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Author Topic: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ Finished  (Read 22831 times)

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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 34 - Apple of my eye.] (Mid-story)
« Reply #210 on: December 19, 2006, 09:23:21 pm »
haha.. lagot ka marc!! ;D

next.. =)
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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 34 - Apple of my eye.] (Mid-story)
« Reply #211 on: December 20, 2006, 12:03:09 am »
[size=10pt]strawberry shortcake na lang. hehe.[/size]

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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 34 - Apple of my eye.] (Mid-story)
« Reply #212 on: December 20, 2006, 11:12:14 am »
kuya maic?
lumayas k pla??
hehehe..
next na pO!

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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 34 - Apple of my eye.] (Mid-story)
« Reply #213 on: December 20, 2006, 12:54:43 pm »
hala.....lagot ka nga kay daddy...!! :-X.......next na p0...!

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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 34 - Apple of my eye.] (Mid-story)
« Reply #214 on: December 20, 2006, 06:42:32 pm »
next next.  :)

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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 34 - Apple of my eye.] (Mid-story)
« Reply #215 on: December 20, 2006, 07:28:56 pm »
andmeng nllman ni malene.
haha. sinu kaya nagturo nung mga yun?
ang usisera ko tlga ever.
patai ka marc!!! bat kc d k ngpaalam e.
yan tuloi patai.hala ka! yak manakot daw ba?
aun po.nextie na hehe.
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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 34 - Apple of my eye.] (Mid-story)
« Reply #216 on: December 20, 2006, 08:25:37 pm »
naku! lagot siya..

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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 34 - Apple of my eye.] (Mid-story)
« Reply #217 on: December 21, 2006, 06:49:43 pm »
sis.. tuloy mo na.. hehehe.. anu kaya ending?

Goodluck kay Lablife. hehe..  ;D ::)
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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 34 - Apple of my eye.] (Mid-story)
« Reply #218 on: December 27, 2006, 12:17:25 pm »
waaaaaaaaaahhh!!

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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 34 - Apple of my eye.] (Mid-story)
« Reply #219 on: December 27, 2006, 05:19:30 pm »
waaaah.. i can't wait for the next chapter.. !!
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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 34 - Apple of my eye.] (Mid-story)
« Reply #220 on: December 27, 2006, 11:37:25 pm »
miss ko na mga kulitan ni kish at marc! =]

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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 34 - Apple of my eye.] (Mid-story)
« Reply #221 on: December 28, 2006, 02:54:58 pm »

Chapter 35 - Together.

Marc: Kish, nakauwi na sila mommy.

Kish: Onga, pansin ko. Kaya nga ayan na si Malene oh?

Marc: Waaaaaaaaa. Lagot nga raw ako eh.

Kish: Ano? Hindi ka nagpaalam? Sira ka pala eh!

Marc: Hindi e kasi sabi naman matagal, dba?

Ayan, nakauwi na ako. Siguro nakauwi na rin si Marc at pinapagalitan na siya. Haha. Ang loko naman kasi nung lalaking yon. Dito daw ba matulog ng dalawang gabi tapos kay mama lang siya nagpaalam hindi na sa mommy niya. Kamusta naman yon, dba?

*KRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNGGGG*

Kish: Hello?

Marc: Kish! Wala pa sila mommy hahaha! Ang saya ko, okey lang na pagalitan ako, nakasama naman kita ng dalwang gabi eh. Gusto mo mamaya ulit?

Kish: Huh? Papagalitan ka na nga eh!

Marc: Nyeh, eh sasabihin ko kayla Jared ako matutulog.

Kish: Wag na, okey na ako dito noh.

Marc: Ayaw mo na ng float? Dadalhan pa naman sana kita...

Kish: Wag na, ayos lang talaga noh.

Marc: Kailan kaya magiging tayo?

Kish: Anong konek nun sa float at pag punta mo dito?

Marc: Wala lang. Gusto ko lang malaman.

Kish: Kelan mo ba gusto.?

Marc: Ikaw ang babae dapat ikaw ang magdedesisyon.

Kish: Para bago naman noh. Ikaw na magdecide. Kelan? Isip ka ng date...

Marc: ikaw na. Hmm. Edi ba, parehas naman tayo ng date ng birthday? Parehong 15?

Kish: Ah, okey. Eh kaso, ang yaaaaak naman.Pinaguusapan natin yun.

Marc: Anong yakkk dun?

Kish: Alam mo na kung kailan magiging tayo..

Marc: Oh sige, wag na nga lang. Para hindi magulo pa ganito na lang noh.

Kish: Uh, sige.

Haaaaaaaaaaaa? Siya nagtatanong kung kelan magiging kami tapos sasabihin niyang Para hindi magulo, ganito na lang. Aba, kuntento na pala siyang ganito eh. Osige, ganito na lang.

Marc: Kish??? Salita ka naman, galit ka ba?

Kish: Hindi, sige. Maya na lang. Kain pa ako pati magaral. Sige, bye.

Hmmmm. Ayan! Bagay sayo! Nakaka asar talaga yung fact na nagtanong siya tapos tipong sasabihin niya naman na ayos na ito sa kanya. Okey, okey. Ayos na rin naman sa akin ito, pero bakit naman ganon? Badtrip.

*Toooooooooooot.Toooooooooooooot*

Marc: Kish, galit ka?

Ano ba yan! Text naman! Epal talaga nito.

Kish: Oo,

Marc :Bakit naman?

Kish: Hindi, ayos lang. Okey lang din naman sa akin yung ganito eh.

Marc: Eh, sorry na. Hindi naman yun ang gusto ko sabihin eh.

Kish: Eh ano?

Marc: Basta sorry na.

Kish: Okey.

Marc: Parang napilitan ka lang ha?

Kish: Hindi naman ako galit eh!

Marc: Sige na naman, wag ka na magalit. Ayaw ko matapos ito,

Kish: Matapos alin?

Marc: yung ganito natin..

Kish: Kasi nga gusto mo hanggang dito lang, dba?

Marc: Hindi talaga, alam ko naman na walang ka-effort effort pinag gagawa ko eh pero please wag ka na magalit please. Ayoko talga matapos ito dahil lang dun, kasalanan ko naman talaga eh. Dapat kasi hindi ko na sinabi yon.

Kish: Kaya nga, dapat talaga.

Marc: Sorry na ha, hindi ko talga sinasadya. Wag natin tapusin ito ha?

Kish: Hmmm. Hindi naman matatapos ito eh, gusto mo simulan talaga natin?

*KRRRRRRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGG*

Marc: Kish! Panong simulan?

Kish: Oo, tayo na!

Marc: Weh?

Kish: Oo, ayaw mo?

Marc: Syempre, gusto ko! I love you..

Kish: Uh, okey. I love you din...

OM. Anong ginawa ko? Sinagot ko na siya? Well, para matapos na rin lahat ng away namin na yon. Mahal ko rin naman siya eh. Natatakot lang siguro talaga ako magcommit. Natatakot ring masaktan sa huli. Pero basta sana hindi niya ako saktan noh? Eto na ito, start na ng bagong buhay.

Naniwala nga siya sa aking crush ko siya. Napaniwala rin naman niya akong mahal niya ako kaya eto, mahal ko na rin siya. Kahit sa onting panahon lang na nagaminan kami, okey na rin yun. Mahalaga akin na siya ngayon, makilala ko pa siya at kikilalanin ko pa siya ng mabuti. :)






The End.

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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 35 - Together] ♥♥♥
« Reply #222 on: December 28, 2006, 03:18:33 pm »
Then they lived happily ever after!  ::)  :)

Congrats sa success ng story mo. :) Aabangan ko pa ang susunod.  ;D
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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 35 - Together] ♥♥♥
« Reply #223 on: December 28, 2006, 06:46:35 pm »
Salamat sa mga nagbasa ng story ko mula umpisa hanggang sa ending. :)
Sobrang saya ko talaga at marami kayong nagbasa.
Hindi ko inakalang ganun na lang yung pag welcome niyo sa story ko eh first time ko lang yung ma-appreciate dito story ko.
THANKS THANKS THANKS talaga.

Meron akong new story: You got it all.

Sana po paki-suportahan niyo rin po! :)

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Re: ♪ Maniwala Ka Sana ♪ [Chapter 35 - Together] ♥♥♥
« Reply #224 on: December 29, 2006, 09:49:22 am »
ganda....cnagot na nya....lol...hmmm.....sayang...ending na...hehe....!!!lol.....basta...maganda p0 cia...!!hehe..! ;)....and promise ko p0 na babasahin ko ung new story mo...!! :)

 

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