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My Devils In Shining Armor || Fin.
« on: December 02, 2006, 01:48:29 pm »
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Devils In Shining Armor
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----------------------------[Meet The Characters]---------------------------


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Chapter 00 : Prologue
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Hi my name's george but guess what i'm a girl..



Let me tell you how I met this two knights in shining armor….




Sandali wait, Mali. sorry mali pala…




Okay, ulitin ko na lang..





Let me tell you how I met Sevenne and Bernard the two devils…




(…I think it's much better!!…)



I’ll tell you in the simplest form I can think of…



nahulog ang loob ko sa kanilang dalawa.





Yes, you heard me right..




At hindi ako nahulog as in literally na nahulog sa kanila.




WAY WORST, I tell you.




BUT before we go there, there’s something you oughta know.




There’s only one word to describe Sevenne and Bernard.




Evil!!.




Fine, I’ll tell you honestly this time.


But first let me take a DEEEEP breath okay?


Both of them can be: b.tchy, cute (rarely), romantic, cocky, conceited, annoying, sweet, violent, scary, seductive, mean, hot, SUPER hot, a pain in the ass, a smart ass, and etc etc.

Kahit anong maisip nyo….



Except



Mabait!!.





Anyways, I’ll go on with how I met this two devils in a shining armor...

« Last Edit: October 17, 2007, 09:19:16 am by RainyKiss »

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Re: -Devils In Shining Armor- (a new story!)
« Reply #1 on: December 02, 2006, 02:01:34 pm »
i like it!!!! nice, nice. love the way to describe them!! haha. but d@mn, as in theyre always like that? how come you fell?!? haha. kidding. continue!
The best part in the word believe is the word LIE.... BeLIEve.. ;)

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Re: -Devils In Shining Armor- (a new story!)
« Reply #2 on: December 02, 2006, 03:06:03 pm »
i like it!!!! nice, nice. love the way to describe them!! haha. but d@mn, as in theyre always like that? how come you fell?!? haha. kidding. continue!

yey! may reply kaagad!! just wait ka na lang kung bakit at paano maiinlove yung bida sa mga guys...

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Re: -Devils In Shining Armor- (a new story!)
« Reply #3 on: December 02, 2006, 03:16:04 pm »
hehe.. ang weird ng ugali nila.. mukhang exciting ito..  ;D

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Re: -Devils In Shining Armor- (a new story!)
« Reply #4 on: December 02, 2006, 03:46:28 pm »
wow! continue mo!! hehhe...
please read my story.. Faith love destiny..
tsk! ill support this..mukhang creepy :P

-westy
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Re: +My Devils In Shining Armor+ (my 2nd story! it's a romantic comedy..)
« Reply #5 on: December 02, 2006, 04:26:57 pm »
nice!i like it!kakaiba...hehehe nstart na po!

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Re: +My Devils In Shining Armor+ (my 2nd story! it's a romantic comedy..)
« Reply #6 on: December 02, 2006, 05:57:12 pm »
 ;D Ang Cute ah~ papahuli muna ako ng pagbasa para d ako mabitin^^ habaan nyu po miss author ah!!  ;D
i miss you.

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Re: +My Devils In Shining Armor+ (my 2nd story! it's a romantic comedy..)
« Reply #7 on: December 02, 2006, 07:03:05 pm »
hey hey hey..... i like your intro... tuloy mo lang sis...
i'LL be the devil that will be there for you when your pretending angels leave you...

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« Reply #8 on: December 02, 2006, 07:20:24 pm »
Ofcourse continue mo.. Interesting... Next na...
MY STORIES: MUL2 TP3 TMW2

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Re: +My Devils In Shining Armor+ (my 2nd story! it's a romantic comedy..)
« Reply #9 on: December 02, 2006, 07:23:34 pm »
WoW...gusto ko ng mga story na EvIL ung lalaki!! pewo HOT!

wooo!! nice!!!

Excited na aq!!~~~

=Altheighia^^ (althea)

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« Reply #10 on: December 02, 2006, 10:17:27 pm »
waah! antagal!!!

nakakatuwa talaga ung mga boiis!!

parang sa mga Korean stories!!! aiii!!

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Re: +My Devils In Shining Armor+ (my 2nd story! it's a romantic comedy..)
« Reply #11 on: December 02, 2006, 10:23:10 pm »
hello new reader here.. mukhang intriguing yung story ah!.. next chapter na please... :)

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Re: +My Devils In Shining Armor+ (my 2nd story! it's a romantic comedy..)
« Reply #12 on: December 02, 2006, 10:38:40 pm »
nyC!! ..new reader hir!
h8ng me wont make yOu pretty ..Ü

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Re: +My Devils In Shining Armor+ (my 2nd story! it's a romantic comedy..)
« Reply #13 on: December 03, 2006, 12:23:54 am »
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Chapter 01 : Serendipity at it's Best!
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author's note: yung mga naka underline ay yung POV nila..
and please sana walang silent readers! i don't mind kung napapangitan kayo,
basta i need ur comments!! para maimprove ko ito!! :)




Monday 7:45 AM


Bumaba na si George para kumain ng breakfast.
naka school uniform na sya.. she's ready to go to school.


Good Morning Mom!! Dad!!

dad: morning sweetie!!
 
mom: george, palitan mo yang suot mo..
you're not going to school today!

Bakit!?!

mom:May susunduin tayo sa airport,
kailangan mong sumama!!

no way!! today's the school fair!!
i'll miss a lot kung hindi ako papasok ngayon!!


dad: it's ur school fair lang nman pala ngayon..
di naman mahalaga gagawin nyo!!

sino ba itong susunduin natin??
napakahalaga ba nya??


mom: please.. sweetie, wag nang magtanong ok??

basta i'll go to school today!!
kahit wag nyo pa ako ipahaitid sa driver!!
Magcocommute ako!!


Biglang kinuha ni george yung bag nya at umalis..

Kainis!! kung kelan ako sinisipag pumasok,
saka ako pinipigilan!!


Pumunta na sya sa terminal FX..

hay!! di pa naman ako sanay magcommute!!

Nung naka pila na sya..
may nakita syang lalake, naka school uniform din..
Guwapo yung guy, matangkad, maputi at chinito,
IN SHORT HE IS HOT!!!


Nagkatitigan sila ni George..

Inirapan sya nung guy!!

Aba!! the nerve!! ako dapat ang iirap eh!!

Nung sumakay na sila, tamang tama magkatabi ang dalawa!!..
sa gitnang part sila nakaupo, medyo masikip kasi may mataba silang kasakay.

Nahihirapan kumuha ng pera yung HOT na guy sa bulsa nya,
kasi nga masikip.. pinagpilitan nyang kuhanin yung wallet nya nang...

Nasiko nya si George!!!!!


Ouch!!

Sorry..

sana naman, mas sincere yung sorry mo no??

sa masikip eh.. ano gagawin ko??

Iaabot na ni HOT guy yung bayad sa driver..


Manong Bayad po!!
Manong Bayad po!!

Nagka tinginan nanaman sila ng masama!!


Naiinis na ako dito sa lalakeng to ha!!!
magantihan nga!!!


Nagkunwari si george na may kukuhanin sa shoulder bag nya.

Nasaan kaya yung iPod ko??


*Dug!!*

Sinadya nyang sikohin yung guy sa ulo!!

Aray!!

(sarcastic) Oops!! sorry!

nananadya ka ba!?!

Nagtitinginan na yung ibang pasahero ng FX sa kanilang dalawa..

huh!?! diba sabi ko sorry? and bakit ko naman ididikit
yung elbow ko sa skin mo?? eww!

May napansin yung HOT na guy!

Shi*t!! lumagpas na ako!!

ha!?! lumagpas na ako sa school!!

-Manong Para po!!
-Manong Para po!!

Bumaba na silang dalawa.

Kasalanan mo to!! maglalakad pa tuloy ako!

Ah ganun!! sino kaya itong nangaaway ng babae??

Nakarating na sila sa school.
malayo din yung nilakad nila..


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School, Home Room ng section III-G

Maraming bumati kay George:

                                       Good Morning George!!
    Bakit ngayon ka lang??
                                                                           gud morning!!
                                          Hi Pretty girl!!


kinausap si george nung isang magandang babae

what happened to you!!
basang basa ka ng pawis!!


Dahil dun sa mayabang na yun! bwisit sya!!

sumabat yung dalawan guy

ha? sinong mayabang? anong section??

gusto mo bugbugin ko?


will you two stop?
i've had enough!!


Oww!! Hi!! sorry ngayon lang ako makakapagpakilala!!
napapanget kasi ng simula ng araw ko eh!!

Btw, I'm Georgina Gatchalian .. just call me george..
kung nagtataka kayo kung sino yung chinitong naka-away ko kanina..
sya si Bernard Romualdo.. sya ang pinaka sikat na guy sa campus.
kasi naman he's:

Matalino - he's from first section!!

Matangkad - 6 footer lang naman sya

Guwapo!! - maputi, chinito at hunk!!

he's the silent type of guy.. pero masungit sya, mayabang
at konti lang friends.. pero maraming nagkaka-crush sa kanya!!
many people call him as the ICE PRINCE!! napaka cold kasi ng personality nya!

yun namang kausap ko sa class room yun sina:
Savannah, Kenn at Ran
they're my BFFs. hindi naman sa nagyayabang, were popular too.
mas sikat nga lang si Bernard kasi matalino sya.. kami, sikat kami
because of our looks..

Every girls in campus admires me!! they want to be like me
at lahat naman ng guys dito, gusto akong ligawan!! well except for
Bernard!! i don't know why he hates me that much!!

So.. punta na tayo sa Quadrangle mag oopen na yung mga booth at
rides!!


Tinatamad pa ako.. i'm sooo tired na! biruin mo
nilakad ko mula gas station hangang dito!
lagot sa akin yung lalaking yun!!


sige na George! sakay tayo sa Ferris Wheel!


Hinawakan ni Kenn yung kamay ni George.

ikaw kenn ha, binasted na kita! tama na yang
pahawak hawak mo!!


hehehe sorry!

dyan ka na muna george mauuna na kami!! sabi ni Ran

umalis na sila.. naiwan si george sa classroom

haay!! magbabayad ka Bernard!!

Nag retouch ng powder at lipgloss si George..
she decided to go to the fair downstairs.

Nung bababa na sya napadaan sya sa Room ng III-A
si Bernard at si Dexter (his friend) na lang nya yung nandun
mukhang nasa fair na rin ang lahat..

Tumingin si dexter kay George..


Man! look at her she's the hottest girl here!!
she's my one and only crush!!


George pretended not hear anything..

Haha!! every guy here likes me!!

nagpatuloy sya sa paglalakad at kumembot sya ng konti ;D
hinihintay nya din kung ano reaction ni bernard

Yan!?! puro powder at lipgloss lang naman nasa utak nyan eh!

Ano daw!?! pinaiinit talaga nito ulo ko!!
ang yabang nya!!! >:(


Tiningnan ni george si bernard  ng masama!! >:(
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School Quadrangle.. School Fair..

Buti naman at naisipan mong bumaba!!

yeah.. wala talaga ako sa mood mga guys!!

sakay na tayo sa ferris wheel

oo nga! tamang tama apat tayo

yeah whatever!! ::)


Pumila na yung apat.. nasa huli si george.
Hindi nya napapansin na pumila din si Bernard at Dexter..


nung pinapapasok na sila......

Ferris Wheel Attendant: tig dadalawa lang ..

nauna si Kenn.. katabi nya sa Savannah

nagka-tulakan.. si Ran ang naging katabi ni Dexter!!

and guess who kung sino katabi ni George??

bakit sya!!! i hate him!! noooooo!

What!?! bakit itong girl na ito ang kasama ko!


wait.. aalis na lang ako.

ferris wheel attendant
: sorry nakasara na.. magugulo yung pila kung aalis ka.

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Hi! yan na lang muna!! sana magcomment kayo kung panget o hinde!!

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Re: +My Devils In Shining Armor+ (it's a romantic comedy.. Chapter 01 posted!)
« Reply #14 on: December 03, 2006, 09:30:24 am »
i love the name George!!! cute naman ng story!! sino pa kaya ung isang devil??? next!!

 

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