Could someone comment on my blog

Not really the layout or anything because I only used one of the photographs I tooked and edited it a bit.
Please comment on the entries, style of writing, use of photographs, etc.
http://grumpybear.multiply.com/ Btw, some stuff are for contacts only (hopefully some of my contacts I have here at Teentalk as online buddies can make comments too)
My comments for : :
http://www.gellahlicious.blogspot.com/I like your torn paper header, I wish I knew how to make that too

The colors are coordinated (pink,green and white)
I think the layout is too cluttered though (so much written all over)
The use of photographs on some blog entries are good.
* I didn't get to read your entries though, will get back to that next time*
overall a 3/5