~Walk Me Home~Finished

[mikhaile29]

okay...kakatapos ko lang po basahin yung story. it took me two days to finish reading it [just like R2_thinkgreen]. dapat talaga 1 day lang kaso kasi, may time-limit ang paggamit ng computer kaya ayun! hehe...hmm, i enjoyed reading it! grabe, nakaka.move talaga. sa sobrang ganda, nagugulat na lang ako pag may pumapatak na luha sa keyboard! wenkz! =p hindi ko na namamalayan nangyayari sa paligid ko pag sinisimulan kong basahin to.

uhm...i was also gonna cite yung mga napuna ni ate "critic_ako"...there were some hanging parts, you know. pero ayos lang siguro, kasi as for me, parang ako na lang gumawa ng storya sa mga parts na yun! [hala eh nu?] =p nah, those parts just let my imagination wander. so parang, ayos na rin yun.

i also have to agree with avie [R2_thinkgreen] again. hehe...madami po talagang silent readers dito sa candymag. i am a silent reader dati [lalo na sa ibang stories] , ayan pruweba na! haha...while reading your story, i noticed that you asked for comments after some chapters...well, i kinda know how it feels pag walang comment sa story mo and believe me, kung dati ko pa sana binalak na bumalik dito sa teentalk, at napansin ko tong story na to, eh di sana isa na ako sa mga nagcomment! anyway, napansin ko lang to sa signature mo dun sa isang story mo and ayun, tinry ko basahin and hindi ako nagkamali. needless to say, you [and your story] are one of the reasons kung bakit ulit ako babalik sa pagbisita sa site na to. nga pala, if i'm not mistaken, parang naiinggit ka sa mga stories na madaming comment na halos umabot na sa ilang pages yung thread nila! i guess, i'd be thankful na hindi isa itong story mo sa mga yun. ewan, kasi pag ako naghahanap ng babasahin na story, i consider the pages of the thread. nakakalula lang pag nakikita ko na umaabot na ng 100 pages, samahan mo pa ng "malapit na matapos" na headline sa tabi ng title ng story. i get discouraged kasi it will take time para matapos kong basahin yun, syempre naman di ba?

anyway, andami ko na po nasabi. sensya na po...hehe...anyway, hindi pa huli ang lahat para hindi mapansin tong story mo. i hope there will still be late readers to come, just like me.

panawagan diyan sa ibang readers! i think you should consider reading this story. be mesmerized and once you start reading it, you'll get the hang of it and will make you want to read more!

thanks kay ms. author for this story! asahan mo pong susuportahan ko yung ibang stories mo. actually, sisimulan ko nang basahin yung "A Part of It"! tc! ^^

[adle]

okay...kakatapos ko lang po basahin yung story. it took me two days to finish reading it [just like R2_thinkgreen]. dapat talaga 1 day lang kaso kasi, may time-limit ang paggamit ng computer kaya ayun! hehe...hmm, i enjoyed reading it! grabe, nakaka.move talaga. sa sobrang ganda, nagugulat na lang ako pag may pumapatak na luha sa keyboard! wenkz! =p hindi ko na namamalayan nangyayari sa paligid ko pag sinisimulan kong basahin to.

uhm...i was also gonna cite yung mga napuna ni ate "critic_ako"...there were some hanging parts, you know. pero ayos lang siguro, kasi as for me, parang ako na lang gumawa ng storya sa mga parts na yun! [hala eh nu?] =p nah, those parts just let my imagination wander. so parang, ayos na rin yun.

i also have to agree with avie [R2_thinkgreen] again. hehe...madami po talagang silent readers dito sa candymag. i am a silent reader dati [lalo na sa ibang stories] , ayan pruweba na! haha...while reading your story, i noticed that you asked for comments after some chapters...well, i kinda know how it feels pag walang comment sa story mo and believe me, kung dati ko pa sana binalak na bumalik dito sa teentalk, at napansin ko tong story na to, eh di sana isa na ako sa mga nagcomment! anyway, napansin ko lang to sa signature mo dun sa isang story mo and ayun, tinry ko basahin and hindi ako nagkamali. needless to say, you [and your story] are one of the reasons kung bakit ulit ako babalik sa pagbisita sa site na to. nga pala, if i'm not mistaken, parang naiinggit ka sa mga stories na madaming comment na halos umabot na sa ilang pages yung thread nila! i guess, i'd be thankful na hindi isa itong story mo sa mga yun. ewan, kasi pag ako naghahanap ng babasahin na story, i consider the pages of the thread. nakakalula lang pag nakikita ko na umaabot na ng 100 pages, samahan mo pa ng "malapit na matapos" na headline sa tabi ng title ng story. i get discouraged kasi it will take time para matapos kong basahin yun, syempre naman di ba?

anyway, andami ko na po nasabi. sensya na po...hehe...anyway, hindi pa huli ang lahat para hindi mapansin tong story mo. i hope there will still be late readers to come, just like me.

panawagan diyan sa ibang readers! i think you should consider reading this story. be mesmerized and once you start reading it, you'll get the hang of it and will make you want to read more!

thanks kay ms. author for this story! asahan mo pong susuportahan ko yung ibang stories mo. actually, sisimulan ko nang basahin yung "A Part of It"! tc! ^^

amazing! just amazing!
i was just having a bad day and this comment came...
it made everything perfect!
 
it's so uber moving!!!

im happy that though i don't have a lot of readers,
i'm blessed to have these kinds of comments from the top of the crop candy girls
thorough and appreciative
that's just so rewarding at best...

i promise to top this story!
 

thanks a lot mikhaile29!

p.s. watch out for the side stories...
i've got quite a few lining up

[eyshiinsane.]

prang kare-kano yung flow ng story.or..binase nio po sa kare-kano ung ibng parts?grbe.ilove it!hahaha.fave ko po kase his and her circumstances.:D

[adle]

prang kare-kano yung flow ng story.or..binase nio po sa kare-kano ung ibng parts?grbe.ilove it!hahaha.fave ko po kase his and her circumstances.:D

yup! this is indeed inspired by karekano...
im a huge huge fan!!
read it for so many times, i've lost count...
this is just modified to be not as dark as kare kano...
hahahahahaha
you know how mature kare kano can be...
 

btw, thanks for reading this!!
one yay for you!

[crazy_sassygurl17]

aw! 

grabe! i really love this story!

love it!

i'm ganna give you 3 thumbs up!

[edzie_015]

Wow. I really love your story. Kahit naguluhan ako ng kaunti sa status ng family ni William at dun kila Jerri at Alfred.

Anyway, the best!

[adle]

aw! 

grabe! i really love this story!

love it!

i'm ganna give you 3 thumbs up!

thanks for reading...
i really thought my story was way buried here in CC...
thank you for finding it...

 

Wow. I really love your story. Kahit naguluhan ako ng kaunti sa status ng family ni William at dun kila Jerri at Alfred.

Anyway, the best!

hahahaha...
the best???
im flattered much my dear...
but really thanks a lot for reading....
 

[dawin_miguel]

Done with the reading!!!!
Bravo!!!

I spent the last 6hours reading this stuff...
A stuff that would definitely amaze someone...

yey!!!!
yey!!!

-Ate Dawin

[adle]

Done with the reading!!!!
Bravo!!!

I spent the last 6hours reading this stuff...
A stuff that would definitely amaze someone...

yey!!!!
yey!!!

-Ate Dawin

thanks ate dawin!
you sure took your time....
 

[RiZa jAm]

hi sis.
I'll read your story after I finish reading yung isa.
 

**madj²⁶

[caca_18]

Hi ateeee!!!!

aun.ahaha. tulad po ng iba, natapos ko rin po ito in 2 days!! wow! ang ganda po ng story niyo. Ang original po ng dating niya.uhm aun. tulad rin po ng sinabi nina ate critic_ako, dun rin po ako naguluhan sa tatay ni jerri, and some other things rin po. pero, other than that, okay naman po yung flow nung story. Sa mga sinasabi niyo po noon na walang nagcocomment, nafefeel ko po kayo, kasi feel ko ganun rin ang daloy ng storya ko, walang nagcocomment:(. pero atleast, ang galing mo ate kasi natapos mo po ito successfully!!  Anyway ate, congrats po sa inyo ng marami!!!!!!! I'll try reading yung next story mo po.

More power!

[aishiteruhachi]

hi po.
uhm, pwede po makahingi ng copy?
pasend nalang po, ira_inigo@yahoo.com
tahnks po

[bloodberry09]

Hi sis! Bago ang lahat, magpapakilala muna ako.

My name is Pam.

I found out about your story because of a recommendation dun sa thread na Recommend/Promote your stories here! and I must say na hindi ako nagsisi sa pagbasa sa istorya mo.

Kung tutuusin, walang bonggang-bonggang event na nangyari sa story mo. Simple lang siya and that's what made it different from the other stories. I like the way you presented the conflict and also the cause of it. I have to agree with the reviews though. Marami kang iniwan na hanging moments sa story. An epilogue would've helped. May mga grammatical errors rin pero madali na lang naman i-polish yun.

Overall, maganda talaga yung story mo. One of the best I've read here in CC. You should really keep writing. I'd also read your other story.

Gusto ko lang sabihin na the whole time I was reading your story, nai-imagine ko si Will Devaughn para sa character ni William! HAHA! Wala lang. Yung name kasi.

Congratulations dito, sis! JOB VERY WELL DONE!

[adle]

Hi sis! Bago ang lahat, magpapakilala muna ako.

My name is Pam.

I found out about your story because of a recommendation dun sa thread na Recommend/Promote your stories here! and I must say na hindi ako nagsisi sa pagbasa sa istorya mo.

Kung tutuusin, walang bonggang-bonggang event na nangyari sa story mo. Simple lang siya and that's what made it different from the other stories. I like the way you presented the conflict and also the cause of it. I have to agree with the reviews though. Marami kang iniwan na hanging moments sa story. An epilogue would've helped. May mga grammatical errors rin pero madali na lang naman i-polish yun.

Overall, maganda talaga yung story mo. One of the best I've read here in CC. You should really keep writing. I'd also read your other story.

Gusto ko lang sabihin na the whole time I was reading your story, nai-imagine ko si Will Devaughn para sa character ni William! HAHA! Wala lang. Yung name kasi.

Congratulations dito, sis! JOB VERY WELL DONE!

your comment was what brought me back here and i am thankful.
and i'm really happy you liked it.
again with regards about the loose ends, im still working on it...^^

[BlackLily]

Hello,

I'm Lily.

I found your story as I was browsing in the finished stories blog. Now here's my review. Your story is very engaging and they way you express the feelings of each character is very touching. Mafefeel mo talaga ang mga feelings ng lead characters sa way ng pagdescribe mo sa feelings nila.

Though as what critic_ako had said may mga parts lang that needs some clarifications like yung ordinary and the status of alfred and Jerri as well as kay Betty kung bakit bigla na lang siya nawala sa eksena. Also I would like to know kung ano ang nangyari sa father ni Will na from being the poor guy that he is bakit naging bigtime na siya owning a nice car and having connections to expose Mer. Ablaza. Ano ang nangyari sa kanya?

Honestly speaking napaiyak ako ng story na to. Lalo na yung part na kumakanta na si Peena. Feel na feel ko ang emotion niya. Feel na feel ko ang paghihirap niya. It made me cry.

And lastly, I wanted to know kung ano ang nangyari after umalis si Will. I maybe asking for too much but hell, I wanted a sequel of this story.  I can't get enough.

YUn lang thanks for posting this very nice story.