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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #45 on: December 09, 2006, 03:11:45 pm »
Next na sis! ;)

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #46 on: December 09, 2006, 03:55:34 pm »
Next na sis! ;)

maybe later. bahala na. lol.
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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #47 on: December 09, 2006, 04:37:58 pm »
woah, gnda naman ng story. zen and karl are cute. Hahahaha.
nice story.

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #48 on: December 09, 2006, 04:52:44 pm »
woah, gnda naman ng story. zen and karl are cute. Hahahaha.
nice story.

Ahaha. Thanks sis! Got their pics from fster lang ehh. Oh dba? At least we have the thought na may nabubuhay na ganun ka cute. Lol. =P
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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #49 on: December 09, 2006, 04:53:47 pm »
ala pa rin  :D
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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #50 on: December 09, 2006, 06:12:17 pm »
aLA pa ding Next oH! :(

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #51 on: December 09, 2006, 06:43:04 pm »
oops.. sorry talaga.. nalilito kasi ako sa jara at jhana.. kasi kala ko kinuha mo sa name mo.. and i thought you're name was jhara kay naging jara.. Sorry talaga ate jhana..
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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #52 on: December 09, 2006, 07:19:41 pm »
Talaga bang childhood friend lang ha Zen? hE HE... Next na...
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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #53 on: December 09, 2006, 11:21:56 pm »
JHANA NiCE ANG STORii MO. HAHAHA.  YAH LOVE SOCCER NOH? HEHEH
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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #54 on: December 09, 2006, 11:24:32 pm »
yey nabasa ko na rin! hehe. Ü

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #55 on: December 09, 2006, 11:54:49 pm »
ala pa rin  :D
aLA pa ding Next oH! :(

Sorry. Went out with the family kasi. I'll update in a while na. Don't worry.

oops.. sorry talaga.. nalilito kasi ako sa jara at jhana.. kasi kala ko kinuha mo sa name mo.. and i thought you're name was jhara kay naging jara.. Sorry talaga ate jhana..

It's okay dear. Haha. Dun sa first story ko, I named the character after me. Pero this time? Nope. Di ko alam basta naisip ko na lang ang Jara and I think it sounds good. Haha.

Talaga bang childhood friend lang ha Zen? hE HE... Next na...

Ate Pau! Haha. Smell something porky between them ba? Lol.

JHANA NiCE ANG STORii MO. HAHAHA.  YAH LOVE SOCCER NOH? HEHEH

DANE, I DON'T LOVE SOCCER. I LOVE BOYS WHO PLAY SOCCER. MUHAHAHAA. =P

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THIS IS MY 2ND STORY. MY FIRST ONE AND WAS REALLY SUCCESSFUL IS ENTITLED PANALANGIN. HOPE YOU'LL LIKE THIS ONE. TTFN! GOD BLESS GIRLS.


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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #56 on: December 10, 2006, 12:06:11 am »
obvious man na u love soccer. channing plays soccer. hot hot hot
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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #57 on: December 10, 2006, 12:10:03 am »
ala prin next?? ???

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #58 on: December 10, 2006, 01:08:30 am »
Pagka-pasok ko sa clinic nagulat agad yung nurse dahil buhat-buhat ko si Jara. Ang pula-pula pa nya that time.

Susme! Anong nangyari hijo?

Nahimatay ho dahil sa init. Allergic po kasi sya sa araw. Namumula at nanghihina ho sya pagsobrang naiinitan.

Marami ka atang alam tungkol sa kanya? Sige na ilapag mo sya rito at paki kuha yung id nya.

Ho? Kunin yung id nya? Kayo na lang po. Nakapulupot ho sa leeg nya ehh.

Nahiya ka pa. Girlfriend mo naman sya dba? Ikaw Zen ha, nagbibinata ka na.

Nagulat ako sa sinabi ng school nurse. Napatingin ako kay Jara na parang naka tulog lang ng mahimbing. compared kanina, di na sya gaano mapula at bumabalik na ang normal nyang kutis. Maputi at mapula ang labi at pisngi. Mana sya sa mom nya. Di ko alam kung kamukha nya ang Dad nya dahil di ko pa naman nakikita.

Pero siya? Maging girlfriend ko? Puh-lease!

Heto! Isulat mo dito yung pangalan, section at kung bakit sya nandito. Sasagutin ko lang yung telepono at kukunan ko narin sya ng cold compress. Alam mo naman yan Zen dba?

Tumango lang ako. Kilala na ako dito sa H.S Clinic dahil nagtratrabaho ako dito pag Friday's. Minsan pa nga may Saturday ehh. Junior Missionary President ako at napili kong mag-OJT dito sa H.S Clinic. Yung iba naman na assign sa iba't ibang work-ed na nagdidiscuss about sa mga Fil-Tribes.

Sabi nga ni Papa ehh papayagan nya ako dito mag-OJT pero sana raw wag ko seryosohin ang pagiging temporary "school nurse" dahil wala syang balak pag-aralin ako ng nursing. Ayoko rin naman ehh. Ang gusto ko? Di ko pa alam. Basta as of now, mag-eenjoy nalang muna ako.

Napatingin ako uli sa id ni Jara at napansin ang kanyang picture. Napatawa ako, paano ba naman naka peace sign sya sa school id nya. Bihira lang yang ganyan na pinapayagan. Meron bang bar pin na butterfly shape sa id strap nya. Napaka-kikay. Girls. Tssk.

Jara Marrise.... Dee.

Bakita kaya napalitan ang apilido nya? Napa shrug nalang ako nun.

Hijo, heto ang cold compress. May emergency meeting ang faculty kaya maauna muna ako ha? Dadating na rin yung mga kaibigan niyang nobya mo. Sumama naman tingin ko sa school nurse noon. Wag mo muna sya iiwan ha? Sige.

Umalis na sya nun at nag-bang nalang ang pintuan. Ang lamig ng compress, nasobrahan ata to sa temperature. Naghanap ako ng bimpo sa loob ng clinic pero lahat basa kaya kinuha ko na lang ang panyo ko sa bulsa at binalot ko naman ito sa compress. Pagkabalot ko nun ay agad na nilagay ko sa forehead nya. Gumalaw pa nga sya pagkalagay ko nun ehh.

Mga 30 minutes eh dumating narin yung kaibigan ni Jara.

Zen, is she okay?

Oo naman. She just fainted because of the sun's heat. Didn't you have any idea she's allergic to the sun? Didn't you saw her becoming red as a tomato?

Nope. We were against their soccer team. Thanks for bringing her here and taking care of her.

Tumayo na lang si Zen and asusual, earphones are stuck once again to his ears. Isa pa to eh! Isa't kalahting wierdo!

Mmm.

Gising na sya Mitch!

ZEN! Napatigil ako nung narinig ko si Mitch. Thanks ulit! And please tell my brother to stop being a faggot.

Magkagalit parin nga talaga sila.

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Mmm.

Gising na sya Mitch!

ZEN! Si Zen? Andito? Bakit? Thanks ulit! And please tell my brother to stop being a faggot.

Anong nangyari? Shoot! Ang lamig ng forehead ko! Ano ba to?!

Pagkakuha ko nung cold compress dun ko lang napansin na nasa clinic pala ako. At napansin ko rin na panyo ni Zen ang naka balot sa compress.

You fainted Ms. Allergic-to-Sun's-heat-that's-why-you-turned-red! You never told us that fact, pero bakit alam yun ni Zen? Huh? Jara?

Tiningnan ako ni Mitch at Chloe ng masama. Di ko naman pwde sabihin na childhood friend ko sya dahil mas magtatanong sila tungkol dati.

Dba nag o-OJT sya dito? He should know the symptoms. Nice one Jara! And one more thing di ko naman din alam na aatake pala uli tong allergy kong ito. It was ages since the last time na nangyari to.

Nakatingin parin sila sa akin na para bang nawiwirdohan at nagtataka.

That's enough! Tara na nga.

Hey hey. Not so fast! First off, early dismissal dahil faculty meeting. Second is you have to return the hanky and say thank you kay Zen.

No problem. Mitch, pahingi naman number ni Karl oh. Sabihan ko na bigay nya kay Zen yung hanky at dba-

Personally Jara. Personally.

Personally? Me? Zen? Thank You?








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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #59 on: December 10, 2006, 08:25:34 am »
taray ni jara! ahaha. sweet naman ni zen at binantayan xa. nyakz! xempre nag-OOJT nga eh. hehe. sana magbati na sila. =) nice jhana! keep it up.

 

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