring na masaya. Okay lang si Richard malapit na magwala yung girlfriend nyang si Midori at hindi kasalanan ni Richard. Anyways ssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh tungkol sa last sentence mo. Haha.

Okay fine, I'll hush. :-X Hahahaha.
Ayun, si Midori nga pala, buhay pa. XD
Ay nako. Hahaha. Problema na ni Richard yan. :D

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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 38 posted {updated just now 4/25/08}
« Reply #517 on: April 25, 2008, 12:21:56 pm »
tagal ko nang di napadaan dito ah.
Bakit lagi na lang si Candace?
Gaaa. Kawawa naman siya.
Poor candace.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 38 posted {updated just now 4/25/08}
« Reply #518 on: April 25, 2008, 12:41:56 pm »
Broken record nga, pero at least may record. XD
Hahahahaha. :D

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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 38 posted {updated just now 4/25/08}
« Reply #519 on: April 25, 2008, 02:30:03 pm »
Broken record nga, pero at least may record. XD
Hahahahaha. :D


Broken record ba. At least may record. Well parang ganon ako. Madalas sa CC. Tapos biglang mawawala ng matagal. Tapos madalas na naman. Para ngang broken record.

tagal ko nang di napadaan dito ah.
Bakit lagi na lang si Candace?
Gaaa. Kawawa naman siya.
Poor candace.

It's sad. Pero kse I know like over a hundred girls who are like Candace. Both sa USA and sa Pilipinas. They always find the wrong guys. And I am just I guess changing some things pero sharing their situations and problems in a story.

Pero don't worry. Diba dapat happy ending. I ummm will make it a happy ending.

Okay fine, I'll hush. :-X Hahahaha.
Ayun, si Midori nga pala, buhay pa. XD
Ay nako. Hahaha. Problema na ni Richard yan. :D


Syempre buhay pa si Midori. I'm gonna make her put Richard in some very interesting and very troublesome and awkward situations. Haha. Naka draft na kase. Pero I don't know when to insert it yet.

Maganda nga magiging problema ni Richard. Haha.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 38 posted {updated just now 4/25/08}
« Reply #520 on: April 25, 2008, 03:00:18 pm »
omg...  :o :o
tsk... so, buking si dave?
well, buti na lang at narinig ni candace yun... poor her...  :-\

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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 38 posted {updated just now 4/25/08}
« Reply #521 on: April 25, 2008, 03:29:31 pm »
napaka-unswerti talaga ni candace..tsk tsk tsk. kuya dave..i missed this. musta pinas?
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 38 posted {updated just now 4/25/08}
« Reply #522 on: April 25, 2008, 07:48:04 pm »
Broken record ba. At least may record. Well parang ganon ako. Madalas sa CC. Tapos biglang mawawala ng matagal. Tapos madalas na naman. Para ngang broken record.

Syempre buhay pa si Midori. I'm gonna make her put Richard in some very interesting and very troublesome and awkward situations. Haha. Naka draft na kase. Pero I don't know when to insert it yet.

Maganda nga magiging problema ni Richard. Haha.

At least nga may record. ;D Hahahaha.
Ahh, buhay pa pala yun. XD Oo nga naman.
Uhm, i'd suggest updating, like.. NOW? Hahaha.
Demanding? ^-^

Mukha ngang maganda. :D Hahaha.

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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 38 posted {updated just now 4/25/08}
« Reply #523 on: April 26, 2008, 09:13:13 am »
At least nga may record. ;D Hahahaha.
Ahh, buhay pa pala yun. XD Oo nga naman.
Uhm, i'd suggest updating, like.. NOW? Hahaha.
Demanding? ^-^

Mukha ngang maganda. :D Hahaha.


Yeah okay. Buhay pa yun. I'm gonna make her the great villainess. Para pagkatapos nya kay RIchard ang buhay ni Richard ay magiging ... "In Shambles" Haha. NOW ? Very demanding ha.

 
napaka-unswerti talaga ni candace..tsk tsk tsk. kuya dave..i missed this. musta pinas?

Yup. Haha hindi ako si kuya Dave. Si Dave yung nabuking na bagong guy sa buhay ni Candace sa story. Ako si kuya Ken. Haha. And Pinas was okay. Thanks for asking. I am gonna drop by your story later.

omg...  :o :o
tsk... so, buking si dave?
well, buti na lang at narinig ni candace yun... poor her...  :-\

Well buking nga. And ilang beses nangyayari yan sa mga guys na mahuhuli na may ibang chics dahil hindi binubura kaagad ang mga messages ng ibang chics. Buking to the max indeed! Haha. Btw Lacy I dropped by your story...just read the first parts. Nice premise.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....Part 38 posted {updated just now 4/25/08}
« Reply #524 on: April 26, 2008, 01:41:40 pm »

Well buking nga. And ilang beses nangyayari yan sa mga guys na mahuhuli na may ibang chics dahil hindi binubura kaagad ang mga messages ng ibang chics. Buking to the max indeed! Haha. Btw Lacy I dropped by your story...just read the first parts. Nice premise.

oohh... i see. ganun pala yun. hehe... ano na kaya gagawin ni candace? buti hindi siya nababaliw sa ginagawa sa kanya.  ;D ;D ;D

btw, my name's kelvs (from "college life", remember? i just changed my username.) hehe... hiniram ko lang yung laci somewhere out there.
it's a Czechoslovakian/ Yugoslavian name, i think...  ;D ;D ;D

 

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