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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 43: 11-eighteen / pics: PG1. :]
« Reply #435 on: November 22, 2007, 10:43:57 am »
nxtie na!!

UP UP UP!!!
h8ng me wont make yOu pretty ..Ü

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Re: It's His Point of View .. / updated: 11- THREE -07 / *PICS on page one. :d
« Reply #436 on: November 24, 2007, 11:38:13 am »
no problem.
note that i'm in the NBSBS. haha


xoxo,
appLe <3

uhm.. thanks again.. btw whats NBSBS.. ahehe.. sorry..


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hay.. andami kong hinabol.. haha.. buti natapos ko.. yee.. nice ups..
up ka na ulit.. hehe.. ^_^
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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 43: 11-eighteen / pics: PG1. :]
« Reply #437 on: November 24, 2007, 06:40:39 pm »
^ang alam ko po NO BOY FRIEND SEEN BIRTH
ewan ko na lang sa another S :D
btw nice story po.. new reader here!! :)
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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 43: 11-eighteen / pics: PG1. :]
« Reply #438 on: November 25, 2007, 02:18:17 pm »
^ang alam ko po NO BOY FRIEND SEEN BIRTH
ewan ko na lang sa another S :D
btw nice story po.. new reader here!! :)

aww.. thanks sis.. hehe..
btw.. im rein..

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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 43: 11-eighteen / pics: PG1. :]
« Reply #439 on: November 25, 2007, 02:53:47 pm »
uhm.. thanks again.. btw whats NBSBS.. ahehe.. sorry..

No Boyfriend Since Birth Society.  :)

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san kaya tumago yung dalawa? at nakuha pang magpicture.
natapos na rin ang kahirapan nila.
party na! I can't wait to see what will happen.

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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 43: 11-eighteen / pics: PG1. :]
« Reply #440 on: November 26, 2007, 03:24:58 pm »
Bump up time. Baka makita ng author at magkaroon ng update.  ;)

now that's romantic. :]
HAHA. you really did that? saludo ako. haha. ((:
if someone told me the same thing, i'd melt too. HAHA.
thanks kuya ken. :]

Well it is isn't it. You're welcome. This is a mellow update you have here. It's good. I actually like the quiet moments like this kind of update, because it showcases characters' behaviors. Like mahiyain (...tumayo balahibo ko), begging inside the mind (..."please please please"), etc.

Plus pinapalayas ka na ng mama mo. Haha. You really got into the story and typed away until your mama wants to throw you off the computer. Haha.
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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 43: 11-eighteen / pics: PG1. :]
« Reply #441 on: November 29, 2007, 07:14:12 pm »
guys, guys, guys.

im sooooooo sorry. T_______T
next week pa po ao makaka update. im really sorry.
i'm having a hard time updating, since our computer broke down. x___x
psh. but promise, i'll make it up to you guys. <3
maybe i'll post next wee.

thans for everything. :]

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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 43: 11-eighteen / pics: PG1. :]
« Reply #442 on: November 29, 2007, 07:36:02 pm »
^

no anicia i don't understand. i don't.  ::)

haha. kiddin'.  ;D
imisshunapatiupdatesmo. :D

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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 43: 11-eighteen / pics: PG1. :]
« Reply #443 on: December 01, 2007, 05:55:23 pm »
No Boyfriend Since Birth Society.  :)



ohh.. thanks sis..
haha.. count me in sa society! hehe..

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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 43: 11-eighteen / pics: PG1. :]
« Reply #444 on: December 01, 2007, 06:08:55 pm »
I'll check on this next week then. Kse you gave yourself a deadline to have one up by next week. Haha. Joke lang. Update whenever you have time. Syempre lahat naman tayo ay busy.  ;)
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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 43: 11-eighteen / pics: PG1. :]
« Reply #445 on: December 05, 2007, 03:31:04 pm »
Bump up time. Baka makita ni "A" at kasulukuyang may update na baka sakali...
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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 43: 11-eighteen / pics: PG1. :]
« Reply #446 on: December 06, 2007, 11:06:21 am »
guys, guys, guys.

im sooooooo sorry. T_______T
next week pa po ao makaka update. im really sorry.
i'm having a hard time updating, since our computer broke down. x___x
psh. but promise, i'll make it up to you guys. <3
maybe i'll post next wee.

thans for everything. :]

~me


awww...sooo saaaddd naman sis!...but anyway its okay sis, i understand po...i'll wait na lang po sa update... :)

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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 43: 11-eighteen / pics: PG1. :]
« Reply #447 on: December 08, 2007, 05:03:28 pm »
UPDATE! yaaay.

*nasa chap 44 na pala tayo. :P hindi 42 yung isang chap. ay basta magulo. :] HAHA.
sorry talaga at hindi ako makapag update. T________T namiss ko kayong lahat. sa lahat naman ng authors na nagbabasa ng story ko, na binabasa ko rin yung story nila (waha, gulo. d:), baka po hindi ko pa mabasa yung mga updates niyo. SOREEEE.



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Chapter 44


“Kahit kailan talaga, ubod ka ng bagal! Ang kupad kupad mo!”

“Eh bakit ba ang kati kati ng pwet mo?! Sandali nga lang kasi!”

Argh. Loko ‘tong si Kuya ah. Papatayin ko na ‘to. Kasalanan ko ‘bang hindi ko maayos yung suit ko? Palibhasa ihahatid niya kasi kami. Kung hinde, nako, upak abot sakin niyan.





“Eto na, eto na!” Tumakbo ako pababa ng hagdan, na halos makabunggo ko na si Manang Loleng.

“Hay susmaryosep bata ka! Kay gwapo mo naman!”

“Gahd Manang, bulag ka na nga.” Umiling iling si Kuya dun sa tabi.

“Shut up, ungas. Inggit ka nanaman.”

“Asa.” Tumawa naman si Kuya. Tumawa rin si Manang.




Pagtingin ko sa relo, quarter to seven na. May 15 minutes pa ako para pumunta kena Yz. Oh well, 5 minutes lang naman papunta don.

“Tara.” Sumakay na kami ni Kuya sa kotse. “Kena Yza tayo.”

“Alam ko. Loko ka, ginagawa mo akong driver eh.” Stinart na niya yung kotse, tapos pinaandar na…





“Hindi nga ba?” ;D










“Hay susmaryosep bata ka! Kay gwapo mo naman!” Whoa. O_O
Same reaction? Hahaha.

“Salamat po.” Ngumiti naman ako.

Kulan nalang, mahimatay na siya sa kagwapuhan ko.
Oh well, ganyan talaga pag pogi. ^-^

“Si Yza po?”

Nataranta naman si Manang, “Ay! Oo nga pala! Upo ka muna! Tatawagin ko lang.”

Tumakbo naman si Manang para tawagin si Yza. Kinalikot ko naman yung cellphone ko. Magbubura bura lang ng messages.





[ psst. ethe! Ű suot m dpat white tie. pra khit anong pliin qn dmit, bgay. ]




Delete.





Teka, ano nga ‘bang suot ni Yza? Malay mo, hindi bumagay yung suot ‘kong white na t-t-tiiieee… SYET!

“Hoy, natutunaw ako.” WOW. :o ::)

Nakababa nap ala si Yza, nakatayo pa sa harapan ko. At… Whoa. Basta, amazing. Ang ganda niya. Indescribable.







Anicia: ang OA mo naman. x______x

Paki mo ba?! Totoo naman ha?

Anicia: kung sabagay. :] yiii. here's her dress: http://flickr.com/photos/partycloz/377133291/






“Bakit naman ikaw matutunaw? Tinitingnan ko lang naman yang dumi sa mukha mo.”

Nagulat siya, hinawakan niya yung mukha niya… “Saan?”

“Wala, joke lang.” Ok n asana eh, kaso biglang nag-iba yung expression ng mukha niya, naiinis ata.

Nako, away ‘to. Think Ethe, think.

“Joke lang ulit. Meron talaga.” Linapitan ko siya…

Sobrang lapit…

Medyo nanginginig pa nga ako ‘eh, pero hindi naman obvious. Tapos lumapit ako sa may cheek niya, tapos hinipan ko.

Namula siya bigla. Feeling ko lahat ng dugo ko pumunta na rin sa ulo ko ‘eh.

“A-ayan. W-wa-wala na. T-tara n-a.” Nauna na akong maglakad papunta sa kotse. Tapos binuksan ko yung pintuan para sa kanya. Pumasok na rin ako sa kabilang side.








“Wow Yza, you look very pretty.” Nakatingin si Kuya doon sa mirror.

Ngumit naman si Yza, “Thanks Kuya Elmer.”

“Psh.”

Tumingin sakin si Yza, tapos nag angat ng closed na fist. “Aangal ka?”

“Hindi na po.”, habang nanlalaki yung mata ko.

“Hahahaha.”





“Ate Yzaaaaaa! Ang ganda moooooo!” Tumakbo samin si Francene, tapos yinakap si Yza…

(Eto naman yung suot ni Francene: http://flickr.com/photos/partycloz/255007459/in/set-72157594336581588/)




“Thanks Francene.” Ngumiti namn si Yza, tapos kinurot kurot yung cheeks ni Francene.

Humarap naman sakin si Francene, “Wow Kuya Ethaaaaaaan! Ang gwapo moooooo!”

Tapos nagtatatalon siya doon sa harapan ko.

Lumapit naman samin si Francis at Josh.

“Wow ‘Cis, kapatid mo, parang alarm clock!”

Tumawa naman silang lahat, pati si Francene.










“Requesting all band members, please proceed to the left side of the auditorium. Thank you.”





“Ohoy, tawag na ako.” Sumenyas naman si Josh na aalis na siya.

“Ba-bay!” Ngumiti naman si Francene.

“Anong babay ka jan? Ikaw…” Hinawakan niya yung kamay ni Francene, “…sasamahan mo ako.” Ngumiti naman si Josh, tapos hinatak si Francene.



Tumawa ulit kami.





“Iba talaga yang si Josh, ano?”

“Iba rin ako.” Tapos inakbayan ko siya. Hala, namula ulit. :P

“Homaygass. Wahahaha!” Tawa ng tawa si Francis.

“Oo nga pala Francis, sino ka-date mo?”

“Onga ‘tol, ‘di m pa nasasabi samin.”






Nanlaki naman yung mata ni Francis, “A-a… An-no kas-si…”

“Hay nako! Your sooooo slow Francis. Tinatawag na ako. Hindi mo manlang ba ako sasamahan?!” Biglang sumulpot si Racquelle sa likod ni Francis. Hala, san galing yon?

Whoa?





Facial expression ko: O_o
Ni Yza: o_O
Ni Racquelle: @..@
Ni Francis: T_T

Hahaha. Gets ko na.

“You mean?” Tumingin naman si Yza sa kanilang dalawa.

“What?” Tumingin naman si Racquelle samin, na para 'bang nagtataka. Bigla naman siyang nagulat. “Oh no, no, no! Baka naman iniisip niyo, kami magkadate?”

Nag-nod naman kami ni Yza.

“Hindi ba?”

“Hin—Oo. Pero. Ah basta. I just need an escort, since iprepresent tayo sa harap.”

“Tayo?”

“Oo. Tayo kasi nagpaka hirap na mag decorate dito diba? Well, they would like to show their gratitude daw.”








“Eh akala ko ba may date na kayo?”

Umiwas ng tingin si Francis sakin, “Oo nga, kaso nag back out yung ulupong ‘eh.”

“At ikaw?” Tumingin naman ako kay Racquelle.

“He had measles.”






Tumawa naman kami ni Yza… “So, kayong dalawa ngayon?”

“Well…”

“Oo.”

“Eh ba’t di nalang si AJ?” Kam to tink ob eet, oo nga 'noh?






“Siya kasi mag maman ng sound systems. So, parang, pagtinawag siya, ihaharap nalang yung spotlight sa kanya.”

“Oh.”








Nagtinginan kami ni Yza…











“WAHAHAHAHA.”

“This will be good.”

“Definitely.”




“Whatever. Tara na nga! I’m like, late na! Come on!” Umirap naman si Raquelle, tapos umalis din.

Si Francis naman, ginaya ulit siya, pero sumunod din…





“Happy Happy Happy Halloween!”

Kumanta naman si josh ng 2 rock na kanta. Hindi naman gaanong screamo, pero ayos lang. Sumayaw naman kami. Halata ‘mong nag eenjoy lahat… Pagkatapos naman non, bumaba siya ng stage, tapos pinuntahan na kaagad si Francene, na malapit samin.





“Buti nalang nauna kami mag perfo.”

“Bakit?”

“Mellow na sunod eh, siyempre, gusto kitang isayaw.”

Hinampas naman ni Francene yung braso ni Josh, pero mahina lang. Natawa naman kami ni Yza.





“Mellow muna tayo mga repa.” Tumawa naman yung iba. Imagine, Racquelle, saying ‘repa’?

Tumawa rin naman si Racquelle. Nagstart nang mag play yung AllFemme.

“Sa lahat ng mga lalake jan, invite your specials to a dance.”

Inaya ko naman si Yza, at fortunately, hindi siya umayaw.








“I see you, beside me
It's only a dream
A Vision of what used to be
The laughter, the sorrow
Pictures in time
Fading to memories…”







Tumingin tingin ako sa paligid ko, habang naka yakap kami ni Yza… Nasan si Francis?







“How could I ever let you go?
Is it too late to let you know?

I try to run from your side
But each place I hide
only reminds me of you
When i turn out all the lights
Even the night
only reminds me of you…”







Si Josh at Francene magkasama, yung mga couples naman magkakasama, may boy to boy pa nga ‘eh. Sh*t. Creepy. Tapo—HOMAYGAS. O_O





“I needed my freedom
That’s what I thought
But I was a fool to believe
My heart lied when you cried
Rivers of tears
But I was too blind to see

Ev-e-ev—Francis?”


NAKO NAMAN, NASA STAGE ANG MOKONG. :D

LHat yata napahinto. Napahinto rin yung mga tumutugtog.

“May I have this dance?” At dahil malapit siya kay Racquelle, at si Racquele ay may hawak ng microphone,











...tenenenen! Narinig namin ang lahat! :D

“Whoooooooooooooooo!” Nagpalakpakan lahat ng tao.

Inabot ni Francis yung kamay niya kay Racquelle… Buti nalang hindi umuiral ang kapride-an ni Racquelle dahil…
































…tinanggap niya yung kamay ni Francis.

“Everything we’ve been through before
Now it means so much more…”



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*hope you enjoyed the update. :] try 'kong mag uppie bukas before my USTET. TRY lang ha? :d

*sorry kung bitin/maiksi. :]




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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 44: 12-EIGHT / pics: PG1. :] **UPDATED!
« Reply #448 on: December 08, 2007, 05:29:27 pm »
maka post muna. nasa store kasi ako. babasahin ko ng maayos mamaya.

that song has been in my head this past week. coincidence.
from those last lines, i think you gave a clue. haha
and ang gara ng dress ni Yza! i love it, it's unique.
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Re: It's His Point of View .. / CHAPTER 44: 12-EIGHT / pics: PG1. :] **UPDATED!
« Reply #449 on: December 09, 2007, 11:33:20 am »
waaah.. ang cute naman.. hehe.. i like it! hehe..
have the courage! go.go.go!

 

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