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ZENsitized. [FIRST PART DONE]
« on: December 05, 2006, 01:06:26 pm »
Holla! Am back and still active. Yay! After the success of PANALANGIN and the deleted SULUNA, I am back with ZENsitized. It is actually spelled sensitized but I changed it because one of the characters is named "ZEN". Get it? Lol.

Hope you all support this and I hope it would be succsful as my first story. And I also hope school won't occupy me. Ha! Lol. And sana walang mga uberly atat dyan. Peace!


- :] jhana



What if you met this person, she was all okay and friendly. At first you thought it would be impossible for you to like her more than you think. But as time goes by, you realized you liked her. More than that, you tried protecting her and every time you're with her you heart beats faster, but here comes fate.


You just have to be sensitized.



Both of you were only starngers passing by the corridors. You never looked at him, so is he. But one activity changed everything and you became interested about him. You just can't admit it but you really were. Would you admit it to yourself before fate ruins it? Or will you let it pass and live like before?


Sometimes you just have to be sensitized.



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« Last Edit: May 07, 2007, 02:43:17 pm by vainballerina »
Summer 2010~
is thinking of writing a new story again. lol

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #1 on: December 05, 2006, 06:25:01 pm »
Mukhang exciting to ha! Next na Jhana... Start mo na... Miss u na!
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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #2 on: December 05, 2006, 06:51:08 pm »
wow.. i think its good... ibang klase ah.. next! i hope nga you can still balance things :)
The best part in the word believe is the word LIE.... BeLIEve.. ;)

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #3 on: December 05, 2006, 07:07:37 pm »
wee
may Z na na story!!

natupad na ang plano ni ate Jhana!!

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #4 on: December 05, 2006, 07:51:06 pm »
NiCe may bagO..

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #5 on: December 05, 2006, 08:45:08 pm »
hmm...interesting!!Ü

ive got a story too..Ü
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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #6 on: December 05, 2006, 09:17:05 pm »
Have you ever dreamt of a perfect life with a complete family, somebody to love you and friend who'll support you thru out? I've been dreaming that since I was a little child. My dad and mom was divorced 6 years ago and it was really hard to accept especially I was close to my dad but I can't do anything about it so I accepted it5 whole heartedly. Yeah, I miss him so much but this is reality.

And now all I got are my bestfriend, my mom and Kean Cipriano! Asking who is Kean? The most loved vocalist of the band Callalily! Isn't he adorable? He makes me weak.

Jara!

Nagulat ako dun ahh. First off, I am Jara Marisse Dee. 4th year highschool and an out-going kid. I grew up in New Jersey and we transfered here in the Philippines last year. Wondering why my surname is Dee? It's because my mom married James, my 2nd dad, when I was 12. At start I don't like him but I saw that mom became happy and James gave us the love of a father.

I have two bestfriends, Chloe Montiverde and Mitch Cruz. They we're the ones who teached me tagalog, I mean I knew the language of course but I sucked at it before. Now? I kinda get it. Haha!

Day-dreaming again sweetheart?

Sinabi mo pa. That's her everyday routine! Snap out of Kean girl. Ang dami-dami mong suitors oh. You can't live in a fairytale forever.

After nyang sinabi yun, she slamed my locker at ginit-naan nila ako. What's wrong with day-dreaming? And I don't need a guy you know. And yes! I am still young for guys or whatever they call it.

Stop it already, let's just buzz out and enter Algebra.

We started walking and as usual we're chatting. Nung malapit na kami sa room, we saw this guy rushing.

Ouch!

Tiningnan namin yung guy and guess what? Wala lang namang sorry or "let me help you". WATCH WHERE YOUR GOING! Clumsy dude! Good thing I don't cuss or else! Uggh!

*END OF JARA'S POV*

ZEN! GUMISING KANA NGA!

Aga-aga heto nanaman tayo. Oops! Wait! Ako nga pala si Zen Andrews. Yes, half-american and the rest is Filipino blood. I live with my mom, dad and of course, si Zara, ang younger sister ko. Actually third year siya at fourth year naman ako.

OPO MA, MALILIGO NA!

After taking a bath, bumaba na ako. Kung di, baka akyatin pa ako ni mama. Ganyan kami dito sa bahay, sigawan pero walang sakitan. Ganyan lang talaga kami magpakita ng concern.

Morning pa, ma.
Nagbeso naman ako sa kanila. Hey Zar!

Kumain kana at malalte na kayo. May kailangan ka bang bayaran sa school or ano pa man? Sabihan mo na ako ngayon dahil..

hinug ko agad si Mama bago pa man nya matapos yung sinasabi nya.

Ma, kaya ko na yung mga extra payments ko for projects. Keep the money na lang! Una na kami ni Zara. Pa, una na po ako.


Sige hijo. Zara magingat kayo ng kuya mo ha?

Nagmano naman ako kay Papa bago pa kami umalis. He may be an American citizen but he lives like a Filipino at magaling rin yan magtagalog. Syempre! Nagjeep na kami ni Zara papuntang school dahil walang time si Papa maghatid ngayon.

Oh, ingat ka ha? Eto baon mo oh!

Kuya, sobra sobra to ahh.

Ibabalik nya sana yung extra kong binigay pero di ko na tingangap. Nagwave na lang ako at umalis na. Shoot! Late na ako para sa Physics. Tumakbo na ako ng mabalis papunta sa classroom namin. Shoot! May naka harang pa sa daan, and guess who. Sila Jara nga naman.

Ouch!

Nabangga ko si Jara pero wala narin akong time para balikan sya at magsorry. Sensya na lang.

WATCH WHERE YOUR GOING!

Well, I didn't planned to bump into her. It was a total accident. Bahala na nga. Dumating na ako sa room namin bago pa man nagbell at dumating ang teacher namin. Saved by the bell! Pumasok na ako at umupo na.





You just have to be sensitized.



Is it lousy? Is it slow? Sana may magbasa. Lol. :]
« Last Edit: February 21, 2007, 08:47:48 pm by vainballerina »
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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #7 on: December 05, 2006, 09:45:26 pm »
Color Coding

Jara Marrise Dee
Mr. James Dee [step-father ni Jara]
Mrs. Letty Dee [Jara's mom]

Chloe Montiverde
Mitch Cruz

Zen Andrews
Mr. Jack Andrews [Zen's dad]
Mrs. Zusy Andrews [Zen's mom]
Zara Andrews [Zen's younger sister]

Karl Cruz [brother ni Mitch][friend ni Zen]

Diane Dela Cruz

<3
« Last Edit: March 06, 2007, 07:14:04 pm by vainballerina »
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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #8 on: December 05, 2006, 09:59:33 pm »
hi! new reader here.
your story seems interesting. ;)

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #9 on: December 05, 2006, 10:10:54 pm »
new reader here. :)
kakaexcite ang story!
YOUR STAR IS OUT OF VOGUE. <3

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #10 on: December 06, 2006, 08:11:51 am »
Nice story Jhana!
I'll support this one..  :)
Wishing silently for you

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #11 on: December 06, 2006, 06:23:50 pm »
nEcz naH.

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #12 on: December 06, 2006, 07:20:48 pm »
yey! new story! gad! ang ganda sobra! start palang ang ganda na! hehe, sis! next na po! plss..
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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #13 on: December 06, 2006, 08:41:49 pm »
haha!! ang cute ng story mo sis!!
si Zen naman ay inisip na lang ang sarili niya..Ü

hmm.. read nyu din po story ko

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Re: ZENsitized.
« Reply #14 on: December 06, 2006, 08:45:45 pm »
ei, newbie here! sounds exciting. =)

ate, paki read din poh ng first story ko.

"The Proposal"
http://www.candymag.com/teentalk/index.php/topic,136319.45.html


thnx a lot!

 

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