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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER III ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #30 on: November 14, 2006, 06:15:09 pm »
Selos lang yan si Andy kaya insecure kay Matthew! nEXT NA...
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER III ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #31 on: November 14, 2006, 06:18:02 pm »
waha! ang ganda tlga nito! ang kuLeEet ng storie! next nah!

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER III ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #32 on: November 14, 2006, 06:32:04 pm »
kakabitin! haha ;D.. next na! ;)

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER III ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #33 on: November 14, 2006, 10:10:05 pm »
salamat talaga sa mga comments nio! ;)
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Chapter V

"Huh? Andy? Anu message nia?" tanong ni Crissy sa sarili.

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From: Andy

Hi Crissy! I'm bored. Wala akong magawa. PUPUNTA AKO DYAN MAMAYANG 2:30 sa INYO. IPAKILALA MO NAMAN AKO SA MOMMY MO

What? Pupunta si Andy sa bahay nila Crissy? OMG, anu kaya mangyayari?

"Huh? Pupunta sya dito?" sabi ni Crissy sa sarili. reply naman si Crissy.

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To: Andy (091958764**)

Sige pumunta ka dito. Okay lang pakilala kita sa Mommy ko at Kuya ko.

Pumayag si Crissy na pumunta si Andy sa bahay nila. Kilig naman itong si Crissy, dali dali syang umakyat sa taas.

"Crissy, ito yung Lacost shoes na..." sabi ni Andrew. Di na natuloy dahil sobrang bilis umakyat si Crissy sa taas.

Pumasok si Crissy sa kwarto niya saka sinara ang pinto.

"GOSH! May pupunta na guy dito sa bahay? Teka? Baka magalit si Kuya at si Mommy! No, hinde, friend ko naman si Andy eh. OMG! Gosh kinakabahan ako! Mababaliw ako! AHHHHH :D"
sabi ni Crissy. Napalundag siya sa kama niya saka naglulundag. Nahulog tuloy siya sa kama.

"Aray....teka bat ba ako nagkakaganito? Naloloka na ako! Si Andy lang naman yun. Kung si Matthew pa yun, diyos ko, mamatay na ata ako!"
sabi ni Crissy.

Sinabi ni Crissy sa mommy niya at sa kuya niya na pupunta si Andy sa bahay nila. Nagprepare naman ang mommy niya ng cookies at juice, habang binigyan naman ni Andrew si Crissy ng chocolate para ipakain sa bisita niya.

Maya-maya...

*Ding Dong*

Sinilip ni Crissy sa monitor kung sino ang taong nagdoorbell. Si Andy na yun. Pinapasok na niya ito.

Binuksan na ni Crissy ang pinto nila.

"Hi!" sabi ni Andy.

"Andy! Tara pasok ka"

pumasok si Andy sa bahay nila Crissy. Pumunta sila sa sala.

"Wow, Crissy maganda ang bahay niyo" compliment ni Andy.

"Hindi naman...tara upo tayo" sagot ni Crissy at naupo na sila sa sofa.

"Hello!" sabi nung mommy ni Crissy na may dalang cookies, chocolate at Juice para sa dalawa.

"Ay! Goodafternoon po, Mrs. Yoshimitsu. Wow. Maganda pala po kayo, kaya pala napakaganda nitong si Crissy" compliment ni Andy, nanaman.

"Ayyy hindi naman" napangiti at humaba ang buhok ni Mrs.Yoshimitsu. Lumapit narin si Andrew.

"Siya nga pala, ang brother ko, si Andrew" pakilala ni Andy sa kanyang brother.

"Uy! Ikaw ba si Jax Yugo? Yung model ng Lacoste sa Japan?" tanong ni Andy.

"Oo, ako nga. my real name's Andrew..." sagot ni Andrew.

"Uyy! Nice to meet you!" sabi ni Andy tsaka nagshake hands.

Umupo na ang apat sa sofa.

"So? Ikaw pala ang..." di na natapos ni Mommy ang sasabihin niya dahil sumingit kaagad si Andy.

"Boyfriend...boyfriend ni Crissy" sagot ni Andy.

Oh My God. Sa Isip ni Crissy. Shock si Crissy at si Kuya, pero mukhang masaya si Mommy!

"Uh? Mommy? Hindi kami..."

"Muffin, ano ba? Wag mo naman akong i-deny sa mommy at kuya mo. Actually tita, nagquarell po kami, ayusin niyo naman po kami....I love your daughter so much..." sabi ni Andy, paaawa effect.

Walang kaalam alam si Crissy. Tulala siya. Sa isip ni Crissy:

"ANu pinagagagawa nitong si Andy? Naloloko na ba 'to? PATAY AKO!"

Sumagot naman ang nanay ni Crissy.

"Crissy. Ano ba ang pinagaaway niniyo ni Andy? Kung ano man yon, abay....FORGIVE HIM" sabi nung nanay ni Crissy.

Halos mahulog sa sofa si Crissy. Nagulantang siya. Di niya akalain na ganun ang sasabihin ng mommy niya.

"Huh? Mommy naman!?! Hindi nga kami ni Andy! Hinde! NEVER!!!"

"Muffin!  :-[ :'( wag mo naman akong ikatwa! Anu ba? Bat ba ayaw mong maniwala? I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!" sagot ni Andy, paawa effect nanaman.

"Ayyy...ayusin ninyong mag boyfriend yan..." sagot ni Andrew, saka umalis.

"KUYA? PATI IKAW?" sigaw ni Crissy.

"Sabi ko sayo, ayus lang sa kuya at mommy mo ang relasyon natin. Sige na, mahal na mahal kita...pls, forgive me" sabi ni Andy.

ilang minutes ago...

"Sige po tita...este...MOMMY alis na po ako..." sabi ni Andy. Ngumiti at nagbabye si Mrs. Yoshimitsu kay Andy. Sarcastic look naman si Crissy.

"Hatid ko na siya sa labas  ::)" sabi ni Crissy.

Lumabas na sila ng gate. Maya-maya binatukan na ni Crissy si Andy.

"ANU BA? BAT MO SINASABI NA MAG BF TAYO SA MOMMY KO?? HUH? ANU PROBLEMA MO?"
sabi ni Crissy, in a high pitch.

Tumingin ng masama si Andy, at lumakad papunta kay Crissy.

"Uy? Anu ginagawa mo? ANDYYYYY!" nagulat si Crissy ng biglang napadikit siya sa gate at hinarang siya ni Andy.

"Hindi mo ba alam yun? Hindi ako nagbibiro kanina. I LOVE YOU Crissy...I wanna be your boyfriend"
sabi ni Andy, serious mode.

Nashock at natahimik si Crissy, and her heaty beats as fast as a sports car.

"Na-love at first sight ako sayo....I LOVE YOU" dagdag ni Andy. Nagwalk out si Andy at sumakay sa kotse niya at umalis. Natahimik si Crissy.

"Nababaliw na ba siya?" sabi ni Crissy sa sarili, at pumasok na siya sa bahay nila.
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find this chapter cute...hehe...comments pls.!
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER III ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #34 on: November 15, 2006, 07:40:34 am »
awww...cge na...!!hehe.. :)...next na p0..!

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER V ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #35 on: November 15, 2006, 08:39:36 am »
will post the chapter VI tonight!
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER V ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #36 on: November 15, 2006, 06:01:52 pm »
OMFG!!!! i like him na!!! ahahaha... next! i like the way he acts and does stuff. :) .. next!
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER V ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #37 on: November 15, 2006, 06:24:55 pm »
ohh.... nice chap.. haha.. ang cute nila.. hmm.. pero i still like matthew than andy.. haha ;D next pls! ;)

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER V ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #38 on: November 15, 2006, 06:53:50 pm »
new reader po...

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nice story...
abangan ko po yung kasunod

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER V ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #39 on: November 15, 2006, 07:20:43 pm »
ohh.... nice chap.. haha.. ang cute nila.. hmm.. pero i still like matthew than andy.. haha ;D next pls! ;)

i agree haha mas gs2 ko rin si matthew nde ko alam bakit haha... next po... :)
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER V ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #40 on: November 15, 2006, 08:57:43 pm »
Parang ang bilis ata ni Andy... La lang... Next na...
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER V ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #41 on: November 15, 2006, 10:32:01 pm »
Chapter VI
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Tahimik na pumasok si Crissy sa bahay nila at nagkulong sa kwarto maghapon. Lumabas lang siya upang mag dinner. After mag dinner, pumasok ulet siya sa kwarto.

Mga bandang 8:30 PM, nag ring ang cellphone niya. Si Andy ang tumawag.

"Hello?" sabi ni Crissy.

"Hi...galit ba ikaw sakin?" sabi ni Andy.

"Nakakashock ka naman kais kanina Andy. Did you mean it ba talaga?"

"Uhm...uh...uh...uhm...hindi! Just trying to...you know...asar lang ikaw"

"Ohhh...ganun...humanda ka saken mamaya"

"Ikaw naman! Biro lang naman yung kanina...really i didn't mean it!"

"Hmm...talaga lang ha!"

"Ako? Magkakagusto sa isang turkey? Never!"

"Ang kapal ng mukha mo talaga!"

"Hahaha...ayan naasar nanaman kaya tumatangos ang nose"

"Hahahaha nakaktuwa ka talaga Andy...luko loko ka"
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Pagpasok kinabukasan sa school, hinarang siya ng 4 Season Girls.

"Well, well, well Crissy, anu ang pinagagagawa mo? Bakit mo inaagaw si Andy saken?" tanong ni Tatum kay Crissy.

"Huh? Friends lang kami nun ni Andy!" sagot naman ni Crissy na medyo natatakot na.

"Ganun? Eh baket pinuntahan ka niya sa bahay niyo kahapon?" sagot ulet ni Tatum.

"Nakita kita kahapon!" sabi ni Summer.

"Huh? Wala yun! Wala!" sagot ni Crissy.

"Mabuti. Pag nalaman kong inagaw mo siya, patay ka. uubusin ko ang buhok mo!" banta ni Tatum at pinadaan na nila si Crissy.

"Sis! Anu ginawa sau nung 4 na yun?" tanong ni Lindy.

"Wala, may tinanong lang" sagot ni Crissy.

"Gosh...alam mo ba lumabas kami ni Brandon kahapon after rehearsals! Nag Rockwell kami...God...he was so gentleman!" sabi ni Lindy na parang butterflies ang feeling.

"Wow naman...so kayo na?" tanong ni Chris.

"Manahimik ka! Friends lang kami!" sagot ni Lindy.

Hindi alam ni Chris na nasa likod niya si Yul.

"May sasabihin ako sayo mamaya sa canteen..." bulong ni Yul kay Chris sabay umalis.

"Huh?" tanong ni Chris sa sarili.

Si Andy naman ay di mapakali sa upuan. Sabi niya sa sarili:

"Moron! Imbicile! Stupid guy! Bat ako nagpahalata kaagad? Kainis! Sira diskarte ko! Bayan!"

Narinig siya ni Brandon at tinanong siya.

"Anu nangyayari sau?"

"Ah wala Brandz....wala to" sagot ni Andy na medyo kinabahan. Sa isip ni Andy:

"Kailangan, pakipot muna ako...kailangan...basta! Yun na yun!"

Maya-maya dumating na si Ms. Bond, na nag seat in muna sa kanila.

Natural, another boring class nanaman. Trigo eh, natural boring. Kaya hayun, tulala lahat ng studyante. Napatingin si Lindy kay Brandon. Kindat naman si brandon kay Lindy. Si Chris naman, binato ni Yul kaya napatingin, ngiti si Yul (wait? Anu ibig sabihin nito? Smells fishy!).

Si Crissy naman, nagkatinginan sila. Lumingon palayo, at sabay nag blush. Unti unting nagkaharap ulet sila. Nagngitian tapos, wala na.

May pinasa si Andy na note kay Crissy. Sabi:

"Kita tayo mamaya sa back building ulet huh!"

reply naman si Crissy:

"Oo..."

okay na sana pero huli sila ni Ms. Bond.

"Christina, Andy! kayung dalawa, tayo sa labas!" sigaw ni Ms. Bond.

Both of them stand outside. Nasa pagitan nila ang pinto. Inirapan ni Crissy si Andy.

"Its all your fault!" bulong ni Crissy.

"No it's not!" sagot naman ni Andy.

Di nagpansinan ang dalawa. Pagkatapos ng klase, pumasok na ulet sila.

"Sis, anu bayan, napalabas ka dahil  kay Andy!" sabi ni Lindy.

Recess na, at hindi sumipot si Crissy sa back building, nag stay siya sa library, at bumalik after recess. Wala paring pansinan na naganap.

Lumabas si Crissy at pumunta ng CR. Pagkalabas niya, biglang may nagcover ng bibig niya at hinatak siya sa loob ng isang empty room sa tapat ng CR.

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Probably, the ugliest chapter, bat di sila nagpapansinan! AT SINO ANG HUMATAK KAY CRISSY? ABANGAN!!!
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER VI ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #42 on: November 16, 2006, 09:07:51 pm »
oh god! sino nga ba?!?!?! haha... i hate him na ulet!!! i am so unpredictable... ahahaha... sana maging fine na sila, diba?!?!?! next!
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER VI ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #43 on: November 16, 2006, 09:20:15 pm »
lemme guess, andy did it?.. haha.. next na.. question lang, bakit nawala na ung color coding?

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER VI ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #44 on: November 16, 2006, 10:42:12 pm »
Chapter VII

“Ahhhrghhh!” sigaw ni Crissy na natakot talaga nung hinatak siya.

Si Matthew pala yung humatak sa kanya.

“Oh my goodness Matthew you scared the hell out of me!” sabi ni Crissy na medyo tense pa.

“Pasensya ka na…natakot ka ata…sorry ulet” sagot ni Matthew na nakangiti.

“Hinde, okay lang yun…teka bat mo ba ako dinala ditto?” tanong ni Crissy.

“Uhm…may ibibigay ako sayo” sabi ni Matthew.

Inabot niya ang isang CD na nasa CD sleeves kay Crissy.

“Anu to?” tanong ni Crissy.

“Mga original compositions ko yan…4 na kanta palang yan…ginawa ko para sayo” sagot ni Matthew.

“Ganun ba? Touch naman ako….sige I gotta go kasi may klase pa ako” sagot ni Crissy na dali daling lumabas ng room.

Tumakbo si Crissy papunta sa classroom niya, habang hinabul ng tingin naman ni Matthew si Crissy.

Pagdating ni Crissy sa room eh andun na ang kanyang teacher sa Music na si Mr. DeFeo.

“Christina, you’re late. Bilisan mo at may vocal exercise tayo” sabi ni Mr. DeFeo kay Crissy.

“Sorry sir, I’m late…” sagot ni Crissy.

“Sige. Okay lang yun, now, ka-pair mo si Mr. Andy Lee” sabi ni Mr. DeFeo.

Na shock nanaman si Crissy. Nakatingin sa kanya si Andy, at gayun din siya. Sa Isip ni Crissy:

“Gosh? Anu ba ‘to? Bat kami pair? Hindi kami…ewan! Pero, is this just simple coincidence or…destiny? Whatever!”

Nilapitan na ni Crissy si Andy. Inasar nanaman ni Andy si Crissy.

“May boses ka ba?” tanong ni Andy na pang asar mode.

“Ewan ko sayo!” whisper ni Crissy na pang asar mode din.

Nagsimula na ang vocal exercise. And unang pair ay si Autumn at ang class guy wannabe na si Ingram Flux.

Autumn: (offkey) You can reach me by rail way
You can reach me by trail way
You can reach me on an airplane
You can reach me with your mind

Ingram: (offkey, di alam ang lyrics) You can reach me by car van
Crossing desert’s like the Arabian
I don’t care whether get here just here if you cane…

Tawanan lahat ng classmates nila. Pahiya si Ingram pero si Autumn, kumaway pa ng ala Sandara. Next pair ay si Yul and Lindsay. Sumigaw pa si Lindy.

“Selos si Chris!” sigaw ni Lindy.

Tawanan naman ulet ang klase. Nagsimula na si Yul and Lindsay.

Lindsay: Sorry I never told you
All I wanted to say
And now it's too late to hold you
'Cause you've flown away
So far away

Yul: (badly offkey) Never had I imagined
Living without your smile
Feeling and knowing you hear me
It keeps me alive
Alive

“Ang sagwa!” sigaw ni Brandon.

“My Goodness, is that singing?” sigaw naman ni Tatum.

Tumigil ang dalawa at nasampal pa ni Lindsay si Yul. Next ay si Brandon at Lindy.

Lindy and Lindy: (duet) It's something unpredictable
but in the end it's right.
I hope you had the time of your life.

Palakpakan ang mga classmates at ang teacher nila. Sigawan at praises kasi nga maganda ang kanilang performance. Next na sina Andy at Crissy.

“Ano kakantahin ninyo?” tanong ni Mr. DeFeo.

“Uhm…Proud Mary po” panguna ni Crissy.

“Ano? Pang babae lang yun ah?” protesta ni Andy.

“Kala ko ba marunong kang kumanta?” sagot ni Crissy.

Nag “ohhhhhhhhh” ang crowd. Sabay sigaw ni Chris at Lindy:

“Sige na Andy! Kaya mo yan daba!”

Pumayag na si Andy. Nagsimula na ang tugtog:

Crissy: Y' know, every now and then
I think you might like to hear something from us
Nice and easy
But there's just one thing
You see we never ever do nothing
Nice and easy

“Andy ikaw na..” bulong ni Crissy.

Andy: We always do it nice and rough
So we're gonna take the beginning of this song
And do it easy
Then we're gonna do the finish rough
This is the way we do "Proud Mary"

Crissy: And we're rolling

Andy: Rolling!

Crissy: Rolling on the river! Listen to the story.

Andy: I left a good job in the city
Working for the man every night and day
And I never lost one minute of sleeping
Worrying 'bout the way things might have been

Crissy: Big wheel keep on turning
Proud mary keep on burning
And we’re rolling, rolling
Rolling on the river

Andy: Rolling on the river! Rolling! Rolling!

Andy and Crissy: Rolling on the river!!!!

Standing ovation and performance nilang dalawa.

“Gosh, I can’t believe you can sing!” Sabi ni Crissy kay Andy.

Uwian…

“Crissy! Wait!” sigaw ni Matthew kay Crissy.

“How are you?” dugtong ni Matthew.

“Fine…ikaw?” sagot ni Crissy.

“Aayain sana kitang kumain sa labas today…free ka ba?” tanong ni Matthew.

“Oo naman…sure!” sagot kaagad ni Crissy.

Di nila alam na nakita pala sila ni Andy. Mukhang nagalit ito!

Sa Restaurant…

“Ano gusto mong orderin?” tanong ni Matthew kay Crissy.

“Kahit ano!” sagot ni Crissy. Di nila alam nakadungaw na si Andy sa labas ng resto.

Mga ilang minuto, ang nakalipas, di na na take ni Andy. Sinugod na niya ang dalawa!

“Crissy!” sigaw ni Andy.

“Andy?” reply ni Crissy. Natakot siya dahil parang galit na galit si Andy.
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oh no! away ba ito? ABANGAN!!!

(sorry wa muna color coding. mejo busy eh. sorry!)
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