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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 3 is up -11/30...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #45 on: November 30, 2007, 02:15:28 pm »
Part 3 - Richard's p.o.v.

So sabado ng umaga at meron na na kumakatok sa main door ng condominium ko. Ah si Chrissy at si Charlie. Dumating sila ng 9:00AM on the spot. Ang problema kay Chrissy never na never nya na ginamit ang doorbell ko. Instead kakatok yan na parang isang taong nagdadabog na naniningil ng pera. So I got up from my bed at nagsuot ako ng shorts and t-shirt. I turned on the ceiling fan. Iniwan ko yung tennis racket ko at badminton racket ko sa living room coffee table. Para alam nila na ready na ako.

Matangkad si Chrissy halos 6'0" tall sya at sexy na parang pang model. Kaya lang parang scratchy yung boses nya. Nung tumingin ako sa peephole ng main door ko, ang una kong nakita ay yung kanyang mga matang napaka arogante.

Si pareng Charlie naman mga 5'11" tall naman sya na ayos ang tan na parang kulay chestnut atsaka built sya na parang isang WWE na professional wrestler. Yung mga arms nya halos kasing laki ng mga legs ko. Pero yun nga lang, yung tyan nya ay halatang mejo na lumalaki na ng katamtaman. It usually happens naman when you start getting old.

Magkaterno sila ng damit. Matching baggy na tan na tennis shorts at loose Nike na t-shirts. Tapos naka rolled up ang mga sleeves nila hanggang balikat.

Pag bukas ko ng pintuan pumasok si Chrissy sabay sabi sa akin sa kanyang nakakairitang tono ng boses, "Hey babe." So niyakap nya ako and we greeted each other cheek to cheek. Then she said, "You smell nice."

Sabi ko naman sa kanya, "Ah pawis yan."

Sumagot naman si Chrissy ng, "Good. Kakausapin sana kita tungkol dyan." Tapos dumiretso sya sa living room.

"Yo pare!" Nag high-five sa akin yan si pareng Charlie, yung asawa ni Chrissy.

Tumaas yung mata ni Chrissy. Halos yung puti lang yung makita mo. Ayaw na ayaw nya na maging stupid too soon yung pagaarte ni Charlie. Nag stretch si Chrissy at tinanong ako, "Ano, ready ka na ba?" Tapos dumiretso sya sa kitchen.

Habang si Charlie naman ay lumakad ng papuntang C.R. "Teka muna may emergency lang. Tinatawag ako ni mother nature."

Binuksan ni Chrissy yung refridgerator at nag pour sya ng mango juice sa isang malaking baso. Tapos habang hawak yung juice ay lumakad syang patungo ng bedroom ko. Tapos unti nyang binuksan yung pintuan at sumilip sa loob.

Bumulong sya sa akin, "Sino sa collection ito ?"

Sinagot ko si Chrissy, "Si Trisha."

She said, "Have I met her before ?"

Sagot naman ako ng, "I think so yata."

She said, "Saan?"

"Sa Los Banos nung nag family picnic yung mom and dad ko. Nung isang taon nung nagbakasyon yung sister ko sa bahay nila mom and dad galing sa college." Ang sagot ko naman kay Chrissy.

Tapos sumagot naman si Chrissy ng, "Kung sinasabi mo yung nung isang taon na na-meet ko yung dalaawang brothers mo…then nope. Hindi sya yung na-meet ko kse ka-partner ko sya sa badminton nung naglaro kami at tinalo namin yung mga brothers mo at lahat pa."

Tapos naalala ko at pinaalala ko sa kanya yung kasama kong babae last year sa picnic, "Si Britney yun."

Nag roll na naman yung eyes ni Chrissy at nagsabing sarcastically na, "Alam mo bakit hindi mo sila pagsuotin ng mga name-tags."

Sabi ko naman, "Okay okay. Pero act ka lang na kilala mo si Trisha okay."

"Kupal ka talaga. Jerk to the max ka talaga." Sabi ni Chrissy.

"Love you rin." Sabi ko sa asawa ni pareng Charlie. 
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 3 is up -11/30...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #46 on: November 30, 2007, 03:29:24 pm »
ooh. anu bah yan, babaero na nga talaga...abnormal ka! abnormal ka richard! :'(
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 3 is up -11/30...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #47 on: November 30, 2007, 05:32:45 pm »
ooh. anu bah yan, babaero na nga talaga...abnormal ka! abnormal ka richard! :'(

Thanks for the comment. Well uhm actually sya yung protagonist. Pero tama ka, looks like maraming girls ata si Richard.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 3 is up -11/30...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #48 on: November 30, 2007, 08:10:02 pm »
wah. grabe yan si richard.
pati ba asawa ng pare niya pinapatulan niya?  ::)


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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 3 is up -11/30...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #49 on: November 30, 2007, 08:34:21 pm »
gawa kasi ng dad nya..
napakaB.I.
babaero ng tunay tuloy si richard..
sino kaya magpapatino??
hmmm
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 3 is up -11/30...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #50 on: November 30, 2007, 09:22:40 pm »
babae mgpapatino  ;D

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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 3 is up -11/30...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #51 on: November 30, 2007, 10:29:15 pm »
haha,,, kaname nia pa yung character ko dun sa story ko! "trisha"

name tags? hahaha... nice idea... dapat nga siguro.... o kea sabihin niya magpa tatoo ng name.... nice!

next!  :)
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 3 is up -11/30...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #52 on: November 30, 2007, 10:44:04 pm »
i loooove it, kuya ken. next next na pleaseee.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 3 is up -11/30...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #53 on: November 30, 2007, 11:49:11 pm »
Grabe naman pala talaga yung naging impact nung sinabi at actions ng daddy ni Richard sa kanya. Pero sana naman as time went by, na-realize ni Richard na hindi na niya tinularan yung daddy niya at ginawa na lang niya kung ano yung tama...

Anyways... talagang ganyan ang buhay.

Nice story by the way.  :)

Francia here.  :)

Next na kuya!  ;D

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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 4 is up -12/1...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #54 on: December 01, 2007, 03:38:01 am »
Part 4 – Richard’s p.o.v.

…Well nung sinabi kong love you rink ay Chrissy nag hands-up in the aur sya kse alam nyang sarcastic yung response ko sa kanya. It’s not a secret naman kase na kinakausap ko sya only because asawa sya ng best friend kong si Charlie. Kung hindi then I would never ever even talk to Chrissy. Kahit maganda at sexy si Chrissy, eh napaka-kupal ang ugali nya. I can’t stand her. Pero she is good wife material naman. Siguro kse I am not looking for a wife kaya kinasusuklaman ko si Chrissy. Of course I don’t tell her that.

As for Trisha naman. She came driving down here from Quezon City pa ng 4:00AM this morning  para lang for a little loving from me before sunrise.

So after ng exchange naming ni Chrissy umiling lang sya. She said, “ Hindi ba sasama sa atin si Trisha?”

Sabi ko, “Hindi. Siguro matutulog lang sya hanggang pag balik natin mamaya.”

Pero at that moment nag moan na bagong gising si Trisha, turned over in the bed tapos didilat-dilat yung mata na parang nasisilaw. Biglang nag side step si Chrissy sa gilid ng bedroom door para hindi sya Makita ni Trisha. So bumalik ulit ako sa bedroom and mejo closed ko yung door behind me and sinabi ko sa bagong gising, “Hey sexy.”

Nag clear ng throat si Trisha tapos tinaas nya yung kumot sa body nya tapos sinabi ng mahinang bagong gising na boses sa akin, “Sino kausap mo Richard?”

Ang pretty at ang sexy talaga ni Trisha. Lalo na pag kini-kiss nya ako ng twenty straight times. So lumpait ako sa kanya and ran my hand over her hair. Tapos minasahe ko yung back ng neck nya. Sabi ko, “Narinig mo si Chrissy.”

Tinaas nya yung ulo nya at lumingon sa akin, “Sino si Chrissy?”

“Wife ni Charlie,” sabi ko.

Sumigaw si Trisha sa direction ng bedroom door, “Hi Chrissy, nabangit ka at si Charlie pag naguusap kami ni Richard.”

Tapos sa other side ng door naman, “Hello Tirsha nice to see you again. Sorry ha. Hindi ko sinasaja na ma-wake up ka.”

“It’s okay.” Nagunat si Trisha. “Richard ano ginagawa mo?”

Sabi ko, “Saturday morning badminton o tennis.”

Tinaas na naman nya yung kumot and Trisha said, “Pwede ba mag stay na lang ako here sa place mo at antayin ka baby?”

Sabi ko naman kay Trisha, “Bakit hindi ka makipag exercise sa amin, at sumama ka na lang?”

Nag sabi ng sh.t si Trisha tapos nag tanong, “Meron ka bang extra na racket?”

“Syempre meron naman.” Sinagot ko sya.

Mabuti na lang at sumama si Trisha sa amin sa court. Kase baka mamaya habang wala ako ditto eh halungkatin nya ang buong condo ko. Baka meron syang matagpuan na hindi nya dapat malaman.

Tapos lumapit ako ulit sa kanya and kissed her.

Nag giggle si Trisha tapos lambing na itinulak ako, “Wag mo gawin kung hindi mo kayang tapusin.”

Nag smile lang ako sa kanya at sumigaw ako sa may direction ng pintuan, “Chrissy sasama raw sa atin si Trisha.”

Chrissy said naman, “That’s good. Kelangan ko ng female bonding this morning.”

Tapos nagtawanan kaming tatlo.

Tapos biglang bumulong sa tenga ko si Trisha, “Na-meet ko na sya before?”

Nabigla ako, “Ano?”

Trisha said, “Sabi nya kse nice to see me again daw. Pero I don’t remember her, so hindi ko pa sya na-meet.” Tapos meron syang false smile na nakatingin sa akin.

Sinabi ko sa sarili ko BASTED!

Pero soabe lang na binaliwala ko yung tanong nya at ngumiti lang ako sa kanya and told her, “Mag-shower ka na. At paalis na tayo.”

Tapos lumiit na naman mata ni Trisha. Tanong nya, “Nakasara ba yang door talaga?”

So nag nod lang ako na nakasara nga yun pintuan.

Tapos hinatak ako ni Trisha towards her. Well naisip ko na hindi naman ako nabasted. Basta pagmahuhuli ah palaging deny lang at baliwalain para makalimutan…kaya madaling makalusot ang mga babaero.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 4 is up -12/1...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #55 on: December 01, 2007, 03:57:09 am »
hi kuya ken! nice story po!galing! curious din ako sa iba pang escapades at schemes ng mga babaero eh!hehehe...
ahhh...richard bakit ka gumaya sa dad mo?..nyak!..
sa sobrang dami ata ng girlaloo mo ay talagang kailangan na ng tags wahahahaha...

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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 4 is up -12/1...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #56 on: December 01, 2007, 04:22:43 am »
ay sos..akala ko pa naman eh hindi siya magiging player dahel ganon ginawa ng tatay niya..nyek..sorry kuya ngaun lang nakabasa..still waiting for an update sa that's life...hehehehe..i'm liking this story ha.. ang bad bad ni richard..makes me wanna be a player..hahaha..jokes.. goshings talaga..sige, punta na ako sa klase..next na kuya..hehe.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 4 is up -12/1...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #57 on: December 01, 2007, 07:19:22 am »
present!!! :D haha. nakahabol din ako.
haynako 'chard goodluck naman sayo noh, sana makahanap ka ng katapat mo!
kuya ken, ganda ganda naman... parang totoo talaga though i know its only fictitious. thumbs up sayo! kailan next up??
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 4 is up -12/1...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #58 on: December 01, 2007, 09:42:51 am »
Grabe naman pala talaga yung naging impact nung sinabi at actions ng daddy ni Richard sa kanya. Pero sana naman as time went by, na-realize ni Richard na hindi na niya tinularan yung daddy niya at ginawa na lang niya kung ano yung tama...
Anyways... talagang ganyan ang buhay.
Nice story by the way.  :)
Francia here.  :)
Next na kuya!  ;D

Well one can never tell what the future holds for him or her. Minsan naman parang jaded yung paningin ng tao. Meaning, yung mali na ginagawa nya pero sa perspective nya ay parang tama pa rin. It's messed up, pero what can you do. As you said yourself and my other story's title says…That's Life. Thanks for the comment. And welcome aboard the story. I'm sure you'll enjoy this.

i loooove it, kuya ken. next next na pleaseee.

Thanks for the comment. I can sense your love for this story. And so excited ka na for the next. Actually part 4 is up already. You'll like that update. Tapos I'm going topost part 5 later. Mejo busy pa sa office.

haha,,, kaname nia pa yung character ko dun sa story ko! "trisha"

name tags? hahaha... nice idea... dapat nga siguro.... o kea sabihin niya magpa tatoo ng name.... nice!

next!  :)

Thanks for the comment. I see you liked the part about the name tags. Nakakatawa diba. Of course it's not nice pero it is entertaining naman. Part 4 was just posted earlier. Part 5 baka i-post ko mamaya. Mejo busy pa here sa office. Okays.

babae mgpapatino  ;D

Thanks for the comment. Well obviously babae magpapatino. Pero you just gave me an idea. Can you imagine pag nasobrahan ang isang lalaki ng masyadong maraming chics. Ang resulta nagsasawa sa babae at nagiging bakla. Just a thought.

gawa kasi ng dad nya..
napakaB.I.
babaero ng tunay tuloy si richard..
sino kaya magpapatino??
hmmm

Sino magpapatino. That's a surprise you'll probably like later in the story. Kung titino ba naman sya. Thanks for the comment.

wah. grabe yan si richard.
pati ba asawa ng pare niya pinapatulan niya?  ::)

Thanks for the comment. No. Hindi nya pinapatulan yung wife ni pareng Charlie nya. Parang sarcsastic na usapan lang sila. I am writing Chrissy as the wife of Charlie at hindi masakyan ni Chrissy ang mga ugali ng mga friends ng asawa nya. At the same time you'll see na hindi talaga gusto ni Chrissy yung mga friends ng asawa nya. And you'll see why magiging babaero din husband nya kahit na sobrang tino ni Charlie.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 4 is up -12/1...just posted Right Now!
« Reply #59 on: December 01, 2007, 09:47:10 am »
ugh. nakakainis. bakit ba ubod ng babaero ang tatay ni richard at kailangang mahawa ang anak niya!?  >:( grrrr. naaamoy ko ang baho at landi ng trisha na yan.  ::) she's a flirt.  :P next na po kuya ken! can't wait for the next updates!  :)


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