Author Topic: ~Love comes Easy~announcement on p 36,NEWEST UPD8!!! DEC3,08 SA WAKAS UPD8D NA (Read 56614 times)

prettygrace · « **Reply #45 on:** March 19, 2007, 01:18:14 am »

Quote from: airah98 on March 18, 2007, 05:16:57 am

yiiihhhee! yaman mo Gerald! haha...white house talaga noh?! yiikkes..

haha..at susunduin ka pa daw Bhea! wag kang magpa late ha!

hey airah.. tnx 4 supproting my story..

oo nga eh.. sana aq din my white house.. haha..lolz!

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Quote from: kheng02 on March 18, 2007, 11:51:21 am

haha! kilig naman.. naku sana naman this tym maaga ng magising si bhea noh. wahaha

haha.. oo nga belle.. sana mgicng xa b4 sa usapan nilang tym.. tnx 4 reading sis..

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Quote from: inluvagal_08 on March 18, 2007, 02:25:48 pm

SH*T so nice!!!
next na po...
nakakailab!!

huwaw!! may new reader ako...

tnx sis..pati sa comment.. later ung update q.. nga pla ano po name mo??

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Quote from: .sabon. on March 18, 2007, 02:53:19 pm

wahhahaa..
go gerald!!!!

tnx ces for supporting my story..

btw.. go gerald nga!! ahihihi

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Quote from: purple_bits on March 18, 2007, 03:42:53 pm

weeeeeeh! ang ganda po ng story mo!>.hehe! kakatuwa!..

magising nga naman kaya si Bhea ng maaga,..wahehe! baka madamay si Gerald..

yehey!!! may new reader ulit ako!!!

tnx for reading and commenting sis..nga pla..ano po name mo??

hmm.. kung magigising c bhea ng maaga..let's find out..

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tnx mga sis sa comment and for reading my story.. grabe.. nkktaba ng puso.. (haha.. ang lalim).. kung may mga silent readers po jan.. yuhoooooo.... paramdam po kau..para mlman q kung like nyo or not ung story.. good and bad comments are very much welcome.. pls po comment lang jan.. pra lalong tumaba puso q.. haha.. para bumotsog..lolz!

airah98 · « **Reply #46 on:** March 19, 2007, 01:24:54 am »

Quote from: prettygrace on March 19, 2007, 01:18:14 am

hey airah.. tnx 4 supproting my story..

oo nga eh.. sana aq din my white house.. haha..lolz!

no probs ate!

inluvagal_08 · « **Reply #47 on:** March 19, 2007, 06:45:29 pm »

grace pow name ko!! Hehe... gnda po ng story mo! Supportahan ko 2! Gling...nakakakilig...nakakainlab...nakakbaliw...hehe!

prettygrace · « **Reply #48 on:** March 19, 2007, 10:31:27 pm »

Quote from: airah98 on March 19, 2007, 01:24:54 am

no probs ate!

tnx sis..

ipo2st q na nga pla ung next chap.. haha.. at last tpos na ung chap 4.. haha.. ang haba...

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Quote from: inluvagal_08 on March 19, 2007, 06:45:29 pm

grace pow name ko!! Hehe... gnda po ng story mo! Supportahan ko 2! Gling...nakakakilig...nakakainlab...nakakbaliw...hehe!

shockz...tnx grace..

wow..magka-name tau.. tnx sa pagsupport mo..nakakaflatter nmn... i'm soo happy that u liked it..

shopaholic_yana · « **Reply #49 on:** March 19, 2007, 11:28:35 pm »

i'm currently reading the first page

new reader here. btw, love ur story. nakakatwa plus the names, yaya beyonce, etc. haha. love it!

and oh, the socks! pink and wyt stripes ah.

hahaha.

prettygrace · « **Reply #50 on:** March 19, 2007, 11:38:21 pm »

Chapter V

Black Eyed…
Peace!

ATEEEEEEEEE!!! (knocks really hard at the door)

(Bhea covers her face with her pillow)

ATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! (knocks really hard na parang magigiba na yung door…)

Storyteller:

After 10 minutes…

ATE! ANO BAH!!! ANG KULIT MO!!!

(Bhea opens the door habang nag-uunat

)

Ano ba problema mo?!!!

*yawns*

Ate!! Kanina pa kaya kita ginigising!!

Unang-una…tanghali nah! Tingnan mo 7:25 na..tanghali na kaya aalis na ko at madamay pa ko sa pigiging late mo…

Pangalawa..hindi ka daw kumain nung lunch pti dinner.. anong bang gus2 mong mangyari sa buhay mo? Ha?! Pag-uwi d2 nina mommy at daddy malalagot ako dun! Baka sabihin nila pinapabayaan kita! Hindi mo ba naiisip na ako ang papagalitan!

Grabe ka! Pangatlo! Bakit mo ni-lock ung kwarto mo?! Hindi mo naman dati nilo2ck yan ah!!! Pang-apat kanina pa ko katok ng katok d2 sa pinto ng kwarto mo at aba! Hindi mo parin binubuksan!!! Ano bang gus2 mo huh?! At last but not the least…kanina pa nag-iintay ung klasmeyt mo!! Aba!!! Sobra naman yan! Hindi lang ako kundi pati ibang tao dinadamay mo…

[shocks naman..

nkakaspeachless… andaming sinabi.. te..te…teka!

mas matanda ako d2 bat ako sinesermonan nito?! At ano daw?! Malalagot daw xa kay mommy at daddy dahil pinapabayaan ako?! Aba teka! Loko tlga tong “pinking” to!! Nadala ako don ah!

]

Hoy!

(sabay batok kay Mikee) ano yang pinagsasasabi mo?! Aba! Kung makasermon ka para kang mas matanda sakin huh! Loko to!

[oopppsss.. $:-\$ nakahalata..hihihi

]

Aray naman!!! (sabay hawak sa batok nya at hinimas-himas) Teka ate! Yung naghihintay sau.. maligo ka na at alis na din ako!!

Nag-iintay?? Sino naman???

[(may biglang naalala) Bhea… nga pala.. susunduin kita tomorrow…7:15 sharp..

Huh?? Ayoko nga!! Bakit mo ko susunduin?!

Bahala ka! Whether you like it or not! Pupunta ako d2… bye!

Shocks…

don’t tell me si…]

Uhmm..Gerald daw eh.. kanina pa nga xa eh.. sbi q mauna na xa kasi baka malate xa.. Klasmeyt mo daw xa….teka…. ate…

(then laughs hard)

[ano nanamang pakulo nitong lalaking to?!

Aba! Ako ba pinagtatawanan nito?! Teka.. si Gerald.. $:-\$ hala.. anong oras na ba?? (looks at the wall clock in her room) naku.. 7:30 I need to hurry na…

aba! Bat tawa parin ng tawa tong si Pinky???

]

Ate!!!!

Hahaha…bakit ka may malaking black eye?

[black eye?!

Ano nanamang kalokohan yan?!!!!!

]

Ano nanaman yang pinagsasasabi mo huh?!

Eh di tingnan mo sa salamin…

bye!!! Alis na ko ate huh.. ayoko kasing malate eh..

anjan naman clasmeyt mo eh..

♪may bla..may bla..may bla..ack eye chech it out! May black si bhe-a..may bla..may bla..ack eye…( tune of MY HUMPS)♪

[anong pakulo nanaman un?!

(then tingin sa mirror)

]

Story teller:

sa baba..sa living room..

Yaya beyonce! Alis na po ako..ayokong malate eh.. uhmm.. $:-\$ Gerald..ryt??

Uhmm..oo..

Uhmm..kuya.. sure ka na iintayin mo si ate?? Naku…malelate ka tlga… kung ako sayo mauuna na ko sa school…

No.. aus lang..hihintayin ko xa…

Yaya: Teka..

iiwan mo yung klasmeyt ng ate mo??

Uhmm..iintayin nya daw c ate eh… ginising ko na din po si ate.. i'm sure na gising na gising na po xa ngaun...

cge po alis na ko…

yaya: Ok..ingat…

AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

yaya: Teka..

si Bhea un ah!!! (sabay takbo paakyat sa room ni Bhea)

(Takbo kasunod si yaya Beyonce..looks worried...)

[hala.. $:-\$ ano kaya nangyari kay Bhea???]

yaya: Bhea iha!!! Anong nangyari?!

Bhea! Ayos ka lang?!!!!! $:-\$

Wwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!

Yaya!!!!!!!

(nakatakip ang face with her hands while crying sabay yakap ng Makita si Yaya Beyonce )

yaya:Anong nangyari iha….tell me… $:-\$

Yaya……

(still crying)

prettygrace · « **Reply #51 on:** March 19, 2007, 11:59:02 pm »

Quote from: shopaholic_yana on March 19, 2007, 11:28:35 pm

i'm currently reading the first page new reader here. btw, love ur story. nakakatwa plus the names, yaya beyonce, etc. haha. love it! and oh, the socks! pink and wyt stripes ah. hahaha.

i'm glad dat u love it... haha... sana magus2han mo ung mga nxt chappies..

purple_bits · « **Reply #52 on:** March 20, 2007, 12:26:28 am »

Quote from: prettygrace on March 19, 2007, 01:18:14 am

yehey!!! may new reader ulit ako!!! tnx for reading and commenting sis..nga pla..ano po name mo?? hmm.. kung magigising c bhea ng maaga..let's find out..

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Liezel po name ko..wahehehe! bakit naman kaya siya may black eye?.. ang dami namang kamalasan ang nangyayari sa kanya..

panu na yan...pati si Gerald late na din..hehe!

inluvagal_08 · « **Reply #53 on:** March 20, 2007, 10:19:09 am »

ei ate grace...gling
next chappie na pow...
hehe..
hayy...love tlga noh! ^_^

shopaholic_yana · « **Reply #54 on:** March 20, 2007, 10:32:19 am »

i've read the rest of your story.. kakatuwa!

prettygrace · « **Reply #55 on:** March 20, 2007, 02:59:35 pm »

Quote from: purple_bits on March 20, 2007, 12:26:28 am

Liezel po name ko..wahehehe! bakit naman kaya siya may black eye?.. ang dami namang kamalasan ang nangyayari sa kanya.. panu na yan...pati si Gerald late na din..hehe!

hi there liezel..nyc meeting u! uhmm.bout the black eye.. ipo2st q na ung continuation ng chap 5... uu nga..puro kamalasan hehe..

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Quote from: inluvagal_08 on March 20, 2007, 10:19:09 am

ei ate grace...gling
next chappie na pow...
hehe..
hayy...love tlga noh! ^_^

tnx grace!! tnx fro reading, commenting and for liking it.. e2 na cont ng chap5...

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Quote from: shopaholic_yana on March 20, 2007, 10:32:19 am

i've read the rest of your story.. kakatuwa!

tnx yana!!! i'm glad na natuwa ka sa story q..

ara155 · « **Reply #56 on:** March 20, 2007, 03:59:56 pm »

hi ate grace.. new reader

thanks for reading my story rin ah... i really like your story ang kulit hehheheheh...

criz_angel · « **Reply #57 on:** March 20, 2007, 04:07:25 pm »

grace!! hehehe!

nice story! nabasa ko na din! hahaha!

loved "darlington!" hehehe!

keep it up sis! mwah!

prettygrace · « **Reply #58 on:** March 20, 2007, 04:43:04 pm »

Quote from: ara155 on March 20, 2007, 03:59:56 pm

hi ate grace.. new reader thanks for reading my story rin ah... i really like your story ang kulit hehheheheh...

hey there ara!! tnx 4 reading my story, commenting and liking it..haha..kulit bah? btw..opcorz nmn i'll contue to read ur story.. support q xa..promise.. ang nyc rin xe eh..

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Quote from: criz_angel on March 20, 2007, 04:07:25 pm

grace!! hehehe!

nice story! nabasa ko na din! hahaha!

loved "darlington!" hehehe!

keep it up sis! mwah!

hey criz!!! tnx!!! oo nga! i'm glad na nabasa mo na story q.. haha..yeah.. kulit ng magkapatid noh.. darlington.. labshu sis! mwaahh!

prettygrace · « **Reply #59 on:** March 20, 2007, 04:44:31 pm »

1st continuation of Chapter 5:

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Yaya: Ano ba yon iha??

Yaya!!!! (alis sa pagkayakap kay yaya still holding her face and still crying)

Yaya and Gerald:……

Look!!!

(tinanggal ung hands sa face then points her eyes through her pointing finger) I have a huge BLACK EYE!!!

(showing the black eye on her right eye)

Yaya: iha!!!!

Anong nangyari jan?!!!!!!

nakipagsuntukan ka ba or errr may nanapok sau?!!!

No!!! (still crying)

Uhmmm… $:-\$ is that because of the ball na tumama sa eyes mo yesterday?

Yes!

That’s it nga!!! Waaahhhh!!!

Yaya!!! I can’t go to school na meron aqng black eye!!!!!!!!

Yaya: huh??? $:-\$ Ahhh..cge iha…wag ka ng pumasok…. Teka..pano tong kaklase mo??

Uhmm..Hoy Gerald! Bat ka ba andito?!

Dba sabi ko sayo susunduin kita? $:-\$ Kaya ayan…

Hay naku!!!

Ikaw talaga bwisit sa buhay ko eh! Tingan mo to(pointing at her black eye) ikaw may kagagawan nito eh!!

Hindi ko naman sinasadya dba…alam mong accident un… $:-\$

Yaya: teka..hindi ko maintindihan? $:-\$ Sinapok mo tong si bhea iho?? Akala ko pa naman gentleman ka!!! i'm so disappointed in you!

[naku! Cge yaya Beyon!

Awayin mo yan for me!!!! tama! he's really disappointing!

]

No po… $:-\$ actually po accident po ang lahat…naglalaro po kami ng basketball nina Jason at David sa bahay nila Jason then sila po ni kat isa nanonood lang while eating.. then napalakas po yung pass ko ng bola kay David tapos nung nakita kong kay Bhea papunta ung ball sinabihan ko pong umiwas xa but she’s like absent-minded and still eating kaya aun po..tinaman xa ng bola ng basketball sa eyes.. $:-\$

Yaya: ahhh…

kala ko naman kung ano eh.. pasensya na Gerald huh.. naghysterical ako.. aun naman pla Bhea eh.. hindi naman pla sinasadya… ikaw naman pla may kasalanan eh..

[huwaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttt???!!!!

Yaya!!!! Akala ko pa naman pagtatanggol mo ko jan sa bwisit na yan…. a..at ako pa may kasalanan???

yaya!!! ano ka ba!! ok k lng?! kakakilala mo lng jan samantalang ako since baby kilala mo na!!! kulang nlng sabihin mo magsorry ako jan sa mokong na yan eh!!!

]

Yaya: magsorry ka nga kay gerald.. nakakahiya..

[shocks! psychic ba 2ng c yaya??!!!

she knows what i'm thinking!

and OMG!!! ako pa magso2ry sa Gerald na 2???!!!

HUwatttttttt???!

Yaya!!! He’s the reason kaya nagka black eye ako!!! bat nmn ako magso2rry sa kanya?!

Yaya: Hay naku Bhea!

Nagmamagandang loob na nga tong si Gerald inaaway mo pa..

(then looks kay Gerald)Naku iho.. pasensya ka na d2 kay Maria Bianca ha.. $:-\$ teka.. narinig mo naman na hindi xa papasok dba? Naku..mauna ka na at baka tuluyan ka ng mahuli jan sa klase mo.. $:-\$

hindi na po nya kailangang magsorry.. $:-\$ ako naman po tlga may kasalanan eh..Naku baka hindi nalang din po ako papasok.. kung ok lang po sa inyo…pwede po bang dito po mna ako para masamahan ko na rin si Bhea.. kasi kasalanan ko rin naman po kung bakit hindi xa nakapasok eh.. alanganan nmn pong pumasok ako eh xa hindi papasok… (pa-cute)

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