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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(o5: She's Mine)...pls read my 2nd story
« Reply #30 on: January 20, 2007, 09:31:53 pm »
;D pasaway naman si justine.. ang angas... inangkin agad si KC!!  :D ;D

hahahahaha...
thanks po for reading ^^


woOho!
astig toh ah!
next nah!

hehehehe...thanks for reading
i'll update it na ^-^


new reader po.
nice story.. inangkin kaagad ni Justine c KC? toink. :D

wow new reader...thanks sis

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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(o5: She's Mine)...pls read my 2nd story
« Reply #31 on: January 20, 2007, 09:51:43 pm »
Chapter 06: Knight and Shining Armor

Eto kami nasa party more likely hell for me. Let’s say sige marami akong kakilala pero hello hindi ko sila kaclose tska isa pa lahat ng nandito marami galing dun sa dati kong school. Jeez ayaw ko silang makita!

“Hoy aalis na ako!” sabi ko pero dinedma lang niya ako.

Sige dedmahin ba ako...well ako naman walk out talaga!

Teka hindi ko nga pala alam where on Manila is this? Hindi naman Makati? Aaaaah I’m actually lost, kita niyo nga naman lowbat pa ako. Jeez! Super dilim naman dito sa dinadaanan ko di ako sanay para bang may sumusunod sa akin tapos ganito pa outfit ko! Tapos may biglang nagtap sa balikat ko kaya napatakbo ako kaso biglang may dumating sa harap ko.

“A-ano p-po kai-kailang n-niyo?” I stuttered habang tinatanong ko syempre takot na takot ako. 

Mukha palang nila gawd mas gusto ko na lang tignan yung nakakatakot na mukha ni Justine at least gwapo kesa sa mga unggoy na to!

“Let’s have fun ganda mo pa naman!” sabi nung isang lalaki while he’s trying to touch my shoulders.

“Don’t touch me!” sigaw ko.

“Wow pare suplado!” sabi naman nung isa.

“Leave me alone!” sigaw ko ulit while trying to escape kaso wala yata akong katakas dito!

“Sabi nang let’s have fun eh pakipot ka pa dyan!” sabi nung isang matangkad na lalaki habang papalapit na ng papalapit sa akin. 

Aaaah can someone help me!?

“TULONG!” sigaw ko.



JT’s P.O.V


“Hoy aalis na ako!” biglang sabi ni Kirsten as she approach me kaso as usual dinedma ko lang siya. 

Kaya yun nagwalk out siya. Pero naisip ko hindi niya alam tong lugar na to since I think hindi siya familiar dito tska madilim dito sa lugar na to. Habang naglalakad ako trying to look for her, I spoted one girl with three boys surrounding her. Una hindi ko inisip si Kirsten yun pero napansin ko yung suot niya damit.

“TULONG!” sigaw nung girl. 

Teka boses yun ni Kirsten ah! Bigla siyang tinulak nung lalaki kaya nahulog siya.

“HOY!” sigaw ko patakbo sa kanila.

“Huwag ka ngang makialam dito!” sigaw nung isang lalaki.

“ANONG SABI MO!?” sigaw ko pagalit.

“J-justine!” sabi ni Kirsten. 

“Ano to lovers kayo?” tanong nung isa.

“EH ANO NAMAN SAYO?” sagot ko.

“Aba akala mo kung sino to ano may laban ka?” palagay ko ito yung leader kaya yun hindi ko inurungan at lumaban ako.

-End of P.O.V-


Bigla akong tinulak nung leader yata at nahulog ako. OUCH! Masakit yun ah!

“HOY!” may biglang sumigaw. 

“Huwag ka ngang makialam dito!” sigaw nung isang lalaki.

“ANONG SABI MO!?” sigaw ulit nung bagong dating na lalaki. 

Perhaps ito yung knight and shinging armor ko na magliligtas sa akin sa mga unggoy na to

“J-justine!” sabi ko.

Shuckers si Justine yung...yung knight and shining armor ko!? OMG!

 
“Ano to lovers kayo?” tanong nung isa.

“EH ANO NAMAN SAYO?” sagot ni Justine pagalit parang nanghahamon ng away.

“Aba akala mo kung sino to ano may laban ka?” sabi nung leader kaya yun hindi naman inurungan at lumaban si Justine. 

Gosh matagal laban na to laking tao pa man din ng tatlong unggoy na to! May pasa na rin si Justine. Ah gawd what to do? What to do? After some time one on one yung laban, leader vs Justine. Please sana po wag masasaktan si Justine kung hindi patay ako! Pero bigla akong linapitan ni Justine.

“Close your eyes...wag mong bubuksan hanggang hindi ko sinasabi! Subukan mong buksan patay ka sa akin!” bulong niya kaya naman ako bigla kong kinlose. 

Palagay ko nagstart na laban nila. Bakit ba ako masyadong tense...? Takot lang siguro ako kay Justine at sa anong pwde niyang gawin sa akin pagkatapos nitong laban na to! Tama yun lang yun!

“J-justine...ta-tapos n-na b-ba?” I stuttered in tense while saying those words.

Pero may bigla na lang akong naramdaman, isang ulong nakalean sa shoulders ko. OMG ano to!? Kung hindi lang nakakatakot si Justine kanina ko pa binuksan mga mata ko.


“Now you can open your eyes!” may bumulong palagay ko si Justine at nakita ko marami siyang pasa pero nakalean lang ulo niya sa shoulders ko. 

“Justine...” sabi ko with a concern look.

“Next time don’t go away from me!” sabi lang niya. 







O_O









Bakit ba siya ganito? *BADUM* *BADUM* shucks naman tong puso ko bakit ba it’s beating so fast na parang gustong lumabas sa katawan ko. It’s really racing so fast I can’t stand this feeling! Justine bakit ka ba ganyan all of a sudden!? Why!? And whatever man reason kung bakit ko to nararamdaman ngayon I don’t want this feeling! No I don’t wish to feel this!



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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(Update: Chapter 6)...need readers po
« Reply #32 on: January 21, 2007, 08:25:24 am »
Justine to the rescue. haha

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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(Update: Chapter 6)...need readers po
« Reply #33 on: January 21, 2007, 09:30:37 am »
omg.....grabe si justine...ibang klase...haha...kahit suplado....knight ang shining armour paren siya ni Kc...wooohooo...and Kc, inlove ka na kay Justine...uyyyy......lol...next na po..!

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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(Update: Chapter 6)...need readers po
« Reply #34 on: January 21, 2007, 01:35:50 pm »
wow naman..kaka inlove...

sikat ata ang name na justine noh?

next na po...

if you do have some time drop bymy story naman po...tnx!

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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(Update: Chapter 6)...need readers po
« Reply #35 on: January 21, 2007, 04:51:36 pm »
new reader here...
nice story po....
ang sweet naman ni Justine....
 kahit na magpabugbog okey lang.!!
next na po!!!
please read my first story

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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(Update: Chapter 6)...need readers po
« Reply #36 on: January 21, 2007, 07:18:58 pm »
nice ate!!! wooo!!! next ate ha!!! \m/ rok on! :)
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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(Update: Chapter 6)...need readers po
« Reply #37 on: January 21, 2007, 11:16:16 pm »
kakainlove naman..how sweet..haay..ü
next na poh..
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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(Update: Chapter 6)...need readers po
« Reply #38 on: January 22, 2007, 01:13:42 am »
Justine to the rescue. haha

hahahaha natawa ako for some odd reasons...
pero thanks poh for reading ^^


omg.....grabe si justine...ibang klase...haha...kahit suplado....knight ang shining armour paren siya ni Kc...wooohooo...and Kc, inlove ka na kay Justine...uyyyy......lol...next na po..!

muahahahahaha astig ni Justine eh noh??
kaso suplado nga...tsk. tsk. tsk
thanks po for reading ^^


wow naman..kaka inlove...

sikat ata ang name na justine noh?

next na po...

if you do have some time drop bymy story naman po...tnx!


hahahaha sikat ba?? siguro nga...kekeke
ah sis what's the title of your story??
when i get the time i'll read it
thanks po for reading mine ^^


new reader here...
nice story po....
ang sweet naman ni Justine....
 kahit na magpabugbog okey lang.!!
next na po!!!

hi there sis...
yay may new reader ako ^^
thanks po for reading!~


nice ate!!! wooo!!! next ate ha!!! \m/ rok on! :)

hi there sis
thanks poh for reading
sige i'll update it soon as i can ^^


kakainlove naman..how sweet..haay..ü
next na poh..

hahahaha nakakainlove nga siguro...
sis thanks poh for reading ^^

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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(Update: Chapter 6)...need readers po
« Reply #39 on: January 22, 2007, 11:54:54 pm »
XeT! nice onE to!
nexterz nah!

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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(Update: Chapter 6)...need readers po
« Reply #40 on: January 23, 2007, 05:35:49 am »
Chapter 07: Boyfriend?


Napadpad kami sa house ko tapos this time ako naman nagdrag sa kanya papasok. Alam niyo nakakaloka kasama tong lalaking to. After all that happened tahimik lang, ni hindi mo man matanong kung okay lang ba siya or what was all that about. He’s really so MYSTERIOUS!

“Ms. Kirsten!” sabi nung yaya ko.

“Ate naman eh Kc na lang po!” sabi ko with a smile.

“O sige na nga Kc pinamili ka ng mom mo ng bagong damit, nasa taas na sa room mo!” sabi niya kaya yun nalungkot ako though iniiwasan kong makita ni Justine yung all of a sudden sad looks ko.

“Hindi bagay sayo yung sad looks na yan!” bulong niya.

“Che!” sabi ko pagalit habang tinutulak siya paupo sa sofa. 

In fairness magaling tong makiramdam at magaling din yata tong makabasa ng iniisip. See isn’t he so weird?

“Wag ka nang malungkot Kc!” sabi naman ng yaya ko. 

“Don’t worry yaya sanay naman po ako eh! Parang si daddy sa isang taon yata once or twice ko lang siya makikita kung hindi lang ako magchrichristmas dun sa Australia hindi ko pa siya makakasama ng matagal eh! Si mommy naman madalang ko lang siyang makita pagnandito siya... hindi man ako masyadong sanay noh!?” sabi ko forgetting about Justine. 

“Sige na nga masyadong kang malungkot may good news ako...yung favorite and love mong cousin uuwi na!” 

YAY!

“Talaga yaya?? Kailan bukas? This week? Next week? Yaya naman eh namimitin!” sabi ko with a smile. 

Napakamoody ko rin noh parang si Justine. Hahahaha

“Ahem!”

Shucks nga pala!

“Mauna na po ako!” sabi niya patayo pero tinulak ko siya paupo ulit.

“Yaya pakisabi naman po kay Ate Lyn na bigyan po ng drinks and any desserts yung guest ko... *tapos tinignan si Justine* dyan ka lang kukunin ko yung first aid kit!” sabi ko sabay takbo para hanapin yung first aid kit.

Nung nahanap ko na bago pa man ako makabalik sa living room.

“Uy Kc gwapo ng lalaking kasama mo...boyfriend mo?”

Jeez yaya NO!

OF COURSE NOT! Yaya talaga!” sabi ko sabay pasok sa living room.

Hay naku tama bang matulog!? Pero sige pang-inis kinuha ko yung alcohol and cotton then slowly, slowly pinahid ko dun sa may pasa niya sa face.

“D@r.n!” sigaw niya ng konti. 

“Masakit noh? Tama ba kasing makipaglaban sa mga unggoy na yun?” sabi ko habang linilinis yung mga sugat niya.

“Sana pala iniwan na lang kita dun eh noh para hindi ako nagtamo ng mga pasa at sugat eh noh!” sabi niya. 

Aish minsan nakakainis siyang kausap!

“Oo nga pala THANK YOU!” sabi ko na mukang inis pa ako sa kanya kahit siya na tong nagmagandang loob na iligtas ako.

“Eh bat inis ka pa yata?” sabi niya with one eye-brow raise and a hint of cold tone.

HINDI PO!” sabi ko.

“Buti naman!” sabi niya. 

Tong tao na to hindi ko talaga siya magets. Masyadong emotionless yung face kaya hindi mo alam kung anong nararamdaman niya ni hindi mo man lang malaman kung anong iniisip niya kahit konting hint wala eh!

“Wag mo akong masyadong tignan baka malusaw ako!” 

Gosh!

“How I wish!” bulong ko.

“Ano kamo?” sabi niya parang galit.

“Excuse Kc pero may tawag ka sa phone!” 

sino naman kaya?

“Sige una na ako!” sabi ni Justine habang palakad na siya palabas ng pinto namin.

“J-justine!” sabi ko tumingin naman siya pero with one eye-brow raised. 

Sarap tanggalan ng eye-brow tong lalaking ito!

“Thanks nga pala ulit!” sabi ko at yung tinignan lang niya ako at tska lumabas na rin. 

Hindi pa siya sira nun sa lagay na yun!?

Eh yun na nga tumawag si Colleen para makibalita about the party and all tska naikwento ko na rin yung nangyari that involves me and Justine sa kanya. Kaya ayun kinabukasan sa school, aba ang aga yata ng beauty ko. Naglakadlakad muna ako at napadpad ako sa auditorium, nandun yung piano kaya yun sinubukan kong magplay ng song tagal ko na rin kasing hindi nakakapagplay ng piano after what had happened. Sa kalagitnaan ng pagtugtog ko napansin ko may nanunood sa akin kaya napatingin ako.


“I didn’t know you could play the piano!” sabi ni Justine.

“Ah to sinusubukan ko lang!” sabi ko with an embarrassed smile.

“Tuloy mo magandang pakinggan! Alam ko gusto rin marinig ni Jt the rest of the song!” sabi ni Daniel. 

Weird bakit bigla na lang sila sumusulpot.
 
“Sorry nakalimutan ko na!” sabi ko while going down the stage.

“Yeah right!” sabi ni Justine. 

Gosh ano kayang problema niya!?

“Hiramin ko lang best friend ko ah! Sige una na kami!” sabi ni Colleen habang kinaladkad niya ako palabas ng auditorium.



“KC don’t you wanna give Justine a chance?”

EH?

“Bat mo naman yan natanong? Eh hindi man kami close nung tao na yun. Tska malabong maging kami nun...isang weird, mysterious and heartthrob tska isang...” hindi ko na naituloy.

“Isang maganda, matalino, mayaman at crush ng bayan...hindi ba perfect couple?” 

Sis naman eh!

“Pero ayoko ng perfect... tska isa pa love isn’t on my mind yet. Hindi pa ako handang magmahal...I don’t wanna love at this time, place and age!” sabi ko while palakad kami sa room namin.

“Pero sis even though you don’t want love, love will be the one looking for you and your match! You may not want love at this time, place and age...pero as you know and I know...” sabi niya though...

“Love comes when we least expected!” sabi naming pareho while napag-isip naman ako.


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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(Update: Chapter 6)...need readers po
« Reply #41 on: January 23, 2007, 06:19:29 am »
riiiiighhhttt...tama si colleen...“Love comes when we least expected” :D.....next na po..!

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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(o7: Boyfriend?)...need readers po
« Reply #42 on: January 23, 2007, 02:12:37 pm »
grbeh naman c justine!! gwapo kaya lang...bad boy effect xa..

niweiz..new reader po ako dito..ganda ng story ;)

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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(o7: Boyfriend?)...need readers po
« Reply #43 on: January 23, 2007, 04:14:04 pm »
wow...ganda ng story mo sis....

gusto ko ujng line ni justine na

back-off she's mine,,,,how sweet!!!.

next na sis!!
Secretly On  :)
http://www.candymag.com/teentalk/index.php/topic,189854.0.html
my story. basahin niyo na po. salamat.

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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(o7: Boyfriend?)...need readers po
« Reply #44 on: January 23, 2007, 04:17:28 pm »
wow...ganda ng story mo sis....

gusto ko ujng line ni justine na

back-off she's mine,,,,how sweet!!!.

next na sis!!
Secretly On  :)
http://www.candymag.com/teentalk/index.php/topic,189854.0.html
my story. basahin niyo na po. salamat.

 

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