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Re: Babaero Incorporated... (part 1 is up finally-11/29/07)
« Reply #30 on: November 29, 2007, 12:04:42 pm »
Part 1 - Richard p.o.v.

"Ilan na ang girlfriend mo ngayon?"

Nung nasa grade three ako dinalaw kami ni dad. Palagi akong amazed sa pagdadamit ni dad. Mula ulo hanggang paa, palaging malinis at soabe. Tapos umupo si dad sa sofa at tiningnan ang report card ko. Nag grunt sya na parang low-voiced na ubo tapos humithit sya sa yosi nya na Marlboro. Bali wala kay dad na perfect yung attendance record ko sa school, at parang okay lang din na above average ang mga grades ko. Pero parang natuwa sya na nasa honor roll ako ngayon. Nahalata ko sa mata nya na parang masayang makintab pero tipong binali wala nya lang. Humithit pa sya ng mga dalawa o tatlong beses pa sa yosi nya tapos linagay nya sa ashtray at pinatay nya yung yosi ng isang diinan lang ng kanyang kamay. Tapos yung kabilang kamay nya ay kinuha yung lapad na alak at tumoma sya. Isa yata o dalawang gulp, tapos bigla nya akong hinatak sa kanya.

Linapit ni dad yung mukha nya sa akin tapos sinabi nyang, "Narinig mo ba ako Richard? Come on, pwede mo naman sabihin sa akin. Daddy mo ako."

Pero I shook my head, parang tilang lito ako sa sarili ko. Ngumiti si dad at parang nangintab yung mga ngipin nya. Lumapit sya sa tenga ko tapos binulungan nya ako, "Ilan na ang girlfriend mo ngayon?"

Inisip ko kung isa lang sabihin ko sasabihin ni dad na bakla ako. Pag sinabi kong dalawa baka kanchawan naman nya na kahina ko naman. Yung may girlfriend nga pero mahina naman. Kaya sinabi ko na lang sa kanya, "Dad three ang girlfriend ko."

"Good boy." Inakbayan ako ni dad tapos tinap nya yung ulo ko. Parang feeling proud na proud sya sa akin. Tapos linagay nya ako sa lap nya at sabay sabing, "Big boy ka na ngayon Richard. Proud si daddy mo sayo."

"Ngayon pag naging binata ka na, alam mo na dapat gawin mo sa mga chics diba ?" Tanong ni dad sa akin.

Hindi ko alam so I just shook my head na parang ewan.

Binulong ni dad sa akin, "Hanapin mo sila. Bolahin mo sila. Yariin mo sila. Kalimutan mo sila."

Hindi ko alam kung ano ibig sabihin ni dad bata pa kase ako. Pero yung mga sinabi nya it stayed palagi sa isipan ko.

Tapos biglang dumating si mommy sa sala. Masama yung tingin ni mommy kay daddy sabay sabi nyang, "Nasaan yung wedding ring mo? Bakit hindi mo suot?"

Tumawa lang si daddy tapos kinindatan nya ako. Tapos kiniliti ako ni dad sa tiyan. Tapos lumakad si mommy sa bintana at tumingin sa labas. Tinitigan nya yung pasahero ni daddy sa koche. Tapos lumingon si mommy kay daddy, tapos pinikit nya mata nya at lumakad sa kusina. Parang ang bigat ng katawan ni mommy na maglakad tapos nagsasalita na hindi ko marinig. Yung tipong parang nagdadasal na bigyan sya ng lakas ni Lord.

Nanood lang si dad ng tv ng sandali, flipping through the channels. Tapos dumukot sya sa bulsa nya tapos binigay nya sa akin yung mga bariya nya at mga perang papel na iba't ibang kulay. Tapos lumabas sya ng bahay at lumakad syang parang jeprox papunta sa koche nya. Pumunta ako sa pintuan. Pumasok sya sa koche nya and he drove off kasama yung babaeng naka pink na damit na nagcha-chain smoke na halos nakatitig sa bahay namin habang nasa loob ng bahay si daddy. Nag screech yung goma ng koche ni daddy nung rumangkada syang mabilis na pag drive.

Sumigaw ako sa kanya ng "Bye daddy!" At nag wave ako. Pero hindi man lang lumingon o nag wave ng good-bye sa akin si dad.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated... (part 1 is up finally-11/29/07)
« Reply #31 on: November 29, 2007, 12:40:44 pm »
ooh. babaero nga, wahahaha okay lang yan richard, maiintindihan mo din yung mga pinagsasabi ng abnormal mong tatay pagdating mo ng grade 6. buti naman at may up na!
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Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #32 on: November 29, 2007, 03:19:14 pm »
Part 2 - Richard's p.o.v.

Nung nakalayo na yung kocke ni dad, ni-shake ko yung bulsa ko. Okay kse pakingan yung jiggle ng mga coins and yung feeling ng paper money sa kamay ko. Hindi ako sure kung bakit ako binigyan ni dad ng pera. Kung para sa good grades ko, o dahil sinabi ko three ang girlfriends ko. Well, either way, at least mas mayaman ako bilang isang 3rd grader.

Pero si mommy wala syang sinasabi tungkol sa biglaang pagpunta sa bahay ni daddy, habang meron isang babaeng mainit ang ulo na nagaantay sa koche nya. Bawat visit ni daddy palaging ibang babae ang kasama nya sa koche nya. Pag dumadaan si daddy hindi nya pinapatay yung makina ng koche nya. Basta nakaandar lang. Kse palaging sandali lang sya kung dumaan. Minsan minuto lang. Tapos bago sya umalis lalapit sya kay mommy tapos susubukan nyang halikan si mommy sa cheeks. Pero palaging iiwas si mommy tapos biglang magiiba yung mata ni mommy na parang evil eyes an tingin kay daddy. Tapos biglang tatawa ng parang demonyo naman si daddy sabay ibibigay nya ang isang dakot na pera kay mommy. Pero hindi naman tatangapin ni mommy yung pera.

Palabas ng house, ilalagay ni daddy yung pera sa ibabaw ng tv.

Pagkatapos umalis ni dad palaging dumidiretso sa bedroom nya si mommy. Papatayin nya yung ilaw tapos isasara nya yung bedroom door nya. Magla-lock lang sa loob doon si mommy. Hindi lalabas hanggang gabi na. Palagi syang nagiging withdrawn ng ilang araw.

Pero minsan kahit mahina yung Da-Moobs ni dad pag basted sya sa ibang babae eh babalik sya sa bahay tapos tatangapin naman sya ulit ni mommy na tumira sa bahay ulit. Palaging paulit-ulit na ganon. Magso-sorry lang si daddy. Tapos pa0humble effect pa sya na nagmamakaawa na naka luhod. At kung kaya nya eh susubukan nyang umiyak dahil talagang mahal nya si mommy daw. Pero syempre hindi nya ino-overacting kse parang forced and over ang dating non. Pag umiiyak sya yung parang tipong taong umiiyak na na-save sila ni Lord. Pero oras na patawarin sya ni mommy, eh diretso kaagad si dad sa bilihan ng alak. At bili na yun ng alak at tagay na yun ng mgaisa sa bahay. Tapos may maamoy ako na parang weird. Akala ko yosi. Pero nung tumanda na ako nalaman ko na yung amoy pala na yon ay yung usok ng marijuana.

Sweet si mommy. Tunay sya na asawa kse malalim yung paniwala nya sa family unit. At sensitive sya sa ganyan na bagay. Pero bakit naman tinatangap ni mommy si daddy kahit na alm nya na babaero si daddy ? Ewan ko. Pero kase karamihan sa mga babae ay meron silang tinatawag na compassion. Hindi nagiging bobo ang mga babae dahil sa compassion, nagiging mas forgiving sila kesa sa mga lalaki.  Yung tipong capable sila na mas mag try and mag hope na mag work out ang problema ng isang babae at isang lalake.

Pero yung araw na sinabi ni daddy na big boy na ako, yun yung huling araw na nakita ko sya. Dahil mula noon pinagbawalan na sya ni mommy na dumalaw sa amin at. Napuno nasi mommy at wala ng natitirang pagpapatawad sa kay dad. Nagsawa na si mommy na makita yung pagmumukha ni daddy, at nagsawa na rin syang makita ang mga magagandang babae nakaakbay kay daddy. Yun yung huling pagapak ng bahay ni daddy. Yun yung huling linagay ako ni daddy sa lap nya. Yung huling nakipagbiruan si daddy sa akin. At huling pagbigay ng pera si daddy sa akin.

Ngayon na nagtatrabaho na ako naalala ko na nung bata pa ako na palagi kong iniisip na gusto kong maging katulad ni daddy. Isang real man. Hindi yung mahina na walang K.

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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #33 on: November 29, 2007, 06:01:08 pm »
wah. wawa naman si Richard.
damn his dad. he must have had something stuck on his behind.  ;D
thanks po sa message kuya...? kuya johnny na lang.  ;D
haaay. sana naman hindi mahawa yan si Richard sa tatay niyang ala wenta.  :P
next po please! at..
yehey! first ako! wooot.  ;D


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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #34 on: November 29, 2007, 06:23:52 pm »
nice update!

ang bait ng mommy niya.

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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #35 on: November 29, 2007, 06:52:12 pm »
nakahabol din. :]
wow, REAL definiton ng babaero.
very nice Kuya Ken. ((:

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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #36 on: November 29, 2007, 07:00:37 pm »
nice up kuya ken. galing.

nga pala, bakit pala johnny_madrid ung username mo? HAHA. it's my time to ask.  ;)
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #37 on: November 30, 2007, 12:16:39 am »
Thanks for the comments. I'm just revising the next part and posting it tomorrow.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #38 on: November 30, 2007, 09:41:07 am »
 ;D w0w dalawa na pala ung posted up!~ ;D
nakakalokang ama yan!~   babaero  >:(
.....well, as expected!~ :D
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #39 on: November 30, 2007, 10:35:56 am »
ooh. babaero nga, wahahaha okay lang yan richard, maiintindihan mo din yung mga pinagsasabi ng abnormal mong tatay pagdating mo ng grade 6. buti naman at may up na!

Well he was looking back when he was a little kid. Of course the story will revolve around when he is working already and finished with school. And part of the stting at background yung abnormal nyang tatay. Haha natuwa ako sa description mo sa dad nya. Thanks for the comment.

wah. wawa naman si Richard.
damn his dad. he must have had something stuck on his behind.  ;D
thanks po sa message kuya...? kuya johnny na lang.  ;D
haaay. sana naman hindi mahawa yan si Richard sa tatay niyang ala wenta.  :P
next po please! at..
yehey! first ako! wooot.  ;D

Well I didn't want to make the story about his dad. His dad is just like part of the background to Richard's story. Parang pwede mong sabihin na part sya ng setting. I am kuya Ken. As for hindi mahahawa… well read the story na lang. Thanks for the comment.

nice update!
ang bait ng mommy niya.

Well halos lahat naman ng mga mommy mababait diba. Hindi lahat although parang mas marami ang mas mabait na mga mommy kesa sa mga mababit na mga daddy. And this is encompassing worldwide of course. Thanks for the comment.

nakahabol din. :]
wow, REAL definiton ng babaero.
very nice Kuya Ken. ((:

There may be a centralized definition of a babaero. But believe me, there are varying levels on 'babaero-dom'. We just want to explore why does a guy become a babaero. How it originates ? A guy can become a babaero in different ways. And I'll explore a few of them. Thanks for the comment.

nice up kuya ken. galing.
nga pala, bakit pala johnny_madrid ung username mo? HAHA. it's my time to ask.  ;)

Thanks for the comment. Well yun ang username na I created. Trippings lang. It could have been charlie_manila or hector_osaka. Haha. Thanks for asking.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #40 on: November 30, 2007, 12:29:51 pm »
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #41 on: November 30, 2007, 12:32:42 pm »
Babaero, Inc.

The premise of this story is basically… the story of several guys. And yes, they are babaero. Basically we see their day to day life. And we want to see if a guys is inherently a babaero because it is in the nature of guys to be so. Or is it something else, like it is an acquired behavior. Yung tipong hindi sila babaero but was exposed and therefore became. And then those who are not and why they are not.

It is an interesting way to tackle a story. It's on the planning stages. I am still trying to finalize my characters. I don't want to have too many. So I just want a few para we can make the story more interesting and stay within the premise.

What do you girls think ? Do you want to read a story about guys that are babaero. And find out how they cheat, lie, act, and steal a girl's heart. Or better yet, steal several girls heart at the same time. And how they sweet talk the girl. And how they try to avoid getting caught. It is a cool story right ? It should have its comedic moments.

guys are naturally polygamous,

and so are girls. i admit i am.  ;D
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #42 on: November 30, 2007, 01:03:42 pm »
ayan...magsisimula na...magsisimula ka ng maging abnormal! naman, nung grade 3 ka pa masyadong normal ang DNA mo...pero ngayon susundin mo na yung Genes ni daddy mo! >:(

waaahh...Richard, kahit kasing gwapo mo pa si richard Gutierrez....hindi tatalab sa yo si karma! maghintay ka lang.

teka naman masyado akng apektado ;D
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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #43 on: November 30, 2007, 01:18:05 pm »
nice.. nakakatuwa.O0
gagayahin nya kaya Dad nya?

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Re: Babaero Incorporated...part 1 is up finally-11/29...just posted PART 2 NOW
« Reply #44 on: November 30, 2007, 02:14:24 pm »
WOW! I am overwhelmed at the response on this story. Thanks girls. I'm glad you are entertained by it.

Kaya natagalan ng halos mga three weeks yung first part nung story after the introduction dahil ginawa ko na yung outline para mabilis yung pag gawa ng story updates dahil meron direction yung story.

nice.. nakakatuwa.O0
gagayahin nya kaya Dad nya?

Thanks for the comment. Gagayahin ba ? Well alam mo naman the old saying in tagalog...kung ano ang nakikita ng bata sa mga ginagawa ng matatanda ay palaging tama sa mata ng bata. Or something like that haha.

ayan...magsisimula na...magsisimula ka ng maging abnormal! naman, nung grade 3 ka pa masyadong normal ang DNA mo...pero ngayon susundin mo na yung Genes ni daddy mo! >:(

waaahh...Richard, kahit kasing gwapo mo pa si richard Gutierrez....hindi tatalab sa yo si karma! maghintay ka lang.

teka naman masyado akng apektado ;D

Thanks for the comment. Sorry mejo apektado ka yata sa story. Pero don't worry it is fiction after all. Pero I have also included a part na "karma" sa middle of the story. You'll like what happens there. It's one of the funniest parts of the whole story.

guys are naturally polygamous,

and so are girls. i admit i am.  ;D

Polygamy...that can be backed up scientifically. Kaya both girls and guys ay naduduling palagi pag meron ibang opposite nila that arouses their attention. Pero people are only animals. And that is part of human nature. Pero hindi naman lahat acts up on their urges. Pero they certainly do think about it. Thanks for the comment.

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Thanks. As for your request sa next...believe it or not I just posted yung part 3. Read it and enjoy. Thanks for the comment.

;D w0w dalawa na pala ung posted up!~ ;D
nakakalokang ama yan!~   babaero  >:(
.....well, as expected!~ :D

Thanks for the comment. Yeah dalawa na. And right now I just posted the third part. I'm sure you'll like the updates.
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