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High School Fairytale (DONE...FINISHED!)
« on: November 09, 2006, 11:03:40 PM »
Hello...im a guy writer po at ito ang aking 1st story!!!! hope you will like it pow!

Inspirations of my story:

1) Hana Yori Dango
2) Love Letter
3) My Sassy Girl
Characters:

Christina "Crissy" Yoshimitsu-cute, beautiful, smart and very palaban na girl
Andy Lee-a massively popular high school hunk na sobra ang hangin sa kokote
Matthew Jo-the Korean balladir na mahilig sa guitar. Super shy yet he has so many admirers
Tatum Jo, Lindsay Ahn, Summer Valenciano and Autumn Yakami-The "4 Season Girls". Beautiful. Goddess. Bad. in short-MEAN CLIQUE
Christian Riego and Lindy Wong-friends of Crissy

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Andrew Yoshimitsu-Brother ni Crissy na super popular model
Ms. Bond- Ang adviser nilang super nakakaloka dahil parang baliw

Plot: Crissy just move from USA to Philippines. She knows tagalog, smart and charming. She transfered to TOMOYO NAGASAKI HIGH SCHOOL. There, She met Andy Lee, a popular guy who has “lot of airs” inside of his head. Everything's fine, except that both Andy and Crissy didn't like each other.Will they fall in love with each other? Or its just another High School Fairytale?

CHapters

Season 1:

Chapter 1: Intorduction

Chapter Two


Chapter Three



Chapter Four



Chapter Five



Chapter Six



Chapter Seven




« Last Edit: April 26, 2007, 01:32:47 PM by Digital_Fortress »

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #1 on: November 09, 2006, 11:07:04 PM »
mukhang maganda po... next po... ;D
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #2 on: November 09, 2006, 11:08:19 PM »
MY SASSY GIRL. YAY! hahahaha. lol. :]
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #3 on: November 09, 2006, 11:13:36 PM »
abah...guy writer again.... mabasa nga....hehe...
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #4 on: November 10, 2006, 04:28:32 PM »
gusto ko rin mabasa..hehe

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #5 on: November 10, 2006, 04:40:20 PM »
4th guy writer... Kaabang-abang.... Nice start.... Next na poh...
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #6 on: November 10, 2006, 04:59:39 PM »
mukhang maganda to aH~!!

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #7 on: November 10, 2006, 05:16:13 PM »
waw mukang maganda toh ah ;D

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #8 on: November 10, 2006, 08:47:55 PM »
nice! hi btw! i think it'll be interesting! next!
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #9 on: November 10, 2006, 09:04:29 PM »
Salamat sa replies nio! ;) e2 na po ang Chapter 1!!! hope you'll like it!
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Chapter I

It was monday, the start of a new school day. Syempre, lahat ng students eh mejo busy and excited kasi nga pasukan nanaman.

4:30 ng madaling araw, nagasing na si Christina or just simply Crissy. Christina migrated in the USA since she was 6. Tinuruan siyang magtagalog ng parents nya kaya marunong siyang managalog ng fluent. Japanese ang father ni Crissy but he died when Crissy's only 5 years old. Isa yun sa mga dahilan kung bakit nagmigrate sina Crissy at ang nanay niya sa USA. After 10 years, Crissy and her mother returned to the Philippines dahil dito na na-assign ang mother niyang Executive Director ng isang malaking Cellphone company. 4th year high school na si Crissy, and she transfered in Tomoyo Nagasaki High School. The High School was an exclusive school, and mostly mga half pinoy-half japanese, korean, chinese, indian ang mga nagaaral...and this is her first day sa school.

(after an hour or so)

"Mommy, aalis na ako!" Crissy shouted to her mom. Her mom replied saying "Okay...mag ingat at goodluck!". Crissy was a bit dissapointed kasi di nya kasama ang mom niya sa pagpasok sa school. Crissy rides on their Volvo car, silently. Pero, kinakabahan sya dahil nga first day niya. After a 6 minute ride, the car stops at bumaba siya. Laking gulat niya sobrang laki pala ng school. Parang USA High School type ang bago niyang skwelahan. Ang uniform ng girls ay sailor-type collar and white short-sleeved blouse, and a navyblue skirt na hangang upper knee lang. For boys, short-sleeved polo and navyblue slocks. She goes inside the school, Maraming students na naglalakaran sa hallway. May mga nag i-iPod, MP3, Disc Man, mga nakikipagusap sa cellphone, nag pa-PALM, nag cocomputer using their laptops, mga varsities na walang sawang nagsisigawan, cheerleaders na nagtitilian, rakistang naglalakad, mga punks na naghahamon ng away at marami pang iba. Hangang 4th floor ang school, and Crissy was very comfortable. Ang section niya ay 4-4, sa 2nd floor, so umkyat siya sa second floor. Pumasok na siya sa classroom, and its already 6:00 AM, 10 minutes before the class will start. 35 lahat sila sa classroom at mukha namang mababait ang mga classmates niya. 32 palang ang nasa loob ng room (including her). Umupo siya besides another girl, at nasa unahan ng isang full Filipino. Tinignan siya nung girl na katabi niya.

"Hi? Bago ka ata dito sa school?! Ngayon lang kita nakita" tanong nung girl.
"Huh? Oo bago lang ako. Galing akong US, at first time kong mag aral dito sa Pilipinas" reply ni Crissy.
"American ka? Cool! Anyway, maganda kang magtagalog...at maganda ka pa!" sabi (at bola) nung guy sa harap niya.
"Hay nako, Chris, nambobola ka nanaman"  sabi ng girl sabay tawanan sila.
"Anyway, I'm Christian Riego. Chris for short. And she's...."
"Lindy. Lindy Wong. Yup im chinoy. And you?" tanong ni lindy.
"My name is Christina. Christina Yoshimitsu. Crissy for short" reply ni Crissy.
"Japinoy? Cool....at mejo pareho pa tau ng nickname huh! ;D" sabi ni Chris.
"Yeah....medyo nga!  :) nice meeting you...i mean both of you!" sabi ni Crissy.
"So! How do you find "Tomoyikes"? huh?" Lindy asked.
"Uhm....Tomoyikes? as in this school?" Crissy asked...too.

"Uh uh!  ;)"

"Uhm...i think this place is pretty good at mababait ang classmates!" Lindy said, habang nakangiti. The people didn't say anything. After few seconds, someone arrives. Natahimik ang buong klase. Maski ang corridors, natahimik. Natigilan at nanahimik ang lahat ng tao. "Anong nangyayari?" sabi ni Crissy. Maya-maya, may footseteps na papalapit sa room. 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8...seconds after, dumating na ang may-ari ng mga footsteps....at classmates sila ni Crissy. Beautiful. Goddess. Bad. in short-MEAN CLIQUE...the "4 Season Girls". The one with the leggy one (as in shorter skirts) and in the pigtails was Autumn Yakami, also Japinoy. Sinungaling at may pagkaboba...nakakuha ng 74 last year pero nakapag 4th year dahil sa lakas ng kapit ng pamilya niya sa school. The one na layers ang buhok at may lollipop is Summer Valenciano. Top 10 student sa whole school, Top 3 sa kamalditahan, kaplastikan at kachismosohan. The blonde, Lindsay Ahn, a legend in her own little mind. Charming yet very very plastic. And Satan's soon-to-be replacement (nuh just kidding, she's not that bad), Tatum Jo, ang Koreanang maldita, pero may sweet side pero sobrang plastic at masungit. Umupo na ang apat, at lahat ay bumalik sa normal. "Sino sila?" Tanong ni Crissy kay Lindy. "Wala...snow, araw, tuyong dahon at bagong sibol na dahon..yun lang wala silang kwenta... ::) ;D" sagot ni Lindy. May isa pang dumadating, this time, all of the girls (except for Lindy and Crissy) goes outside na nagtitilian. Papalapit din sa room nila Crissy ang footsteps.

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sino kaya sila? abangan  ;)

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #10 on: November 10, 2006, 09:57:36 PM »
anyway...promotion muna!

(note: 3 of the characters there will appear sa Chapter II)

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL180/4570795/9602107/203606504.jpg

look :)
« Last Edit: November 10, 2006, 10:06:59 PM by Digital_Fortress »

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #11 on: November 10, 2006, 11:01:04 PM »
anyway...promotion muna!

(note: 3 of the characters there will appear sa Chapter II)

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL180/4570795/9602107/203606504.jpg

look :)

Hi mr. digital_fortress, the one you used as chrissy is cute!!!

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #12 on: November 11, 2006, 10:23:01 AM »
Sana maycolor yung bwat character...Wow si Chris Cayzer bida! Nextna...Paula hir....
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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (sana basahin nio :)
« Reply #13 on: November 11, 2006, 06:08:27 PM »
Hi mr. digital_fortress, the one you used as chrissy is cute!!!

i agree! ok Ramona....iba iba color!

BTW, Chris Cayzer's character is Matthew Jo, another character not Andy. Andy is the one beside the picture i used as Crissy. :)
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Chapter II

The girls started to scream and make noise.
"OMG, ICBT! (I cant believe that) classmate naten ang mga fafas na yan! Ahhhh!" sigaw ni Tatum, tili ever naman ang mga kasama niya. ???

Nasa hallway na ang foosteps. Lumabas si Crissy at ang kanyang 2 "new" friends. Nakita nila na naglalakad ang 3 very cute and good-looking guys ang dumadaan. Lahat ng girls pumapalakpak, nagsisigawan, tilian, nag ba-blush, except kina Crissy at Lindy.

"Oh no...this isn't happening! Hinde! Hinde! Hinde ito nangyayari!" sabi ni Lindy. "Baket?" tanong ni Crissy kay Lindy. Pumasok si Lindy sa room, parang nagmumuk-mok ata ???. Sinundan naman sya ni Crissy at Chris. "Hey Lindy, what's going.....on?!" tanong ni Crissy ng pumasok na ang 3 guys na pinagkakaguluhan sa labas. "$#!%!!!! classmates naten sila? WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON IN THIS ONE SAAAAD WORLD???? >:(" pabulong na sabi ni Lindy. Tinitigan ni Crissy ang tatlo. Napatingin sa kanya yung lalakeng nasa gitna. Iniwasan niya ng tingin. Dumeretso ang 3 at naghanap ng upuan. Nagustuhan nila yung last row, pero may problem. May nakaupo...naku po patay tayo dyan :(. "Hoy...ikaw....gusto kong umupo dyan! alis!" sigaw nung lalakeng isa na medyo makapal ang eyebrows, na nasa gitna. "A....An...Andy? Ayyy! Ayan na pala kayo! Pasensya na kasi..." sabi nung lalake, pero pinutol ni Andy ang pagsasalita nito. "Tama ng angal, alis na!" sabi ni Andy habang hinahatak ang kawawang classmate na lalake, sabay tapon sa bag nito at umupo. "Ohhhhh...galing talaga ni fafa Andy....go go!" sabi ni Autumn, habang tinitignan sila. Nagulat si Crissy sa ginawa ng classmate nya. Napa kunot ang nuo niya at tahimik na bumalik sa upuan.

Sa Recess...


Kinuwento ni Crissy ang na feel niya sa 3 guys na classmates nila.

"Yung isa, yung singkit na laging nakasumbrero, mukhang mabait at easy to hang out, pero...(mukhang bakla ;D). Yung isa naman, na laging abot ng tenga ang ngiti ay parang...may ibig sabihin....mukhang babaero, pero ok lang. Yung isa....that Andy guy....i hate his guts! >:( kala mo kung sino umasta! Baket anu siya?" sabi ni Crissy....galit na galit. "Hmmm....si Andy Lee ay very imfluential na student dito sa school. He is a candidate for Validictorian, un nga lang abot utak ang hangin sa kokote." explain ni Lindy. "Ah ganun ba? pwes, di siya uubra saken" protesta ni Crissy.

Bumalik na sila sa room. Ang kanilang next subject is Trigonometry, and their teacher was Ms. Bond. "Hello mga students, kumusta na kayo?" sabi ni Ms. Bond. "Ugh...that teacher...she loves quizes...parang ginagawang chichirya ang quiz ng teacher nayan eh!" sabi Lindy kay Crissy. Di nag react si Crissy, tumawa lang ng konti. Tapos...

"As my special gift, magkakaroon tayo ng re-cap quiz sa Geometry!" sabi ni Ms. Bond. Nag react lahat ng student, maliban kay Andy at Crissy na tila kampante na mapapasa ang quiz. Nagsimula na ang quiz. Halos lahat ng students ay nahihirapan. Tulala, balisa, nag eemote, nakatulog, pero si Crissy at Andy ay tuloy sa pagsagot. Natapos ang quiz na tumagal ng 10 minutes.

"Nasagutan mo lahat, bro?" tanong ni Brandon, isa sa mga kabarkada ni Andy. Brandon is a guy, who is a "babaero". He's biggest asset is his charming smile na nagpapatunaw sa mga babae :D. "Offcourse, you think I'm an idiot? Syempre naman...isa lang ata mali ko dun!" sagot ni Andy.

"Sis, nasagutan mo?" tanong ni Lindy kay Crissy. "Uhm...di ako sure sa answers ko, im so tensed!" sagot ni Crissy. "Grabeh yung quiz! Bagsak ako nyan >:(" sabat ni Christian.

After ma checkan ang quiz...

"Diyos me, Brandon Montero! 4 out 15 problems! Mag-aral ka nga!" sabon ni Ms. Bond. Napayuko si Brandon sa hiya. "Eto pa! Autumn Yakami! 1 out of 15! Nangopya ka lang ata!" dagdag pa ni Ms. Bond. "Hindi ma'm no, (duh *pabulong mode*)" sagot ni Autumn. "Good, Summer. 10 out of 15. Pretty good" compliment ni Ms. Bond kay Summer. Hayun, ang Summer naman ay napangiti at nagmalaki sa fwends niya.

"And oh, who is this? Christina Yoshimitsu! Very good you perfect the quiz!" masayang sbai ni Ms. Bond kay Crissy. Pumalakpak ang klase, except sa 4 Season Girls at si Andy, na mukhang nagalit. "Aba...Andy Lee...13 out 15. Great pero nadaig ka ngayon ni Ms. Yoshimitsu huh?" sabi ni Ms. Bond.

Nagpaalam na si Ms. Bond at wala pa ang next teacher. Nagdabog na tumayo si Andy sa kanyang desk. Nilapitan niya ang nagbabasang si Crissy. "Hoy ikaw bagong saltang ewan, anong gusto mo? Gusto mo akong tapatan?" pasigaw na tanong ni Andy kay Crissy. Everybody's silent. Sinarado ni Crissy ang libro niya at tumayo.

"Huh? Bakit? Porket ba nataasan kita sa quiz? Bakit ano bang pakialam mo?  >:(" sgaot ni Crissy na medyo galit na.

"Alam mo, ayus ayusin mo buhay mo! Alam mo ba na ako ang pinakamatalino dito at walang makakaagaw sakin nun! Kung ako sayo, magsisi na ako na pumasok ako dito sa skwelahan na to!" Andy said with a high peech at sobrang galit.

"Wala kang pakialam! Nagaaral akong mabuti at wala akong intention na agawin ang trono mo!" sagot ni Crissy, na galit na galit mode! :o

"Ah ganun! Hoy ambisyosang babae, hindi kalang ambitious, napaka illusionada mo pa! Kala mo kaya mo akong patumbahin ha? Kung ako sayo lumayas ka na dito sa school na to! Ngayon na!" sigaw ni Andy.

Nanahimik si Crissy at napaupo sa silya niya. Napaiyak ito. "Crissy? Ok ka lang?" sabi ni Lindy. Tinignan ni Lindy si Andy ng masama, gayon din si Christian. After a second or so, umaliwalas ang mukha ni Andy at parang nagaalala. Umiiyak si Crissy sa desk niya ng  sinabi ni Andy na...

"SORRY...I DIDN'T MEAN ANYTHING" :( with a sincere voice.

Tumingin si Crissy kay Andy, tumayo ito at may luha pa pero bakas ang galit nito sa mukha.

Walang anu-ano, sumigaw siya ng...

"GO TO HELL!!!!! >:("

nagulantang ang buong klase at si Andy pati ang mga kabarkada niya. Tumakbo papalabas si Crissy ng classroom. Nanahimik ang lahat sa luob ng room.

Mag-isang umiyak si Crissy sa loob ng Music room. "Ang sama sama ng ugali niya! Napaksama niya! I HATE HIM! :'(" sabi ni Crissy. Ilang segundo pa't naglabas ng sama ng loob si Crissy, ng biglang may narinig siyang may nag-gi-gitara.

She followed the music of the guitar at nakita niya ang isang lalaking tsinito na nagigitarang mag isa. Natigilan yung Guy, tapos tumingin sa kanya. Nakita nung guy na puro luha ang mukha ni Crissy. "Sorry, na istorbo ata kita..." sabi Crissy at dahan dahang lumakad papalayo.

"Hindi naman...halika umupo ka dito." sabi nung guy. Lumapit ulit si Crissy at umupo sa tabi ng guy. "Your new, right? Tell me your name..." tanong nung boy. "Christina...or just Crissy" sabi ni Crissy. "Ako nga pala si Matthew Jo...Matthew nalang itawag mo saken"[/b] sabi ni Matthew. Matthew is a rocker pero napakatahimik na guy. He loves guitar and music. He's as popular as Andy and as smart as him, pero Salutatorian lang siya. "Hi Matthew...nice to meet..." natigilan si Crissy ng pinahiran ni Matthew ang kanyang tears using he's handkerchief. "Ayy...salamat :-[" nagblush naman bigla si Crissy. "Sige, i gotta go...my klase pa ako...naglabas lang ako ng sama ng loob...sige ha!" sabi ni Crissy. Ngumiti nalang si Matthew habang tinitignan si Crissy habang papalayo.

Bumalik si Crissy sa classroom. Nakatingin sa kanya ang lahat. Deadma. Bumalik siya sa upuan niya ng walang sinasabing kahit ano. Nilapitan siya bigla ni Yul, kabarkada ni Andy. Si Yul ay isang Japinoy din, napaka vein at mahilig sa sumbrero, sometimes napapagkamalan siyang bading (hindi nga ba? ???).

"Crissy, uhm...Andy said that...Andy said that...he's very very sorry at...talagang nabigla lang daw siya." sabi ni Yul kay Crissy. "Bahala siya sa buhay niya" reply ni Crissy. Tumayo siya sa desk niya at nilapitan si Andy. "Never kitang mapapatawad! NEVER! >:(" sabi ni Crissy kay Andy. Napatyo si Andy. "Anong gusto mong gawin ko para lang...ma forgive mo ako? huh? lahat gagawin ko!" sabi ni Andy na halatang sincere.

"Dapat lahat ng tao dito sa campus na makakasalubong ko eh dapat sabihin eh "Sorry na...pinapasabi ni Andy" kailangan ganun kung hinde, BAHALA KA. Your my MORTAL ENEMY!" sabi Crissy. Nanahimik si Andy at umupo sa desk.
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aba mukhang magkaaway ata ang dalawang ito ha! abangan kung ano mangyayari! ;)

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Re: High School Fairytale (Romantic Comedy po ito) (CHAPTER II ALREADY DONE!)
« Reply #14 on: November 11, 2006, 06:24:39 PM »
ganda po sobra haha next po pls... :)
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