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« on: November 10, 2007, 02:01:08 pm »

Babaero Incorporated / Part 1 to Part 9…on page 10…for easy backreading. Click Here
Babaero Incorporated / Part 10 to Part 15…on page 16…for easy backreading.Click Here
Babaero Incorporated / Part 16 to Part 24…on page 30…for easy backreading. Click Here
Babaero Incorporated / Part 25 to Part 29…on page 30…for easy backreading.Click Here
Babaero Incorporated / Part 30 to Part 35…on page 37…for easy backreading. Click Here

Babaero, Inc.

The premise of this story is basically… the story of several guys. And yes, they are babaero. Basically we see their day to day life. And we want to see if a guys is inherently a babaero because it is in the nature of guys to be so. Or is it something else, like it is an acquired behavior. Yung tipong hindi sila babaero but was exposed and therefore became. And then those who are not and why they are not.

It is an interesting way to tackle a story. It's on the planning stages. I am still trying to finalize my characters. I don't want to have too many. So I just want a few para we can make the story more interesting and stay within the premise.

What do you girls think ? Do you want to read a story about guys that are babaero. And find out how they cheat, lie, act, and steal a girl's heart. Or better yet, steal several girls heart at the same time. And how they sweet talk the girl. And how they try to avoid getting caught. It is a cool story right ? It should have its comedic moments.

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Main characters:

Richard - main protagonist, good guy, pero yun nga babaero sya, is there hope for him na tumino ?
Candace - main protagonist, good girl, always finding the wrong guy, is there hope for her to find a matinong guy to make her happy ?
Midori - supporting role, girl with a mean streak, mejo crazy & psychotic, girlfriend ni Richard
Charlie - supporting role, best friend ni Richard, asawa ni Chrissy, lawyer pero gusto maging writer
Chrissy - supporting role, asawa ni Charlie, works sa office, hates Charlie's aspirations to be a writer
Jake - supporting role, best friend ni Richard at Charlie, magkababata silang tatlo, police si Jake at palaging may nightmares
Kelly  - One of Candace's friends. She's an aspiring singer and actress.

Other supporting characters to be introduced.

Minor characters:

Trisha - on of the girls Richard is going out with
Britney - some girl Richard was going out with last year
Mark - ex boyfriend of Candace
Craig - ex boyfriend of Candace
Anna - one of Candace's best friends
Cindy - Jake's fiancee
Sharmaine - Midori's friend who seems to have a thing for Richard
Janet - some girl sa buhay ni Richard
Vibes - Anna's so-called "boyfriend"
Dave Tahid - some suitor of Candace, pero may girlfriend na iba
Ronnie - Britney's current boyfriend
Melissa - Richard's ex-girlfriend and former live-in partner
Victor - Melissa's off and on again fiancee
Anne - mother ni Richard
Junior - half-brother ni Richard at Nelson
Doreen - asawa ni Junior
Nelson - brother ni Richard
Lisa - asawa ni Nelson
Grace - half-sister ni Richard at Nelson
Jerry - stepfather ni Richard

Other minor characters to be introduced.



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« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2007, 02:06:18 pm »

nice naman..sige nga.. Grin
justine nga pala,susubaybayan ko to..

kaialan up nito?
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« Reply #2 on: November 10, 2007, 02:08:58 pm »

I think it would be great. Iba iba ang ways ng mga guys pagdating sa pambababae, and sometimes, kailangan mo pang malaman sa iba na ganyan yung lalaki yan. And...

yes. I still wanna know more Cool
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« Reply #3 on: November 10, 2007, 02:49:53 pm »

 Cheesy w0w, pansin ko lang, ung mga story mo kua puro tungkol sa kalokohan ng mga guys ah Tongue la lang... i think this story's gonna be great... madame kameng matututunan dito  Grin
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« Reply #4 on: November 10, 2007, 03:26:55 pm »



sana true story ito..... Grin Grin

mas na-e- inspired ako lalo eh....

kasi nangyayari talaga.....

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« Reply #5 on: November 10, 2007, 05:36:39 pm »

Kuya Ken, the title was so catchy... Start it please! Smiley
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« Reply #6 on: November 10, 2007, 05:38:20 pm »

haha... i've got my heart broken several times already... this story should have been made several ages ago!!! ^_______^ Lyka nga pala here... anyway, just wanna thank you for reading my story!
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« Reply #7 on: November 10, 2007, 06:39:17 pm »

Of course i'll keep up with your story. Nakakaintriga kaya 'to Cool, kung ayaw mo ng madaming characters, why don't you separate one story from another story? kumbaga hiwa hiwalay sila. Pero iisa lang ang diskusyon ng bawat storya, hehehe ang topak ko talaga Grin

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« Reply #8 on: November 10, 2007, 06:40:31 pm »

Wow. You really have interesting stories.
I'd love to read on this. I want to know more.
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« Reply #9 on: November 10, 2007, 07:05:34 pm »

this'll obviously be another cool story to look forward to. (:
gawa ni Kuya Ken eh. HAHAHA. :]
next, next!
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« Reply #10 on: November 10, 2007, 10:04:19 pm »

ayawko sa mga babaero
pero suportahan ko
pa rin to kuya..

lee nga po pala.. Smiley
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« Reply #11 on: November 11, 2007, 04:21:54 am »


sana true story ito..... Grin Grin

mas na-e- inspired ako lalo eh....

kasi nangyayari talaga.....

 Wink

Well ang masasabi ko lang ay...what is fiction but a reflection of life and the true stories behind them with a few modifications to protect the actual people...diba ? Thanks for the comments.

nice naman..sige nga.. Grin
justine nga pala,susubaybayan ko to..

kaialan up nito?

Thanks for dropping by Justine. I am just doing a little drafting and freewriting for this story. It should be up and going soon this weekend. Sige sana subaybayan mo. Take care.

I think it would be great. Iba iba ang ways ng mga guys pagdating sa pambababae, and sometimes, kailangan mo pang malaman sa iba na ganyan yung lalaki yan. And...

yes. I still wanna know more Cool

Well depending sa klase ng guy ang pambabae rin. Yung approach ng isang guy na supremely confident with himself is different than a way a mahiyain guy approaches a girl. So I'm going to show that here in the story as well. Para we can see the contrast. Minsan naman kse may mga matitino rin ng guy naman. Yung tipong loyal. Pero linoko ng girlfriend. So after ng break-up nagalit sa mga babae. Ay yun ang mga motivation naman ng mga babaerong katulad non. The motivation of revenge on all girls dahil sinaktan sya ng girlfriend nya.

At marami pa. Yun nga ang parang problem ngayon. I have so many characters that are so colorful I can use here. Pero I don't want to have too many characters. Kse then the story will suffer. Pero ang daming klaseng babaero guys I can use.

I hope if you keep up with this story when I start it soon that you will get to know more sis. Thanks for the comment.

Cheesy w0w, pansin ko lang, ung mga story mo kua puro tungkol sa kalokohan ng mga guys ah Tongue la lang... i think this story's gonna be great... madame kameng matututunan dito  Grin

Well tama nga ang napansin mo. Kse pag kalokohan parang mas mataas ang entertainment value and katatawahan. Also pag walang kalokohan baka maging boring yung tipong parang deflated yung story. Mawawala interest non pati ang writer. haha. Well yun nga lang marami kayong matututunan na mga cardinal rules among guys lang na hindi dapat i-share sa mga girls. Haha. Mabuti na lang halos walang guys nagbabasa dito. Thanks for the comment.
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« Reply #12 on: November 11, 2007, 08:17:08 am »

nice. dumadami na ang mga stories ni kuya ah! keep it up. i love readin your stories.  Wink
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« Reply #13 on: November 12, 2007, 08:47:53 am »

Of course i'll keep up with your story. Nakakaintriga kaya 'to Cool, kung ayaw mo ng madaming characters, why don't you separate one story from another story? kumbaga hiwa hiwalay sila. Pero iisa lang ang diskusyon ng bawat storya, hehehe ang topak ko talaga Grin

up ka na kuya Wink

Thanks for the comment. I'll keep your suggestion in miund. Actually I was planning on separating their stories...sort of anthology style of writing with the central theme being babaero.

The story should be up and coming soon once I finalize a few more details. Thanks for your patience.

haha... i've got my heart broken several times already... this story should have been made several ages ago!!! ^_______^ Lyka nga pala here... anyway, just wanna thank you for reading my story!

Thanks for the comment Lyka. No probs it's my pleasure reading it. As for broken hearts, that's a part of life. Sort of a learning experience. Well I'm just finalizing the characters and the story should be up and going soon.

Kuya Ken, the title was so catchy... Start it please! Smiley

Thanks for the comment. Yeah it's a catchy title isn't it. The beginning will start soon, just finalizing some details.
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« Reply #14 on: November 14, 2007, 03:41:06 pm »

Thanks for the very positive responses so far before the story even started. Hope you girls get to enjoy this story. It's gonna be a good one. Thanks for your patience.

nice. dumadami na ang mga stories ni kuya ah! keep it up. i love readin your stories.  Wink

Really ? Thanks for the nice remarks. I already finished one of the stories already. It's the link below. This one is almost ready to start. Just finishing up the little touches to have a good first couple of postings. Para hindi pahinto-hinto. It should be up soon. Thanks again.

ayawko sa mga babaero
pero suportahan ko
pa rin to kuya..

lee nga po pala.. Smiley

Thanks for your comment Lee. Well we don't really like people who are not true to a relationship diba. Pero you should enjoy this story once it is up and running. Maybe get to see what goes on in their mind.

this'll obviously be another cool story to look forward to. (:
gawa ni Kuya Ken eh. HAHAHA. :]
next, next!

Thanks for the positive remarks. This is going to be a cool story. I mean the title has it. The premise is there. Pero gusto ko lang magkaroon din ng story. Parang may susubaybayan diba. Aside from the babaero guys gusto ko meron isang magiging matino ang maging one-woman guy...kung mangyayari lang yun ha. Pero I want to add a twist yung magandang problema...para doon sa titino na guy. Haha.

Wow. You really have interesting stories.
I'd love to read on this. I want to know more.

Thanks for the comment Lissy. I am still doing some outlines on what direction I want to take this story. Kse parang it can just be about the babaero guys going through their motion lang. It can get boring after a while. So I just want to see at least kung meron anong klaseng storyline to add to it.
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