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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) first story. pls support. :) updated
« Reply #45 on: August 22, 2007, 05:24:57 pm »
hello po.. new reader.. kat po.. i'm going to support this po..  ;)

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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) first story. pls support. :) updated
« Reply #46 on: August 22, 2007, 05:58:31 pm »
i am inlove with your story coz it's english. type na type ko siya sis. Goodluck sa test. hope we can be good friends. >_<

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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) first story. pls support. :) updated
« Reply #47 on: August 22, 2007, 06:53:18 pm »
sweetness!ahaa!nxtie na!

sweet nga ba un?...  8) ano pong name mo? ana here.

awww...
ang sweet naman ni Mr. football player...
hehehehehe...


elyse right? :) haha.. parehas kau ng reply ni regina_lacson.. 

waaaah....sis..nextie na..wow!!!! kacurious naman kasi yung guy...excited na ko!!! ahahah

haha.. medyo matagal tagal kaung magiging curious.. haha..  :P 8)

^weh? naku, 2 years lang naman gap natin eh! ;):);) cgeh, cgeh, hintay ko nalang ang update ah? i'm totally in-love with your story, sis! hehe. super nice!  ::) :) ;)

grabe.. pero wag mo akong tawaging ate ah. ayoko kasing may nag-aate sa akin.. parang 100000000 years older ako. hahaha.. thanks hannah!



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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) first story. pls support. :) updated
« Reply #48 on: August 22, 2007, 06:57:32 pm »
hello po.. new reader.. kat po.. i'm going to support this po..  ;)

wow thanks kat! :)

OMG. I love your story so much! I can totally relate to it. :]] next na please! grace here pala. i'll support this. friends?

i am inlove with your story coz it's english. type na type ko siya sis. Goodluck sa test. hope we can be good friends. >_<

_grace_

ate grace ba? haha.. are you older? anyway, thanks for the support grace! you can totally relate to it? hmmm...  ::)

yup. friends tayo. :)
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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) CHAPTER 3
« Reply #49 on: August 22, 2007, 09:29:52 pm »
There are extras in this chapter. Italics na lang sila.. :) ENJOY! and please do comment. mwah   :-*


CHAPTER 3

“Smile. Heather. You need to smile. Even if it’s hard.” I told my reflection one morning. My arms hurt because my mom beat me, two nights before. Yeah, you heard it. She beat me two nights before yet my whole body still felt sore.

My mom lost the lottery. That’s why she hit me. Never did she win. That is why I always end being beaten up because of a stupid lottery. She said I was a pain and I carried a curse.

“Mom, I’m going. Goodbye.” I said as I slammed the door.

“Don’t forget to buy me a lottery ticket! Be home at six!” I heard her shout.

Oh gosh.

Before going to school, I saw a truck beside our house. “A family might be renting the house beside ours.” I told myself.

When I arrived in our school, all eyes were on me. I suspected the gossipers already knew why I wasn’t with Dominic. Three days had passed since I caught Dom making out with the cheerleader. Dom and I never spoke to each other since that incident.

“I suppose Dom broke up with her. She’s such a bore.” I heard a girl say. “Look at her. She’s so… so… yuck”

I walked past them. I was sorta used to them. No one ever, ever, ever liked me. I was an outcast ever since I enrolled in this school.

“Dom has a new girl friend that’s why they’re not together! Christina!” A guy shouted. My heart sank. Christina was the cheer leader everyone adored. I looked down and walked fast. I hid my face with my long hair from the people around me. 

All of a sudden, I bumped into something… someone.

“Are you stupid or stupid?” I heard a guy shout in front of me. I looked up and was shocked.

Oh gosh. Dominic.

I noticed that Christina was all over him. I pushed him. “Move away you stupid moron!” I started to walk.

“Heather wait up!” He shouted.

I stopped in my tracks and opened my ears to him. He said slowly, “Thanks for the two dull years you gave me. I ran out of enthusiasm. You’re boring. I couldn’t help but be attached to a beautiful babe.”

I turned around. “Right Christina?” Then, they kissed passionately. The crowd in the corridor cheered them as I walked out annoyed.

“He fooled you.” I repeatedly said to myself. “I hate myself”

“Ms. Lancoln!” I looked back and wiped my eyes. It was Mr. Gee, our class adviser.

“Yes Mr. Gee.”

“Congratulations.” Huh? I was appalled.

“Why sir?”

“You’re a candidate.”

“Candidate for what?” As far as I knew, I didn’t join any contest.

“For expulsion.”

“What the…” I almost shouted. I was a candidate for expulsion. As in E-X-P-U-L-S-I-O-N.

He pulled me and showed me my grades. “Look, you got five failing grades.”

“I can stay in detention like for ten days for me not to be expelled. Or even twenty.”

“Your detention days are over Ms. Lancoln.” I felt the tears rush down my cheeks as he left me.

What else could I ask for?

Abusive mother. Fraud boyfriend. Failing grades.

After classes, I went straight to the football field. I sat in one of the bleachers and watched the players as they continued their practice. I smiled as I remembered Mr. Football player. He was indeed a gentleman and I really liked his company. However, it was still a mystery if I’d meet him again.

“Someday… I hope I can see you once again Mr. Football player.” I whispered to myself.

I leaned onto my bag and closed my eyes. The fresh air gave me peace.

“… Wake up kiddo.”

I raised my head only to see a guy looking at me. I quickly moved away. I didn’t realize I fell asleep.

“Hey, who are you? And what are you doing here?”

“Can’t you feel it? It’s raining…”

I was shocked. I didn’t know the guy I talked to, but he resembled someone-- Mr. Football Player.

I looked up to the sky. It was definitely not raining. “It’s not raining. Who are you?!” I started to pack my things and looked at my watch. It was already five forty-five. UH-OH.

“Look. I’m just a concerned student here. Believe me. It’s raining.”

“Whatever, whatever.” I stood and walked away.

“Wait!” I glanced as he ran after me. He almost plunged into the ground. “Ouch.”

“Stupid.”

I ran fast and left him there. I needed to be home by six with the lottery tickets… or else
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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) CHAPTER 3
« Reply #50 on: August 22, 2007, 09:40:22 pm »
oh yeah! nakaka-excite na ang mga pangyayari! next! haha!  :D

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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) CHAPTER 3
« Reply #51 on: August 22, 2007, 09:45:04 pm »
Go Mr.Football Player!!!!!!  :D

Hay nako heather, wag mo na lang pansinin yung mga walang kwentang tao na yan! grabe sila! kung ako sa yo eh binugbog ko na yung ex mo! grabe talaga!  :D

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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) CHAPTER 3
« Reply #52 on: August 23, 2007, 12:23:30 pm »
next na. love the update. :]]
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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) CHAPTER 3
« Reply #53 on: August 23, 2007, 04:45:26 pm »
oh yeah! nakaka-excite na ang mga pangyayari! next! haha!  :D

Go Mr.Football Player!!!!!!  :D

Hay nako heather, wag mo na lang pansinin yung mga walang kwentang tao na yan! grabe sila! kung ako sa yo eh binugbog ko na yung ex mo! grabe talaga!  :D

mr football player, sia nga ba un..? bwahaha..  :P

next na. love the update. :]]

haha.. thanks grace!

readers.. comments please..thanks much.!
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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) CHAPTER 3
« Reply #54 on: August 23, 2007, 05:16:11 pm »
baka siya c mr. football player ..hmmmm ..
nxtie na!

h8ng me wont make yOu pretty ..Ü

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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) CHAPTER 3
« Reply #55 on: August 23, 2007, 08:08:22 pm »
baka siya c mr. football player ..hmmmm ..
nxtie na!

waaa.. oo nga oo nga!.. 

 ??? ??? ???

eh kaso pano pag hindi?

 ::) :P :-X

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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) CHAPTER 3
« Reply #56 on: August 23, 2007, 08:57:56 pm »
omg!!!! kacurious talgah..para ngang siya si mr.football player..ahaha
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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) CHAPTER 3
« Reply #57 on: August 23, 2007, 09:32:35 pm »
Mr. Football Player naman, magpakilala ka naman... Kawawang Hether atleast may Mr. Football Player ka naman! Next na  Kim! ;)
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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) CHAPTER 3
« Reply #58 on: August 24, 2007, 06:29:17 pm »
omg!!!! kacurious talgah..para ngang siya si mr.football player..ahaha

haha.. :)
medyo matagal kayong magiging curious.. hahaha.. :)
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Re: My Football Player... (i__i) CHAPTER 3
« Reply #59 on: August 24, 2007, 06:30:48 pm »
Mr. Football Player naman, magpakilala ka naman... Kawawang Hether atleast may Mr. Football Player ka naman! Next na  Kim! ;)

Ayaw pa ata nia magpakilala e.. :) tingnan mo nga, wala sia sa chapter na to.. :(
haha.. thanks! chaka po ate.. di po ako si kim.. :) ana po here.. :)
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