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Re: Babaero Incorporated.....long update Part 7 up right now 12/5/07...on page 8
« Reply #120 on: December 06, 2007, 06:51:08 pm »
nice story..

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Re: Babaero Incorporated.....long update Part 7 up right now 12/5/07...on page 8
« Reply #121 on: December 06, 2007, 07:29:47 pm »
ang ganda talaga ng story kuya.  talagang may nangyayaring ganyan sa totoong buhay. galing!  :)

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Re: Babaero Incorporated.....long update Part 7 up right now 12/5/07...on page 8
« Reply #122 on: December 07, 2007, 07:20:49 am »
you're right bro/kuya...anyways,i'm looking forward sa update mo ;) keep it up..very nice story ^-^

Thanks for the comment. The update is coming up later today. You'll like this one.

nice story..

Thanks for the comment. Feel free to drop by anytime.

ang ganda talaga ng story kuya.  talagang may nangyayaring ganyan sa totoong buhay. galing!  :)

Thanks for the comment. Well what is fiction nama but a reflection of real life diba. The update will be posted later today.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated.....long update Part 7 up right now 12/5/07...on page 8
« Reply #123 on: December 07, 2007, 07:33:50 am »
ay nyek.kainis si mark. si mark. si mark. grrrr >:(. bakit ba kasi nauso ang pagpikot weh? kainiishhh...chalap sapakin si Mark tapos iatsa sa universe ng sumabog.tignan lang naten kung makayanin niyang makasurvive sa blackhole.  >:(

ayus lang yan Candace, madaming mga lalakweng ewankasi diyan eh...join the club! :D dale. heheh. mga lechugas na lalaki >:(
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....updated Part 8 up right now 12/7/07...on page 9
« Reply #124 on: December 07, 2007, 12:40:12 pm »
Part 8 - Candace's p.o.v.

Hindi ako nakatulog. Madaling araw na at naglalakad ako sa kwarto ng back and forth. I talked to myself all night upset sa nangyari.

Finally, I just dropped on on my bed imbis na mag-breakfast. I was just going to call the office at magsick-call ako. Then na realize ko na wala palang pasok at Sunday morning lang.

Parang gulong gulo ang isip ko. Now meron pa akong migraine, and I can't think straight.

Alam ko naman na I'm too smart for this mess. I finished college. May degree ako from a respectable university. Pero I guess there are just things na hindi nila itinuturo sa babae sa college.

Then nakatulog ako.

Tapos nagring ng nag ring yung landline telephone ko at cell phone ko around 10:00AM. Sino kaya yung tumatawag. I answered the phone, "Hello."

"Hey baby. I am sooo sorry. Please forgive me ha. Pwede ba ako pumunta dyan. Please. Magkita tayo. Come on. I'll explain everything. Hindi mo kse naiitindihan. It's not what you think." It's Mark whining and begging to come over. Grabe talaga ang pagka-kapal ng mukha ni Mark. Huling huli na sya gusto pa rin makipagbalikan at magpaliwanag. Ganyan ba katanga-tanga ang pag tingin nya sa akin?

"Mark, paano nalaman ng asawa mo kung saan ako nakatira?" Tanong ko sa kanya.

Sumagot sya, "Yung card na padala mo sa akin. Nakita nya."

Tumingin akong pataas, "Divine intervention."

Nagmakaawa sya, "Mag drive ka papuntang Ortigas. Meet me sa Mega Mall sa Zbarros. I can explain everything baby."

Natawa ako, "Ipapaliwanag mo ang sitwasyon mo?"

Sumagot ang demonyo, "It's complicated kse baby."

Talagang nangigil ako sa sagot nya. "Tingnan natin ng maigi okay Mark, you lying son of a b..ch! May asawa at pamilya ka. May family ka na nung nagkakilala tayo. You slept with me nung alam mong may asawa kang nagaantay sayo sa bahay mo. Kung may palpak yung memory mo na nakalimutan mong may pamilya ka, dapat mag almusal at sumabay sa almusal ng mga anak mo. Para  mag improve yung memory mo."

Tapos sumagot naman yung makapal na mukha ng, "So, paano yan baby. Hindi ba tayo magkakasama sa Valentines Day?"

I just hung up the phone.

Para akong nalagutan ng hininga. Sumakit yung mga lungs ko. Nag ring na naman yung phone. Si Mark na naman siguro. Pag sagot ko ng phone sinigawan at minura ko yung taong nasa kabilang linya tapos I threatened to get a knife and cut his Mr. Herbie.

Biglang may nag pause sa kabilang line. It was so quiet na parang may narinig ako ng mosquito flying around.

Pero hindi pala si Mark. It was a friendly voice at nagsalita, "Candace?"

…to be continued.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....updated Part 8 up right now 12/7/07...on page 9
« Reply #125 on: December 07, 2007, 01:33:31 pm »


i love this update! nakakaawa naman si candace...

next na ken, cant wait!



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Re: Babaero Incorporated....updated Part 8 up right now 12/7/07...on page 9
« Reply #126 on: December 07, 2007, 01:51:23 pm »
^^ i agree. ganda ng update na to. naaawa ako kay candace. pero infareness sakanya ang strong niya. nagawa niyang sabihan si mark ng ganun. tapos si mark naman ang kapal ng mukha. hahaha. sorry. huling huli na nga gumagawa pa ng palusot. amp.

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Re: Babaero Incorporated.....My question to you readers, please answer. Thanks.
« Reply #127 on: December 07, 2007, 03:07:06 pm »
Thanks for the comment. Astig ba ? Yun nga eh. As girls woud say "dyahe". I know several girls na ganyan nangyari sa kanila. Just finsihed with a bad heartache tapos another bad or even worse heartache happens after a short while. Pero I'll improve the mood and make it better.

oo kuya, astig story mo! hehehe.. danda danda... oo nga, laganap nga kuya yang mga ganyan sa ngayon kaya katakot hehe.. sige, kuya para lalo gumanda... ::)


awww...candace wawa ka naman superb! pero saludo ako sayo dahil nagawa mo pa iyon kay mark...go girl! hmmm...sino naman yung tumawag?...

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Re: Babaero Incorporated.....My question to you readers, please answer. Thanks.
« Reply #128 on: December 07, 2007, 05:58:53 pm »
oo kuya, astig story mo! hehehe.. danda danda... oo nga, laganap nga kuya yang mga ganyan sa ngayon kaya katakot hehe.. sige, kuya para lalo gumanda... ::)

awww...candace wawa ka naman superb! pero saludo ako sayo dahil nagawa mo pa iyon kay mark...go girl! hmmm...sino naman yung tumawag?...

Thanks for the comment. Well astig pala. Pero it happens all over the world din yan. I am writing a dancing club/disco scene where magkikita si Mark at si Candace again. later in the story ito. I am trying to make it interesting and it will be kse I am writing that her friends are going to be there too. Revenge time kaya ? If so, then yari si Mark.  ;D

^^ i agree. ganda ng update na to. naaawa ako kay candace. pero infareness sakanya ang strong niya. nagawa niyang sabihan si mark ng ganun. tapos si mark naman ang kapal ng mukha. hahaha. sorry. huling huli na nga gumagawa pa ng palusot. amp.

next na po kuya.

Thanks for the comment. Actually Candace will emerge as the character with the most strength. I am writing her as a person who will be a stornger person because of the bad experiences in her life. Tapos she'll survive and be tougher and better as a person.

As for the palusot, kahit huling huli na ang guys at may evidence na mismong huli na...magpapalusot pa rin. It's natural. Guys that say they never did palusot...of course he is lying  ;D


i love this update! nakakaawa naman si candace...

next na ken, cant wait!

Thanks for the comment. Honga nakakaawa. Pero don't worry I've decided it's her story too. So I'm sure her life will get much better down the road. I'm just revising the other update right now.  It should be up soon. Kapo-post ko lang kse ng update kanina eh.

ay nyek.kainis si mark. si mark. si mark. grrrr >:(. bakit ba kasi nauso ang pagpikot weh? kainiishhh...chalap sapakin si Mark tapos iatsa sa universe ng sumabog.tignan lang naten kung makayanin niyang makasurvive sa blackhole.  >:(

ayus lang yan Candace, madaming mga lalakweng ewankasi diyan eh...join the club! :D dale. heheh. mga lechugas na lalaki >:(

Thanks for the comment. Wow! Parang galit na galit ka kay Mark. I don't blame you. The story gets better. Ayos comments mo, besides articulating how you feel eh napaka enteratining pa.  ;)
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....updated Part 8 up right now 12/7/07...on page 9
« Reply #129 on: December 07, 2007, 06:19:55 pm »
Mark is soooo annoying. Anyway, I'm curious about that friendly voice.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....updated Part 8 up right now 12/7/07...on page 9
« Reply #130 on: December 07, 2007, 08:46:56 pm »
awwww....bitin... :P

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Re: Babaero Incorporated....updated Part 8 up right now 12/7/07...on page 9
« Reply #131 on: December 07, 2007, 09:06:41 pm »
"Candace... it's me ana"

HAHA. wala lang. nabitin kasi ako eh.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....updated Part 8 up right now 12/7/07...on page 9
« Reply #132 on: December 08, 2007, 01:32:10 am »
ewan ko ba ang tanga tanga ni mark.. magpapaliwanag eh ayan nakabulatlat na yung katotohanan..*wow nanosebleed ako habang tinatayp ko un ah..lol* i like candace..tama yan.. wag mo ng pakinggan paliwanag niya..gawin mo, punta ka sa bahay niya at itlugin mo..bwahahaha. next na po kuya. hehe.
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....updated Part 8 up right now 12/7/07...on page 9
« Reply #133 on: December 08, 2007, 07:39:38 am »
Mark is soooo annoying. Anyway, I'm curious about that friendly voice.

Thanks for the comment. If Mark is anoying, then that would put about 99 % of us guys as annoying sometime during our lifetime. As for the friendly voice, the update is coming up later today.

awwww....bitin... :P

Thanks for the comment. Yes tama ka, nakakabitin nga. By the way I just visited your story here at CC, I didn't know meron ka palang story dito. And it's an interesting one at that.

"Candace... it's me ana"
HAHA. wala lang. nabitin kasi ako eh.

Thanks for the comment. Wow! Anong tawag doon…can you read my mind ? Basahin mo yung update ko. Matatawa ka. Kulang ka lang ng isang letter. Haha.

ewan ko ba ang tanga tanga ni mark.. magpapaliwanag eh ayan nakabulatlat na yung katotohanan..*wow nanosebleed ako habang tinatayp ko un ah..lol* i like candace..tama yan.. wag mo ng pakinggan paliwanag niya..gawin mo, punta ka sa bahay niya at itlugin mo..bwahahaha. next na po kuya. hehe.

Thanks for the comment. Your points are well taken. As for pumunta sa bahay nya at itlugin nya…siguro mga part 25 or so…may makikita kang itlugin ang isang person. And all I can say is WATCH OUT!
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Re: Babaero Incorporated....updated Part 8 up right now 12/7/07...on page 9
« Reply #134 on: December 08, 2007, 07:56:04 am »

Thanks for the comment. Your points are well taken. As for pumunta sa bahay nya at itlugin nya…siguro mga part 25 or so…may makikita kang itlugin ang isang person. And all I can say is WATCH OUT!
hahaha.. i'm so psychic talaga..hahaha.. can't w8 for that itlugan session.. teka..chapter 9..so that means 16 chapters nalang..hehe.
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