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++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(The End)++
« on: January 07, 2007, 07:48:55 AM »
HI po keila here at may bago po akong story...hehehe
nasa mood lang gumawa ng new story,, bored kasi ako kaya yun nakaisip ako ng mga ideas for a new story  ;D
sana po support niyo,,, and please comment!~

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Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk



Poster by ah-sheh



Love comes when we least expected.
Don’t go looking for love; kasi love will be the one looking for you…
It’ll come not on the time, day and place you’ve expected it to come,
And not even to the person you want it to be;
Dumarating na lang ito by surprise...


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comments po,, pls support tska dapat ko po bang icontinue??
« Last Edit: May 28, 2007, 10:38:10 AM by cutie_donghae »

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it looks interesting to me...

tuloy mo yan sis!

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"Some pages turned, some bridges burned but there were lessons learned."

pls read my first story..

http://www.candymag.com/teentalk/index.php/topic,136831.0.html

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Wow hi there sis vel...
first reader kita..thanks ^^
sorry kung crappy tong chapter na 'to T_T

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Chapter 01: First Encounter

Today was no ordinary day dahil pasukan na ulit after at least two months of having summer vacation. And guess what meaning makikita ko na ulit best friend kong si Colleen Sy. Oo nga pala name is Kirsten Cassandra Madrigal. Tawag ng best friend ko sa akin KC, others call me Kirsten, Cassie or simply KC din. I’m 18 years old sophomore student.

“OMG KC!” sigaw ng best friend ko saktong pagbaba ko ng car namin.

“Colleen!” sabi ko with a smile habang papalapit kaming sa isa’t isa.

“KC guess what…?” sabi ni Colleen.

“What?” tanong ko naman habang papasok kami ng room naming.

“Alam mo yung famous heartthrob na si Justine Tan from High School? Dito pala yung school nila!” sabi ni Colleen with a hint of happiness.

“And so?” tanong ko naman sa kanya without any care.

“Hoy siya yata ang pinakagwapong lalaki dito sa school!” 

Hay naku si sis talaga isa rin pala siya sa maraming girls na patay na patay dun sa Justine Tan na yun. I’ve been hearing his name so many times sabi nila he’s such a hottie pero di ko pa siya nakikita. Though sabi ng iba he’s mean, cold, scary and conceited. Eto pa wala ni isang girl na sineryoso yun tska siya at yung grupo niya eh kinatatakutan ng marami, ewan ko lang kung bakit. Palagay ko he has this complete bad boy image kaya patay na patay lahat ng girls except ME! Pero AYAW ko siyang makabangga nakakatakot daw siya eh. Hehehehe

“Earth calling KC…linilipad na naman yata utak mo sis!” sabi ni Colleen.

“Ah sis labas muna ako para naman maging familiar ako sa school natin!” sabi ko.

“Gusto mo samahan kita!?” sabi ni Colleen though I signalled No to her kaya yun lumabas akong mag-isa. 

Actually hindi naman dapat kami sa school na to mag-aaral ni Colleen. Dahil may nangyari lang sa past school kaya lumipat ako then ayaw maiwan ni Colleen doon kaya sumunod siya. Isa pa nandito kuya ni Colleen kaya ok lang din kaya she’s already familiar of this place.

Teka nasaan na nga ba ako? OMG I’m lost! TT_TT Ah may paparating siguro naman matutulungan niya ako for directions.

“Excuse me!” sigaw ko kaso suplado hindi ako pinansin. 

“Excuse me!” sigaw ko ulit kasi naman siya lang chance ko para makabalik sa class ko kaya naman ako na lumapit.


“Leave me alone!?” sigaw niya in a hint of cold and scary tone. 

Gosh katakot siya! Parang kung pwde lang kainin ka niya ng buhay!

“Teka!” sabi ko and this time feeling ko naiirita na talaga siya sa akin.

“Wala akong panahon sa mga taong tulad mo...kung pwde umalis ka na sa harapan ko!” sabi niya as he walks away. Aba nanghahamon yata siya ng away! 

HOY wala rin akong panahon sa yo kaso kailang ko lang makabalik sa room ko kaso HINDI ko kasi alam kung saan yung room 2-1!” sabi ko pasigaw kasi I’m so upset and this time he stops to take a look at me and now I look at him. 

Gosh gwapo siya kaso sama ng ugali!

“Mukha ba AKONG tanungan ng directions? Isa pa wala ni isang babae ang nakuhang sumigaw sa akin... magdusa ka kung hindi mo alam pabalik sa room niyo!” sabi niya as he walks away. 

GOSH sarap patayin nung lalaking yun! Ano kaya problema niya...kala mo kung sino siyang naghahari-harian dito sa school na to! Aish sarap talagang patayin at umpugin sa pader ulo niya! Argh what a day! 


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comments po...sorry crappy chap siya TT_TT sana may new reader po,, hehehe
tska tuloy ko pa po ba to??
« Last Edit: September 08, 2008, 05:21:08 PM by cutie_donghae »

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hi ate keila.....new story....hehe...suppport ko dn to....may bago na nman akong aabangan...yey!!! :D.....and nice start pala...hehe...ummm...cno kaya ung mayabang na guy na un...??i think that was justine tan....hehe...guess ko lang p0 un ha...hehe....next na p0..!

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hi poh!

i'll support this  ;)

next na poh  ;)

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new reader!
i like it! next nah!

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hi ate keila.....new story....hehe...suppport ko dn to....may bago na nman akong aabangan...yey!!! :D.....and nice start pala...hehe...ummm...cno kaya ung mayabang na guy na un...??i think that was justine tan....hehe...guess ko lang p0 un ha...hehe....next na p0..!

Hi sis thanks sa pagsupport ng two stories ko...
dalawa na aabangan mo...hehehe

hi poh!

i'll support this  ;)

next na poh  ;)


Hi po...thanks sa pagsupport na po pala i read yours,, ganda talaga ^^

new reader!
i like it! next nah!

wow thanks sa pagbasa mo ng story ko...
i'll update soon baka maya-maya ^^

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Sorry po na late ako ng update T_T

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Chapter 02: JT


After nun dumating kuya ni Colleen na si Kuya Craig kaya nakabalik ako sa room namin. Well boring yung day na to since beginning palang school kaya ayun natapos rin yung isang araw, oo nga pala nakuha na namin locker number namin kaso hindi kami pareho ng area ni Colleen. Oh well straight akong umuwi sa house after nun.

“Oh Kirsten nakauwi ka na pala!” sabi ng mom ko as I approach her and gave her a kiss in the cheeks.

“Kararating ko lang po!”
 
“So musta school?” tanong ng mom ko.

“Ok lang...at least nandun si Colleen tska si Kuya Craig, okay naman ako!” sabi ko.

“Well that’s good...sige anak pahinga ka na!” sabi ng mom ko. 

Tapos nun umakyat na ako, nagpahinga sandali then naligo and then nagsign-in ako sa msn at may new contact ako...hmmm sino kaya yun?

JT: wassup?
Cute_kcm: hu u?
JT: dude wla kong time makipaglokuhan sayo!
Cute_kcm: excuse me hndi ako boy...!
JT: sino ka?
Cute_kcm: Eh kaw sino ka?
JT: sagutin mo tanong ko!
Cute_kcm: KC...kaw?
JT: KC? Nickname ba yun or name?
Cute_kcm: anong palagay mo?
JT: ano nga eh!??

Aish wala tong pasensya...naalala ko tuloy yung lalaking nakasalubong ko kanina. Pareho yata sila ng ugali! Shucks bakit ba yung day ko puro na lang bad boys nakakaencounter ko!?

Cute_kcm: Kirsten Cassandra...ok na?
JT: school?

Ano ito interrogation?

Cute_kcm: bat kailangan mo pang malaman?
JT: SABI NANG WAT SCHOOL MO!

Shucks what a temper kahit sa chat!

Cute_kcm: OB International...ei wat name mo at wat school ka nagaaral?


JT cannot reply because he/she seems to appear offline.

What the...tama bang mag-offline? Aish may similarity talaga yung boy kanina tska tong nakachat ko! Pareho silang may temper...gosh! Teka kanino niya nakuha email address ko!? Omg this is starting to freak me out!


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sorry crappy po siya...tuloy ko pa po ba?? thanks sa mga nagreply sa chapter 01 ^^
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weh...i think i know that guy....ummm...that was Justin Tan ayt??dba Jt un so yeah...hehe...!!!!tp0s pareho pa ng ugali soooo un na nga....lol.....san nman kaya nia nakuha ung email add ni Kirsten?? ???


ate keila. nice start p0...hehe.....continue mo po....hehe...next na plz..!!!! :)

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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(o2: JT)...pls read my 2nd story
« Reply #9 on: January 09, 2007, 10:34:35 PM »
nice start sis..c justin un..hahah...tp0s the temper pa..dpat ndi mo agd bngay eadd mo kc..hehe..anyway, next na poh
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weh...i think i know that guy....ummm...that was Justin Tan ayt??dba Jt un so yeah...hehe...!!!!tp0s pareho pa ng ugali soooo un na nga....lol.....san nman kaya nia nakuha ung email add ni Kirsten?? ???


ate keila. nice start p0...hehe.....continue mo po....hehe...next na plz..!!!! :)


hahahaha, thanks sa comment...
i'll soon post ^^

nice start sis..c justin un..hahah...tp0s the temper pa..dpat ndi mo agd bngay eadd mo kc..hehe..anyway, next na poh

heheh hi sis thanks poh for reading mah story
post ko na po next soon... XD

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Re: ++Falling In Love to a Mean Jerk++(o2: JT)...pls read my 2nd story
« Reply #11 on: January 16, 2007, 05:38:59 AM »
Sorry po my internet died on me kaya nalate ang update ko...
im really sorry  :'( :'( :'( :'(

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Chapter 03: Meeting the Mean Jerk

The following day pumasok na ako sa school, pumuntang locker area to put some of my stuff tapos paakyat na ako ng room ko...hehe hindi na ako naliligaw tama ba namang ikutin tong buong school over and over kahapon paano hindi ko mamememorize. Habang paakyat ako sa stairs may nakabanga ako...

“aaaaaaaaaaaaaah!” sigaw ko kasi naman mahuhulog na ako.

Bakit naman kasi hindi marunong tumingin sa dinadaanan tong tao na to eh! Kaso good thing he caught me kaya yun I’m all over him.


“HINDI KA BA MARUNONG TUMINGIN SA DINADAANAN MO?!” sigaw ko sa taong to.

And that’s the time tinignan ko siya while best friend ko and palagay ko friends niya eh saktong dumating din.

“IKAW?” sigaw ko dun sa boy kaso wala siyang reaction he just stared at me. So happen siya yung super conceited na boy na nakabangga ko rin kahapon sa hallway. Yung super suplado na boy! 

“OMG KC!” sigaw ni Colleen. 

Sis tama bang isigaw name ko? Pero pareho kaming umayos ng tayo at kinuha ko yung nahulog kong gamit, grabe naman kung alam ko rin lang na muntik akong mahuloh sana hindi na lang ako nagheels!

“Ikaw si KC? Kirsten Cassandra?” tanong nung isang lalaki sa tabi nung boy na nakasave at nakabangga sa akin.

“Yea...sino ka?” tanong ko naman.

“Wow naman pare di tayo kilala! Amazing!” sagot pa nung isang boy.

Sheesh di ko nga kayo kilala what’s amazing with that? Bakit hindi na lang kayo magpakilala kasi...dami niyo pang satsat! Well it doesn’t really bother me since wala rin akong time sa mga taong tulad nila.
 
 
“S-sis...” bulong ni Colleen parang natatakot well nakakatakot naman kasi sila eh. 

Pero dahil I just hate the boy that saved me and his group kaya I’m pulling an attitude here. Argh nakakakulo kasi sila ng dugo eh bakit kasi naman sa lahat pa ng taong makakabangga ko bakit SIYA uli!??

“What’s amazing with that eh hindi ko nga kayo kilala well I don’t even bother knowing who you are...so don’t waste your time telling me! Tara na sis!” sabi ko habang dikit na dikit sa akin si Colleen kala mo nakita ng multo sa takot. 

Pero habang papalayo na kami, may biglang sumigaw na kaya napalingon kami ni Colleen.

“Kirsten Cassandra...JT nga pala...remember that name!” sigaw nung si JT while he and his group went away. 

OMG! OMG! Siya…siya yung kachat ko. O_O OH MY GAWD!

“S-sis...siya...siya si Justine Tan na pinaguusapan ng lahat...di...di ko alam di mo pala siya kilala!” sabi ni Colleen.

“OH MY GAWD...siya...siya si JUSTINE TAN!?” Kaya naman pala napakamean niya, tapos kung makapagsalita hari niya tong school...jeez I hate those type of people more likely I JUST HATE JUSTINE TAN!   

“Yup isn’t he a total hottie?” sabi ni Colleen.

“Hoy kanila lang takot ka sa kanya now you’re daydreaming...jeez!”

Kainis lang talaga grupo nung mokong na yun.

“Tska yung dalawa kanina sina Aaron and Daniel yun! Talagang perfect yung group nila noh?” sabi ni Colleen. 

Though bigla na lang parang kabute dumating grupo ng mga maldita as you can say.

“Hoy Kirsten Madrigal stay away from my Justine...he’s mine so back-off you bit.ch!” sabi ni Nicole as she and her group flips their hair. 

Konti na lang hinila ko para nasaktan sila eh kala mo kung sino! Talagang bagay yung dalawang yun kung umasta parang kayang-kaya nila lahat ng tao pero! And FYI wala akong balak agawin yung Justing Tan na yun kung gusto niya sa kanya na!


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should i continue?? sorry nga po pala sa super late update TT_TT
« Last Edit: September 08, 2008, 05:23:54 PM by cutie_donghae »

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 ;D nice!! danda~~ Go Kirsten!! hehe  ;D tapang  ;D
i miss you.

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;D nice!! danda~~ Go Kirsten!! hehe  ;D tapang  ;D

hahahaha...pero hanggang kailan kaya siya magiging matapang??
pero thanks po for reading and i love your comment ^^

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haayy...grabe....dumadami na talaga mga epal at feelers....lol.....at si NICOLE na un......tinawag pa nya si Kirsten na b!tc*.....what the hell??....baliktad kaya un....baka siya ung b!tc*.....geeeezz...next na p0..!!!

 

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