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At The First Place | bagong link somewhere down there o.o
« on: April 09, 2007, 08:24:36 pm »

At The First Place
by angel_devil

BABALA: Ang pamagat ng kwentong ito at ng mga kabanata ay malamang na walang kinalaman sa takbo ng magulong kwento na ito. Kinakailangan ng matinding pang-unawa sa pagbabasa at napakahabang pasensya para mapreserba ang buhay ng author. Maraming salamat :)

Yesterday can cover today and tomorrow can replace it
A compassionate heart won't leave you
Attention will always be here

Characters:
Danica, Trevor, Anikka, Nadine, Criztall, Jessica, Andrew, Jake

2007 - 2011
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Re: ~At the first Place~
« Reply #1 on: April 09, 2007, 08:48:09 pm »
nice! first ba ako?? next na sis!!!
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Re: ~At the first Place~
« Reply #2 on: April 09, 2007, 08:52:18 pm »
Yes! Ikaw ang first!!  :D

Baka bukas na lang yung next... Tatapusin ko muna yung isa ko pang story...
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Re: ~At the first Place~
« Reply #3 on: April 09, 2007, 09:19:26 pm »
hihintayin ko yung next nito. hehe.
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Re: ~At the first Place~
« Reply #4 on: April 09, 2007, 09:29:13 pm »
huwaaaw! intayin ko ung next bukas! ang ganda! :)
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« Reply #5 on: April 09, 2007, 09:45:46 pm »
at ako... ang first... ay maghihintay din tulad nila!!! hehehe!!!
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« Reply #6 on: April 10, 2007, 08:53:28 am »
Quote from: sayuri on April 09, 2007, 09:19:26 pm
hihintayin ko yung next nito. hehe.
Quote from: inluvagal_08 on April 09, 2007, 09:29:13 pm
huwaaaw! intayin ko ung next bukas! ang ganda! :)
Quote from: norilicious on April 09, 2007, 09:45:46 pm
at ako... ang first... ay maghihintay din tulad nila!!! hehehe!!!
sige antay kayo... ako nag-aantay din  :D  Lagay ko lang muna 'to ...


Chapter 1: Nobody’s home
It’s where she lies, broken inside…

Pumasok ako sa loob ng bahay na tinitirhan ko… Walang tao… galing ako sa labas, nakipag- laro lang saglit… Lumabas akong natutulog pa sila, pero pag- balik ko wala na sila… Iniwan nila ako… paano nila nagawang iwan ako?...

“Ms. Alonzo!”

“Sorry po ma’am…”

“I knew na may problems ka, pero sana wag mong dalhin sa klase ko.”

“Sorry po talaga ma’am…”

Ilang taon na ba simula ng iniwan nila ako ??? ? 10 years ??? ? Not bad… Almost 11 years na rin pala… :-\

“Ms. Alonzo! Get out of my class right now!”

Sungit naman nito ::) … Kinuha ko yung bag ko then lumabas ako ng room… Nobody really cares for me and alam ko na yun… Matagal na… :-[ :'(




Mamaya na po yung next...  ;)
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« Reply #7 on: April 10, 2007, 09:00:33 am »
halah, ang galing mo mambitin hehe.
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« Reply #8 on: April 10, 2007, 09:26:56 am »
hmm... hihi... intriguing... :) I'm fond of reading stories like this.
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Re: ~At the first Place~3rd story ko na?~need readers tsaka comments
« Reply #9 on: April 10, 2007, 03:32:36 pm »
Quote from: sayuri on April 10, 2007, 09:00:33 am
halah, ang galing mo mambitin hehe.

Bitin ba?  :D

Quote from: inluvagal_08 on April 10, 2007, 09:26:56 am
hmm... hihi... intriguing... :) I'm fond of reading stories like this.

ay ganun >:D


“Danica!!”

Oh God >:( ! Kill me >:( !

“Danica! Wait up!”

Hinawakan nya ako sa braso, tinanggal ko yun then I faced her…

“Ano?! Anong kailangan mo ??? ?Ano nanamang mga kaartehan yang ibibigay mo?! Give me a break >:( !”

“Ibibigay ko lang sana sa’yo ‘tong invitation… Para sa party next week :-[ .”

See? Kaartehan nga naman >:( !! Kinuha ko yung invitation then pinunit ko yun sa harap nya.

“I don’t have time for this stupid thing!!”

Iniwan ko sya dun… Oo, kung nasaktan ko sya… IT’S NOT MY FAULT!... Kung hindi nila ako iniwan this wouldn’t happen at all!

Dumiretso ako sa cr… Nag- hilamos ako… Ano pa bang pahirap ang matatanggap ko?!
Lumabas ako then I saw my ex-suitor… Flirting with a sl*t ??? … Buti hindi ko sya binigyan ng chance ::) .

“Danica!”

“Huh ??? ?”

“I’m Criztall, I’m new here. I heard a lot about you :) .”

“Talaga ??? ? Ano namang narinig mo ??? ?”

“I heard that you’re smart and isa ka sa mga pinaka independent na student dito!”

“Let me see :-\ … Living for almost 10 years without any guidance or support from my parents… Sa tingin mo hindi ko pa kayang suportahan ang sarili ko? :) .”

“Oo nga pala :-[ … Magiging classmates na tayo :) .”

“Really? Well, goodluck sa’yo.”

Iniwan ko na sya dun pero hinabol nya pa rin ako.

"Uh… I kinda need your help right now.”

“Huh? Help ??? ?”

“Umm :-[ … Paki-hatid naman ako sa building nung mga college student :-[ .”

“And why would I do that ??? ?”

“Nandun kasi yung kuya ko eh.”

“Sorry, mag-hanap ka na lang ng iba.”

Maglalakad na ako ng bigla nya akong hinarangan… :-X >:(

“Pretty, pretty please?”

Mag-paawa ba naman ??? ? Hay naku!! ::)

“Fine!”

Sinamahan ko sya sa may building ng mga college students…

“Kuya!!”

“Hey…”

"Kuya si  Danica nga pala classmate ko…… :-X ”

Habang sinasabi nya yun eh nag- lakad na ako pabalik sa building namin…

“Hey Danica!! Wait!!”

“Bakit ??? ? Naihatid na kita dito. Don’t tell me hindi mo alam bumalik sa building natin ??? ?”

Tinuloy ko na yung pag- lalakad ko… I really hate my life.

“Danica… :-\ ”

“Ano >:( ?!”

“I just want to be your friend… :-[ ”

“Fine I’ll be your friend… But would you just leave me alone >:( ?!”

“Alam mo, totoo nga yung sabi nila! Kaya ka walang kaibigan dahil dyan sa ugali mo >:( >:( !!”
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Re: ~At the first Place~3rd story ko na?~need readers tsaka comments
« Reply #10 on: April 10, 2007, 05:31:09 pm »
Sis! Xenxia na hindi ko na nasupport yung continuation ng story mo ha na Dreaming Of You but good thing you had lots of readers.. Eto din panigurado at kasama ako dun! Nice one.. Congrats your talent in writing is creatively evolving! Naks! Next na.. Ang tarush talaga laging ng bida mo! Go lang!
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« Reply #11 on: April 10, 2007, 05:52:59 pm »
thank you ate pau!! taray nanaman ba ng bida ko  :D
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« Reply #12 on: April 10, 2007, 06:26:53 pm »
haha, sungit lagi ng bida hehe..
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« Reply #13 on: April 10, 2007, 06:28:10 pm »
^ bad mood ako nung sinimulan ko eh  :D
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« Reply #14 on: April 10, 2007, 06:36:53 pm »
haha ganun. hay naku, tinatamad ako mag-update ng 1st story ko. palagi kasi nasa isip ko yung 2nd story eh.
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